ArHi FF: Highway to hell-2, chapter 38, pg 141

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thecraze92

@thecraze92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#951

loved freddy is this update!

I think you should let the anticipation build up...and may be, have them adopt malli to end this nuisance of her leaving the house as well. Lastly, she should not listen to Peter. If he didn't care then, he prolly wouldn't care now!

P.S. Thanks for the pm!

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#952

Vidhya...Congratulations for ur Career rise.Super!!, Absolutely thrilled for u!!! 🤗A party is on eh??

I have been holding few updates for sometime...I read them all.I didn't comment some them earlier as I was travelling a lot.

Wanna hug u tight...for all of them..Cried when Khushi told about her baby...sobbed so much when Arnav sobbed with Khushi...for the loss.

Loved the wedding prep bit...then comes Malli...that was quite a good change from the storyline...I am loving this...I see Arnav like a Godfather.the song was beautiful.

And the hilarious intro..with Peter Parker and our huggable..Green Goblin.Muwaaanh!! For that.🤗

And now the fun chapter...with all cornflakes around...that was very cute.Khushi saying " NO" for sex and Arnav...becoming ASR in the morning...and not giving in...Good Job!! On that...I don't want a spineless Arnav.Khsuhi take that...LOL!!!

Yea..a bit of tease would be fun...I don't mind if they can hold till the honeymoon.This 'kiss' in the show...has really shaked us up.So, Yes please...some Hawt innuendoes..are so very Welcome.

Peter...now it's ur turn...to show u have indeed some Ballz!!!

Thank you for the PM's...loved all the songs .And u r the Best!!! Muwaaanh!!! Love ya!!!😊🤗

Ash.

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#953

That was a good one Vidhya, I can totally imagine Freddy swatting Peter on his back...and I must say those few lines of Freddy were AMAZING! Completely hilarious, witty and to the point!!

So Peter is back at the doorstep..I dont know much about him to judge him on whether Malli should listen or not...

and as for Arnav and Khushi...I likeddd how you added them in :) I was missing them. As for the sex...ummm...I dont know, if it gets too hard to handle...go for it? LOL! However, the cornflakes fight was great along with Khushis and Mali's convo, its like they have this born connection, probably because of facing very similiar pasts.

GREAT UPDATE :D

- Dee

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Alice

@alice54

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#954

Awesoem Update!!!

i would say let them wait till their honeymoon and make it up in big time😉

continue soon...

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#955

Loved this update!!

It was AWESOME!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!

Plzz continue soon!!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#956

nice..wonderful update...beautifully written..😊

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#957

Loved the whole update !!!! It was very lighthearted and sweet !!! Loved the cornflakes fight !!!! I don't really mind if they wait until their honeymoon !!!!
Eager to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!