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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Simply amazing zee u r writing so beautifully goshhh

i was crying

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Lily2011

@Lily2011

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

thnx 4 d 2 post. simultanously. keep updating. v nice post.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Zee! What a fantastic and dramatic update! I'm glad Babu ji came and Khushi put her foot down finally! Arnav deserved a taste of his own medicine! Can't wait for the next part! :D

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merrydock

@merrydock

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

that was intense, pm me the next update

thankis

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: devisridhar
.sorry zee for the angry words for ASR but i can't help it being a girl, i love khushi's resolve and chastity ...

OMG! love your comment! thanks a bunch of flowers, lol. i'm totally with you. i love angst from arnav's side, so no worrys. 100% with you

xxx

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Very nice writing. Can't wait for more.

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malose

@malose

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

wow sucha amezing parts

i love it

it was time that some one take care of khushi

its time for arnav and his familje pay back and apolagi to her

update soon cant wit to read what gonna happen

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RASMI

@-carpediem-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Both d parts r really gud.waiting for next one

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-GreenEnvy-

@-GreenEnvy-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

that was so exciting! omfg! wow! babuji rocked! lol im sorry but asr pisses me off 🤔

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Shuveniya

@niya_s

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

😉Okay so I've read all of your works...I love all of them right Zee ?

But something was darn right freaking special about this one.

I felt like I was gasping for air, running a marathon reading this...

It was like Boom Baam, Kaboom !!! Explosiveee😳

Kushi wiping the sindoor off and ripping the mangalsutra was 👏

The cruelty inflicted on her was horrendous so a bit of remorse/anguish is good from the Raizada..alot would be better.

U know Zee, I've grown up all my life in Canada, and I wouldn't think twice about leaving my future husband if he EVER lay a hand on me. I will clean the sindoor from my maang within seconds..with dettol or windex if I was treated like Kushi ...😳😉 But knowing the full meaning and the symbolism behind the mangalsutra and sindoor and the way its applied in correlation with Arhi's love for each other is beautiful...especially in your SS ⭐️

xoxo