Originally posted by: misssmily
First of all : fantastic !! 👏 both parts were really good especially the 3rd part it was exellent !
So here is my analyses: 😊
The thrid part was just mindblowing loved geet and her dad's dialogue ! 👏 Very well written i must say ! So Geet's dad is being suspicious... before readng that part i wasn't that afraid of "the maan u portrayed" but now... i have mixed feelings... U built so much mistery around maan's character in this part, really well done 👏. With this updt u made it clear that maan has some motives, he is not here by chance... So will b patiently waiting to know his motivation ! It was really smart of you to tell us that from geet's dad point of view... it added fear around maan character... With this part the title of ur ff start to make sense ! Because after readin part 1 and part 2 i was like : well maan seems too sweet compared to the title and little intro of ur ff 😛
On the other hand :we saw how nave and innocent geet is... 😕she didn't think once abt how he knew everything abt her... she assumed he was a nice guy... and here i want to say : hope u don't plan her to stay like this, i don't want her to b a poor nave girl ( just a request ^^ )
Noticed one more thing : For now, i didn't find anything from what i can say that maan loves geet... for now it's just a mere attraction... hope that's what u thought when u wrote it bcoz this is what is looks like 😳
Now comming to the part 4 :
Hmmm nice part... not much to say abt this part apart from the fact that i felt something ^^ 😆
Actually when maan and geet were in the jeep, when geet said to maan things her dad told her abt him, i felt like he was saying : Oh to tumare dad ne mera pata lagaya...hmm...
Ok great parts, me eager to know maan's motives ! And to finish my peace of critic : maan's character seems to supress geet's one... don't know if u got want i wanted to say...😉
With all my support and love ! 😊
Zubi !
First of all : fantastic !! 👏 both parts were really good especially the 3rd part it was exellent ! - Thank you 😛
So here is my analyses: 😊 - Huh!??? ...I'm sacred now
The thrid part was just mindblowing loved geet and her dad's dialogue ! 👏 Very well written i must say ! So Geet's dad is being suspicious... before readng that part i wasn't that afraid of "the maan u portrayed" but now... i have mixed feelings... U built so much mistery around maan's character in this part, really well done 👏. With this updt u made it clear that maan has some motives, he is not here by chance... So will b patiently waiting to know his motivation ! It was really smart of you to tell us that from geet's dad point of view... it added fear around maan character... With this part the title of ur ff start to make sense ! Because after readin part 1 and part 2 i was like : well maan seems too sweet compared to the title and little intro of ur ff 😛 - I will take that as a credit
On the other hand :we saw how nave and innocent geet is... 😕she didn't think once abt how he knew everything abt her... she assumed he was a nice guy... and here i want to say : hope u don't plan her to stay like this, i don't want her to b a poor nave girl ( just a request ^^ ) -yet she is Intelligent ... Sure i will keep in mind...
Noticed one more thing : For now, i didn't find anything from what i can say that maan loves geet... for now it's just a mere attraction... hope that's what u thought when u wrote it bcoz this is what is looks like 😳 -...Hope so 😕😳...
Now comming to the part 4 :
Hmmm nice part... not much to say abt this part apart from the fact that i felt something ^^ 😆
Actually when maan and geet were in the jeep, when geet said to maan things her dad told her abt him, i felt like he was saying : Oh to tumare dad ne mera pata lagaya...hmm... - Hmmm...You got me there 😆
Ok great parts, me eager to know maan's motives ! And to finish my peace of critic : maan's character seems to supress geet's one... don't know if u got want i wanted to say...😉 - yes i got your point...errr...emmm...Like?...😉
With all my support and love ! 😊
Zubi ! - Will my Love RR(Rose)😛
Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
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