Originally posted by: Naina2127
Hi Vidhya :)
I'm a new reader so I thought I should introduce myself, I'm Naina.
Anywho, I started reading this FF and couldn't stop! So I pretty much spent the last two hours catching up with the story, and I have to say you did an amazing job! I loved reading how Khushi made a new life for herself, with Freddy, Nigel, and Adit, and of course her two little girls. I completely adored reading the part where Arnav introduces himself to them, and seeing how he became comfortable with them over time. Payal and her weepiness always cracks me up, I just love how she reacts by crying to everything! And poor Buaji, at least the woman repented, even though she's now dead. Reading about Nita's illness practically had me in tears, but then I read that she was in remission and was all happy :) Um Adit-Anjali getting married had me SO mad, and I'm still queasy with how Arnav went to Anjali's house when the in-laws came over. The In-Laws! Oh my god! I freaking LOVED reading that part! I could absolutely positively relate cause I'm a Southie and that entire brahmin thing, with the garlic and everything is so something I've heard older family members saying! It was so funny!
And Arnav and Khushi, and their relationship. I thought the way you developed their story, with Arnav wanting that date and Khushi saying no, then agreeing to the lunch, and then him being so supportive of her, coming all the way to London to be there for her, was just...I have no words. I'm so happy to see that they both view each other as family, how Khushi considers him a parent to her kids...oops, their kids, and reading their cute little parts. SO happy she proposed to him in this last part! And I absolutely cannot wait to read the rest of the story!
Thanks so much for writing this awesome awesome story! I absolutely adored reading it, and you have no idea how much I'm looking forward to the next part...especially after reading that teaser 😆
Wow, I hope I haven't bored you with this enormous post, but yes, I just love your story.
Cheers!
Naina
Thanks Naina. I am glad you liked my little story here and the way the characters have developed. Its been fun writing it, and hearing that people enjoy reading makes it even better. Glad you had fun. 😊
Cheers!
Vidhya
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