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Link to Previous Part 11: /forum/fan-fictions/2325057/ff-kaho-na-pyar-hain-updated-part-20-page-86

PART 12

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

It was late afternoon, the sun was almost setting. The bright ray entered the detention hall where Barun, Kushaal, Manvi and Kushi sat.

"It all happened because of you, akru.. Ab yaha pas gaye na" said Manvi pulling a rather ugly face at Kushaal.

Kushaal looked directly at her from the desk in front of her, "maine kaha ta kya, chair ke upar utkar, bandar ki tara nacho??, Bandiriya!!"

"Bandar hoga tu!" Shouted Manvi sliently so the teacher doesn't hears her. Kushaal just eyed her, as he saw the teacher is looking his way.

Kushi was siting next to her sister looking up at the ceiling "Ohh devi maiya, yaha se bahar nikal ne ka koi upay bathiye" she spoke stumping her foot.

"Pagal hain sabke sab" muttered Barun from the desk in front of Kushaal's, getting rather annoyed sitting in the detention hall with "namoonas".

"Yeh main kya kar rahi hoon yaar, Kushaal ko naraaz kar rahi hoon, when am meant to be wooing him." Manvi thought to herself looking at Kushaal, who was no longer looking at her.

"How do I divert his attention to me, kaise, kaise" she thought tapping her fingers on the table. When suddenly her eyes fell on Kushi doodling away on a paper.

"Mil gaya rasta" she smirked. "Di mujhe bhi paper aur pen do na", "yeh lo" says Kushi handing the paper and pen to Manvi.

Manvi quickly starts drawing hearts on the paper, scribbling 'I LOVE YOU jannu' in big black hand writing. She crunches up the paper into a ball and aims it at Kushaal and she throws, giving back the left over papers and pen to Kushi.

"What the" muttered Barun, as a paper ball hits his steady back.

"Oops, wrong person" says Manvi biting in to her toungue looking down at her desk.

Barun quickly looks behind and sees everyone is busy doing something, he leans down from his chair grabbing on to the white paper ball.

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Prachi finally reaches home after tackling the busy trafic, "main agayi dadi" she speaks entering the dining area. "Theek hain beta, quickly freshen up and come downstairs and help me make these ladoos" says Dadi from the dining table. "Ladoo dadi?? But why are you making them??"

"Yeh bahut khaas ladoo hain beta, mandir main ja kar bhog lagene ke liye hain, so am making them myself" spoke Dadi happily.

"Oh Dadi, bagwan ji koh maska kyun?? Boyfriend shoyfriend ka chakar hain kya??" Said Prachi teasing her grandma.

"Chup, shaitan.." smiles Dadi, whilst Prachi runs upstairs to her bedroom to freshen up dumping all her shopping on top of her bed, to get back to later.

After having a quick shower, she quickly reaches downstairs and helps Dadi make the ladoos.

Gurmeet enters the house with Adi.

"Gurmeet tum agaye beta" speaks Dadi loudly. "Haan Dadi" answers Gurmeet taking a sit in the lounge with Adi. "Adi toh woh mital wala client ko kya huwa'" Gurmeet ask Adi whilest Dadi makes her way to them.

"Yeh sab kya hain beta, ab ghar main bhi office?" Speaks Dadi looking at the masses of files on top of the glass tea table, "nahi dadi its a very important project, so I have to do it tonight" answers Gurmeet puting his right leg over his left.

Dadi looks at Gurmeet in a shock, "Yeh sab se bhi ek important bhaat hain aaj, tum mere sath mandir chaal reh ho".

"Aaj nahi Dadi, bahut important report tayar karna hain" speaks Gurmeet trying to persuade Dadi.

Dadi pulls a face, acting to fool Gurmeet into going with her, "haan, tum mera kyun sune ge.. Ab toh main boori ho chuki hoon na??"

Gurmeet looks at Dadi and stand up from his sitting position putting his both hands on Dadi's cheeks saying "Dadi, this is not true.. Your not old.. Am coming with you..".

Adi giggles packing away all the files on top of the table with out Gurmeets command. Gurmeet looks behind and is shocked to see Adi is packing away with out his permission, he looks at Adi with his laser eyes which frightens Adi so he leaves the folders on the table standing back up "sorry sir" he speaks.

"Sorry kis bhaat ki, pack up" Gurmeet speaks and everyone laughs at Adi for being frightened.

"All the ladoos are made Dadi" shouts Prachi from the dining table.

Gurmeet: "Ladoo??"
Prachi: "haan bhai ladoo, Dadi ki khaas, you know the ones she makes to flatter bhagwan ji"
Gurmeet: "Dadi ki khaas Ladoo.. I love them" and he runs towards the dinning table ready to gobble it up.
Prachi: "nahi bhai, you can't eat from here this is for bagwan ji.."
Gurmeet: "teek hain, main nahi katha"

"Okay Gurmeet beta, get ready and come we shall be going now, and Prachi you get ready aswel" says Dadi.

"Main Dadi??, but kyun??" Asks a confused Prachi. "Mandir jaane ke liye" says Dadi. Prachi quickly comes up with an excuse to avoid going "Main nahi ah sakti Dadi, am not feeling well."

"What happened Prachi?" Says a concerned Gurmeet. "Kuch nahi bhai just a slight headache" lies Prachi.

"Theek hain beta, you take rest... Yeh Barun bhi ab tak ghar nahi aya, it would of been nice if he came with us too" says Dadi.

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The white paper ball was now in Barun's hand. He opens its up and reads "I love you Jaanu". "What the" he mutters. He looked behind him and saw Kushi scribbling away on a piece of paper. "Yeh mujse pyaar karti hain?" Barun thought in a confused state, "how dare she!" He screamed within himself.

He pushed the wooden chair backwards causing it to screech, which gained the attention of everyone present in the room. Barun stood up, the white paper crunched in between his clenched fist, he marched his way towards Kushi and hovered in front of her.

Kushi glanced up, "ab isse kya chahiye!" She whispered looking at the ceiling. "Look at me damn it" Barun howled, "yeh kya hain?" He screamed opening up the paper and holding it close to Kushi's face.

"I love you jaanu" Barun screamed, "Jaanu! How dare you call me that" Barun said with disgust.

Kushi's facial expressions changed from shock to surprise to amusement. She didn't have a clue what this Barun was going on about.

Kushaal looked at the whole scene from his desk and thought to himself "yeh ajeeb behenain hain. Ek hi mulaqaat main love hojatha hain".

Maanvi had her head bowed down, she realised that this mayhem was caused because of her "ab kya karu!" She thought, hoping to find a soloution out of this mess.

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Gurmeet and Daadi arrived at the mandir, there was a radiant ambience created at the mandir today, a lot of people had gathered and were singing and dancing to please the Hindu lord Shiva.

Gurmeet stopped his foot near the steps at the entrance of the mandir, "Daadi aap ja kar pooja kar li jiya, main aap ka bahar wait karta hoon" he spoke earnestly to his Daadi. "Lekin beta ab aap agaye hain tho andar chal kar darshan kar lijiye na" Daadi spoke with a hint of hope. "Nahi Daadi please don't force me, mujhe nahi jaana, aap jaiye" Gurmeet said with determination. "Theek hain beta" Daadi said half heartedly "jaisi aap ki marzi" she whispered whilst climbing up the long stairway to reach the glorified temple.

Gurmeet stood outside, leaning onto the strong white pillar for support, waiting for his Daadi when a sudden laughter reached his ears.

The laughter was the most beautiful sound he ever heard, it filled his entire body with an unknown warmth, the sound caused a certain part of his chest to ache.

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Prachi was home alone and in her heart she was grateful that there were no obstacles in her way for this special day.

She covered her body with a rich red saree, heavily embroidered with silver sequins. She plaited her into a tight braid and placed fresh marigold flowers into her hair, tying it into a bun. She adorned her feet with jingling anklets and her hands with twinkling glass red bangles. She left her neck empty, perhaps on purpose.

She picked up all the bags of shopping she had done earlier today and rushed out her room. However, laid forgotten under her duvet was the box which contained the silver stoned men's bracelet which she had bought to gift that special someone.

She carefully sneaks out the house, avoiding the dutiful servants reaching the gigantic field of the tall broadly built man. She decorates his field as a newly wedded bride.

The tall broadly built man was standing outside his lavish house breathing in the icy air. He glanced his eyes throughout the landscape, perhaps in search for someone.

His eyes came to a stop when he spotted a light flicker of flame coming from a distance. He started closing in on the distance with his steady steps.

The more closer he went the more he believed it was her "Jisse dhoonte hain meri ankhen' Kahi woh ladki ass paas tho nahi'" He asked himself confidently in a hope he will be surprised.

He reached the place where the light was coming from. It was deep into the woods, surrounded by trees and an acre of land which stood in the middle.

He knew this had to be the place, where all his dreams always came true, this is the most precious land he owns and is very close to his heart, as it bared witness to all the moments they shared.

Candles illuminated the surroundings. The flames brightened the dark night creating a glow around the whole place which also reflected on his face. Fresh red rose petals were scattered on the ground, making a soft carpet for him to walk on. He gazed all around and a smile adorned his face when her fragrance filled his nostrils and when he looked up he found her smiling at him covered in red, holding a cake.

He moved towards her and stood a mere 2 inches away from her. His closeness was having a weird effect on her, her breathing became rapid and her eyes shut automatically. He looked at her and smiled and brushed his cold hands onto her warm cheeks, which turned into the colour of tomatoes with his one touch.

His closeness made her senseless, she was falling weak, without her own knowledge she dropped her hands onto her sides causing the cake to drop out her hands.

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Manvi was still puzzled whilst Kushi giggled at Barun's raged face expressions, to her his face looked rather funny matching his humorous words.

Barun looked directly into her face, and was getting electrocuted by her laughter. It pierced through his ears like as if someone put a knife in him.

"Iss tara mujhe gooro math!, Main aur tumse pyar??, shakaal dekhi hain apni??" Continued a laughing Kushi getting up from her seat standing next to the table looking into Barun's eyes.

"Wah, kya bath hain" cheered Kushaal supporting Kushi.

"Gatiya ladki, mere paise ki peeche pari hain, Chorni..!, ab main dekhata hoon Jaanu kya hota hain.." He spoke walking into her slowly. Her laughter suddenly stopped, her pink face turned pale whilst she walked backwards. She couldn't go any more back as the table was now stopping her from moving any further, she closes her eyes as she knows he was not going to stop, giving up all hopes of survival she grabbed onto the table with her hands.

Her face was only couple of centimetres away from the reach of Barun when Manvi quickly stands up and with her pencil like fingers and soft palm places her hand in the centre of Barun's chest stopping him from getting closer to her sister.

She pushes him back with her entire force just like the hunk John Abraham from her favourite movie 'Force' and succeeds.

"Strong hain ladki.. Nahi??" Speaks Kushaal addressing it to Barun who looks at him rudely.

Kushi opens her eyes, "pinch me" she says to her sister as she couldn't believe she got saved.

"Yaha yeh kya hora hain" shouts Mrs Dasgupta who had enough of this troublesome foursome who were not ready to sit in silence.

All for them become silent and look at the teacher. "Tum sabki aur doh gante ki detention hain.. All sit back in your place now" she screams.

"What the' two more hours" says an angry Barun sitting back down in his place looking back at Kushi who was also now sitting down.

"No man! I can't be in here for another two hours! Have to get out of here" thinks Kushaal looking at the huge window. "Mrs Dasgupta, bahut garmi hain nahi? Can you please open the window?" Says Kushaal.

"Garmi?? Yeh kya pagal hogaya hain?" Thinks Manvi as its really cold in the detention hall.

The teacher listens to Kushaal and opens the window for him. "Thanks miss!" Speaks Kushaal.

"Am just going out for a bit students, please behave yourself am coming back in 5 minutes" says the teacher and walks out the hall.

Kushaal quickly gets up as the teacher exits the room.

Precap

Prachi ki raat bakhi..
Gurmeet ki raat hothi hain haseen..
Kushaal ki raat ki nayi shuruat..
Shabir ki raat hoti hain rangeen..

***************NOTE***************

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Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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lagtha hain barun bilkul paagal hain..
gurmeet fida over ladooo..
wow!
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Really nice plz update soon this is just amazing thnx for the pm 😊
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fantastic superb...!manvi barun great...its really good work...keep going...continue soon...eagerly waiting...
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great update as always dear thanks for pm cont soon
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She pushes him back with her entire force just like the hunk John Abraham from her favourite movie 'Force' and succeeds.

"Strong hain ladki.. Nahi??" Speaks Kushaal


maanvi khushaal barun n khushi scenes are absolutely hilarious!! the comic scenes are too good!!🤣 the scene sizzles with them .

geet, khushi n maanvi being sisters..WHAT A COMBINATION!!disasters waiting to happen!!👏

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Wow love the scene in the classroom

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