ArHi FF: Highway to hell-2, chapter 38, pg 141

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bookadict303

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Omg! Loooved it! Continue very very very soon! :)

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

whoa! did not see tht coming!! it was rele good though. very nice twist! great job hun! this was a great update!!

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

A big hug for you! That was an amazing update! Heart-breaking, too. Can't wait to read more!

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N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

i was actually crying... i feel so sorry for Khushi.. and yes she has all the right to say all what she did.. once and for all... loved it.. so much... you come back with more interesting turns in each updates...

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Jenni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

That was heart breaking, poor Khushi! Update soon please! I think Arnav n Khushi need sometime together!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

shit. o my god.
thats...i feel so horrible for her.
o god.
o my god.
that was angsty. as you put it, really angsty, i mean the way khushi just burst out, i dont blame her.
i mean anjali has seen her share of gloom but somehow her happiness always ends up as khushi's semi loss...
but im loving the ending, i mean arnav fully understands how much he ruined, for himself, for her...

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WittyKitty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Till when will Anjali's bura saaya bring misery to khushi? This is what happens when a man gives FAR too much importance to his sister...at the cost of his own happiness!😡

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Vidiya ! :D
I believe this is the first ever comment i've got to post. I wanted to last time as well, don't know what happened then.

You're one amazing, fabulous writer ! honestly, I've caught up to your threads in no time, and they've just awestruck me ! Truly loving how've been developing their story in the future, and I can so imagine it like that.

All the character synopsis and the way you've developed them are just great, loving the self-made women Khushi, those adorable kids and the fully supporting friends. Last post, my heart went to Nita (the little one) , going throu cancer. everything was so surreal and just so real.

I've felt the dialogues and the imagery, loving the kids especially. Keep it up, and keep this going. I don't want it to end, lol. You're just great with everything from dialogue, to getting into the character and pouring their heart out, to maintaining a correct plot that matches the absolute correct timing and atmosphere. Loving it all.
Please post again soon, I'll be gladly looking forward to it as always <3

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Omg!! vidhya...
it was totally unexpected...nice twist..
feelin so bad for khushi...!!
great update
continue soon

Divya

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fareeha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#410

Am so sad, that was so unexpected. I feel so sorry. That was written beautifully, esp the last part, where arnav khushi shared their pain with each other.