FF-BIRTHDAY GIRLS(UPDATED PART 8)

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SO JUST A IDEA CROSSED MY MIND AND I THOUGHT OF WRITING THESE...
ASSUMPTIONS:
EVERYTHING SAME AS D3 EXCEPT THAT:
1. KRIA AND SHARON ARE FRATERNEL TWINS...AND THEY AND THEIR PARENTS LIVE AS FAMILY
2.KRIYAANSH AND SWARON HAVE BECOME COUPLES.

PART:1-PAGE 1
PART 2-PAGE 4
PART 3-PAGE 8
PART 4-PAGE 11
part 5-page 15
PART 6- PAGE 20
PART 7-PG 24
PART 8-PG 29

PART 1:
Swayam adjusted the ladder properly and looked into his watch.11:50pm "COOL".he climbed up to the window.'THANK GOD'he said to himself, window was open.He came inside the room from the window.There his angel was sleeping..
He slowly went 2wards her and called out softly...SHARON.
"whos this???? sharon opened her eyes. SHARON-" SWAYAM WHAT A PLEASANT SURPRISE".HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHARON"said swayam and handed her the gift he had brought for her.Sharon opened the gift, there was a beautiful dress inside.WOW 'SWAYAM thanks i will just go and try it!!!!!she ran inside to washroom.THANK GOD,'said swayam to himself 'sharon khush to hui...
then came a scream...SWAYAM...WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?????
out came sharon with a loose dress...'you dont even know ki tumhari gf konsi size ka dress pehnti he'
swayam-baby...dekho shayad tum pehle se patli ho gayi ho..
sharon-what do you mean pehle main moti thi...
swayam-sharon dekho suno sharon...
TRRRIIINNNGGG...
(it was swayams alarm hahaha... bichara)
swayam got up fully tensed... sharon's b'day(ofcourse also kriyas) was only 10 days away.it was her 1st b'day after their love confession,and it needed to be special...
"kya karu"swayam was confused"REY ...REY ko call karta hu...
he called REY and a girls voice came"THE NO. YOU HAVE DIALED IS BUSY PLZ CALL AGAIN LATER"
SWAYAM-ye rey bhi na...
after some his call gets connected
REY- kya kar raha tha swayam????kab se tuje call kar raha hu...kisse bate kar raha tha???
SWAYAM-REY ye main tuje puchne wala tha...chal chod abhi meri baat sun...
AND our bichara swayam told him abt his dream...
REY- yaar mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi sapna aaya... then REY told him abt his dream...
REY'S DREAM:
REY climbed up to the window... there his angel was sleeping he went up to her and woke her"KRIYA HAPPY BIRTHDAY"
KRIYA-REY AAP...
REY TOOK OUT THE SMALL BOX OPENED IT AND GAVE IT TO KRIYA...
KRIYA-WOW diamond ring...and she wore it but it was too big for her fingers...REY YE KYA HE??? aapko mere finger me koinse size ki ring fit hogi ye bhi nahi pata...REY aap bhi naaa...huh,,,
REY-KRIYA suno...
BACK TO REALITY...
SWAYAM-YAAR REY hame to ek jaise sapne aane lage...
REY- kyu nahi aayenge...aakhir main hamari gf's twins jo he...
SWAYAM-REY wo to thik he hum unke b'day ke liye kya karenge...
SOCHO REY SOCHO... WHAT WILL WE DO????

SO FRNDS HOWS MY FF.I M WRITING 1ST TYM SO MISTAKE HOI TO MAAF KARNA...PLZ DO COMMENT...😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...awesome start👏...do continue and pls pm me...😉
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Edited by anamika143 - 14 years ago
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Hey dis is gonna b interesting...same same dream lol..plz pm me wen ul update next 😊
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cool, u never knw palki mite c this so keep writing 😉
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its very nice
please continue

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very nice!! do keep writing!! nd pm me wen u update fr sure!!😊😊
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hay dats gud!!! plzz continue soon and plzz do pm me!! :D
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its really an awesome ff yaar truely awesome keep writing good going actually tooo goodd going <3

👏👏👏👏
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Hey this is nice!!Looking forward to it...specially the SwaRon love story!!Do PM when you update..annd update soon!

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