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IMPORTANT NOTE
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I'll end the note by saying that every writer needs inspiration.the comments of readers acts as a motivation for a writer.Thanks to all those who have been encouraging me with this ff soo far...
I love you all...You guys may now enjoy the part..


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PART 64

[WRITTEN BY ME]





The sunlight peeped in the hut through small holes n blessed the couple madly in luv with each other.Armaan was still holding ridz in his arms n she had her head on his shoulder n her arms round his bare tummy.Her hairs were lying half on his arm n half on his chest.they lukd as if they were made for each other just to complete each other.
Ridz shuffled a bit as she felt sum huzz buzz around her.she half opened her eyes n lukd around her only to find a three pairs of hungry eyes lukin at her lustfully.
after the sunlight broke in the hut 3 men entered the hut as if they lived there n finding a couple inside they were first surprised but then they observed the creamy white legs of Riddhima her soft delicate skin was making them even more lustful.
Her face hidden in her hairs n Armaan's chest but they checked her out completely n it was then that she felt sumone's presence n opened the eyes.
she got scared seeing the 3 men who certainly didn't seem to b gentlemen .A better name for them wud b goons.As they had chains in their neck n improper way of dressing along wid their ill gestures was clear enough to make anyone understand their personality.
One man: hai kya cheez hai yaar kasam se us saley ko kal raat bada maza aaya hoga
she hugged Armaan's jacket more tightly n thanked him so that the thorax portion[upper half of human body below neck till stomach] of her body was neatly covered under the jacket.
2nd man: haan yaar chehra nahin dekha tabhi itni khoobsurat lag rahi thi ab chehra dekhney k baad toh dar hai kahin mujhey kuch ho najaye hai aisi khoobsurti
Listening their words she was frightened n lukd at Armaan who was still asleep.
3rd man: madam kal raat iskey saath thi iski toh ban gayi ab hamri subah bhi achi bana do
His comment made a tear fell from her eye n it landed on Armaan's cheeks.
He immediately opened the eye
AR: Riddhima
he stud up a bit surprised n lukd at her
AR: hey basket kya hua
he wiped her tears .He still had not seen the goons.
she hid her face in his chest n he cudn't understand wat was wrong??
1 man: hai kaash iski jagah main hota
Armaan's ears alarmed n he lukd at the entrance of the hut were the three stud smiling sheepishly
2nd man: arey yaar kal raat toh tuney mazey liye hamri bhi subah achi karadey na kya item hai dost??
Armaan's blood boiled at such a cheap comment n dat too for his riddhima.
He seperated himslef 4m Ridz n she lukd at him .they both stud up n he tuk his hirt n wore it.He rolled up his sleeves til his elbow n the 3 men watched him.Ridz hid herselves behind him.
AR: haan kya pareshani hai aap logon ko
1st man: teri chamiya badi khoobsurat hai hamein bhi toh chakhney de
This was enough armaan 2 tolerate.
He moved a step ahead wen she held his hand n signalled him not to take action
AR: dekhiye kal toofan ki wajah se hum yahan fas gaye they aur ab hamein jana hai
2nd man: tu jana araam se ja bas isey chod ja ab aur sabr nahin hota isey apni baahon main...
B4 he cud complete he got a punch 4m Armaan.
2nd man : teri itni himmat
RI: Armaan plz
AR: nahin riddhima I'm sorry meri wajah se tumhain in giery huey logon ki baat sunni pad rahi hai inhain toh main chodunga nahin
3rd man : oh toh naam Ri
he also recieved a punch
AR: meri riddhima ka naam apni gandi zubaan par laney ki himmat bhi mat karna
Wid this the fight began n Armaan was enough e make them taste mud of he hut
2 of them lost conscience bt the third tuk the gun n shot .The bullet struck Armaan's chest.the bullet struck almost the heart ridz guessed
she shouted Armaan
MAN: ab tujhey kaun bachayega tera yaar toh gaya ab tera woh haal karunga ki tu zindagi bhar royegi.
Armaan was still conscious
as the guy proceeded 2wards ridz Ammy tuk the utensil nearby n struck the goon's head wid it n
he also went unconsciuos
AR: apni aakhiri saans tak tumhain kuch nahin honey doonga basket
ridz made his head lie in her lap
RI: main tumhain kuch nahin honey doongi Armaan
He smiled n he moved his hand to put the lock of her hair behind her ear n in doing so he filled her mang by the blood on his fingers by mistake.
The moment he saw red blood of his on riddhima's hair partition he smiled.Riddhime touched her forhead and saw the red blood on her fingers.They both looked at each other in surprise completely understanding what it meant by...He recollected the devi maa's chunri which he got in the temple..
AR: Socha tha ki tumhari maang ko chand sitaron se sajaunga lekin kabhi sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ki apney khoon se tumhari mang bharoonga.
Saying this he went unconscious n Ridz shouted for help.
She went out 2 call for help.
Since the area near the lake was a bit deserted ,she cud find noone .Just then she spotted an old fisherman n asked for help.With the help of fisherman n his colleagues she managed sumhow to take Armaan 2 the main oad n hiring a taxi reached Sanjeevani..
she constantly checked his pulse rate n pumped his heart .She was reciting prayers all the time
till they reached sanjeevani..
Her eyes had swollen due to constant crying .
It was just 7.30 in the morning
No doctor was present in Sanjeevani that time..
She knew a slight delay would prove fatal to Armaan,so she decided to operate immediately..
By the time nurses prepared Armaan for the OT ,she changed in her usual suits in a fraction of seconds n rushed to the OT.Her mang sill had his blood.
She asked a wardboy to inform Dr. Shubhankar immediately.

Before going in the OT she stood infront of ganesh ji's statue n prayed to give her strength to operate
RI: bhagwanji mere Armaan ko bacha lena.. main mar jaungi uskey bina.aaj meri doctory ka sabsey bada imtehaan hai.mujhey shakti dena bhagwan taki mera haath na kaampey .uskey jism par razors chalatey waqt mere dil par kitne zakhm banengey yeh mujhe khud ko bhi nahin pata... plz mujhey kamyab karna.kal mujhey maa ne ashirwad k roop main chunri di aur aaj yeh sab plz bhagwan raksha karna mere Armaan ki. yeh kaisa imtehaan hai plz meri madat karna.

She then went to the OT closed the door.

Inside wen Ridz opened Armaan's shirt she found that the bullet has passed very close to the amulet[The taweez which bua gave when Armaan was returning from Lonavala on Mihir's death] which lied at Armaan's heart.Had it not been the amulet Armaan's heart would have been the target of the bullet.
she took out the amulet from his neck n tied it on his arm n thanked God again n started to operate.

Meanwhile everyone arrived including Kirti n Shubhankar.
Vijay was completely broken..
He had consoled himself the by the grief of losing his wife but if today his son dies he'll have no reason to live...
KI: Shubahnkar riddhima operate kaisey kar sakti hain woh toh Armaan se pyaar karti hai
SHUBH: haan kirti lekin ab hamrey paas intezaar k alawa koi option nahin hai shayad wait karna risky tha

After 3 hrs the bulb outside the OT switched off n all eyes were fixed at the door shubhankar rushed in being a cardiologist to see Armaan's condition.
Ridz came out n composing herself she said
RI: Armaan theek hai goli heart k paas lagi thi but I managed to take it out... 24 hrs observation main rakhna padega uskey hosh main aaney ka intezaar bhi karna pdega
Saying this she was about to go away ,as it was hard for her to control her tears,when she heard Shashank's voice..
SH: Riddhima!!
Riddhima stopped hearing her dad's words.
till now she had tried her best to compose herself but seeing her father right infront of her she

outbursted wid tears
she hugged him tightly n cried bitterly
RI: papa woh Armaan aaj meri wajah se zindagi aur maut k beech khada tha
she cried
SH: Riddhima beta shant ho jao ab toh Armaan theek hai na
RI: woh hamesha aisa kyunn karta hai papa jantey hain us aadmi ne goli merey upar chalaney k

liye nikali thi lekin isey pehli ki goli mujhko ****i Armaan maut aur mrey beech deewar ban kar

mere samney aagaya .aaj agar usey kuch hojata toh main apney aapko kabhi maaf nahin kar

pati pata hai goli uskey heart k just paas se guzri hai us taweez ki wajah se Armaan ki jaan bachi

hai warna aaj
she cried.
Vijay Malik cudn;t see her crying so much so he went to her n kept a hand on her shoulder
VI: Riddhima beta
she turned n seeing armaan's father she felt guilty as she was the reason for getting Armaan in

ICU
She joined hands infront of him
RI: I'm sorry uncle meri wajah se aaj Armaan ki yeh halat hui hai main aapki gunehgar hoon plz

mujhey maaf kar dijiye
he held her hands
VI: Riddhima kuch nahin hua tumhari wajah se .Armaan par sabsey zyada haq tumhara hai plz

sambhalo apney aapko agar aaj Armaan k hotey huey woh gundey tumhain haath laga l;etey toh

main Armaan ki taangain tod deta shhh plz chup ho jao ro mat.Armaan mera beta hai he is a

strong guy in choti moti goliyon se usey kuch nahin honey wala insey zyada toh woh tumharey

gussay se darta hoga kyun
he made her smile in her tears
VI: dats like my daughter.pata hai shashank main aapsey jealous feel kar raha hoon meri beti

aapko papa bulati hai aur mujhey uncle not fair.riddhima tum meri honey wali bahu toh baad main

ho pehley meri beti ho woh beti jo mere betey ki jaan hai
she blushed a little as he wiped off her tears
VI: plz beta mujhey bhi papa bulaya karo na plz
RI: ok uncle I mean papa .
she suddenly became serious
VI: kya hua
RI : ARmaan theek toh ho jayega na
VI: jab tak tum uskey saath ho usey kuch nahin hoga samjhi
Shashank kept a hand on vijay's shoulder as he cud understand wat he was goin through while consoling his daughter

just shubhankar came out of OT
SHUBH: I can't believe it
SH: kya hua Dr. sab theek toh hai
SHUBH: Sir Dr. riddhima did an excellent work.she had done a wonderful operation n that too which was much risky goli bilkul dil k paas se guzri ek galti aur dil main zakhm ban sakta tha but she has done a comendable job.
SHASHANK: pyaar main insaan sab kuch kar sakta hai shubhankar
KIRTI: well done Dr. riddhima this is ur first surgery gr8 job
she smiled n her eyes fell on the glum face of Karan
she went to him n saw tears in his eyes
RI: Karan Armaan ab khatrey se bahar hai plz relax
K: thanx bhabhi aaj aapney bhaiya ki jaan bacha li warna main
RI: Karan main Armaan ko kabhi bhi kuch nahin honey doongi samjhey tum.
he sensed the determination in her voice n thanked god in his heart to give his bro a beautiful life partner.

Padma: Riddhima teri maang main yeh khoon???
RI: maan woh goli lagney k baad galti se Armaan k haathon se meri maang bhar gayi thi
She said slightly blushing
Karan sensed the slight tension on Padma's face so he thought to lighten the atmosphere
KA: wow matlab ab hamein das din bhabhi ka wait nahin karna padega ab hum bhabhi ko abhi hi apney ghar lejayengey
Ridz glared at him
ANJY: bilkul nahin meri behen ki poori rasmon riwaz k saath shaadi hogi tabhi woh tumharey ghar jayegi 10 days later samjhey
KA: That's cheating
MUSKI: That's what is Indian culture

It was 9 pm n all were in the hospital waiting for Armaan 2 gain conscious.
ridz told all of them to go as she'll wiat but Karna requested her to go bak as she had not eaten anything since morning
Ridz denied goin bak saying dat Armaan also ate nothing since morning.All knew it was worthless 2 argue so all went bak home
Ridz went to ganesh ji's idol to pray him for making Armaan gain his conscious.as if her wish was granted
wen she went bak 2 Armaan's room
She sat near his bed n tuk his hands in hers.
RI: Armaan plz aankhein kholo na baat karo mujhsey plz Armaan main tumhain aisey nahin dekh sakti plz
A tear droped 4m her eye n fell on Armaan's wristhe half opened his eyes n mumbled-Riddhima
She clsped his hands tighly
RI: Armaan tum theek toh ho na
he now fully opened his eyes 2 see his life
AR: tum theek ho
RI: kyun goili mujhey lagi thi jo main theek nahin hongi
he smiled seeing her frown
AR: main theek hoon jaan
RI: kyun kiya aisa agar tumhain kuch ho jata toh
AR: aur agar tumhain kuch ho jata toh
RI: aaj tumhari yeh halat sirf meri wajah se hui hai sab meri galti hai mujhey aisey kapdey pehenney hi nahin chahiye they aur
she was crying bitterly cursing herself the same time
He knew only 1 thing cud calm her
He pulled her to himself in a tight hug stoppiung her to banter as she didn't expect this
AR: kuch nahin hua tumhari wajah se samjhi chup ho jao aur haan I luvd u in dat dress

he whisped kissing her ear lobe
she was lying above him
She cupped his face n showered his face with kisses..
She stopped after she felt her heart relax
AR: wow agar mujhey pata hota ki mujh par pyaar ki barsat hogi toh main toh roz ek goli kha loon
he got a smack 4m him
RI: shut up Armaan tumhain pata hai us waqt merey dil par kya guzar rahi thi jab khoon se latpath tumhari body merey bahon main thi.. mujhey ek pal k liye laga ki kahin main tumhain kho na doon lekin fir dil ne kaha ki agar Armaan tumhari jagah hota toh tumhain kuch nahin honey deta bas tabhi main bahar madat k liye gayi aur kuch bhaley logon ki wajah se aaj hum saath hain main bahut dar gayi thi Armaan.agar tumhain kuch ho jata toh main bhi mar
he placed his fingers on bher mouth
AR: kabhi nahin hum saath jeeyengey aur saath marengey samjhi
she smiled
AR: ao Riddhima Gupta ab aap ki mang mere naam se saj gayi hai toh yeh batayiye ki abhi bhi wait karna zaroori hai 9 days ka
She blushed...
RI: Armaan woh
He understood
AR: Mujhe pata hai Riddhima ki har ladki ek grand wedding ka sapna dekhti hai and I promise hamari wedding is world ki sabse achi wedding hogi and hamari saari ceremonies ko main yaadgaar bana doonga...
Mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi meri bahon main toot kar bikhar jana chahti ho par koi baat nahin jaisey itney din waisey 9 din aur sahi aur fir main gin gin kar badla loonga...
She blushed even more...
AR: oye hoye
RI: tum na bas yahi sab soojhta hai har waqt
AR: ab jiski biowi itni sexy ho woh aur kya sochega
RI: besharam
AR: I luv u basket
RI: I luv u too
RI: woh taweez kaisi hai Armaan uski wajah se tumhari jaan bachi hai aaj
AR: woh mujhey bua ne di thi jab tumhara accident hua tha tab meri raksha k liye
RI: thanx to bua agar woh taweez nahin hoti toh goli seedha tumharey heart ko lagti
AR: itney jaldi chgutkara nahin milney wala mujhsey
RI: ****kara pana chahta kaun hai
AR: really
RI: hmm
he asked her to cum near but she hesitated
AR: cum'on I'm ur husband now aur haan u plz put sindoor in ur mang everyday
She blushed slightly while goin near to him
He pushed her to himelf.
He was lying on bed n she was above him now.Her legs were hanging in the air
He removed her dupatta n started kissing her neck passionately..
She was melting in his kisses when she just bakd off.He frowned seeing her hesitation..
RI: ARmaan plz abhi tum bahut week ho bahut khoon nikla hai abhi tum aaram karo please..
He smiled seeing her concern
RI: acha ab so jao
AR: pehley tum jao aur sofa par so tabhi sounga
RI: ok baba
She went to the couch n he didn't know when he dozed off staring at her.However, she couldn't sleep the whole night.

Next morning ridz told everyone abt Armaan's well being n when all came to met him she went 2 mandir 2 thank god for giving her Arman back..
When she returned shew offered aarti to everyone n when she reached Armaan he took the vermillion in the plate n filled her mang first den took the aarti
AR: ab tum lag rahi ho perfect Mrs. Malik
ridz was shocked by this act of Armaan...
She glared at him for calling her so infront of everyone..
VIJAY: lagta hai ab merey betey se intezaar nahin ho raha
SHASHANK: bas 9 din aur bhaisahab fir toh Riddhima aapki hi hai
Ridz was pink now
MUSKI: kitna maza aayega na inki shaadi main
KA: haan bahut main toh khoob dance karoonga apney bhai ki shaadi main
Ridz was blushing more n more n Armaan was enjoying seeing her going red now n then.She thought to leave...
RI: main abhi aati hoon
But Karan held her bak
KA: aap kahan chali aap chali jayengi toh bhaiya ka man kaisey lagega..Aww meri bhabhi kitni pyaari lagti hain sharmatey huey
PA: bamash kyun meri beti ko tang lkar raha hai
Thereafter all went to resume their duties n AR were left wid Karan
KA: bhaiya mainey apni leave extend karwa li hai aapki shaadi k paanch roz baad jaunga
AR: itni jaldi
KA: ab main ek student hoon
AR: woh toh hai acha yeh bata London main koi girl friend hai ki nahin
KA: nahin main ek padhney wala bacha hoon
AR: kya tuney apni bhai ki naak kata di
RI: ARmaaan har koi tumhari tarah nahin hota flirty
AR: hey yaar gussa kyun hoti ho main toh mazak kar raha tha
RI: oh acha trabhi afsos kar rahey they ki Karan ki ek bhi gf nahin hai jabki tumhari kitni saari thin

Karan was enjoying their cute fight
AR: Riddhima plz yaar tum aisey gussa mat ho main toh bas aisey hi keh raha tha
RI: haan haan tumney toh kuch kiya hi nahin
KA: bhaiya aaj toh aap gaye
AR: abhi dekhna mera kamal
AR: ouch ah!!!
Ridz ran to him
RI: Armaan kya hua tum theek toh ho kahan dard ho arah hai
she sat next to him n he held her hands
AR: yahan dard ho raha
he pointed to his heart
AR: jab bhi tum gussa hoti ho na yahan dil main dard hota hai sacchi
she glared at him n Karan knew it was time for him to leave
he slowly went out smiling
AR: I'm sorry jaan plz don b mad at me plz
ri; tum na
she hit him slightly
AR: ouch
RI: sorry
AR: I luv u
RI: I luv u too
he tuk her in his embrace n kissed her forehead
just den ridz remembered Karan was still there

RI: Armaan chodo Karan dekh raha hai
AR: woh bahut samajhdar hai woh room se chala gaya
RI: acha fir bhi chodo koi aajayega
AR: aajaney do mera toh romance karney ka mood kar raha hai
RI: Armaaan
he seperated her rom him n lukd deep into her eyes
AR: Riddhima tumhain pata hai jab bhi tumhari mang apney naam se saji hui dekhta hoon I feel so complete
She blushed slightly
he pulled her mor closer to himself n asked her to remove her sandals.
She slwoly removed them n sat next to him on the single bed
AR: I don want 2 wait for 9 days
she blushed more deeply
RI: Armaan polz hum koi aur baat nahin kar saktey
AR: nahin pati patni toh romantic baatein hi kartey hain jaisey ki first kiss first night
RI: ARmaan
she was lukin so beautiful while turning crimson red dat he cud not control himself
he kissed her cheeks n snuggled closer to her n buried his face in her neck
RI: koi aajayega
AR: darwaza lok kar do plz plz
She knew he was desperate for her so she went n lokd the door n sat near to him again
AR: wah!!! kya baat hai aaj ek hi baar main maan gayi
RI: Armaaan
AR: I luv u
he kissed her ear lobe as he whispered dat n den kissed her neck lin making her shiver again n again.
He was kissing her whole throat n she was losing her self in him.She didn't know wen he put her dupatta aside n kissed her beauty bone
she buried her hands in his hairs n ruffled them all.
He was luving her touch.
He lukd at her rosy lips.He knew he had the right to capture them now.He proceeded towards her lips n she closed her eyes to feel his lips upon hers.|Just then the door was knocked.The duo came out of the trance
She immediately took her dupatta n went to open the door while Armaan was cursing the person at the door
Karan was at the door
KA: kya ho raha tha andar
RI: nahin woh aisi koi baat nahin hai bas main Armaan ki dressing kar rahi thi
KA: oh tabhi itni laal ho rahi hain aap
AR: saaley tujhey abhi aana tha
KA: sorry bhaiya main ja raha hoon u guys enjoy ab koi knock nahin krega don woprry i'll cum in evening
Karan went away
AR: toh hum kahan they
RI: shut up Armaan pata nahin kya soch raha hoga Karan
AR: yahi ki main tumsey kitna pyaar karta hoon
RI: tum na
AR: bahut hot hoon I know
RI: Armaan tum nahin sudhrogey
then she walked out to bring the lunch for him while he smiled reccollecting the cozy moments they spend just a few seconds before.

Ridz went to the kitchen of sanjeevani n made a healthy veg soup for Armaan
She came in a few minutes
AR: offo kahan reh gayi thin I missed u so much
RI: Armaaan tum na bas 15 min k liye hi toh gayi thi
AR: woh kya hai na Mrs. Malik aapka yeh jo deewana hai iska agar bas chaley toh yeh aapko uski nazron se ek min k liye bhi ojhal na honey de
she blushed as he used Mrs. Malik term for her
AR: oye hoye bas 9 din aur riddhima fir tumhari saari raatein meri main tumhain rat bhar soney nahin doonga yaad rakhna
She was crimson red now
RI: Armaan plz ab yeh soup pilo nahin toh thanda hojayega
AR: tum apney haathon se pilaogi tab toh piyunga warna
RI: ok ok nautanki baaz tum na kabhi nahin sudhrogey
he chuckled as she fed him
thereafter she gave him an injection n he drifted to sleep
In the eve all came to meet him.Maliks n guptas all were there as it was break time so interns were also present
VIJAY: kaisi tabiyat hai beta
AR: fine dad aapki bahu k hotey huey aapko chinbta karney ki koi zaroorat nahin
VI: woh toh hai
Ridz blushed at their comments
ATUL: Arman merey bhai ab tu jaldi se theek hoja pata hai terey bina man nahin lagta kaam main
AR: main bhi yahan bore hota rehta hoon soch raha hoon 3 din baad dutiess resume karloon
RI: aisa karney ki sapney main bhi nahin sochna samjhey u'll take bed rest for full 1 week aur discharge kal hogey samjhey
AR: wat mujhey discharge nahin hona fir ghar par tum merey paas 24 ghantey nahin rahogi
she glared at him for speaking dat infront of all
KARAN: haan bhabhi aap bhaiya ko yahin bitha lijiye
SHASHANK: arey Armaan why dfo u worry ?Riddhima tumsey milney aati rahegi
AR: haan woh toh hai par
MUSKI: Sir woh kya hai na Armaan ka bas chaley toh 24 ghanta roidzy ko apney saamney bithaye rakhey isliye bechara udaas horaha hai
All giggled seeing ridz blushing badly n Arman smiling as well as blushing slightly
just den ridz felt sumthing weird She held her head n sat on a stool
AR: Riddhima kya hua
RI: kuch nahin shayad chakkar aagaya tha
ANJY: chakkar toh aayega hi na pata hai jabsey tum admit huey ho Ridzy ne kuch nahin khaya hai
AR: What? Riddhima yeh kya bachpana hai
RI: woh bas bhookh nahin lagti thi
AR: shut up.Karan jao basket ke liye khana lekar aao...
KA: ji bhaiya
RI: arey nahin aab main thek hoon
AR: dont u dare 2 say a word basket .Do din se kuch nahin khaya agar kuch ho jata toh
RI: sorry
Vijay n Shashank ,Paadma smiled seeing their cute talk n adored the couple in deep luv.
Karan brought the food in half an hour n Arman fed her himself as he knew she wud eat little if she ate herself
he made her stomach full
Just then they heard a shout
A lady in 60s was shouting loudly in the corridors of Sanjeevani
LADY: arey hato yahan se mujhey milney do merey bachey se
Armaan: yeh awaaaz toh...
On the other side people had informed police about the incident n policed arrested all the three people.The cops were surprised to see the 3 faces.

AR: yeh awaaz toh omg I can't believe it woh yahaan aagayin
RI: kaun Armaan
AR: Riddhima tum us lady ko plz andar lekar aao
RI: ok
she went out n brought the lady in her 60s wid her
LADY: hai mera bacha kyua haal bana rakha hai kaisa hai tu
AR: bi main theek hoon aap yahan kaisey
LADY: arey jaisey mujhey pata chala ki tujhey goli lagi hai main tujhey dekhney chali aayi kitna kamzor ho gaya hai
Guptas n interns were confused
AR: oh bi aayiye insey miliye yeh hain
He introduced everyone n finally he was abt to say that she is riddhima wen bi interrupted
BI: yeh meri honey wali bahu hai na
AR: aapko kaisey pata
she went to Ridz n holded her hand showing the kangan on her wrist
BI: jab yeh mujhey leney aayi main tabhi samajh gayi thi
ridzy bend down n tuk her blessings
BI: jiti reh haye K se khoobsubsurat bahut ho tum Ammy teri p[asand bahut achi hai
AR: thanx bi bi aaj mkain aapko phone karney wala hi tha hamari shaadi hai 9 din baad
BI: kya aur tu mujhey a se ab bata raha hai main tujhsey bolungi bhi nahin
AR: sorry bi apney ammy ko maaf kar dijiye
He pouted like a kid n bi smiled sweeing him
BI: acha theek hai Karan beta tu kaisa hai
KA: shukar hai aapko main yaad toh hoon warna aap toh bas ammy ki hi fikr karti hain
BI: arey nahin bacha tu bhi mera beta hai
AR: Riddhima yeh bi hain jab main ghar chod kar gaya tha toh inhoney ne hi mera khayal rakha tha
BI: merey Ammy ki s se shaadi hai 9 din baad mujhey toh y se yakeen hi nahin hota
KA: kar lijiye bi kyunki shaadi toh bahiya ne kar hi li hai maang main sindoor bhaley hi galti se bhar gaya ho lekin bas shaadi ki formalities nibhani hain becharey bhaiya inka bas chaley toh bhabhi ko aaj hi ghar utha le chalein
RI: acha ab aap log thodi der k liye bahar jayiye mujhey Armaan ki dressing karni hai
all went out
Riddhima hesitatingly unbuttoned his shirt while he was staring at her lovingly
She slowly removed his shirt n he was enjoying the shivers he was getting while cumin in contact wid his bandaged chest
she slowly removed the bandage n then applied the madicine after cleaning the wound
Her fingers touched his bare chest n current was running thru Armaan's body
ridz didn't dare luk into his eyes as she knew she'll get lost in them
Armaan held ridz held after she completed the dressing n as abt to make him wear hi shirt
RI: Armaan
AR: I luv u ouch
RI: Armaan dard ho raha hai
AR: hmm
she kissed the portion of his chest where it pained.
he closed his eyes feeling her lipd on his body
RI: ab theek hai
AR: hmm actually yahan bhi darad ho raha hai
he pointed to his lips
RI: dhat
she hit him slowly n he smiled
She was blushing slightly
He held her close to his body
RI: Armaan kya kar rahey ho sab log bahar intezaar kar rahey hain
AR: toh karney do bas I want a kiss
she was red now
He moved forward n leaned half upon hers to kiss her there lips were a few milimetres apart wen her pager rang
AR: is pager ka toh main
RI: DR. kirti oh Armaan main baad main aati hoon
she immedtaitely made him wear his shirt n went out
AAR: arey riddhima suno toh
but she ran away

all den came in again n after sumtime went home.
after 2 hrs ridz returned
Armaan lukdt at her
AR: I missed u so much tumhain meri bilul bhi fikr nahin hai

RI: Armaan main bas 2 ghantey hi toh nahin thi ek emergency thi plz gussa mat ho
AR: main kaun hota hoon gussa honey wala
she smiled seeing him annoyed n sat near him
RI: aap mere husband hain toh gussa honey ka sabsey zyada hq aapko hai samjhey
he smiled but still pretended 2 b angry
RI: hmm lagta hai gussa kafi zyada hai
She sat next to him n made him face her
RI: I luv u Armaan
she kissed his forehead .but he still didn't smile
She kissed both of his cheeks n he smiled
RI: I luv jaanu plz smile now it hurts wen u don speak to me
AR: really
RI: hmmm
AR: I luv u basket
he kissed her forehead n cupped up her face .he kissed her eyes,her cheeks, her earlobes.
She trembled wid his kisses n he enjoyed the affect he had on her
He kissed on her nosetip n lukd at her rosy lips.
ridz opened her eyes
She found him staring at her lips.
Nervously she lukd down
He lifted her chin up as if asking permission thru his eys
AR: may I
She closed her eyes n he got the signal positive.
He moved more closer.His breath touched her face n she felt her heart beating non-stoppingly
He interlocked her fingers wid his n their lips were just inches apart.The size wud have been

reduced 2 zero only if Atul wud not have barged in
Seeing them in such a compromising state he was shoked
AT: I'm sorry guys
Ridz immediately stud up 4m the bed n was deep ed now
AR: kya yaar champ tujhey bhi aana tha
AT: haan saley hospital main romance karna mana hai main ghar ja raha tha toh socha bye bolta

jaun gud night waisey teri night toh gud ho hi chuki hai kyun Ridz
ridz was blushing badly
AT: ok toh main chalta hoon take care ab cont. kar lo par plz darwaza lok kar lena
AR: haan Riddhima darwaza lok kar do
RI: Armaaan
she glared at him.
she made him eat the dinner n they fed each other after that she gave him the injection n he dozed off.

next day Armaan was to be discharged in the evning
In the morning
KA:bhabhi aapko nahin lagt aaj aapko ghar chaley jana chahiye aakhir jabsey bhaiya hospital main admit hue y hain aapney apney ghar ki shakal hi nahin dekhi jayiye araam kar lijiye main hoon na
RI: nahin main theek hoon
AR: Riddhima Kaan theek keh raha hai tum ghar jao
RI: par
AR: agar tum nahin gayi toh main yeh dawa nahin khaunga
RI: acha theek hai main lunch lelar aaungi ok take care
AR: u too bye
RI: bye
He lukd at her.she was abt to go wen he held her wrist n pulled her to himself
Ridz was shy as Karan was still there
KA: main baad main aata hoon
RI: Armaan tum bahut esharam hotey ja rahey ho Karan k samney hi shuru ho gaye
AR: apni biwi ko achey se gudbye boey bagair thodey hi janey deta
RI: Armaaan tum na
AR: I luv u
he lukd into her expressive beautiful eyes
RI: I luv u too
He kissed her forehead as wel as her both cheeks
RI: ab main jaun
AAR: ok
she went away
KA: bhaiya aap koi mauka nahin chodtey
AR: nop kabhi nahin arey yaar aaj se ghar par rahunga bore honga
KA: so sad lambi judaai pyaar bina kya
AR: saley ruktujhey batata hoon
he threw the pillow on Karan n both brothers laughed
IN the lunch break all interns came 2 meet Armaan
RAHUL: ab kaisa hai
AR: first class
MU: yeh ridzy kahan hai
AR: mainey usey ghar bhej diya araam karney k liye
RI: main aagayi
she wore a red chdidaar suit n he was mesmerised in her beauty .she blushed finding him staring at her
ATUL: aankhon hi aankhon main ishara hogaya aur...
ANJY: Atul kya ga rahey ho tum
AT: arey indonon luv birds ko dekho aankhon hi aankhon main sari baatein kar rahey hain
MU: so cute na
Rahul lukd at muski .She looked so cute while smiling
MU: oye khottey aisey kya dekh raha hai
RA: nahin kuch nahin
Armaan smiled seeing Rahul
KARAN: bhabhi yeh kya hai
RI: mainey Armaan k liye uskey favourite aloo k paratehy banaye hain
AR: mainey tumhain araam karney k liye bheja tha ya kaam karney k liye
RI: mainey rest kar liya tha fir yeh banaya sacchi
AR: sacchi
Ridz nodded n he smiled
KA: arey waah mujhey toh bahut bhookh lagi hai
She opens the lunch box n all make their way 2wards it
RI: ek min yeh sabsey pehley Armaan khayega
ALL: ooo
AN: haan haan ab yeh toh apney patidev ki hi seva karengi
She blushed
RI: di plz
She then went n fed Armaan lovingly while the rest adored them.
Later all went to their duties n Armaan luvd the paratha a lot.He kept on praising it again n again.
finally in the eve he was discharged.
He went home
Ridz came to meet him at 8 pm after her duty was over
She saw karan requesting him to eat the medicine
RI: Armaan kya hai kyun natak kar rahey ho dawai khaney main kisi bachey se kam thodey hi ho
KA: acha hua aap aagyin bhabhi bhaiya keh rahey they jab tak aap nahin aayengi yeh dawa nahin khayengey
RI: Armaan yeh kya bachpana hai
AR: kyun tumney promise kiya tha na isliye I was waiting 4 u
RI: tum na
Karan smiled n left the couple
She made him eat the medicine n Armaan asked her to stay for the dinner n both ate the dinner 2gether
RI: ARmaan ab bahut der ho gayi hai mujhey chalna chahiye
AR: hmm bas 8 din aur madam fir yahan se aapko kahin nahin janey doonga
RI: bye I luv u gud night
AR: aisey gud night nahin klehtey
RI: acha toh kaisey klehtey hai
He pointed his cheekd forward n signalled her to kiss it
She blushed n gave a peck there..
RI: happy
AR: very much ab meri baari
RI: no way
She ran away
AR: arey basket suno toh I luv u
Karan dropped Ridz home as Armaan asked him to do so.

Ridz 2 came meet in the morning.she entered the room seeing Bi feeding Armaan
AR: riddhima
RI: b kaisi tbiyt hai
BI: abhi tk toh t se theek thi lekin ab tum gayi ho toh b e bahut chi hogayi hogi kyun Ammy?
Ridz blushed slightly hile ammy smiled
AR: aao riddhima bitho
BI: min abhi aati hoon
saying this he left the couple lone
RI: yeh bi kyun chali gayin
AR: smajhdar hain janti hain ki pati ptni ko kel chod dena chhiye
RI: tum na
AR: min n
RI: huh bahut beshrm ho
AR: awe b toh mujhey hi jhelna padega zindgi bhar
RI: Armaan dawa khyi
AR: haan lekin sli dawa bhi baki hi
RI: sli matlab
AR: matlb tumhar kiss u know
RI: sudhar jo Armaan
AR: cum'on basket pti ka kehna manna chahiye ab jaldi se meri gud morning kiss de do
She blushed slightly but gave a quick peck on the cheeks
AR: mujhey wahan nahin yahan chahiye
He pointed to his lips
RI: pehly bolna tha b toh nhin milegi
AR: ruko main khud hi leleta hoon
He grabbed her wrist en she wa abt to run away
AR: o bkt b kahn jaogi
he pulled her to himelf such tht he ws pinned on the bed n he w on top of her
she strted brething heavily
RI: Arman kya kar rahey ho koi ajyega
R: tooh jney do
He removed the lok of her hair n put it behind her er
She closed her eyes n shivered by hi touch
AR: I luv u
he kised her forehead,her cheeks.her eyes.Her hands automatically reached his hair n she ruffled them
Hi desires were now more enhancing
AR: Riddhima I don wnt to wait for the rest 8 days plz I want to feel u in my rms n make u mine forever
RI: main toh tumhari hi hoon Armaan bas 8 din aur ruk jo plz
AR: theek haai par pn kiss toh main abhi loong
He moved towrds her lip n she closed her eyes out of nervousness
His lips were bt to eal hers wen Karan cme in the room
K: oop miney kuch nahin dekha
he put hands on his yes
Arman n Ridz were embarassed n hge quickly got up 4m her n he tud up leving the table
K: I'm so sorry mujhey nahin pata tha ki hamari bhbhi jan aayi hui hain warna main knock krkey ta sorry waisey mainey kuch nhin dekha
AR: tujhey bhi abhi aana tha
K: sorry bhaiya oh inspector shb aaye hin kuch zaroori baat karni hai
AR: inspector cha bhejo unhin
Karan calls the officer
IN: so Dr. rmaan Malik p hi hain na woh jinko goli lagi thi
AR: ji
IN: plz hamin poora incident btyiye
Armaan told him the truth how the goons tried harass ridz n he saved her
IN: well woh gunday mammoli nhin they woh smugglers they jinki police ko bahut time se talsh thi aur apki wjah e humnay unhain pakd liya iliye aapko PM ek brvery awrd dengey parson ek function hi Mumbai main whin pr
RI: kya sch wow Arman dats gr8
AR: lekin mujhey koi ward nahin chhiye mainey toh bas Riddhima ko bachaney k liye yeh sab kiya tha
IN: fir bhi pki wjh se is desh k bhala hua hi isliye plz aap yeh award le lijiye ga..Aap is function main kisi ek aur insaan ko lasktey hain
RI: ARmaan plz u'll take this award kitna ach muka mil hai plz
AR: ok I'll cum
The officer goes.
Soon all come to know the breaking news n everyone cums to meet n congratulate him
Vijay hugs his on n the all interns started to fight to whom Armaan will take wid him
Ridz was quiet
AR: ek min jan mujhey hi toh main bataunga na
ATUL: ok
AR: Riddhim jayegi mere saath
RAHUL: no wonder majnu sala dosti ki toh koi qadr hi nahin
AR: Rahul chup ho ja.. baskey jayegi mery saath bas...
RI: arey Armaan inlogon ka itna man hai tum plz inmain e kisi k saath jao plz
RA: Arey nahin Riddhima.Itne bade occassion par Armaan apne better half ke bina thode hi ja sakta hai...
Ridz's face flusehd with Rahul's comment and her gaze fixed at the ground as if she was searching for something...
AR: agar tum nahin chalogi toh main award recieve karney nahin jaunga...
RI: ok fine I'll cum

AR got to the award ceremony,recieve the award and give an interview where Armaan told the reporter about the incident and declared Ridz as his wife infront of the whole world...
People all over the nation admired this lovely couple and blessed them...
Ridz was looking stunning in the red saree Armaan gifted her for this special event while he himself looked dashing in the blach tuxedo...
Both drove back home after recieving the award and prize money of five lakh Rupess.

Armaan entered his house wid Ridz but found the whole house dark..
AR: itna andhera kyun hai yahaan?
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I hope you guys may like this part.
Thanks a lot for your encouraging comments on the previous parts.Waiting eagerly for your comments...
New readers may kindly add my new account NSDT_PM and send me a buddy request if they want pms for this ff...

Love u all
Take care!!


Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res🤗

Hey Asma, sorry sweetie, i know i'm sooo late , school's killing but finally edited my reserve!!!!!!

Part 63-
Awesome part...after their wonderful engagement, the phone conversation that the whole family heard, 😆...aww that was soo embarrassing...n then in the fire escape...aww, so romantic!! Yeh pager ke bhi galat timings hai yaar!!!

Wow, their date n their immense love n the trust...just perfect!!! Brilliantly written ..., truly it's flawless...it's like a dream!! How can he love her sooo much...Hmmm Shashank really trust Armaan, aur kyu na ho, akhir he's soo sweet n cute yar ..😉 no but he's just amazing!!!!

Part 64-
OMG the whole time the fight was going on, was like go Armaan n then the bullet ...thank God Riddhima found someone to help n she had to do the operation herself, that was tough but then Armaan's recovered!!!! Awww he already considered her as his wife, like the sindoor n all...Their romantic moments are sooo cute...n yeh Armaan to sab ke samne 😆!!!! awww he can't wait for the wedding date...me too!!! well love all of them here...they're all great!!! n AR toh brilliant!!!!!

Take care
Muahhh
🤗
Pranishta
Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res will edit after my exam on Thursday!

Edit:
So it's Thursday and I have no more exams!😆
Anyway Asma, what can I say, this part was absolutely fabulous!! So dramatic! And so long!!😃
Absolutely LOVED it!!!!!!
I thought the morning after the date, Armaan will be full on romantic, but then those gundas had to ruin it!! And poor Ridz must have been so scared. But then her tear woke Armaan up!😲 So cute!
But then the fight was so tense and really well written. And then Armaan getting hurt was so scary! But Ridz was sooo brave, she managed to operate on him. And her care for him was just so heartwarming! And when our hero woke up I was so happy!!!!!!😊 Like his moments with Ridz were romantic!!! I just thought AR were adorable! I can't wait for wedding ceremonies and the next update!

And about the note: Please know I really appreciate your writing and look forward to updates! And I will always try and comment as soon as I can!❤️

Thanks for pm!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!

Edited by Bhavya8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part, loved it.
Loved AR moments so much.
Karan was such a pain...lol
Eagerly waiting for AR mrg.
Update next part super soon.
Thanks for the pm, take care.
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Hey Asama.🤗..woww you updated...Love the part to the core.👏.OMG...Armann have fight with goons and got injured😲...Thanks god that he is fine now, and all because of Riddhima's care and love..Love the way Ridzy took care of Armaan..Awwiiee I just love naughty side of Armaan..the way he always tease Ridzy by addressing her Mrs. Mallik..loved it😛..wow He got Award and reward..Gr88888..Love all the AR moments to the core...Armaan is really desperate to get married..Dont worry, only 9 days are left😉.. I am very excited for AR marriage...Do try to continue soon...thanks for the PM...Take care😊

PS: Read your IMP Note sweety..I can completely understood how it feel when we didn't got much motivation from our reader..But I want to say one thing..Don't u dare to be demotivated😡..We all are here for you and this FF...Love it like anything...And you are an awesome writing dear👍🏼...Keep it up the good work...Muuahhh🤗

Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
asmiii...lovely partsss...loved em to the coreee...loved armaan ridx kissing triesss with loads of interuptionsss
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
Ar scenes were very cute ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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hi dear
awesome,mind blowind n superb part
loved AR moment
plz cont soon
take care
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
AAILAA AAPKA LINK WORK KIYAA
I AM GOING TO BE FAINT
YIPPPEEE
HYEEE ASSMI
HOW R U JEE
good naaa
aaa mele ammy ka accident ho dayaaa i ma saddd...😭😭😭
but those goons yaar oue gabbar singh jaise logo ki pic bhi lagati na to maja aa jata...😆
oye hoyee kya part thaaa aull ab ye dono do do baal shadi kalenge
bhaii agar itnaa pyar ho toh 4 4 baar bhi kar sakte hai no probs hai jeee
armaan kabhi nahi sudhrega chahe hospital mai doc rahe ya paitence...😆
loveee uuu
SORRY WILL BE LATE IN EDITINGGG...
Edited by ishka_virani - 13 years ago
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hey Asma!
dat was so romantic! loved it 2 da core!
AR moments were beautiful! but every1 r such a kabab mein haddi...especially Karan!
i so love dis naughty Armaan! seems its very difficult 4 him 2 wait till deir marriage! don't worry sirf 9 din baki hai 😉...uskey baad toh Ridz ki khair nahi 😆
cont asap...very excited 4 upcoming parts!
thnx 4 pm
luv
Sunita:)

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