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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
ok guys..glad u liked it...updating episode 21 😃
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Episode 21

(Manasvi and shefali r in the kitchen preparing dinner 4 the family)

manasvi: acha..shefali..vegetables ready rakhna..ok?
shefali: ok bhabhi..
(bhoomi comes in)
manasvi: arre..bhoomi...tum yahan?
bhoomi: haan bhabhi..amin aapke aur shefali bhabhi ki koi help karna chahti...
shefali: help..no..no way...tumhe arram ki zaroorat hai..
bhoomi: nahin..bhabhi..main bilqul theek hoge...mujhe kaam karna hai..
manasvi: bhooi..kaa se kaam aapni ki liye nahin..tho..iss bache ka socho..tumhe arram ki zaroorat..
shefali: haan..doctor said it clear...bachay ke liye...theek nahin..hai..ek choti se garbar sab kuch spoil kar sakta hai..
bhoomi: ok bhabhi..
manasvi: aisa karo..tum dining table phar beto...main koi fruits lati ho tumhare liye...
shefali:haan..tumhe health ke liye..healthy cheezi khani chahe..
bhoomi: uff..theek hai..aap jeethi hum haare...ok?
manasvi: hehe....ok
(shaku comes in)

shaku: bhoomi..tum yahan..doctor ne kaha tha arram karne ke liye...jao..chalo..
bhoomi: acha...jab shefali bhabhi ki bari hoge..phir main buhut ache tarha unka khayal rakhongi...ya phir jab manasvi bhabhi ki bari..(stops)

(manasvi wipes a tear from her eye)

shefali: arre manasvi bhabhi..aap ro kyun rahe hai..? tho kya hua ki aap conceive nahin kar sakte...duniya ki sabse badi khushi aapke saath hai..khushi..(smiles and wipes her tears)
manasvi: u r rite...
shaku: acha..emotional scenes baand karo..aur jaldi se dinner karte hai..
bhoomi: oh..lekhen jhetji aur arjun nahin aaye?
shefali: unku phone karo...
bhoomi; main karte..kaam se kaam bait kar..main phone kar sakte...
manasvi: acha..jao..

(bhoomi dials up arjun's number...arjun-suraj r still in office..the reception picks up the phone)

recepion; hello..goenka group of companies..how may i help u?
bhoomi: erm..jee main mrs. bhoomika goenka bul rahe hoo..
reception; oh ye maam..baat kya hai?
bhhomi: jee..wahan phar arjun goenka hai?
reception: maam...voh kaafi busy hai..pata nahin kab voh phone phar aa sakte hai..lekhen main aapka message paas on karoge..
bhoomi: ok..thank u...ok..bye..
reception: bye..maam..(both hung up)

reception(through phone): erm..sir?
suraj: yeah..?
reception: erm...mrs.bhoomika goenka called up 4 arjun..she asked when he could call home..
suraj: ok..thanx 4 the message..i'll tell arjun..
reception: ok..(hungs up)
suraj; arjun..bhoomi called up..
arjun: really..?
suraj: but..reception said u were busy...i would suggets that u call bhoomi now..and tell u will be late...
arjun: relax bhaiyya i will...
(arjun gets his mobile..and calls up bhoomi)

bhoomi; arjun..
arjun: hi bhavri..
bhoomi: arjun...kaha ho tum? pata hai..main tumhara intazaar kar rahe hoo..
arjun: i no bhavri..lekhen main yahan phar busy hoo...aur..shayad puri raat thak kaam karna parega..
bhoomi(heartbroken): acha..matlaab tum ghar nahin aa sakte..?
arjun: erm..aaj raat nahin...
bhoomi: tumhare patni se ziada business aur important hogaya hai..
arjun: bhavri..aise baat nahin hai..dekho..subha ghar aaonga..phir baat karenge...ok?
bhoomi(feels pain in stomach): argh!!
arjun(concerned): bhavri..r u ok?
bhoomi: main theek ho..bas sar ka dard hai..headache...tum kaam karo..and bye..
arjun: and i luv...(but bhoomi hungs up)...u...
suraj; kya hua../
arjun: i dont no..lagta hai..usse bura laga hoga..
suraj: arjun..i think tumhe bhoomi ko ziada attention deena chahe...
arjun: lekhen bhaiyya...agar yeh kaam nahin hua..phir kakasaheb hume baarbaad kar sakta hai..
suraj: arjun..jab parivaar saath hoo..phir yeh business kuch bhi nahin..

(back at home..)

manasvi; kya hua..bhoomi?
bhoomi(crying a little): bhabhi..voh subha ko aayega...
manasvi: puri raat kaam karta rehega...?
bhoomi: haan...buhut maan kar raha tha..ki amin arjun ko batao ki main maa bane ali hoo..aur dekhna chahti thi ki uska reaction kya hoga..lekhen....abh...
manasvi: hey..bhoomi...dekho..suraj bhi busy..hai...aur main thori aise upset ho rahe hoo..
bhoomi; i guess so...
manasvi: jao...arram kar lo..have some sleep..
bhoomi: ok..bhabhi...

Precap: Yuv~Aksh plan more conspiracies against the two brothers, meanwhile Bhoomi tels Arjun.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thats gr8 fanfic 😊 . keep it up 👏 👏
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hey tht really kool 😉 pls contd 😃
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cool..😊
gud goin... 👏 n keep writing.. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok..thanx 4 the comments guys..updating episode 22 😃
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Episode 22

(Next morning-Bhoomi wakes up and finds that she was asleep all alone and sees arjun is not here yet)

bhoomi: abhi thak ghar nahin aaye...kabh aayega voh..phir main bataogi usse ki...(blushes)
LK: karam ka phaal tho tumhe milega..bhoomi...arjun zaroor ayega...sabar ka phaal hamesha meeta hota hai..
bhoomi: time kya hui..? (sees that it is 7:45)...uff..7:45...main fresh up kar lethi hoo..
LK: haan..tum fresh up karo...aur main dekh tha hoo..ki arjun ayaa ki nahin..
(bhoomi goes 2 freshen up..downstairs manasvi and shefali r serving breakfast)

manasvi; shefali..chalo..nashta ready?
shefali: haan..bhabhi..bhoomi kaha hai..?
manasvi: erm..shayad voh so rahe hoo..usse disturb nahin karna chahe...
shefali: hmm...i agree...main nashta laga thi hoo..aur aap suraj bhaiya aur arjun ko phone kare..
manasvi: ok..(but sees that arun-suraj r back at home)

manasvi: suraj..arjun..kaha thi tum dono?
suraj: manasvi..voh buhut kaam tha..iss liye raat ko kaam karna parha...lekhen.
manasvi: neva mind...arjun..bhoomi chahti thi..ki tum jaldi se ghar aao..voh tumhe kuch batana chahti thi..
arjun: kya...aise kaunse baat hai?
shefali: tum jao upar...
arjun: theek hai..(goes upstairs)

manasvi: chalo..suraj..nashta karte hai..

(arjun is upstairs in his room..)

arjun: bhavri...bhavri..kaha ho..?
(bhoomi comes out of the washroom)
bhoomi: kya hai?
arjun: bhavri..i'm sorry...
bhoomi(interrupts): sorry ki koi zarorat nahin hai..
arjun: bhavri..maansvi bhabhi keh rahe thi..ki tum mujhe kuch kehna chahti hoo....
bhoomi: haan..voh kya hai..ki main.....main...
arjun: main kya? come on tell me....kya hua?
bhoomi: ki main pregnant hoo..
arjun: sach...really...(getting happy); tum pregnant hoo?
bhoomi: haan..kal mujhe pata chala aur..main tumhe patana chahti thi...
arjun: bhavri...i'm so happy....(hugs her tightly)
bhoomi: lekhen arjun...main iss bachay ko akele nahin handle kar sakte..iss mein tumhare help ki zaroorat hai..
arjun: bhavri..tumhare liye aur apane bachay ke liye..main hamesha hoo..kabhi bhi kisi ki saath zaroorat hui..phir yaad rakhna ki main hoon tumhare liye...
bhoomi: thanx..arjun..(holds on 2 him)
arjun: ok...neeche chale..nashta bhi karna hai..
bhoomi: tum aaj office jaogi..?
arjun: nahin..pehle abhi abi office se ayaa hoo..aur doosra yeh ki abh main daddy bani wala hoo...
bhoomi(blushes): arjun...

(both come down)

arjun(happy):bhaiyya..i'm going 2 be a daddy....haha..
suraj(hugs him); congrats arjun..
arjun: really..i'm so happy...pata hai bhavri..hum kal aapni holiday ke liye chalti hai..
bhoomi: lekhen arjun...pehle jhetji aur manasvi bhabhi apane honeymoon phar jayee..phir uski baad..
arjun: oh haan..main tho bhool gaya...
suraj: nahin...pehle tum aur bhoomi jao..hpir hum dono jayege...
arjun: lekhen...bhaiyya..
manasvi(interrupts): haan arjun...suraj theek keh rahe hai...pehle tum dono jao...
shefali: abh aao..nashta ka time hogaya hai..
khushi(fully ready); daddy...main ready hoo....mujhe school drop off karo...
suraj: haan beta...chalo..(about 2 go)
shefali: erm..nahin surja bhaiyya...main isse chor thi hoo..
suraj: lekhen shefali...
shefali: bhaiyya...abh abhi kaam se wapis aaye hai..main isse chor thi hoo..aap nashta kar liye...
khushi: haan daddy...shefali aunty mujhe drop off karege...aap nahsta kar lo..
suraj: ok beta...as u wish...(hugs her)..ok..ache bache bana ok/
khushi: ok..
suraj: aur koi shararat maath karna..ok?
khushi: ok daddy...bye mummy...
s-m: bye...

(upstairs: mansen and mamaji)

mamaji: pata hai..jeeja...ki humari teen bahus se ek bahu maa bane wali hai?
mansen: kaun..shefali?
mamaji: arre shefali nahin jeeja...voh naukarani...bhoomika..
mansen: tho kya hua khushal..uski bachay bhi usse ki tarha naukar honge...
mamaji: lekhen jeeja...voh baat nahin hai..
mansen: tho kaunse baat hai?
mamaji: baat hai..ki agar bade dadaji ni yeh faisla kiya ki voh saare property uss bachay ki naam kar deengay..phir humare haath se voh property gaye..
mansen: theek kaha tumne khushal...
mamaji: hmm?
mansen: hume arjun aur bhoomi ki bachay ko jald se jald ko khatam karna parega..
mamaji: lekhen kaise jeeja?
mansen: fikhar maath karo khushal..voh bhi maine plan kar liya hai..
mamaji: abh kaniya bachay arjun aur bhoomika ki bache ko..(grins)

Precap: Arjun~Bhoomi reach their holiday destination, meanwhile Manasvi feels a strange feeling towards Suraj.

Howz dat, ppl?
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ok..thanx guys 4 the remarks..updating episode 23 😃
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Episode 23

(Arjun~Bhoomi r in the plane..)

arjun: acha..bhavri..tum yeh fruits kao..
bhoomi: lekhen..arjun..mera maan nahin karta...
arjun: oh come on..bhavri...lao..na..
bhoomi: plz...i'm full up..
arjun: tumhe nahin chahe..tho isse chahe..(points 2 the baby)
bhoomi: erm....
arjun: come..on...have it...
bhoomi: ok..(takes the fruits)..vaise hum kaha jaa rahe hai..?
arjun: bhavri..surprise hai..tumhe abhi nahin bata sakta..
bhoomi: kyun..?
arjun: agar maine bata diya..phir yeh surprise nahin rehega....haina?
bhoomi: haan..voh tho hai..lekhen phir bhi batao na..
arjun: hm..kisi romantic place mein..
bhoomi: voh tho mujhe bhi pata hai...lekhen kaha...?
arjun: thori dhir ke liye intazaar karo...
bhoomi(thinking): uff...intazaar...hamesha main tho intazaar karte rahe hoo...neva mind..i luv surprises(smiles)

(the plane lands..and arjun-bhoomi come out)

bhoomi: yeh kaha aaye hum..?
arjun: welcum..bhavri..2 Shimla....
bhoomi: shimla?
arjun: hmm..nice..sweet..romantic...shimla...
bhoomi: mujhe laga tha..ki tum mujhe kahiin switzerland lekhar chalo ge...lekhen...this is way better..hehe
arjun: tumhe yeh destination pasand aaya...?
bhoomi: haan..lekhen yeh mere destination nahin hai...
arjun: agar yeh nahin hai..tho kaunse destination hai tumhare?
bhoomi: mere destination..mere manzil tum hoo..arjun..
arjun(blushes): really..main?
bhoomi: hmm...abh yeh bags uthao...aur chalo....
arjun: ok..madam...

(both arjun-bhoomi grab a taxi..and go 2 a nearby hotel)

arjun: erm..yeah..mr. and mrs. arjun goenka...
reception: erm..ok....here r yur room keys..and enjoy yur stay here...
arjun: thank u...
reception: u r welcum...
(arjun-bhoomi go in the lift...)

bhoomi: acha arjun..pehle hum kya karenge?
arjun(singing): hum tum ek kamri mein baand hoo..aur lights baand ho jaye....
bhoomi(blushes): stop it...arjun..plz..
arjun: kyun..kya hua?
bhoomi: kuch nahin..(lift door opens)..dekho humara floor agaya...
arjun: chalo...

(arjun opens the room wid the keys..and luk inside...)

bhoomi: wow...kitna beautiful kamra haina..arjun?
arjun: haan...buhut romantic hai...
bhoomi(luking in the shower): wow...nice shower....hehe..
arjun: acha..bhavri....erm...kya kare?
bhoomi: pehle main unpack karoge...
arjun: no..no....tum rest karo...unpack main karta hoo...
bhoomi: lekhen arjun...
arjun: main kcuh nahin suna chahta...tum arram karo...(helps her on the bed)
bhoomi: arjun...kaam se kaam main chal tho sakte hoo..lekhen aise useless hona...
arjun: bhavri..mere baat ko mind maath karo...lekhen...humare kahiin dushman hai..aur mujhse badla leene ke liye..agar yeh dushman ni tumhe ya phir humare bachay ko kuch kiya..phir main aapni aap ko kabhi maaf nahin karoge..
bhoomi: arjun...aisa kuch nahin hoga..aur humare dushman hai nahin hai..
arjun(interrupts): hai..humare kahiin dushman..hai...
bhoomi: matlaab?
arjun: matlaab...kakasaheb aur mamaji...aur yuvraj..aur..unka parivaar...
bhoomi: arjun..kaam se kaam...yahan aaye hai..phir bhool jao.inn baato ko...main yahan aaye ho..tho iss liye..thaki main tumhare saath koi waqt spend karo...
arjun: i no..vaise raat hone wali hai..dinner order karo..?
bhoomi: haan..ok
arjun: jab thak dinner nahin aata...main unpack karta hoo...ok?
bhoomi: ok...(thinking):aaj jo mujhe chahe tha..voh mujhe mil gaya...arjun..aapna bacha...

(back in the heritage house..suraj is doing his office work)

shaku: beta...?
suraj: jee ma...?
shaku: kaam kar rahe hoo...?
suraj: erm..haa lekhen aapko mere saath koi kaam ho tho...kehaye...
shaku: erm..beta..bade dadaji tumhe bula rahe thi...
suraj: sab kuch theek tho hai../
shaku: haan..tum aao..
suraj: ok..

(everyone is present in the heritage house)

suraj: jee..apne mujhe bulaya...?
bade dadaji: haan...humne socha hai..ki arjun aur bhoomika ki aane ki baad..hum iss ghar mein party raki..
manasvi: yeh tho buhut achi idea hai..bade dadaji..
bade dadaji: aur ek baat aur..kyunki arjun aur bhoomika yahan nahin hai..iss liye...suraj..tumhe business ko samhalna parega...
suraj: jee...aap fikhar maat kare...
yuvraj: lekhen..bade dadaji...property ki 4 caretakers hai...do caretakers tho holiday phar chale gaye...tho phir unke places mujhe ya shefali ko nahin..
baisa: bade dadaji..jo pehle faisla liya tha..voh faisla final rehega..
(yuv is furious)

Precap: Mansen plans to send someone to ruin Arjun-Bhoomi's holiday, meanwhile Manasvi feels attracted to Suraj.

Howz dat, ppl?
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dis is da 1ts time i've read ur fan-fic & i think its 1daful .keep it up!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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