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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
oh great
i misssed a lot
so i read all
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
very nice........ 👏 👏 👏 keep it going 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
Jas asked me to update since she can't log in

part-9...Bhumika goes 2 Arjun's house 4 the party which
is conducted 2 celebrate
A's success.she was treated
well by arjun & his family.but
when other guests cum
they all go 2 them. then cumes
A's childhood
friend;the rich mishti.she
talks 2him very freely.kripa did'nt like the freedom she
was taking 2 him.Bhoomi feels
lonely.she begins 2 go.but
unexpectedly angad holds her
hand.she feels very happy. but
she goes & stands at the
verandah.A cumes:bhumi,why
r u standing here?cum &
enjoy the party. B:no
arjun,i don't hav any mood. A:i no bhumi,u feel
isolated here.but don't feel
like that as long as i'm
alive. his words were touching
2 her. she:arjun,will u luv me
4ever? he:ofcourse.
she:but seeing my sister's
life i doubt about it.b4
marriage didi& jeeju were so
close that they were even
willing 2 die 4 each other.but
now he wants only her 2
die. A:all the men r not
like yuvraj. she:i no ..i
trust u,i no that u'll never
be another yuvraj.
A:bhumi,if i die also i'll
continue luving u.
she:plz don't talk about
death.bcoz i want u 2 be alive
4 me.u r my breath. Arjun
smiles. B:i'm so happy
2hear ur sincere words..if we
were alone i wud've kissed
u. A:thats ok,no 1 will
see,giv me a kiss. Bhumi
becomes shy & smiles:no
way....she runs away from
him.his eyes follows her &
smiles. A's family hav
sum debt left.his dad
tells:there is only 1 way 2
escape. A:whats that? dad:u
hav 2 marry mishti,only
her money can save us. Arjun
was shocked.

Hum dil de chuke sanam 4 Sujal-kashish
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Part-12....Kashish did'nt get a gud welcome from TUshar's
ppl.they think that she'll keep in her line thru her
beauty.K was very affectionate 2 T's
baby;Shubam.
T becomes very happy:kashish,i respect u
,bcoz u r becming a wonderful mom.
K smiles. Sujal
decides 2 leave 2 bombay. his parents did'nt allow.
S:no,i've 2 go.i'll stay with rishi.i want freedom 2
think & dream.i've lots 2 dream about..my
childhood...kashish....
S leaves.his parents become sad.
Rishi was surprised about S's return.
R:i thot u won't
return.i thot u'll b enjoying ur romance with kashish.
S
smiles.
R:ur smile shows thAT u r in luv with kashish.that
day itself i told u no.but u said no.
S:that was the
gr8est blunder of my life.my biggest mistake.i feel like
singing a luv song.
R:but 4 a duet,kashish is not here.
S:but i see kashish with the eyes of my mind.the magic of
luv makes a lover 2 write a luv song & 2 sing it.
R
laughs:is it?
S sings:hum dil de chuke sanam....S
feels that K is also there with him 2 sing.later when he
realises that it was only his dream,he becomes really
upset.he cries loudly.R was shocked:why r u crying?
S:kashish was not there with me 2 sing.
R laughs:only bcoz
of that?u r not able 2 liv without seeing her 4 a
moment?its ok.after wedding u can see her 4ever.
S:the
wedding is over. R was surprised:its over?then why
did'nt u bring her here?i wud like u see ur childhood
luv.
S:its impossible 2 bring her here.bcoz the person
whom kashish got married 2 is not me,its tushar.
R was
shocked.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
thanx 4 sharing its a gr8 fan fic 😉 😃 pls contd 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
PART-10...Arjun loses his control:papa,how cud u ignore
bhoomi?u 4got what he has dun 2
us?she is the reason why
i'm here now. dad:i no
that,but our
circumstance..A:i don't want 2
hear anything.
dadi:arjun is rite.he shud'nt
cheat bhumi. A
reveals his luv 4 Bhoomi 2
mishti.M was very sad:its
ok Arjun.i understand.i'm fond
of u,bcoz of ur true luv
4 bhoomi.but plz see me as ur
gud friend. A:i always
saw u like that.still i'm.
m smiles:thank u arjun.so
a gud friend shud help the
friend when he is in
need.rite?so i'll giv u sum
money.ur debt will be over.
A was shocked. M:don't be
shocked arjun.4 this
money only ur dad forced u 2
marry me.but i'm telling u
that u don'r hav 2 marry me 4
this.its just a friend'd
help. he:thanks 4 ur big heart
mishti.but i can't recieve
it. M:thats ur complex
arjun.if u don't pay
money,u'll lose
everything..then ho can u bring bhoomika 2
ur life?she'll suffer along
with u.u want 2 see it?
A:no..i won't allow her 2
suffer. M:then u
recieve this money. A
accepts her money. Bhoomi's
mom cumes 2 see
Arjun:yuvraj is becoming really
cruel.he won't allow 2 conduct
this wedding.yuvraj will
not be there 4 2 days.b4 he
cumes back plz take bhoomi
away. she cries. A:tell
bhoomi 2 get ready.i'll
cum 2mrrow 2 take her home.
she becomes happy. Yuvraj's
mom finds it out & informs
him.bhoomi was getting
ready.she hears the sound of a
vehcle:Arjun has cum.but
unfortunately it was not
arjun,but yuvraj.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
good... very good... extremly good... 😃 update quick....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
pART-11..YUvraj shouts at bhumika:what do u think of me?u


thot u can easily fool me?let
Arjun cum.i'll kill him.i

won't allow u 2 go with him.
B got scared. he goes

near manasvi:u thot u can
save ur sister?

M:yes,she'll be saved.u
cannot do anything.when

i'm alive u won't get her.
Y:so that means i won't

get bhumi if u r alive..then
i'll kill u.then i'll get

bhumi no. Yuvraj beats M
heavily.bhumi-mom

cud'nt save her. M's
situation was really

dangerous.so B takes a
knife & stabbed him.ppl were

shocked.B screams. Arjun
reached.he did'nt

understand anything. B
cries:i killed arjun...A

was shocked. B:if u had cum
a little more

earlier,this wud'nt hav
happened. A was really

upset. B:u go arjun.god
does'nt like us living

2gether.u marry misti.don't
spoil our life.u go

arjun..plz giv me ur fav
violen.thats enuff 4 me 4 ur

presense.but in jail i dunno
whether they'll allow me 2

carry.go arjun...but plz don't
say 'gud-bye'.i can't

bear it. A:bhumi.. suddenly
she falls into A's

arms. she:u shud not cum 2 see
me 2 the jail.don't see
me
in that situation.sumtimes
i won't be seen alive

there. A:bhumi,how can i liv
without u? he hugs her

tightly. A sees Y's
hand moving slightly. A:yuvraj
is not dead.we'll take
him 2 the hospital.

B:no let him die.otherwise
he won't giv us piece.

A:r u crazy?
M:arjun,we'll take him
2 the

hospital. B:u r mad.he'll
kill u. M:i don't

want him 2 die,not bcoz i luv
him.bcoz if he dies,u'll
be
in jail.u'll miss a happy
life.i won't u 2 be happy
in
Arjun's hands. B was
touched by that. Y gets up.

M

stares at him. Y:i tried
2 kill u.then also u saved

me? M:that's not bcoz
of my luv. Y becomes

sad:i won't destroy bhumi's
life.let her go with
arjun.bhumi,i'll be ur old
jeeju.u can trust me this

time. M:i can't trust
u. Y:i no that.but giv me

chance..2day onwards i'll be
ur faithful husband,i

promise. he catches M's
hand.she gets relieved.
Y:bhumi,thanku 4
teaching me a lesson.all these
days
i
was not conscious.now with
ur punishment i think i've
a
change. Arjun-bhumika smile.they
get married & hav a

happy life. THE END.





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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
great story jas
it was wonderful and sweet 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
wow...... very nice.... till the end.... 👏
but y did ya end ???????
els u shud continu writing such small sweet stories... it was really nice !!! 😊 😊 😊

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