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Posted: 19 years ago
hey...jus started 2 read ure fanfic...

its brilliant!! 👏 👏 👏
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PART 4

Kripa was really shocked to see angad on the team…… she didn't even know he swam and he turned out be on her team!! but this was hardly a time to deal with differences if they wanted to go to finals they had to win this thing so forgetting everything about angad she just smiled and took her place.

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"Wow this ***** decided to follow me here to.. Now I will tell her wat angad khanna is made of. She cant just come in and spoil my game and then walk off. She will pay and so will her sister"

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" ok everyone ready…. Remember the order angad….amber…josh….soniya…kripa"

" yeah…um wait coach how does this relay work again?"

" omg kripa…ur askin me this 5 min. before the meet…but heres what happens… angad will dive and swim a lap freestlyle with a baton in his hand then hell pass the baton to amber who will swim one lap and them josh willl do the same thing and then u will finish us off..understand?"

" uh..ya"

" ok good..good luck you guys"

Angad walks over to kripa

" ready to kick sum ***"

" lets do it"

Angad walks over to the diving board and as soon as he hears the gun shots he dives…

While hes swimming kripa cant help but notice his perfect body.. The bulging mucles and the light tan…"he was sooo perfect" kripa shook her head to get out of that thought it was just soo insane one minute she hated him the other minute she was telling herself he was soo hot…

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Someone pushed a baton into her hand and she looked up to see a hurried soniya pushing her

" kripa go!!!!!"

As kripa was swimming angad couldn't help but notice her figure…she was petite with dark brown hair and although she had attitude problems there was still something attractive about her…..

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Suddenly people were hugging him and clapping his back

" we did it angad!!!!… we won now we can go too to championships…yay!!!!!!"
" wow!!! Omg.. With kripa on the team I thoughjt we had a free ticket to last"

" shut up angad… it was you who got a slow start…im the one that got us caught uop"

" women are soo vain nowadays.. Anyways don't you hav anything better too do than eat my brain"

" no.. ur brain is just sooo yummy"

" aww really kripa… r u flirtin wid me"

" shut up angad! I dun flirt wid scardy cats who runnaway from their "JOB"

" hey kripa look"

In that flash of fa moment that kripa looked up….angad panced her

Kripa simply pulled her swimsuit back up and walked over to angad who was laughing his head off

She went behind him and pulled his pants down

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Caught by surprise angad looked at kripa with shock

No girl heck no one till today had had the courage to do that… the most popular boy since kindergarten did not get panced.. It was a rule…well not officially but by mutual agreement from past experiences..no one messed with the most popular kid.

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Angad was fuming by now … he had always hated kripa ever since they were little…… but now he was tooo angry to even find words but looking at his face anyone could tell that if he could he would shoot kriopa right now…. What did she think of herself… she had been irritating him since she was little, her brother stole his dads title away from him, and if that wasnt enough she even spoiled his first game and now panced him in front of all these people

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Kripa was laughing her head off until she saw angads face and it really scared her… she almost thought he was going to kill her.. Scared she ran into the locker room and washed her face and tried to calm down and forget that face..

Angad saw all the mocking faces off the crowd and that made him even angrier so he walked into the girls locker room and locked the door..

"hi kripa"

Kripa turned around and screamed

" what asre you doing angad…. Look ur scarin me "

All the while kripa was moving backword and angad was advancing forward

" a--ng---a--d u---- r-- rr----ee-aa-----lly scar---in m----e…don't move or I---lll yell"

By now angad was two centimeters away from kripa and kripa had hit the wall

" yell kripa… I dare you to yell"

Angd gave her a daring look

" im serious angad ill yell"

She opened her mouth and ………

coming soon- angad is hurt but his pain makes him happy...kripa is hurt yet the pain makes her happy....

hey every1

now u know what happpens when two angry ppl get even angrier😆😆ENJOY

himani😃

Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

hey...jus started 2 read ure fanfic...

its brilliant!! 👏 👏 👏

thx😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky-moon

nice part but weird preview 😛

lol ya kinda weird😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: muqualp

nice part! plz cont soon!

thx😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: delicateangel

damn yo kontinueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

ill cont tomm.😃

im typin right now😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
Superb part!!! Cant wait till the next part! Cont soon!
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Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

Superb part!!! Cant wait till the next part! Cont soon!

thankuu😃

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thanks😃

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awhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh pls cont. soon 😃

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