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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srirad

for new thread👏

Wonderful update..👏
Maaneet moment cute⭐️
Precap interesting..What is maan plan..?
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next

u will come to know abt his plan in the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

wowww loved it

the maan in ur ff is such a sweetheart i wish n pray that all get someone like him in their life
n waiting to see what is maan's plan????????

I too wish and pray for the same dear regarding the plan it will b clear in the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update dear piggy
Lots happened in this update

Maan openly expected their love...
That was a great move
Then he combined their name...

This two things will have greate impact on her

He takes her to his farm house this is other greate move

Then precap is very interesting

I am typing from my iPhone so small comment dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice part
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Very nice update dear piggy
Lots happened in this update

Maan openly expected their love...
That was a great move
Then he combined their name...

This two things will have greate impact on her

He takes her to his farm house this is other greate move

Then precap is very interesting

I am typing from my iPhone so small comment dear

Di again a perfect analysis regarding the precap let us hope for the best love u Di
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I have replied to your comments. Here is the next part I hope u will enjoy reading it.
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PART 71

Maan: Geet tum meri aadat bigaad rahi ho

Geet gives him a confusing look

Maan: Nahi samjhi? Ab tum har baar drive karte waqt apna sar mere kandhe par rakhogi toh mujhe iski aadat ho jaayegi aur phir kisi reason se agar hume alag alag car mein jaana pade toh phir tumhare bagair main drive kaise kar paaunga

Geet started laughing and hugged him lovingly

Maan: Achhaji toh Madam ko mujh bechare ki halat ko dekhkar hassi aa rahi hai koi baat nahi Geet inn sabka main gin gin kar badla lunga sahi waqt aane par

He winks at her

Geet turns pink in shyness

Maan continues driving

Geet was smiling throughout the drive

Suddenly the car stopped

Maan: Ab iss car ko kya ho gaya. Geet tum yahi baitho main zara check kar lu k car mein aakir kya problem hai

Geet was a bit reluctant she did not want Maan to go out

Maan: Geet ab jab tak main dekhunga nahi toh hume pata kaise chalega k car mein kya problem hai aur waise bhi ye area city se kafi dur hai yaha hume koi help nahi milnewala hume khud solution dhundna hoga pls Geet ek baar mujhe check toh kar lene doh

Geet unwillingly leaves his hand

Maan comes out of the car and starts examining the car

Maan: Geet humare car ka engine garam ho gaya hai

As soon as Maan says this Geet starts getting nervous

She carefully observes the area it was very much similar to the place where she had witnessed the murder

Maan: Geet tum yahi wait karo main kahi se paani dhundkar lata hoon

Geet comes out of the car and hugs him

She was trying to tell him that u won't go anywhere

Maan: kya hua Geet tum dar kyun rahi ho daro mat Geet yaha paas mein hi ek well hai main waha se jaakar paani le aata hoon tum bus andar baitho

She increases her grip

Maan: Geet kya tum mere saath chalna chahthi ho?

She nods her head in approval

Maan: Thik hai chalo

Maan takes a can with him and both of them start moving towards the well

Geet's nervousness was increasing

It was a deserted area and Geet could actually recollect the incident that had taken place in Amritsar

Maan: Geet mujhe kafi time ho gaya hai iss area mein aakar lagta hai hum raasta bhatak gaye hai waise bhi kehthe hai k iss area mein raat ko khafi gunde badmaash ghumthe hai

Geet could now visualize the goons standing in front of her

She immediately stopped Maan by holding his hand indicating that he should not go ahead

Maan: Kya hua Geet thak gayi dekho bus thodi dur aur dekho waha pe ek ghar dikh raha hai hum waha se madat maang lethe hai

Geet could sense some danger but she was not able to express it

Maan held her hand and both of them started approaching the house

Maan: Hello koi hai?

Something was different about this house Geet could sense it

She had a strong feeling that both of them should not enter the house

Maan: Geet darwaza toh khula hai chalo andar jaakar dekthe hai

Both of them entered the house

It was a dark room as dark as death

Geet started breathing heavily she could somehow relate herself with this place

Maan: Koi hai? Dekhiye humari car yaha paas mein bannd pad gayi hai kya hume thoda paani mil saktha hai

Suddenly both of them could hear some noise from the adjacent room

Maan: Lagta hai uss kamre mein koi hai chalo chalkar dekthe hai

Geet stopped him by holding his hand

Maan caressed her face

Maan: Geet lagta hai tum thak chuki ho tum yahi rukho main andar k kamre mein jaakar dekhtha hoon okay

Geet does not allow him to go

But Maan removes her hand and goes inside without looking at Geet

Geet could not gather courage to go along with Maan

15 minutes passed Maan did not return

Her heart was giving her signals that her Maan was in danger

She immediately rushed inside

She was shocked to see the scene that met her eyes

She could see shadows of some men who were holding some weapon like thing in their hand

She could clearly make out that those weapons were swords and guns

She started looking here and there but the room was dark and hence she could not locate Maan

Her attention again got focused on those shadows

It seemed she was again trapped in the same situation like that in Amritsar

One goon held a person and stabbed him with his sword

She wanted to shout but her voice was not supporting her

As the victim was falling down he took a name

Maan: Geet''''

It was Maan's voice

Geet recognized Maan's voice

Geet: Maan

She screamed with all her strength

Suddenly the lights were switched on and after few seconds when her eyes got adjusted to the brightness she saw a dead body lying in front of her eyes

She could not believe her eyes. Her Maan was lying there motionless

Geet: Maan'

Her love was now dominating her fear

She rushed towards him

Geet: Maan uthiye Maan dekhiye aapki Geet aapke paas hai aap usse baat nahi karoge

Maan did not move he was lying in a pool of blood

Geet: Maan aap kuch bolthe kyun nahi aap aise kyun so rahe ho yeh koi sone ka waqt hai kya, uthiye Maan maine kaha uthiye

Geet was crying she was totally helpless

Geet: Maan aapne mujhse vaada kiya tha k aap meri aakhon mein kabhi aasu aane nahi doge toh aaj jab main ro rahi hoon toh aap aise aaram se kaise leth sakthe ho

Geet slapped him many times but Maan did not respond

Geet: Maan aap mujhe kyun tadparahe ho aapki Geet aapke bagair nahi jee sakthi aap mujhse naaraz ho toh mujhe saza dijiye par yun humesha k liye mere daaman ko suna mat kijiye

She hugged his body

Geet: Aapke bagair aapki Geet mar jaayegi Maan

A hand moved towards her shoulder and touched it tenderly

She knew it was him she recognized his touch very well

Maan: Geet k bagair toh Maan bhi nahi reh saktha

Geet comes out of his embrace and looks at him

Maan was perfectly alright he had a victorious smile on his face

Geet started kissing him madly all over his face

Maan allowed her to do whatever she felt like doing

Geet captured his lips and started kissing it passionately

She bit his lower lip and demanded an entry

She started exploring every secret of his mouth with her tongue

She was removing all her insecurities and fear through this kiss

This kiss was also signifying her happiness that she was going through on seeing her Maan safe and sound

Maan was responding to the kiss with equal passion but he did not try to be the dominant partner in the kiss

After sometime Geet finally ended the kiss and hugged him

Maan carefully lifted Geet in his arms and goes and sits on a chair as usual Geet was sitting on his lap

Geet rested her head on his chest

Maan: Maine tumhe kafi dara diya na Geet mujhe maaf kar doh par main kya karta mere paas iske alawa koi aur chara nahi tha

Geet: Par aapne aisa kyun kiya Maan?

Maan: Tum nahi jaanti? Geet jis tarah mujhe takleef mein dekhkar tum tadap rahi thi ussi tarah tumhe takleef mein dekkar main andar hi andar ghut raha tha

Maan: Tumhari aawaz sunne k liye main taras gaya tha Geet tum toh kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi jaanti ho Dhust danav sunne ko mere kaan taras rahe the

Geet: Maan jaante hai Amritsar mein maine ek aadmi ka khoon hothe hue dekha hai unn gundo ne uss bechare aadmi ka sar kaatkar murder kiya tha main ye baat bardaash nahi kar paayi issi wajah se main shock mein chali gayi thi par aaj

Maan: Par aaj mujhe uss aadmi ki jagah dekkar tumhe apne shock se bahar aana hi pada main jaanta tha tum react zarur karogi aakhirkaar humara rishtha duniya k har ek dar se kafi zyada buland hai

Geet: Maan maine aapko kafi pareshan kiya haina mere iss condition ki wajah se aapko kafi mushkil uthani padi

Maan: Tum meri Geet ho aur Geet se judi hui koi bhi baat Maan ko takleef nahi pauchasakthi.

Geet: Main wakai mein badi khushkismat hoon Maan jo mujhe aap mile

Maan: Geet kal hum police station jaakar iss incident k baare mein police ko inform karenge main nahi chahtha k wo gunegaar yuh khule ghume unhe unke kiye ki saza milni chahiye

Geet: Ji aap thik keh rahe ho unn gunegaaro ko saza milni chahiye

Maan: Main unhe nahi chodunga Geet unki wajah se hi meri Geet ki ye halat hui hai sach keh raha hoon Geet agar tum aaj bhi nahi bolthi toh main shayad iss ladai mein haar maan letha tumhe khone ka darr mujhe jeete jee maar detha

Geet: Geet toh markar bhi apne Maan ko kabhi bhula nahi sakthi maut bhi aa jaayena tab bhi apne Maan k liye Geet maut ko bhi kadi takkar dekar aapke paas laut aayegi

Maan: Humhara saath yuhi bana rahegana?

Geet: Humesha humesha k liye

Maan could not control his emotions any longer

He took her lips within his initiating a passionate kiss

A kiss through which both of them were making new promises

This kiss marked the beginning of their new journey a journey where both of them had dedicated not only their lives but also their existence to each other

PRECAP: Maaneet launch a police complain

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

finally the plan gonna be revealed...i mean ab toh definitely geet will be fine...after all...MSK ka plan joh hain...kabhi fail nahi hota... :P


coming to the update...well...their car stopped...am damn sure that it forms part of maan's plan... ; )...i mean see like geet was thinking...it all resembled that manhoos day from when geet went into such a state...aur phir both of them in a deserted place...n that weird house''...i was also being scared like geet...hehe...


geet screamed maan's name...it seems maan's plan of recreating a similar scene as that ay worked...i mean geet has started talking...n this is quite an improvement...and on top of this...maan got such a wonderful kiss from his mishti...oops i mean so many kisses...maan must be so happy...hihi...


this was so typical filmi style...i mean maan's plan...and i so so so loved it...it was just wonderful and on top of this it was a success...and we have got to see geet back into her older self...and ab maan also wan't remain aloof and sad...after all...he has got back his "life"...


continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...



Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago

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