ArHi FF: Highway to hell-2, chapter 38, pg 141 - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina2127

Hi Vidhya :)

I'm a new reader so I thought I should introduce myself, I'm Naina.

Anywho, I started reading this FF and couldn't stop! So I pretty much spent the last two hours catching up with the story, and I have to say you did an amazing job! I loved reading how Khushi made a new life for herself, with Freddy, Nigel, and Adit, and of course her two little girls. I completely adored reading the part where Arnav introduces himself to them, and seeing how he became comfortable with them over time. Payal and her weepiness always cracks me up, I just love how she reacts by crying to everything! And poor Buaji, at least the woman repented, even though she's now dead. Reading about Nita's illness practically had me in tears, but then I read that she was in remission and was all happy :) Um Adit-Anjali getting married had me SO mad, and I'm still queasy with how Arnav went to Anjali's house when the in-laws came over. The In-Laws! Oh my god! I freaking LOVED reading that part! I could absolutely positively relate cause I'm a Southie and that entire brahmin thing, with the garlic and everything is so something I've heard older family members saying! It was so funny!

And Arnav and Khushi, and their relationship. I thought the way you developed their story, with Arnav wanting that date and Khushi saying no, then agreeing to the lunch, and then him being so supportive of her, coming all the way to London to be there for her, was just...I have no words. I'm so happy to see that they both view each other as family, how Khushi considers him a parent to her kids...oops, their kids, and reading their cute little parts. SO happy she proposed to him in this last part! And I absolutely cannot wait to read the rest of the story!

Thanks so much for writing this awesome awesome story! I absolutely adored reading it, and you have no idea how much I'm looking forward to the next part...especially after reading that teaser 😆

Wow, I hope I haven't bored you with this enormous post, but yes, I just love your story.

Cheers!
Naina



Thanks Naina. I am glad you liked my little story here and the way the characters have developed. Its been fun writing it, and hearing that people enjoy reading makes it even better. Glad you had fun. 😊

Cheers!
Vidhya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahaha cricket. Oh Arnav, how could you do that to her? 😆

Can't wait to read about this explosive dinner!

Do update soon.

Cheers!
Naina
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lol...great update. So, i guess no kinky for Arnav...huh?!!😆 I was laughing out loud as I read the couch watching cricket part...and my husband looked at me too...Cause we just played the exact scene out before i settled into bed and whipped out my lappy for company as he was watching HIGHLIGHTS...with the same answer...it'll be done in a bit!!😆 All men are alike...😡😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
ASR watching cricket?! Nice one. I have to say, I enjoy watching cricket. Especially when India was in the finals of the world cup. I was on a bus, and was trying to keep up with the the scores.

Back to the update, Anjali's pregnant? Can't wait to read everyone's reactions! Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update!!!!!
Loved the way you explained the truth about Indian men and cricket👏ClapClap
And loved the way Aadit took care of Anjali...it was actually a little funny also...
continue soon...
Edited by alice54 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..omg..i just have one thing to say abt dis part 'MEN' ...nd dey say women r complicated
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Posted: 13 years ago
I can't believe they aren't married yet😆 so much like a couple. His explanation of why he didn't like it was hilarious, poor Khusi, she worked all the way to be like one of his fantasies. Never mind, she is his fantasy, dream, everything.
Adith or choo chweet, loving this guy, he got so very over excited at the concept of delivery😆. Waiting for the dinner, and how is Nita now? Fit and fine I presume?
Lovely chappy,
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant update. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Loved it.

Update soon.😃 Thanks.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow anji is pregors cooolll

I love it

Asr choosing cricket man ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i would gripe bout men and cricket, but honestly, if the world cup was on- i wouldnt want sex either.

well cept...i mean arnav...and quickies are fun too...although a private showing of the game would be perfectly kinky ok...

BLOODY HELL! she's knocked up?
wow...

wonder how arnie takes it 🤣


aadit...god. i mean the marriage was horribly timed- but i still love this man, he's adorable...


man! OMFG cant wait for this dinner...

ps. my original account is malluangel, i just need to get posts on this :P

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