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Posted: 19 years ago
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genious pls post ur story next part
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Mere Dharkano Ko Qarar dO
recap: mahrukh crying in her room alone when someone come into her room and lock the door
now age parhiye
mahrukh turn around and see tahmoor standing near the door shez shocked to see her and also scared
mahrukh: aap.....aa..a..pp.aap yahan kiya kar rahe hain
tahmoor door ke saath take laga kar khara ho jata hai and smiling continuosly
mahrukh: i said wat r u doing here (tahmoor jee still khamosh but smiling) just get lost from my room...........sunai nahi deta aap ko maine kaha jaen yahan se tahmoor bah......(suddenly she realized wat she was going to say and cursing her and turn around now his back is infront of tahmoor)
by this tahmoor smiles mischievously and come near her
mahrukh feel tahmoor beside her and turn around both thier eyes meet and both lost in each other eyes
song background:
jee yeh chahe yeh lamhe
bas yahiin pe rukh jaen
saamne tum raho aur
hum tumhein dekhte jen
(tahmoor)
dil mian hone lagi hai
meeth imethi si halchal
tum raho saath jaise
mere aankhon ka kajal
(mahrukh)
suddenly mahrukh come into reality

now nexttttttt
both r lost in each other eyes
mahrukh come into reality but tahmoor still luks mahrukh
mahrukh get confused and wid her eyes on floor she said
mahrukh: a....a.a.aaa..aap yahan par kyun aye hian plz go from here
but instead of going tahmoor come more closer to mahrukh and she take her step bach and saying
mahrukh: dekhiye aa..aap aap kiya kar rahe hain i said just go from here
but again as u know tahmoor is so dheat so he take one step forward and mahrukh moves backward
aur jee wohi huwa jo hamesha hota hai
mahrukh jee deewar se takra jati hain
and tahmmor come forward mahrukh tries to go from the side when tahmoor blocks her way by putting his hand on the floor mahrukh get scared but doesnot show it to tahmoor (but our tahmoor is so clever un k opata chal jata hai) tahmoor just luks at mahrukh and said in low tone
mahrukh: wat...wat the hell u u u..... want to do i said na just g...o from here ur face how dare u r to come into my room......u....u.dont have any rite.....
just then tahmoor put his finger on mahrukh lips and said
tahmoor: SSSsssshhhhh
and put his other hand around mahrukh waist and pull her closer to himself and make his ace close to his ear and said
tahmoor: tum ne ek haq (rite) ki baat k ithi na maine tum se related sare rites apne naam kar liye
by saying this he see her face for some time and goes to his room
and mahrukh jee slowly slowly deewar ke saath neeche behti jati hain (i hope u guyz get it) and started crying bitterly (as usual nothing new in it)
coming up: tahmoor and mahrukh face to face infront of all the family members

note: remember one thing abhi dono ka nikkah huwa hai ruksati ahi huwe hai woh sehar ki shadii ke saath ho gi so dont misunderstand aur es liye tahmoor apne room main chala giya tha


MERE DHARKANO KO QARAR DO
RECAP: mahrukh cries
Ok now next
Mahrukh,sitting on a floor and crying bitterly
And said
Mahrukh: I hate u tahmoor I hate u I hate u u
Background song
Jis se nafrat hai us ko
Pyaar kaise karon gi
Kyun bhala us ki khatir
Dil se ahen bharon gi
Jane kaise aye hain
Imtehan ki yeh ghariyan
Ab ulajhti hi jaen
Mere rishton ki lariyan
Bhuj gae sare diye
Ooooooooooo
Apni palko ke tale
Sari umeeden piyasi
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha
Kuch ahi baqi
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha
Kuch nahi baqi
(don't confused maine 3 songs mix kar ke yeh likha hai)
mahrukh aur tahmoor ke nikkah ko ek hafta guzar giya tha aur es 1 hafte main ek bhi din aisa nahi tha jis main salman aur seher ne mahrukh ko tang na kiya ho mahrukh pooe week neeche nahi aye thi
but atlast who yeh sooch kar neeche aa gae ke kahin pehle ki tarah phir sab us se saawal na poochen
ok jee mahrukh stairs se neeche aa rahi hoti hain and in the lounge all r sitting first mahrukh want to go back but then tania saw her coming down aur us ko ander ane ka ishara karti hai to mahrukh ko na chahte huwe bhi ana parta hai wait wait wait guyz tahmoor abhi tak office main hai wph yahan par majood nahi hota
ok jee now mahrukh enters in lounge
salman and seher start coughing when they see her salman apne pass mahrukh ki jagah banata hai but mahrukh knows ke who us ko buhat tang kare ga so she ignore her and goes to seher whoz playing wid tania's children and sit wid her
Salman: wese mahrukh..o ho ho ho …mahrukh BHABHI aaj aap yahan kaise
Mahrukh: woh main …..
Seher: tahmoor bahi se milne aye thi we know but hez still in office
Mahrukh: nahi main….
Salman: wese BHABHI agar aap chahe to un ko call kr sakti hain
Tania: haan shahyad ese bahane us ko ghar ki yaad aa jae
Mahrukh: nahi aap log galat samajh rahe hain
Salman: haan haan ab to tum oh I mean aap hum ko galat hi kahen gi ah kiya zamana aa giya hai
Mahrukh rone wali ho jati hai and just then haleema enters
Haleema: kiya hai kyun sab mil kar mere bahu ko tang kar rahe ho khabardar agar kise ne ese kuch kaha to
Just then bahir tahmoor k icar ka horn hota hai aur ander mahrukh ek dam khari ho jati hai
Salman: are are bhabhi khari kyun hain beht jaye bahi ne ander hi ana hai
Tania: bewqoof aachi biwiyaan apne husbands ka istaqbaal (welcome) khari ho kar hi karti hain
Sehar: beht jao mahrukh bahi tum ko khaa nahi jaen ge relax yaaar
Just then our hero mean tahmoor enters in the lounge and sits on the sofa wid salman and mahrukh prays ke salman kuch ulta seedha na bole
Salman: aap ko pata hai bahi abhi aap ki BEGUM aap ki car ka horn sun kar khari ho gai thi lekin yeh zalim samaj raaste main aa giya warna aap ke istaqbaal ko zaroor bahir khari hoti
By this all laughs and tahmoor just smiles and see mahrukh whoz sitting wid sehar by her face down just then haleema enters and said
Haleema: sehar tumhari frind ka ki call aye hai
Sehar call attend karne chali jati hai and haleema to kitchen
Just then tania's son sheryar comes to tahmoor and said
Sheryar: mamu mamu kiya mahrukh khala mere mumani hain
Mahrukh face all red and he see sheryar wid surprise and then to tahmoor whoz also luking her wid a naughty smile on his face yeh dekh kar mahrukh ko gussa chahrh jata hai
Tahmoor sheryar ko apni god (lap) main bhitata hai and gives him a chocolate and said
Tahmoor: beta yeh aap ko kis ne kaha
Sheryar: salman mamu ne
Mahrukh gusse se salman ko dekhti hai and salman
Salman: aa aa woh main who main……mere dost ka msg aya hai main chalta hoon
Salman walks out aur phir mahrukh tahmoor ko dekhti hai jo use hi dekh raha hota hai and when mahrukh see tahmoor,tahmoor winks at her aur mahrukh ka gussa aur high ho jata hai just then sehar enters and she see mahrukh luking tahmoor angrly
Sehar: wese mahrukh BHABHI agar aap bahi se akele main milna chahti hain to hum yahan se jane ko tiyaar hain
Tahmoor: neeke aur pooch pooch
And this is more than enough for mahrukh she walk out by saying
Mahrukh: woh mujhe college ka kaam karna hai
And all r laughing
Mahrukh goes to her room and lock the door and started crying
And said
Mahrukh: main aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karon gi tahmoor kabhi nahi kabhi nahi I hate u nafrat hai mujhe aap se us rishte se jo mere aur aap ke beech main hai us pyaar se jo maine kabhi aap ko kiya tha main aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karon gi main aap ko kabhi bhi koi bhi khushi ka ehsaas nahi hone doon gi kabhi nahi kabhi nahi bilkul usi tarah jis tarah aap ne mujh se mere sari khushiyan cheen li main aap ko itna majboor kar doon gi ke aap ke pass mujhe chorne ka aur koi raasta nahi bache ga aap ne mujhe mere apno ke saamne girne par majboor kar diya main aap ko aap ke apno se door kar doon gi main aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karon gi kabhi nahi
And cries bitterly
Background song
Cheen ke tere ujale
Main andhera kar doon gi
Zindagi main tumahri
Zehar itna barh doon gi
Tere rahon main kaante
Main bhichaon gi har pal
Chain na pae kahiin to
Yun rahe gi ek halchal
Tere hoonton pe hanse
Oooooooooo
Ab na aa pae kabhi
Badua hai yeh hamari
La lalalallalal
lalalalalaaaaaaaaa

ok now
coming up: mahrukh mission starts but but but mahrukh kiya kare ge kiya who tahmoor ki khushiyan khatam karne main kamiyab ho pae gi and may be one new character introduce who realize mahrukh that she still loves tahmoor but how

mahrukh is finding her mom in the whole house
mahrukh:ami.......ami...............amiiiiiiii......kahan hai aap where r u?????
and finally she find her in the kitchen she goes there and
mahrukh: ami main jaa rahi hoon (no response) amiii i am going main jaa rahi hoon
rakshanda: to mere rokne se tum kon sa rukne wali ho jao maine kab mana kiya
mahrukh: haan to sahi se kahen na jao
rakshanda: aacha theik hai jao.....tum kon sa mere sunti ho kaha bhi tha tahmoor ke saath chali jao tumhein chor de ga lakin nahi
mahrukh: ami plz not again
rakshanda: aacha thiek hai jao par jaldii wapis ana
actually mahrukh is going to one of her friend's house jahan us ki baqi ki frinds bhi aa rahi hain n then from there they all go some restaurant for treat from mahrukh of her nikkah
ok jee mahrukh bahir ati hai n wahan woh tahmoor ko dekhti hai jo apni car ka door khol raha hota hai she ignores him and passes when tahmoor said
tahmoor: mahi....aao main tum ko drop kar deta hoon
mahrukh: mahrukh naam hai mera not mahi and i'll manage thanx
she is abu to go when tahmoor comes infront of her wid full anger in his eyes


mahi is abu to go when tahmoor comes infront of her
tahmoor: gari mian behto mahi
mahrukh again ignores her n abu to go n this time tahmoor hold her wrist
tahmoor (wid full anger): i said sit in the car (shez in the same position) sunae nahi diya wat i said to u
n this time mahrukh anger raise
mahrukh: hote kaun hai aap (kashsih's famous dialogue anywayz) mujh se yeh sab kehne wale...jin kagaz ke tukron ki base par aap mujh par itna haq jama rahe hain na woh mere liye koi maine (meaning) nahi rakhte (woh apna haath churati hai n go but suddenly turn) aur ek baat yaad rakhiya ga main es rishte ko nahi maanti...aur na hi yeh rishta age barhne doon gi....n dont u worry aap ne joh ehsaan mujh par kiya hai na buhat jald us ehsaan se aap ko aaad kar doon gi
saying this she goes leaving behind shocked n dukhi tahmoor wid tears in his eyes
background music
Jaane kaisi hui hai
Mujhse aisi nadaani..
Meine bikhrali aapni..
Zindagi ki kahani.

Paas ake bhi mujhse..
Dur woh hogaya hai..
kaise batlaoon kisko..
Mera kiya kho gaya hai..

Dastaan dard bhari..
Oh oh oh oh..
Maine chahat ko meri..
Apni haaton saza di..

Dil ye bezaar hua hai..
Cha gayi hai udasi..
Thoda sa pyar hua tha..
Thoda hai baaqi..



aur agar mahrukh peeche mur kar ek baar tahmoor ko dekh lete to shahyad es rishte ki sachai ko samajh pati

mahrukh apne friend ke ghar jati hai n from there all the 4 goes to rstaurant
there they chit chat n tease mahrukh by tahmoor when suddenly mahrukh talha ko dekhti hia who is sitting wid a gal mahrukh xcuses herself n goes to talha
talha has his back towards mahrukh
mahrukh is at some distance but she hears talha's voice clearly
talha to the gal: maine aaj tak kise larki ko nahi kaha par aap ko keh raha hoon.....jab se maine aap ko dkeha hai tab se aur kuch soojhta hi nahi ....maine aaj tak aap jaise larki nahi dekhi..... jab aap ko pehle bar dekha tha tab se aap ko chahne laga hoon... i luv u... i luv u so much ... main jald hi api mother ko bhejo nga bas tum tiyaar rehna
gal: oh talha u r so sweet ......
age un ki kiya baatein huwi mahrukh ne aur kuch nahi suna n she cums to her frinds n after sometime they all leave to their respective houses
n mahrukh apne ghar enter hoti hai then sare busy hote hain n no one is in the lounge she thanx God n goes up to her room n locked the door n lying on the bed n starting crying
o kabhi bas itna thak gai hoon
coming up: y mahrukh crying????? is she luv talha or wat?? kiya mahrukh aur tahmoor ka rishta toot paye ga..kiya mahrukh talha ko pane main kamiyaab ho sake gi .....kiya talha waqai mian us larki ke saath hai or hez just to make mahrukh jealous or something else
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
i love ure fanficc
plzz continuee
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
zillae dear plzzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeee soon....... 😛 ur story is just toooooooooo gooddddddddddd... 👏 waiting to read the next parts eagerly........... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
whr r u zillae dear continueeeeeeee it yaar we r waiting. 😕
and so nice of u that u post ur story in ur thread 😃 thank u so much 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
yaar continue karna.. mujhe jaanna hain ki agge story mein kya hoga... tahmoor aur mahrukh kaise kareeb aayenge.................. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Grrr888888 Story 👏
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PLzzz continue sooon
Iman
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
hey genious lovely story... 😛
just read ur story in two days... 😊
very nice plot.. 👏 . but now wat??? 😳
plz cont soon.... 😊
can't wait more to read the next part. 😊
update ur story soon... with longer parts... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
hey
its a great story...do cont soon...
i cant wait for the next part... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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zillae dear kahaan ho yaar.. please jaldi se story continue karo na.... 😭 me eager to know ki ab tumhari story mein agge kya hoga..... 😉

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