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anky_1205

@anky_1205

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Nice one... I hope geet make maan cOme out of this pain soon.
Waiting for the next update soon...

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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

Awesome part
Loved Geet trying her best to make him come out of his pain
Hai they finally sleep peacefully in eachothers arms so sweet
Continue soon looking forward to them spending time together

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#573

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Atiffa

@Atiffa

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

awesome

Geet took the initiative but Maan want to win her trust

Geet want to remove his pain...and she is trusting him again

But Maan's behavior is really confusing

Precap is interesting

Cont soon

Luv

Atiffa

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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#575

amazng update...

luv da way both now understanding each other...

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#576

simply wow, bestest bestest part of "Hercomplete submission"anu Each and every word had so many emotions that no words can describe them . sumtym u say say silence speaks larger than words , this update can only be felt ,can only be cherished ,can only be enjoyed in silence . so, beautifully written , a tear of joy had cum in eyes feeling them both . Everything was cleared btw them .
"I am all yours... just need sometime to make you believe this" loved dese lines of maan . it really placed him on the top,sab gunah maaf 😊

I need to make him beleive I trust him completely... per Maan, he will not be convinced so easily... he must have his own yard stick... hmmm... but I can always try" she shied.\

loved lines of geet again showing her depthness of her love and trust towards him 😊

Anu , a lot of warm hug 🤗🤗🤗for u and for d update 👏👏👏

Edited by acjanfeb1 - 13 years ago