DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended)

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: sun_423

adi u totally rock........ 👏
bole tho ek dum jhakas.............. 😃 😊 😛
adi ab tho mujhe lagne laga hain ki meri story continue karne ke liye mujhe teri expert advice ki zaroorat padegi............ 👍🏼
tum tho star ho......... lekin haan star banke humhe bhool na jana..... 😆

aur kiran you are absolutely right..me tho just loved ur comment................. 😉

Suri...teray comments tu expectainally sab say achay hotay hai..star tum logo nay hi banaya hai...mein bhoolnay waloon mein say nahi hooo...aur tumhein meri nahi balk mujay tumhari advice ki zaroorat paray giii....n no thanx 4 ur comments...😳

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: rajeevAC
😆 😆 too gud Kiran dii...adi pardada not fair saara credit khud hi maar lete hoo but chalo me love ur story isliye cont soonn 😡

manuuu sisssy...welcum 😳

Oye AC sara credit mein kab liya...every part is dedicated to her...may i write her name or not😳 anywayz thanx..Richa..Gari..Unum...4 ur comments....😊

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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Parvathi

@Paru6

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Posted: 19 years ago

#183

wow! adi such an awsome part 👏 now cont soon

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#184

Thanx 4 ur comments..Parvathi 😳

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#185

DIL KYA KARE(Part-15)

Recap:Tusshar calls Kashish n tells her to b bac soon...as she has to join da office

SHIMLA
Gerewal House
SK returns to Shimla..
Sujal:itz nice to b home...
Kashish:hmmm ghar tu ghar hi hota hai naa..(she is getting ready to leave)
Sujal:kahan jaa rahi hoo...
Kashish:office...
Sujal:kal hi tu aye hai...
Kashish:kaam tu kaam hota hai naa..
Sujal:acha jayoo mein bhi office hoo ata hoon..ek hafta hogaya office nahi gaya...
Kashish:hmmmmm
Sujal:kitni dayer mein free hojayoogii..
Kashish:kyun...
Sujal:i will pick u up...
Kashish:hmmmm teq hai in 2 to 3 hour...
Sujal:ok
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SHERGILS OFFICE
Kashish enters Tussahr cabin...
Tusshar:Welcome Kashish...
Kashish:thanx
Tusshar:kaisa tha tumhara so called honeymoon...woh bhi Delhi mein...mein hota tu tumhein Mautrius...
Kashish(interups):Excuse me! yeh mera personal mamla hai behtar hai agr hum kaam ki baat karay tu...
Tusshar:haan kaam..mein tu asie hi keha raha tha..
Kashish:jagah chaiye joo bhi hoo..lekin agr do log ek dosray say pyar woh apni jinaat wohi bana letay hai..
Tusshar:tumhari yeh kitaabi baatein mujay tu samjh mein nahi ati hai..
Kashish:tumhein mein samjha bhi nahi rahi...aur mein yahan par apna resignation denay ayi hoo...
Tusshar:Kashish..mein tumhein apnay say door nahi janay doongaa..isliye tum yeh bhool jayoo k tum yeh job chor rahi hoo..
Kashish:tumsay door honay ka sawaal hi nahi utthta...door unsay howa jata hai..jink app kareeb hoo...aur tumhara tu meri zindagi mein koi wajood hi nahi hai...
Tusshar:hmmmm interesting itni jaldi bhul gayi mujay....kya naam hai tumharay husband kaa(tries to remeber) haan Sujal...milna paray gaa ussay...
Kashish:Tusshar..meray pass in fazool baaton k liye time nahi hai...yeh raha mera resignation...(she is u leaves n Tusshar follows her outside.....)
Tusshar:Kashish tum shyad bhool rahi hoo..we hav a contract..k tum 1 month ka notice diye beghair nahi chor sakti....
Kashish:mujay tumharay saaaaaaath kaam nahi karna...
Tusshar:karna hi paray gaa...u don't hav anyother choice..
Sujal(interups):Hi Kashish..
Tusshar:Hey Mr.
Kashish(shocked):tum...
Sujal:haan office say jaldi fariq hogaya..(pauses n looks towardz Tusshar..) ek min mein tumsay baad mein baat karta hoon..(he returns to Kashish n Tusshar is left confused)haan Kashish mein yeh keha raha tha..k office say jaldi fariq hogaya tu socha Rosy ki due coffee hi pii loo(he loooks at Rosy n pass a smile)
Kashish:haan par...
Tusshar:hello Mr. app kon hai..aur yahan kya kar rahay hai..
Sujal:oh haan tumhein tu bhool hi gaya..Hii i am Sujal Gerewal..
Tusshar:I am (stammers) Tuuuuuushar
Kashish:haan..Tussahr hum is baray mein kal baat kartay...
Tusshar:ok...
Kashish:chalein Sujal..
Sujal:haan chal raha hoon...thanx 4 da coffee Rosy...
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Itz late at nite...Sujal n Kashish r sleeping...wen Kashish phone ringz...she picks da phone itz Tushar....
Tusshar:Hii distrub tu nahi kiya..agr kiya bhi hai who cares..
Kashish:kya hai..kyun phone kiya...
Tusshar:kal office arahi hoo naa..
Kashish:tumnay poachnay k liye phone kiya..
Tusshar:nahi yeh kehnay k liye..k tumharay pass meray saath kaam karnay elwa koi choice nahi hai..so is baray mein sochna chor doo..
Kashish:Bye
Tusshar:Gud Nite(disconects)
Kashish(to herself):abhi meri zindagi mein khushyain ayi thi k yeh tufaan agaya....mein nahi chati k meray ateet ka saya meray aaj par paray....ek mahinay ki tu baat hai..mein kal hi notice day doongi..1 month yun hi guzar jaye gaa..phir yeh job mein chor doongii..
(Sujal sees Kashish worried....n gets up..)
Sujal:kon tha...
Kashish:nahi koi nahi...
Sujal:bahut raat hogayi hai soo jayoo..
(Kashish lies on his chest...n says)
Kashish:Sujal...
Sujal:hmmm
Kashish:mujay dar lag raha hai...
Sujal:dar kis baat ka dar...
Kashish:tumhein khonay ka...
Sujal:mein kahan jaa raha hoon..silly grl..dar lag raha hai..
Kashish:mujay khabhi chor kar tu nahi jayoogay
Sujal:Kashish asy baatein kyun kar rahi hooo..
Kashish:nahi phealy jawaab doo..
Sujal:acha baba..khabhi nahi jayoonga..tumhein chor kar...har waqt tumharay saaath rahoonga..
Kashish:tum mujsay hamshea hi inta pyar kartay rahoogay..
Sujal:nahi itna nahi issay bhi zyda...
Kashsih:Sujal...agr...
Sujal:Kashish ab mein subah galat tu nahi kehta....tum hi mujay sunay nahi deti...subah to late hoongaa..hii...
Kashish(annoyed):ok Gud Nite...(n turns da other side..)
Sujal(smiles):Kashish mazak kar raha tha...
Kashish:nahi tum soo...warna subah...
(Sujal turns her his side....)
Sujal:Kashish mein har pal tumharay saath rahoongaa..bahut pyar karta hoon tumsay..shyad hi khabhi zindagi mein itna kiya ho.....kisi say....aur yeh fazool khyal tumharay dimaag mein aye kahan say....chalooo ab yeh baatein choro...aur smile
Kashish(smiles):i love u...
Sujal:i love u too..
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SHERGILS OFFICE
Kashish:Plz may i cum in Sir..
Tusshar:u r alwayz welcum cum in
Kashish:appnay bulya tha...
Tusshar:haan....yeh kehnay k liye..k...packing abhi say karlooo..kal hum ek outdoor asignment k liye Goa jaa rahay hai..
Kashish:tumhara dimaagh kharab hogaya hai kya..mein tumharay saath kyun ayoongi....
Tusshar:aur haan puray 15 days humein wahan rehna hai ..
Kashish:mein nahi ayoongi...
Tusshar:tumhara pati tumsay bahut pyar karta hai...
Kashish(confused):haan...
Tusshar:kya tum yeh chati hok woh tumharay ateet k baray mein janay...
Kashish:tum mujay dhamka rahay hooo..
Tussahar:tumhein kya lagta hai...
Kashish:Sujal meray ateet k baray mein jaanta hai..
Tusshar:kya woh yeh jaanta hai k woh ateet mein hoon..
Kashish:tum asa kuch nahi karoogay...
Tusshar:bilkul nahi karoonga...iska matlab tum kal meray saath Goa arahi hoo..
Kashish:Tusshar tats blackmailing....
Tusshar:haan sweetheart....everything is fair in business n love...
Kashish:teq hai..mein chalooo giii..
Tusshar:tats gud..i will wait...
GEREWAL OFFICE
Rishi:Bigb mujay app say kuch baat karni hai..
Sujal:haan bolo...kitnay paisay chaiye...
Rishi:nahi bigb woh baat nahi hai..
Sujal:tu kya howa..kiddo itna tensed kyun hai..
Rishi:Bigb..Vasu Mom...apki dalaut k liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai..
Sujal(confused):tum kehna kya chatay hoo..
Rishi:Bigb chaiye app meray bhai nahi lekin..apnay khabhi mujay yeh mehsoos nahi honay diya...bahut pyar karta hoon appsay...
Sujal:saaf saaf bol kya howa...
Rishi:Bigb..mom nay phelay bhi apko marnay ki koshish phelay bhi ki thi..aur dobara bhi karay gii..
Sujal:log pasion k liye kitna gir jatay hai...
Rishi:mein yahan sirf warn karnay aya tha..apna dhaayan rakhna...
Sujal:hmmmm....
(Sujal tells this all 2 Angad...n asks wat shud b done...Angad tells him to wait...let se..wat Vasu do next...then they will take there step...Sujal goes home after a hetic day...)
SUJAL ROOM
Sujal:how was ur day...
Kashish:teq tha..
Sujal:i missed u soo much(hugs her..)
Kashish:Sujal...mujay Goa jana hai..ek project k liye..
Sujal:kab....
Kashish:kal...
Sujal(annoyed):kal aur tum mujay aaj bata rahi hoo....jayoo..mujay fariq nahi parhta...
Kashish:Sujallllll...suno tu
Suja:mujay kuch nahi suna
Kashish:mujay khud aaj pata chala
Sujal:acha wapis kab ayoogi
Kashish:15 dayz...
Sujal:what....sirf 15 dayz...itni jaldi kyun wapis arahi hoo..thora aur rukh jayooo...
Kashish:Sujal...tumnay tu kaha tha..tumhein meray janay say fariq nahi parhta..
Sujal:mein tu kuch bhi bolta rehta hoon..tum..15 dayz..mein itnay din tumharay beghiar kaisay rahoongaa..
Kashish:jaisay phelay rehtay thay....
Sujal:tab mein tumsay thori na karta tha...
Kashish:sirf 15 dayz ki to baat hai tumhein pata bhi nahi chalay gaa...kaisay guzar gay...
Sujal:tum jaanti bhi hoo..15 dayz..dayz..kitnay zyda hotay hai...1 din mein 24 ghatnay ek ek ghtanay mein 60 mins...aur 1 min 1 min mein 60 seconds....yahan ek pal ki doori bardhast nahi hoti..aur tum 15 dayz ko thora bol rahi hooo..
Kashish:Sujalllll...mein bhi tu miss karoongii..tumhein..
Sujal:hmmmmm
Kashish:kya soch rahay hoo
Sujal:mein soch raha hoo..kyun naa..Shergils join karlooo..
Kashish:haan haan..karloo roz Rosy ki coffee jo milay giii
Sujal:bolti hoo tu kar leta hon..lekin mujay woh tumhara roboteic boss passand nahi...
Kashish(laughs):Sujal..tum bhi naa...
Sujal:haan mein bhi na..par 15 dayz..
Kashish:chaloo ab mujay packing bhi kanri hai..
Sujal:hmmm ok...
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Here da part endz..
Hope u like it...
Plz Do Comment..
Luv
Adi

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago

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Ambarina Altaf

@ambarinaaltaf

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Posted: 19 years ago

#186

brilliant adi par daduu..... 👏 too good awesum part.... 👏 par yeh tushki baby ko hatao story mein se.... 😡 warna mei usse upar bhej dungi... 🤢 n contd soon... 😆

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rajeev1

@rajeev1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#187

👏 ..very nisssssssshheeee!...continue soooon 😃

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 19 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf
brilliant adi par daduu..... 👏 too good awesum part.... 👏 par yeh tushki baby ko hatao story mein se.... 😡 warna mei usse upar bhej dungi... 🤢 n contd soon... 😆

Hey Amby thanx....aur Tushki ka mein bahut jald hi kuch karta hoon...don't worry....tumhein takleef nahi dooonga😆😉

Farah...thanx 4 reading my story....😳

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Shruti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: appki_kashish
Wah Wah Adil kya likhte ho ek dum apne jaisa bana diya Sujal ko usse bade flirt toh tum ho anywayz thoda sudhar jao aur Sujal ko bhi sudharo 😉 aur phir Kashish Sujal ko chodke dusro pe bhi concentrate karo 😉 by the way ur story roxxx but not you 😆n ya keep writing akhir training toh mujhse hi li hain na aur haaan sara credit khud mat lo mera bhi nam aana chahiye akhir i play such an imp part im sure mujhse impress hoke hi u wrote da story 😳😳

wah wah kiren bahut aachey 👏kya baat kahi too good luv ur comment boley to jahkas 😉😉

adi bolo hai koi jawab and i agree with her yaar sab ko dedicate kartey kabhi apni life ki heroine ka naam bhi le liya karoy 😆😆

chalo tum dono bilkul story ke couple ki tarah ho 😃

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Shruti

@Shruti11

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Posted: 19 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: rmanu7382
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Adiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Tum ne story kab se shuru ki ......
yaad aaya Sur ne ek baar bataya tha ............
wait till i catch hold of u 😛

haila meri manu is back i m sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy manu meri story par bhi comment kar do merey thread par tumahra hi intezar tha

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