OS: A Poolside Proposal, note on pg 14

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Zeba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

A splendid OS Vidhya!

Loved it.

⭐️

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Roopa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Awesome update Vidhya...👏

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Alice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Bloody Freaking awesome...you have a unique class of writing...this OS shows it... Brilliant one...😃

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shybabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

ohlala...continue pleeez😃

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smiley-shiney

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Nice OS.

I want this to happen in the show

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tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

An Amazing OS Vidhya.Would totally love to see this scene portrayed in the show! It was intense, subtle and romantic.👏

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

So adorable.
Love the dialogues.
Great job!

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Sara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

nice os

thanks for the pm

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madmaxine

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Thanks everyone for the nice comments. I'm a ittle overwhelmed at all the compliments! At work now, back later to reply individually to them. I do want to specially thank Muffin for comparing me with Vidya Balan. ☺️ And Nancy for providing the inspiration for this OS. I might write a follow up in which they fall into the pool! 😆😆

Cheers!

Vidhya

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egle

@egle

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

"Flattering! That's what girls like. To be told they'll be taken to hell after marriage."

"So, that's a yes?" he asked doubtfully.

🤣

That was fabulous! Hope to see more of your writing (especially the one where they fall into the pool 😆)

👍🏼

Edited by egle - 13 years ago