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Posted: 13 years ago

HELLO GUYS I AM STARTING MY FIRST FF ON ABHIYA
HOPE U LIKE IT 😊

IN THIS STORY THERE ARE NO VAMPIRES

CHARACTER SKETCH

DOBRIYALS

ARNAB DOBRIYAL: A VERY SUCCESSFUL BUSSINESS MEN OF DEHRADUN.BUSSINESS PARTNER OF CHAND RAICHAND

MADHU DOBRIYAL:HIS SWEET WIFE

PANCHI DOBRIYAL:ELDEST DAUGHTER AGE 24

MISHA DOBRIAYL : MIDDLE DAUGHTER AGE 22

PIA DOBRIYAL : YOUNGEST DAUGHTER MODEL IN PARIS AGE 20

RAICHANDS

CHAND RAICHAND: BUSSINESS PARTNER OF ARNAB DOBRIYAL

HASEENA RAICHAND: HIS CARING WIFE

SIDDHARTH RAICHAND: ELDEST SON AGE 25

KABIR RAICHAND: MIDDLE SON AGE 23

ABHAY RAICHAND: YOUNGEST SON CURRENTLY IN LONDON AGE 21

INDEX
CHARACTER SKETCH PG 1
CHAPTER 1 : THEY RETURN PG1
CHAPTER 2 : THE REASON PG1
CHAPTER 3: THE ENGAGEMENT PG 1
CHAPTER4: PREPARATION PG 1
CHAPTER 5: SANGEET PG 1
CHAPTER 6: MEHNDI AND HALDI PG 2
CHAPTER 7: THE WEDDING PG 2
CHAPTER 8: RITUALS AFTER MARRIAGE PG 3
CHAPTER 9: PLANNING PG 3
ANOTHER CHARACTER SKETCH PG 4
CHAPTER 10: OF TO LONDON PG 4
CHAPTER 11: MEETING PG 4
CHAPTER 12: DECISION PG 5
CHAPTER 13:REUNION PG 6
CHAPTER 14:DAYS PASSED PG 8
CHAPTER 15:THE DANCE PG 9
CHAPTER 16: REALIZATION OF LOVE PG 11
CHAPTER 17: THE EVENT PG 12
CHAPTER 18:TRUTH REVEALED PG 14
CHAPTER 19:PROPOSAL PG 16
CHAPTER 20: SPECIAL GUEST PG 19
CHAPTER 21:CONFESSION OF LOVE PG 22
CHAPTER 22:HEART BROKEN PG 24

CHAPTER 23:FRIENDS WEDDING PG 25

CHAPTER 24:BACK TO INDIA PG 27

CHAPTER 25:LOVE IS IN THE AIR PG 28

CHAPTER 26:TIME TO PARTY PG 31

CHAPTER 27:WHO IS BACK PG 33

CHAPTER 28:THE SECRET OF JEH MARRIAGE PG 35

CHAPTER 29::A NOTE FOR PIA PG 37

CHAPTER 30:ABHAY TO RESCUE PG 39

CHAPTER 31:LIFE IN DANGER PG 41
CHAPTER 32:23 GIFTS FOR PIA PG 43
CHAPTER 33:A NEW START PG 46

THEY RETURN
Dobriyal house

in night

Madhu: panchi misha jaldi karo tumhein piya ko lene airpport jana hai.
panchi: mom men aap ko batana bhol gayi weather problem kiwajah se piya ki flight 1 din late hai
madhu: panchi tum bhi na hamesha phone par lagi rehti ho aur kam ki baath batana bhol jati ho
panchi: mom ab to batadiya na
madhu:tou ab jakar sojao
panchi: good night mom

Raichand house

chand: aaj mei bohot khush hoon haseena akhir itne saalon bad hamara beta kal london se araha hai.
haseena: haan chand mein bhi bohot khush hoon akhir abhay araha hai.

paris airport

abhay flight has landed in paris. he has stay of 1 hour in paris.
abha was walking while looking at his phone and suddenly he smash into someone

piya: cant you see
abhay: i can ask you the same question
piya:first of all you were not watching where are you going and saying that its my fault and she said andha in a low voice.
abhay:what did u say? do u think i am blind.
piya(thinking isehindi ati hai): tumhein hindi ati hai?
abhay:ati hai mein jaheel nahi hoon
piya:whatever waise bhi mujhe deer horahi hai
abhay:deer tou mujhe bhi horahi hai.

then they both leave

in flight

piya come finding her seat and she saw that abhay was sitting next to her

abhay: tum mera peecha karte karte yahaan tak pounch gai
piya: kissi ghallat fahmi mein mat rehna waise bhi i hate you
abhay: i hate u too.

during the whole journey they did not talk to each other.
the flight landed and they move opposite directions.

dehradun airport

misha and pachi come to welcome piya
siddharth and kabir come to take abhay

dobriyal house

arnab and madhu: welcome home beta we mised u alot
piya: i missed u too mamma papa
arnab: are you ready
piya: yes i am

raichand house

chand and haseena welcome back we miss u
abhay:miss u too
haseena:kya tum tyaar ho
abhay: jee mom

precap: flashback why abhay and piya come dehradun

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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 2 the reason

abhay pia both were sitting in there rooms and were in there deep thoughts

flashback

arnab madhu and chand haseena both were sitting in raichand house

chand: well mr dobrial i know ap yahan kyun aiyen hain

arnab: tu aap ko is bath koi atraz tu nahi

chand: mujhe kyun atraz hoga agar sid panchi aur misha kabir shadi karna chathein

arnab: tu mein rishta pakka samjon

haseena: lekin ek problem hai

madhu: kya problem hai?

haseena: hamare jotish ne kaha hai ke agar hamare teenon bachon ki shadi teen behnion se aik din nahi hui tu hum barbad ho jain ge.

chand: mr. dobrial agar aap ko koi itraz na ho tu hum aap ki choti beti ko bhi apne ghar ki bahu banana chatein hein

arnab: mujhe kya itraz hoga ye tou achi baad hai.

chand:humein aik baar bachon se pooch lena chaiye.

arnab: mein abhi pooch leta hoon ab bhi pooch lejeye

chand: ok

then arnab goes to talk to pia and chand goes to talk to abhay

arnab: hello pia

pia: hi papa

arnab: piya mujhe tum se kuch kehna hai

pia: kahiya

then arnab told the whole story
arnab: kya tum karogi

pia: ji papa

arnab: thnx beta love u

pia: love u too papa

chand on phone

chand: abhay mujhe tumhein kuch batana hai

abhay: ji dad boliye

chand also narrates the story

abhay: yes dad i will marry her

chand: oh thats great

abhay: bye dad

then both chand and arnab come and tell them the good news

madhu: tou phir hum engagement ki date fix kardetin hain

hassena: i think next weak sunday

arnab: ok mrs raichand thats good

chand: congratulation

arnab same to u. ab humein chalna chaiye

chand:bye take care

precap: engagement
first official meeting
shocked

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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 3 engagement

Next day pia woke up late so as soon she gets up madhu told her to get ready

pia:ok mom i will get ready in half and hour

half and hour later...

panchi misha pia all were ready to leave for party

pia dress

misha dress

panchi dress

arnab: my daughters are looking beautiful
all three: thnx papa

then they all leave for party

raichand manshion

all three brothers were dress in black. standing with each other. when the dobrial arrives

chand: plz come in
arnab: oh yes
chand:now u have come we can announce the engagement
arnab: thats great

then chand took the mike

chand: ladies and gentlemen thnx for coming in my children engagement and now we shall begin the ceremony. i am happy to announce that siddrth is getting engaged to panchi

then sid and panchi come and exchange rings

chand:now my second second kabir is getting engaged to misha

then kabir and misha come and exchange rings

chand: now its time for the third engagement my youngest son abhay is getting engeged to mr dobrial youngest daughter pia

when abhay pia come to stage they were shocked that they are getiing engaged to each other because their first meeting was not soo good but they kept queit and exchange the rings

chand: now plz ladies and gentlemen enjoy the night

panchi,misha,and pia went to sid, kabir and abhay

sid:hello ladies u all look beautiful
panchi:thnx
kabir: misha tum ne kabhhi bataya nahi tumhari choti behain itni pretty hai
misha:tum ne bhi kab bataya ke tumhara bhai itnahandsome hai
abhay:thnx lekin aap ki behen aap se pretty nai
pia: jessa tum bare handsome ho
panchi:pia why are u taking like this
pia:panchi yeh wohi larka hai joh mujhe airport mein mila tha aur ab
panchi:par ab tou
abhay: par ab mein
pia: mujhe pata hai batane ki zarorat nahi hai
abhay: tum se to bath karna bekar hai
pia:tou math karo

and then they both leave

sid panchi, misha kabir were shocked
and decided humin kuch karna parega

precap
preparation begins

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Chapter 4 preparation

next morning madhu told pia misha panchi that there wedding is next weak so they have to go for shopping today as function are starting soon

pia: dont worry mom sab hojaye ga
madu: mujhe pata hai tum log sab karlo ge
pia:mom then we must leave for mall now
panchi:sid ka phone aya tha woh log humein mall mein milenge
pia:oh no
misha:tum ne kuch kaha
pia: nai

outside the mall

sid: yeh larkiyan kab aingi
kabir: ajaingi chill
abhay: hope pia na aye
kabir:kya
abhay: nothing

then the girls come and hug each other. abhay pia dont look at each other. panchi and sid decided they would shop in pairs.then they all split

pia was shopping like crazy and abhay was becoming angry because he was done with his shopping

abhay:kitni shopping baki hai
pia:tumhein is se kya
abhay: mujhe is se matlab hai hum is mall mein 4 hour say hain
or abhi tak shopping kar rahe hain tumhari shopping kab tak or chale gi
pia:4 hours or😆
abhay:tum karti raho mein jaraha hoon
pia:tum nahi jasakte mein tu mazak kar rahi thi. i am done
abahy:lets go
pia:ok fine

they both reached dobrial house

panchi:kitni dear laga di. hum tou kab ke agae
abhay:dont ask me ask your sis
panchi:ok ok dont get angry

then abhay leave and pia start laughing

panchi: kya hua
pia: kuch nahi just have a fun time
panchi:ok! waise kal sangeet hai
pia:fine bohot maza aye ga
panchi:haan aega

precap: sangeet

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chapter 5 sangeet

pia and her sisters were getting ready for sangeet all tree of them were looking wow

pia panchi misha
madhu enters the room

madhu:meri bachiyan kitni pyaari lag rahi hain unhain kissi ki nazar na lage
all three:thankyou mamma
madhu:ok beta come down raichand are about to come

then she left the room

downstairs

raichands have arrive and three brothers were looking awsome

kabir abhay sid

the girls meet the boys and suddenly

pia:abhay tum harne ke liye tyaar hojao
abahy:harne ke liya?
pia:oo lagta hai kissi ne abhay raichand ko bataya nahi ke girls verses boys competion hai
abhay:dance ka na mujhe pata hai par tum haro gi mein nahi
pia:acha dekh lenge chalo panchi misha hum inhein dekhatein hain
panchi:ofcourse pia
sid:tum bhi

panchi giggles and leave

siddhath:abhay aj tou humein inhain dekhana hi hoga
abhay:bilkul chalo
kabir:haan chalo chalo

competion begins

first it was solo performences

panchi dance on bahaara. every one clap for her

then sid dances on dildara

now it was misha turns and she chooses dhunki

kabir dances on criminal

now it was turn katiya karoon she did the best

then come on stage and dance on sajh dahj ke.he make every on crazy.

now duet round

panchi and sid dance on hum ko pyaar hua

misha and kabir dances on desi beat

then abhay pia turn and they dance on character dheela

then it was round in which both three sis dance on darling

and boys dance on desi boys

then they all were waiting who wins but as the parents were judges they declared no one win or lose its a tie

they all start claping and start enjoying the night

precap: mehndi and haldi

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Posted: 13 years ago

really awsome yar what a fighting btw abhiya hahhahah and they r getting married hope they fall in love fast pm me next time amazing yar plzzz pm me next time plzzz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa
really awsome yar what a fighting btw abhiya hahhahah and they r getting married hope they fall in love fast pm me next time amazing yar plzzz pm me next time plzzz

thnx for appreciating i will surely do