D3 ff..kaisa yeh ishq hai p 12 pg 50

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Guys im goin 2 write my frst ff.. hope u like it..

Character sketch

Kria ghai ' 24 years old she lives in Toronto.Her ex bf is Reyansh Singhania she loved him very much bt kria left him due to some misunderstanding..now she is dating Raj Singhania..She is a choreographer.She still feels fr rey bt tries to ignore her feelings

Reyansh Singhania ' 25 years old lives in Mumbai. His elder brother is Raj Singhania . Evry one thinks dat Rey is dating Tanya..bt he loves only one person kria..He loves kria more den his life bt he lost her due to sum misunderstanding.Rey is a famous dancer of India he won many competitions and he is also a dance instructor.Rey is nt aware dat his brother is dating Kria.

Raj singhania ' 26 years old he is very hot. Dating kria and he loves her very much. He is rey's elder bro . He is also a famous dancer and he is confused if kria loves him or not.

Swayam Shekhawat ' He is 25 years old and he is dating Sharon he loves her very much and soon dey r goin to get engage..he owns a dance academy.

Sharon Rai Prakash ' 24 years old loves swayam very much ang goin to get engaged wid him.She is a fasion designer and also an awesome dancer.

Vicky ' 25 years old . he is dating neha since 4 years and love her more den anything. He is really good in Bboying ,locking and popping .

Neha ' she is 23 years old loves Vicky and still calls him deewana.She is a bollywood actress and a choreographer.

Nilesh- he is 25 years old dating simmi.He is a famous rapper and dancer..

Simmi ' 24 years old hot girl dating nilesh and she is a dancer and also a model.

Amar- he is also 25 years old . Dating rinni and he won the title of masterchef India season 5 he is really good chef and judge of master chf india season 8.He is also a dancer.

Rinni ' 23 years old cute and dumb girl loves amar .and she is also a model and dancer.

Bharat ' 25 years old angry man.But loves Vishaka very much he proposed her and she slapped him bt she says dat he is really close frnd of her. He is a manager of Ferrari company and he is an awesum dancer.

Vishaka- she is 24 years old and dun believe in love .she is very close to bharat .she is also a dancer.

Tanya ' 24 years old she created misunderstanding between kria and reyansh.and she always stick to rey.evry hates her and she is very arrogant.

Ps- Kriya dun knw dat raj is rey's bro.

promo

Toronto.

Trin trin kria picked up her mobile and received d call and said

Kria-hello kaun hai jo mujhe subha subha pareshan kar raha hai.

Raj- Happy birthday 2 u my love..

Kria- raj tumhe yaad tha? Aww I love u .

Raj- ok fast get ready mai tumhe pick up karne aaraha hu 2 day is a special day..see ya in 10 min.

Kria- bt raj.. uff phone kat diya.bt uski kya galti hai usse to nahi pata dat aaj ke din kisi ne mujhe dokha diya tha..(wid irritated mood) uffu kria tumhe koi hak nahi hai usko yaad karne ka jisne tumhe use kiya..:(

Hope u liked it..

guys excuse me if I made mistakes😆

Index

character sketch-pg 1
part 1-page 2
part 2-page 5
promo-page 7
part 3-page 8
part 4-page 10
part 5-page 11
part 6-page 15
promo-page 19
part 7-page 22
part 8-page 25
part 9 - pg 29..
pat 10 -page 32
part 11 - page 38
part 12 - page 50 PMS LATER
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Ahhh it feels so gud to be back here.. jahan se shuru kia wahan pe wapas .. guys meri bakwaas bohut der tak hogi so plxx read .. ok so I was confused dat shld i cntinue or not

cux u all knw dat I am very LAZY..n update twice a month.. aur upar se 2 FF aur hai but tum logo ke cmmnts padh ke pata nae kya dimaag mai aaya n i told u ol dat im cntinuing it.. mera heart VS brain fighting ho rahi thi.. .. ok so pehle mere fighting padho baad mai update..no cheating

DIL : tu kitni badi kam*ni hai jaoo cntinue karo ..!

Me: yea ur ryt cntinue karti hu..

Dimaag: Aabshar agr tu karegi to FB pe kon bethega poore tym tum type karti raho gi kya..?

Me: yup Miss Heart mai kya poore tym type karti bhetungi..?

Heart: type tum apne liye to nae kar rahi na evry one likes ur FF aise chod ke jaana acchi baat nae..!

Me: haan.. but mujhe KriYaansh ki yaad aaying den..

Heart: aise lag raha hai ki poore tym maths practice karti ho tum jab dekho IF pe bhet ke KR FF padti ho usse yaad nae aati? yeh sab sirf tumhare brain ki wajah se hua hai jab dekho KR ke baare mai sochta rehta hai..!

Me: *puppy face*

Brain: OYE..! mai sochta hu? but uska main reason tum ho..! tumne hi to KR ko jagah di hai rehne ke liye..!

Heart: fine im d reason but wo FF likhne ke idea to sab tumhaare the and now u r backing off..kitne gande ho tum...pata nae kya kar rahe ho iske skull mai..?

Brain: excuseme waise bhi agar mai iske skull mai nae hota to yeh paralyze ho chuki hoti..aur iske koi akal bhi nae aati..

Heart: ha waise bhi konsi akal hai iske paas..

Brain: for d frst tym kuch sahi bola tune mai to aaj tak use bhi nae hua hu..:P

Brain and heart Hi5..

Me: STOP it u two.. tum log mujhe hi belong karte ho na..? to chup raho..

Brain: sry abshu..

Heart: abshu yaar dekh sab kitna miss kar rahe hai tumhara FF .. cntinue kardo na..but uske liye tumhai tumhara Dirty dimaag use karna hoga..

Brain: Dirty dimaag ?? waise sahi to kehrai ho tum fine abshu i dun have n e prob but tumhe type karna padega, PM bhi karna padega upar se saare FF bhi to padne hai..think about it...

Heart: Argghhh mai abhi pump karna band kardu blood to bole..Oye mr.dimaag teri bhi Job chali jayegi samjhe..

Brain: Ok sry sry abshu jao karo cntinue karo..

Me: duhh tum dono mujhe maar do ge ya fir pagal kar doge kisi din..

Heart: dun wry babes mai aisa nai hone dungi..

Brain: pagal? ha mai kaise pagal ho sakta hu..

Me: MOMMMYYY..!!

Heart: Ahem ahem waise aaj uski Profile nae check ki babes tune KR kke chakkar mai..

Me: ooo haan arey shh chup raho ye baat dimaag tak nae pooching or else u knw na..

Heart: ahem ahem..!

ab u guys tell me aise attacks se mai to pagal oppsie pareshan hoing hamesha ..! ok so b4 starting my FF maine pehle ke updates n cmmnts pade..jab cmmnts pade i was ROLFING sab kitne seedhe the pehle.. and maine jab update ki length dekhi i was like mai lambe update karti thi wo bhi daily..wow pata nae kya hua mujhe ...ok so enuf of my bakwassing *phew* ab scroll down and read...

note: well in my FF tanya is playing negative role so now we have Miss Taani so y use tanya..? now onwards taani is Rey's GF in my FF..

1 min sry to interrupt actually b4 starting read previous update you guys will remember where I stopped..ok so now u can read..

Part 12

6:00 Am

It was a beautiful morning both lovers were on der bed..sharon came running into kria's room ..she hopped on the bed that scared kria..

Kria: Sharon kya hai yeh..? subah subah monkey jaise jump kar rahi ho..!

Sharon: Kriaaa get ready gal..

Kria: kyuu??

Smrithi enters d room and cuts Sharon..

Smrithi: kyunki we r going to Mt.Abu..bhul gayi..?

Sharon: Im soo exited..*fells on d bed cuddling teddy in her hand wid her legs up in d air and a huge grin*

Kria: *puppy face* maa mujhe nae jaana..

Smrithi: Kria tum already itni sad rehti ho god knws why and bahar chalo u will feel better..

Kria: Mom plzx..

Smrithi: fine den no one will go...trip is cancelled..!

Sharon: Whaat..? no moom..! plzz kria ki bacchii teri wajah se mere plans cancel ho rahe hai..!

Kria: *uwaan* theek hai chalo..*puppy face*

Sharon hugged kria..

Sharon while hugging: u r d best sweeto..!

Kria: ahh stop buttering and get up ready hona hai..!

Sharon gets up and goes towards washroom..

Kria closed and rubbed her eyes...the moment she closed her eyes last night's thoughts flashed in her mind..Her heartbeats increased she was shivering she want rey to be with her.. But after whatever he did she cannot accept him..he never loved her ...!

Her thoughts were broken by Sharon who was yelling from bathroom..

Sharon: Kria..!! tum fir so to nahi gayi? Cum one jaldi wake up and pack ur stuff..!

Kria: arrgh Sharon I am going..!

( I am not showing breakfast scene and all)

*cut to d next scene*

Kria: dad hum jayenge kisse..?

Gautam: Ofcrz sab apni car se jayenge..

Smrithi: Ok so Sharon and Kria tum dono Raj and Reyaansh ke ghar jao and den swayam ko pick karke taani ko pick kar lena..

Sharon: K mom..

Kria: umm..Mom!

Smrithi: yeah..?

Kria: kya mai aapke saath jaa sakti hu..?

Smrithi: but y beta..?

Kria: wo bohut din baad aapse mil rahi hu to tym spend karungi..

Sharon grabbed kria's hand and took her to d corner..

Sharon: Kria mom dad ko akele chod do thoda tym spend karenge ek doosre ke saath..!

Kria: but Sharon..

Sharon: zip ur mouth Kria and come wid me..!

Kria: Fine lets go..

Sharon: Mom kria is going wid me..

Gautam: ok accha hai ab chale or else late ho jayenge..aur haan Vicky,Neha,Amar,Rinni,Nil,Simmi and Bharat,VIshaka ek car me honge..

Smrithi and Gautam left..

Sharon and Kria are in d car..

Sharon: why in the f**king hell taani is cuming wid US..?

Kria: Sharon wo Rey ki GF hai to Rey ne hi bulaya hoga..!

Sharon: ahh Rey and uski so called miss taani...

Kria: leave it Sharon so frst Raj ko pick kare yea Swayam ko..?

Sharon: lets pick up Rey and Raj bro frst den swayam..

Kria: Y..?

Sharon: cux im not gonna drive till mount abu..! raj bro drive karege..!

Kria: Swayam kyu nahi..?

Sharon: Thak jayega mera baby..

Kria: ohh mera baby hun..? *in a teasing tone*

Sharon: Shut up..!

Kria chuckled..

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Taani marhani getting ready ..

Taani: god subah subah jaana tha inhe..! but Rey ko akele bhi nahi chod sakti or else wo kria beech mai aayegi..

She calls Rey..

Taani: hey baby..

Rey: Kya hua taani/..?

Taani: Ready ho gaye..?

Rey: yea wht bout u..?

Taani: Almost hogaya hai baby ..

Rey: frstly mai tumhara beta nahi hu and jaldi ok cux no one is gonna w8 for u..!

Taani: tum bohut rude behave kar rahe ho rey..!

Rey: Bye..

Taani: uhh..

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Raj: kiska phone tha rey..?

Rey: taani ka tha..

Raj: ohh madam aapko miss karahi hai..!

Rey: Stop it bro..

Raj: Kria ka tha call bhi nahi aaya..

Raj's phone started ringing..

Raj: hello..?

Sharon: bro we r out cum fast ..!

Raj: okay Sharon..!

Rey: Kya hua?

Raj: Sharon is here..

Raj and Rey moves towards d car..

Kria was standing outside d car...raj hugged her and kissed her cheeks lightly..Rey was just staring dem his heart winced in pain seeing both of dem...he love kria more than anything in this world and he never wanted to loose her..but destiny played its game..now his bro was with kria..dont know why but rey still believes that kria loves him..! and today he will make her say dat and will clear all d misunderstanding between them..!

Rey: hey Sharon..hi Kria..

Kria: hey..

Kria murmers under her breathe: Aaj is Sharon ki baachi ka subah subah chehra dekh ke uthi thi dats y itna boora din jaa raha hai..!

Sharon: Shall we move guys..?

Raj: yup Sharon,come kria..

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Swayam came down running from his mother..

Swayam: Ma wo log aagaye now let me goo..!!

Sw mom: Swayam take care..and Sharon ke saath rehna ..

Swayam: Okkk mom ab mai jao..!

Sw mom: agar Sharon ko kuch chot lagi I wont leave u mere hone wali bahu ko kuch nahi hona chahiye..!!

Swayam: Godd..! theek hai..!!

Outside swayams house..

Sharon: swayam kahan reh gaye the..!

Swayam: arrey wo ma na pakad lia tha..

Sharon: excuse me Mr.Swayam shikhawat don't u dare talk anything about my Mother in Law..

Swayam: hello going to be Mother In Law..

Sharon: Whatever..!

Sharon: bro aage aao n drive karo..!

Raj: Kyuu..?

Kria: what do u mean kyu kya meri behan poore raaste drive karegi...

Raj: ok mam oye rey..!

Rey:yup bro..?

Raj: cum in front half tym tum drive karna half tym mai..

Rey: ok bro..

Raj: Btw taani kahan hai..? woh bhi to chal rahi hai..

Sharon: oh god..noo..

Raj: Sharon cum on..!

Sharon: karlo pick us marhaani ko..!

Swayam: Jaan gussa mat ho..!

Sharon: Aake bhet jayegi side mai mere..mummaa..

Dey pick up taani and head towards Mt.Abu..

Kria: kitni door hai mt.abu Mumbai se..?

Rey: 768 Kilometres..

Kria stared him..

Kria: thx..

Rey: ur always welcomed..

Swayam nuzzled Sharon..

Sharon: swayam kya kar rahe ho..!

Swayam:...

Swayam:pagal ho gaye ho kya chodo..!

(swaron were sitting on d last seat, kria and taani on second, R brothers were sitting in front..!)

Swayam kissed sharons neck and den her jawline while his fingers were playing wid hers..

Taani: waise Sharon kya hua tumhe aaj bohut chup ho..?

Sharon pushed swayam back..

Sharon: actually mai faltu logo se baat nahi karti..!

Taani: Faltu kaun hai aur kaun nahi ye to mujhe pata hai..*looking at kria*

Rey: taani enuf ok! Tum kyu start ka rahi ho..!

Raj: rey chill..! taani plx chup raho..

Taani: whatever rey mujhe pata hai tum itna over react kyu kar rahe ho..*she was staring kria*

Kria: raj im not feeling well so kyat um plx car rok sakte ho..?

Raj: yeh sure Kria..

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NIlesh: arey mere bhaai..! Vicky hugged him from d back seat..

Vicky: dude mai drive kar raha hu..chodo mujhee..!

NIlesh: Bhai koi gaana chalao na..

Neha: pehle u leave Vicky..!

Simmi pulled nilesh ..!

SImmi: nilesh seedhe nahi bhet sakte kya..?

Nilesh: le aagayi miss oh so perfect..!

Simmi: kyaa kaha tune..?

RInni: simmi isne kahan le aagayi miss oh so perfect...

Vishaka: dude use pata hai isne yeh kaha..!

Rinni: to kyu poocha..?

Gang: arrghh SHUTUP RINNI..!

Amar: aley kyu chila lahe ho tum tab log..meli linni ko toi tuch nae bolo ta...!

Bharat: tu aur teri rinni dimaag sada diya hai apun ka tum sab ne..abey Vicky laga koi gaana..!

Vicky put his fav song CD..jabse tere naina..vicky started grinning like fool and neha was blushing..

Vishaka: oh god not again fir yeh song..

Simmi: Vicky plzz change karo..isse acche nil ka rap hai..!

Nil: Really..gimme d beat guys..

Bharat: baad mai mere bhaai..

Simmi: Vicky shut dat song right now..! or else..

Neha: or else wat u doing to my babu..?

Vishaka: oye hindi serial ki bahu raani dun start ur drama right now...

Amar: guys maine lemonade pack kiya hai sabke liya chahhiye kisi ko..?

Nilesh: haan haan mujhe mujhe..

Nil snatched one full bottle from his hand and gulped it down and then burped loudly..!

Simmi & rinni: eww how disgusting..

Neha: if Sharon hoti she might have slapped u..

Vicky: Amar mujhe bhi do..yaar gala sukh gaya..

Vicky drank d juice..

Vicky: ahhh amar tu bohut accha lemonade banata hai..!

Amar: thx yaal..

Vishaka: ab humai bhio dede..

Amar gave one glass of lemonade to everyone ..

Vishaka: maza aagya mar thoda aur do..

Simmi: mee too..

Neha: neha also wanting one glass..

When dey were full der was pin drop silence in car..

Nil: Vicky..*low voice*

Vicky: kya hua yaar..?

Neha:babu..*low voice*

Vicky: kya hua deewani..?

Nil: mujhe washroom jaana hai..

Vicky: kyaa..?

Neha: neha also want to go to washroom..

Vicky: yahan pe washroom kaise aayega..?

Evry one: Vicky..!

Vicky:yea?

Evry one: humai bhi jaana hai *puppy face*

Vicky reached near a dhaaba he saw Krisha's Car..!

Vicky: guys dekho shayad yahan pe washroom hoga i guess Sharon and all yahi pe hi hai..!

Nil opened d door and rushed towards dhabba..! all d gals also ran towards dhaaba..!

Nil: bhai saab washroom kidhar hai..!!

Sardarji: oohh ji wo khet (Farm) dikh raha hai uske uss side pe hai..!

Nil: itna door..!

SImmi ran towards d bathroom and slammed d door..

(der was only one bathroom hota hai aisa mere saath aisa hi kuch hua tha..:P)

Vishaka was banging d door ..

Neha: pehle neha going move vishaka..

Rinni: pehle mai jaongi..,!

Nil pushed evry one..

Nil: mai jaonga pehle..!

Vishaka: nahi mai..

Just den bharat and amar came ..

AMar: tya hua? Tune tab tak nahi ki..?

Nil: bathroom mai simmi ghussi hai..!

Bharat: abbey wo jhaad ke peeche karle na..

Nil: good idea..

Nil went at d back side of d tree..and came out..(ab backside kya hua I wont tell..)

Nil: ahh sukoon mil gaya..

Gals were still doing cat fight..

Boys met swaron,kriyaansh and raj taani der..

Raj: guys tum yahan..and wo lad kyu rahi hai..?

Swayam: ho kya raha hai..?

Nil: gimme d beat guys..

Boys started booming..

Nils rap..

Jaa rahe they hum Mt.Abu,

Sab ho rahe they bekaaboo,

Amar ka lemonade pee ke kiya fun..

Ab jaana hai sabko bathroom one by one..

Evry one started rolfing..

Ok so hw was d update..

Boring?

Yaa i knw..:(

I promise once dey reach Mt abu u will also enjoy..

Precap: humko pyaar hua poori huyi dua..

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hey guys firstly im sry fr nt giving d precap😛 and second dat im a big bhulakad😆 so im makin a pm list plss like d second post after dis part so i will add u in dat..😳so here u go

Part 10

Rey saw kria was busy in tying her ribbon'her bare back was making him crazy..kria was unaware dat rey was der in d room bt sum wild smell was making her unconscious..she turned to see who is der and she was shocked to see rey..

Kria-rey aap..!

Rey-umm imm sryy..

Krai-aap andar kaise aayee?

Rey-woh mai to washroom jaane ke liye..

He was moving towards kria and kria was taking her steps backwards..and she hits d wall..

Kria-rey aap plz jao..

Rey-ok ok kria If u dun mind kya mai tumhari ribbon tie kar sakta hu ..trust me mai apni aankhe band rakho ga..

Kria was starin him she dun knw wat to say she din want rey to tie her ribbon but dun knw y her feet automatically moved toward him facing her back..

Rey was happy dat kria still trust him..he closed his eyes and started to tie d ribbon..kria was breathing hardly...A drop of tear falls frm her eye she still wants rey..rey was brushing his cold fingers on her bare back..he ties a knot hardly pulling kria near him..she slowly moves to face him and say's aap aankh khol lo..

When rey opens his eyes..and was staring deeply in kria's eyes kria in his..

Kria moves towards d door which she locked..she tries to open it bt it was jammed..

Den rey moves forwards and say's her to move aside he tries to open d door..bt unfortunately (or may be fortunately..;)😉)he cant open d door..

Kria-rey pllzz aap hatoo I will open..

Rey-u cant yeh bohut hard hai..i guess hum ko yahi rehna padega..

Kria came back to reality

Kria-aap ko kya lagta hai dat I can spend tym wid u..

Rey was shocked hearing dis and sumwat hurted..

Rey tried to calm down kria keeping his hand on kria..

Kria-rey plzz dun touch mee'

Mean while Tanya was making plan

Tanay-aisa kya karo jisse who kria ki bacchi pareshan huye..idea woh abhi raj ke room mai hai mai wahan ki power cut kar deti hu..

Rajs room

Rey-kria dekho I knw mai kisi ko call karta hu..

Kria-no rey pata nahi sab kya sochenge'

Just den lights go off..

Kria screams and hugs rey thightly and dey both fall on d bed..

Kria-rey mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai..

Rey hugs her more thightly and he din reply to her answer he closes his eye to capture dis moment his body was thirsty fr her..kria was also feeling unconscious she cant control her self so she laid a light kiss on rey's face..rey was shocked wid dis action of her bt he knew she still feels fr him he slowly lifted kria holding her face in one of his hand'kria was staring at him passionately..she kisses him on his ears..and keeps her hand circling his neck rey comes near and kisse her face passionately..and den kisses her neck..slowly moves torwards her jawline and kisses hardly der she was breathing hardly her hair were messed up..she was brushing rey's hair..he was kissing all over d face den he moved to kiss her shoulder..she slowly takes off her sandals and jewelry he pulled her more closer and was staring at her and breathing hardly his breathes were hitting her neck like knife..it was making her mad..she opens d zip of his jacket rey took off his jacket and flunged it on the other side..(ahem guys bt he was wearing his shirt..:P😛)he was staring at her lips while she was running her hand all over his back and one hand on his head guiding him to her lips he lightly kisses her on her lips..and moves to see her reaction she was closing her eyes and caught his lips hardly under her lips and kissing him passionately dey both were sucking each others lips and there toungues were twirling and dancing together..rey starts his work untangling her ribbon while dey both were kissing each other..he touched her bare back and was pulling down her sleeves just den suddenly lights cums back..kria and rey both were shocked wat dey were doin kria pushes rey and stands towards facing d wall and tears were rolling down her eyes wat she was doin rey was also shocked wid dis was he did just nw he cant believe wat he did he moves his face to look at kria she was literally shocked and cld nt say n e thing bt cry he picked his jacket..and moves toward kria..

Rey-kria job hi hua im sry maine yeh intentialy nahi kia..

Kria din answered him ..

Kria-rey aap jao plzz mai aajaongi..

Rey-ok ok plz kria im sry mai jaa raha hu..

Rey hardly broke d lock..and shuts d door and leave cursing him self frm doin dis so fast and breaking his trust once again ..

Kria in d room started crying hardly kyu kyu kia tumne yeh rey kyu tum mere paas aaye I cant control my self mai apne aap ko nahi rakh paati tumse door'just den her phone starts ringing it was raj's call..she picked up

Kria-hello

Raj-baby where r u its almost half hour kahan ho

Kria-raj im cumin..

She disconnects d phone and combs her hairs and ties d ribbon of her dress and moves outside of d room wid a pale face..

At d party..

Sharon-kria kahan hai..?

Rinni-yeh pata nahi kahan gayi..

Vishaka-dude I whish she is fine..

Tanya-woh guys aagayi kria

Tanya was happy seeing kria's face pale..

Neha-kria where u were..neha tentioning..

Kria-guys kuch nahi kuch kaam tha so dekhne gayi thi..

Sharon knew kria was lying..bt she thaught to ask her at home nt nw..

Siimmi-cum kria lets dance..

Kria-no guys u carry on'im nt feeling well..

Just den raj rey and all d boys came..

Rey was staring at kria and she was at him..

Raj-kria tum theek ho?

Kria-hmm..raj mai ghar jaa rahi hu plzz im nt feeling well..

Raj-ok chill jao n take care..

Sharon-lets go kria..

Kria-sharon nahi mai driver ke saath chali jaongi tum ruko ..

Sharon-bt kria..

Kria-sharoon plz

Sharon-ok fine be careful..

Ok guys dats it fr 2day im sry bt im nt gud in dis all romantic type scenes..lol..bt hope ya liked it..

Precap

Swayam dropping sharon home rey crying hardly he need kria he will die if she is nt der wid him.same wid kria y cant she cntrl her feelings

Edited by awesomeabshu - 13 years ago
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Part 11

kria reached home as soon as driver opened d door fr her she rushed inside the bunglow crying luckily her mom was nt awake at dat tym..

Meanwhile at d party evry one was leaving..

Swayam:hmm sharon I will drop ya..

Sharon:okk chale..byee guys hum jaa rahe hai'.

Nilesh rubbing his hand..:hum jaa rahe hai ohoo'

Simmi:yeh nilesh tum bhi chalo mere saath..

Nilesh:arey mai apne bhai ke saath jaonga..vickkyy mere bhaai.

Vicky:arey haii mai apni kagu ko drop karunga tu jaa khud..

Swayam:guys tum log ladte raho hum jaa rahe hai bye raj bye rey..arey rey kahan hai?

Raj:hmm who I guess accha feel nahi kar raha tha'chalo bye see u den'

Vishaka: hey bharat tu chal meri saath ice cream khaane '

Bharat: pagal hogayi hu iss tym ice cream khaogi..

Rinni:woow ice cream amar tum bhi chalo na..

Amar:tumhale liya kuch bhi linni..

Bharat:arey oye apni linni ke chamche chal ..

Simmi:hey bharat awaaz sambhal ke nil tub hi chal mere saath ice cream parlour aur neha tum kyu saraswati bane khadi ho learn ladko ko kaise attitude dia jaate hai chalo tum bhi ice cream khaane..

Raj:haha bye guys catch u all later'.

Rey in his room..

Back ground music tujhe bhula diya..

Rey:aaj jo bhi maine kiya nahi sahi kiya ek baar fir kria ka trust tod dia..*cries*..kria tum tumhaare bina mai bas ek dead body ki tarah hu..tumko dekh ke mai apne aap ko nahi cntrl kar pata..kria har har saas apni mai tumhare saath lena chata hu har pal tumhare saath jeena chata puri zindagi tumhara ban ke rehna chata hu aur aaj jo kuch bhi hua usse tumne mujhe roka nahi does dis means tum abhi bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho? Do u luv me still? Kria I knw u lyk me and yeh mai tumse bulwa ke hi rahunga..

Kria's room..

Kria:*sobs* maine aaj reyaansh ko apne kareeb aane diakyu mai itna comfortable thi aur mai uske saath kya karne wali thi ohh god kya mai rey se pyaar..nahi aisa nahi ho sakta woh aur Tanya ek dusre ko pasand karte hai aur aaj jo bhi hua who meri life ki badi galti thi rey ek baar fir mujhse khel raha tha tumse zyada cheap insaan maine duniya mai nahi dekha reyaansh singhania..i hate u..!!!

Swaron..<3

Swayam : sharon .. u luked really gorgeous 2day..

Sharon:thnks swayam *blushses*..

Ghadi ruking..(wow just luv dis gadhi kharab hoing aadhi raat mai..:P)

Sharon:swayam koi prob..

Swayam:guess gadi kharab ho gayi..w8 lemme check..

Sharon:ok..

Just den it start rainig heavly.. starts..

Sharon:swayam mujhe dar lag raha hai..swayam r u der?

She opened d door of d car .. and noticed that swayam was missing..

Sharon:s..s..wayam tum kahan ho..?

She was muving backwards on d road..

Sharon:swayam dekho plzz mazak mat karo..

Swayam came and puled her frm back'

Sharon:mummaaa ahhhaaa'..

Swayam:haha sharon mai hu swayam'

Sharon:swayam *hugs him* tum mujhe kyu chodke kai gaye mai kitna dar gayi thi..*cries*

Swayam:hey sharon mai to bas mazakk kar raha tha..

Sharon:mazak huh chodo mujhe I hate u..

Swayam : areyy meri baby plz maaf kardo '

Sharon:nahi..

Swayam:plzz

Sharon:theek hai..

Swayam:waise sharon guess car mai major kharabi aagyi so hamai aaj yahi nite spend karni padegi..

Sharon:are u kidding me itni tez barissh ho rahi hi..

Swayam:sharonn!! Tum bimaar ho jao gi chalo andar chalo car mai..

Swayam and sharon both hopped in ..

Dey both were breathing hardly .. and staring each other .. swayam kept his hand on sharons face and kissed her lightlty on d face and den her neck sharon was trying to cntrl her self but she lost her cntrl..(after all kria ki behan hai ;P) she kissed swayam near his lips and was brushing his hairs smoothly..(hayee mere shaanu ke hairs..) swayam went slowly towards her lips and caught dem slowly between his sharon panicked fr few secs ..bt she also started kissing him par par smrithi ka phone aaya phir and whole thing got disturbed..

Sharon swayam staring at each oder feeling embaressed..

Sharon received d call

Sharon:hello..

Smrithi:kahan ho beta kitni raat hogaye hai jaldi aao kria ko high fever hai..

Sharon:what..?mom aap car send karo swayam ki car kharab ho gayi hum abhi aarahe hai..

Swayam:kya hua??

Sharon:kria ko high fever hai..

Swayam: kyaa..

Sharon :mom car send kar rahi hai.. we will go..

After 10 min der car arrives they both hopp in and rushes to prakash mansion..

Sharon rushes to d room

Sharon:mom kria ko kya hua..kria tum theek ho??
kria:sharon im fine just thoda fever tha..

Smriti:beta kria abhi theek hai just rest chahiye ..and swayam tum jaldi jao aaj yahi hamar guest room mai so jao baaarish ho rahi hai and tum jaa bh nahi sakte so go and sleep koi kam ho so mujhe bolna..

Sharon:kria kya hua..? tum kyu aise behave kar rahi ho.?

Smriti:beta kria aap bohut stress le rahi hu kyu kya horaha hai sharon koi mujhe bataye ga?

Kria:mom aisa kuch nahi hai..trust me..

Smriti:kuch ho ya nahi kal hum sab tumhare mood sahi karne ke liya picnic jaa rahe hai apne farm house jo pahad par hai..mount abu..

Kria:nahi mom mai theek hu..

Smriti:bilkul nahi sharon tum apne saare frnd ko bol dena aur raj aur reyaansh ko bhi bol dena..

Sharon : ok mom..mai inform kardungi aur tu jaa ke sooja nahi to mai tumhe chodo gi nahi..

Kria:par..ok jao mai so rahi hu..

Smriti:gud nite beta..

Sharon:gud nite aur mai aarahi hu abhi jagah dena mereko..

Kria:ok baba..

Ok guys frstly mereko kuch samajh nahi aarahai hai aur I guess iske baad mai late update karu cuz mai india aarahi hu aur nahi pata tym milega ya nahi and sry kriyaansh nahi tha swaron tha but thoda tha cuz mai kriyaansh fan hu bt swaron part mai apna 100% de rahi hu so hope ya like it..

Precap:trip to mount abu .. cute couple moments..

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part 6

AirprotKria came out frm d wash room and saw dat raj was standing der..

Kria-raj? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ? girls washroom ke bahar koi dekhe ga to kya samjhe ga'!

Raj-chill kria'u knw wat mera bhai bahar aagaya chalo lets go im really exited tumhe usse introduce karne ke liye..

Kria-*smiles * tum kabhi kitna baccho ki tarah behave karo ho..ok lets go..

Raj-haan dekhte hai mere bhai ko tum kaisi lagti ho..

Kria-kya?

Raj-ohh nothing lets go..

Outside at the parking lot..

Rey-god yeh bro kahan reh gaye ?

Sharon-yeh aur ye simmi rinni aur baaki sab bhi nahi aaye ab tak..swayam message karna unhe ..

Swayam-meri battery discharge ho gayi rey tu karde message..

Rey-yeh..

When he was goin 2 message Tanya yelled rey ..

Sharon-rey!! Tune Tanya ko bhi yaha bula diya'oh god..

Swayam-ab yaha bhi rey se chipke gi..

Sharon-kyu tum jealous ho?

Swayam-whaatt? Mai kyu jealous honga aur tumhe to bas bahane chahiye mujhse ladne ke..

Rey-guyyss yaar ab yaha mat shuru karo'.and sharon maine Tanya ko nahii bulaya..!

Sharon-to tumne usse bola kyu?

Tanya cums and hugs rey thightly..sharon whispers 2 swayam

Sharon-aagayi chipko kahin ki isse mujhse door rakhna nahi to yah ape wrld war 3 start ho jayega..

Swayam-oho sharon bas karo..ahem excuse me Tanya '

Tanya-oh sry..

Rey-thank god..

Tanya-kuch kaha tum ne'

Sharon-nahii usne kuch nahi kaha..rey tu Vicky ko message kar..

Tanya-huh..watever..

Rey-yeh w8..

While rey was messaging Vicky raj and kria were moving towards d parking

Raj-kria jaldi chalo..

Kria-yeh ruku..mai ek baar 'passport check karti hu hai ya nahi

She starts checkin her passport '

Raj-kriaa jaldi chalo woh hamara w8 karhe honge..

Kria-okk..

When dey came out of the airport while kria was still checking her things..

Kria-areyy meri lipgloss kahan gayi..aur mera mobile o god..yeh raha..

Raj- kria tum itni hyper kyu ho rahi ho..chalo woh rahe woh log..

Kria- acha baba bt let me atleast check..

Raj-oh god pata nahi mai isse pyaar kese karne laga..

Kria-kya kaha??

Raj-nothin carry on..

Kria-theek haii..:D

Raj and kria walked towards the parking lot'

Sharon-kitni tym kyu lag raha hai?

Swayam-yehhh ab tak to aajana chahiye tha..

Sharon-kahin kuch prob to nahi ho gayi..

Rey-guys mai check kar ke aata hu..

Tanya-rey..!

Rey-what?

Tanya-rey plz ruko I cant go inside..

Rey-tumhe kisne jaane ki bola?

Tanya-rey plzzz'.

Rey-dekho Tanya..

Sharon-rey tum rehne do mai aur swayam chale jayen ge'swayam..chalo

Swayam-sharon tum jao na..mai yahi rehta hu..

Sharon raised an eyebrow

Sharon-swayam..

Swayam-gussa mat ho mai aaraha hu.

Sharon and swayam left'and Tanya hugged rey thightly ..

Tanya-finally mai aur tum akele hai..

Rey-tanya chodo mujhe kya kar rahi ho..

Just den kria and raj came searching fr dem..

Raj-woh rahee'

Kria felt like sumone very close to her heart was near her..bt she ignored it..

Kria-wow couples hmm..

Raj-woh thodi der mai kya chala gaya yahan pe to romance hi shuru ho gaya..

Kria-ohh so u tumhara bhai..hai casonova hai kya? *weird face*

Raj-huh..casanova..dikhta hai bt ek hi ladki ke pyaar me dewaana hai bilku meri tarah..*dreamy face*

Kria-*blushes* chale..

Raj-ohh haan..lets go..

Rey-leave me..pagal go gayi ho..

Tanya-no nahii chodungi..

Raj-ahemm aheem..

Kria was standing der and smiling '

Rey-bro aagaye hato..

As soon as Tanya broke the hug sum one by mistake pushed kria..

Rey-bro..aagaye itni der kyu lag gayi?

Raj-woh madam apna bag check kar rahi thi..and hi Tanya..

Tanya-hi bro..kaise ho?

Raj-im fine'luking preety..

Tanya-thnkxx'

Rey-btw where is ur so called gf'

Raj-hello manners..yahan hai..arey kahan gayi yahi to khadi thi..

Raj-oh wahan khadi hai..

Kria was fighting with a guy who pushed her..

Kria- samajhte kya ho tum apne aap ko..?

Guy-sry by mistake ho gaya..

Kria-shut up mujhe pata hai tum jaise ladko ke bare mai..

Raj-woaw kria kya hua?

Kria-he pushed ..mee'

Raj-hey how dare u..

Guy-sry who galti se hua..

Raj-theek hai theek hai it fine chalo kria..

Kria-it nt fine at all..tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe dhakka marne ki..

Just rey standing der at enjoyin the fight bt can nt see krias face properly..

Rey-wow intresting girl..

Tanya-huh..

Raj-kria enuf chalo my bro is w8ing..

Kria-theek hai..*irritated face..*

Slow motion exactly like dat jaise films mai hota hai hero herion bohut saalon baad mil rahe ho..:P :D

Soft romantic air was blowing reys hair..

Rey turned his face to look if sum one is standing back of him just den raj and kria came..

Raj- dudeee..

Rey slowly slowly unki taraf palat raha hai and kria is staring at d grnd..rey ne apni eyes dheere se upar ki and the Biggest shock of his life.. "KRIA"

Raj said hey rey meet my gf kria..kria slowly raised her head to face his bro cuz she was shocked when raj said hey rey'and dhamaka..

Rey and kria was staring each other they cud nt imagine wat was happening wid them kria was like she is goin to burst out..and rey he could never ever in his dreams thaught dat kria is his bro's gf'he was shocked more den kria..his eyes turned dark red..he was standing cold der .. same thing was happening wid kria..she din imagine dat rey is raj brother..

Raj-kria meet rey..mera bhai..

Kria was staring at raj silently..

Raj-kria r u fine'

Raj gave her a side hug..

Rey was fr sum moment he was happy bt den he realized dat raj is dating kria and he is madly in love wid her..

Just den Tanya came yelling reys name..

Tanya-rey darling..

Kria stared at rey wid sum sort of angry and disappointed looks..

Tanya said bhaiya and bhabi as soon hse turned she was shocked dat it was none other den kria..she den stared at rey whose red eyes were still on kria'.

Sharon and swayam came out breathing hardly..

Sharon 'rey bro nahi mile..

Kria heard sharons voice and turned to see her..sharon was having a big smile on her face bt when she saw kria her smile disappeared she was staring at her she never evr expected actually none of dem expexted dis..sharon was looking at swayam wid a happy face evn swayam dat kria is here den both of dem realized dat kria is dating raj..dey came forward 2 see rey bt rey was still in same position..it looked like he is paralyzed ..

Raj-guys..guys!! kria..

Kria-han..

Raj-kya hua tumlog ko itne chup kyu ho and rey..reyy'

Rey-yes b..ro

Raj-kya hua? Yeh saare Vicky aur sab kahan hai??

Hearing vickys name a drop of tear falls frm krias eyes..and nw she was really disappointed and more hurt den b4 dat rey lied to her 3 years back dat he dun love Tanya..bt sumtyms b4 dey were hugging each other..

Swayam 'woh sab aate honge..

Just den sum voice came frm back of raj and kria..

Evry one shouted hum aagayee'

Raj-guys..

He turned bt kria din cuz she was still staring rey sharon swayam and last bt also d least Tanya..

Vicky-broo'kahan the itni din se na koi call ya message..

Neha-deewane ye hai bhaiya handsome he is..

Raj-hey u must be neha..

Hearing nehas name kria just can not stop her self to face dm..

Kria turned slowly..and evry one was smiling bt when dey swa her der smile was paused and samt thing happened wid dem all d gals were sooo happy to see kria again bt den that same thaught made der smile disappear..

Raj-guys meet my love of my life ..kriaa'

Evry one was like wt*..

Rey was staring at d grnd ..and all the gang staring at him..

Tanya-cut d drama off guys dekho kaun aaya hai broo and unki love kriaa'

Kria-raj plzz mai ghar jao im nt feeling well..

Raj-kria kya hua abhi to puri time mujhse ladte hua aayi and nw suddenly tumhari tabbiyat..

Evry one was staring kria..

Kria-woh actually..

Sharon-broo!! Aap rey ke saath ghar jao we will drop kria home..

Raj-bt mai isse drop karta tha ghar Toronto mai and mujhe tension ho gi..

Swayam-kya hum bhoot hai..chill hum drop kardenge aap bhi thak gaye ho and I guess rey is nt well..

Raj-rey kya hua?rey..

Rey-nothing bro just stressed l'ets go..still staring at kria..

Tanya-rey baby plsss drop me..

Vishaka-dude behave he is goin to drop her brother tum jao apne aap se nahi to kahin tumhari dress na phat jayee'

Tanya-huh..loser..

Sharon-kria we will drop u home..

Kria cant say dem no cuz she wanna meet dem and hug dem..

Rey-bro chale..

Raj-yeh w8..

Raj hugs kria ..

Raj-be care ful..

Kria smiled..

Rey can nt tolerate this so he jumped in his car so did raj and dey both head towards der house..

Meanwhile kria and gang having der tym..shron slowly came towards kria and hugged her thightly evn kria hugged her..they both began to cry harly..and rest of d gals join dem..neha was crying really hard..

Neha-kria tum humai kyu chod ke gayi..

Sharon-atleast inform kardeti pata hai hw I felt dat tym..

Simmi-sharon control ur self and kria tum to mujhse baat mat karo..

Rinni exactly hugged kria thightly..

Vishaka-dude khan gayi tum..she started crying and evry one was shocked she hugged her'

Kria-im sry guys plss maaf kardo dun knw kya hua us raat ki mai aise 'huh leave it..waise tell me tum log ka kya hua..and nilesh I was dying to hear ur live rap cuz tumhare album maine sunni hai..

Nilesh-dude tumhe to mai kuch sunao gab hi nahi ur impossoble..

Kria-sryy..and amar tumhare liya mai roz pray karti thi dat tum master chef jeet jao and nw ur my fav chef..

Amar-thank u kliya mai bohut khush hu te tum wapat tagayi..

Kria-and bharat wow atlast tumhara sapna pura ho gaya..ferraii ke owner mujhe ek free mai chahiye'

Bharat-yeh koi puchne ki baat hai to aur nahi to kya itni dino baad baadlo se nikli ho dena to pade ga hi..

Kria-*laughs* and Vicky kya popping karta hai to..

Vicky-tum mujhse baat na karo tumhari wajah se meri deewani roz roti thi..

Kria-aww sry..and my fav boy swayam..

Kria hugged him I missed u..

Swaym-evn me..

Sharon was nt at all jealous..infact she was really happy..

Kria-guys I missed u all really much..

Sharon-tumne hum sabke bare mai to boldiya bt rey..

Kria was blanked

Krai-huh rey kaun hai rey oo yea raj ka bhai nice guy and her gf Tanya wow couple made in heaven..

Sharon-kria..dekho its nt like dat..

Kria-phir kesa hai plzz sharon I dun wanna talk bout dis drp me home..

Sharon-ok kria..

At reys home

Raj and rey entered d house so rey hw is kria..

Rey-acchi hai..

Raj-she is an angel maine kaha than a and ur Tanya kuch nahii uske saamne..

Rey-broo plzz im nt dating her..

Raj-dude chill im sryy..

Rey-no prob im sry mai chillaya..

Raj-kuch nahi hota ok den mai fresh hoke aata hu phir kria ko call karna hai..

Rey-fine..

Rey rushes towards the room wid anger and slams d door hardly..and starts crying hardly..

Rey-aisa kyu hua mere saath ek ladki se maine pyaar kiya frst aapne usko mujhse cheena aura b mera bhai aur kria date..kyu kiya aapne kyuuu'

Precap-party tym.🥳.

Hope u liked it .. will update a promo tommrow..plz hit like if u want pm'J

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guys so here's d 9part..sry fr late update i was busy in my exams..and thnks a millions fr ur cmmnts🤗

Part 9Rey's house..

All d boys were at d party..

Swayam-wow bro kool party'

Raj-thnks dude..sara credit nil,Vicky,bharat and amar ko jaata hai..

Swayam was wearin hot black jacket and inside white shirt..

Raj was wearin red jacket and black shirt..

Rey was wearin blue jacket and dark blue shirt inside..(the one which he was wearin on d launch party of shakti *hayeee*..)

Amar was wearin cool pink shirt..

Vicky was wearin white shiny hot jacket..

Bharat was wearin cool purple shirt and a black tie..

Nilesh was wearin yellow and black combination..

Rey-hey guys..

Vicky-rey mera yaar kahan tha tu..

Rey-mai to yahin tha bt tumhe kya hua..?

Nil-dude ignore kuch zyada pagal ho raha hai neha ko dekhne ke liye..waise saari gals reh kahan gayi..

Raj-no idea dude after all yeh sab ladkiya hai..

Bharat-arey mere wali to ladkiyo ki tarah behave bhi nahi karti ..

Evry one shouts what??
amar-aley ithka matlab hai te vithaka tethe tirf accha dost manti hai..(arey iska matlab hai ki vishaka sirf isse accha dost manti hai..)

Raj-gals ke yahi prob hai just good frnds..

Nil-yeh dude..

Swayam-guys sht up yaar ..rey tu kyu itna chup hai dnt wry Tanya aarahi hai..

Rey-stop it its enuf I dunt like Tanya at all..

Raj-guys bas karo..uffu yeh sab itna tym lagati hai..make up dress jewelry..gosh!!

Nil-gimme d beat guys..

Gals hogayi hai party mai latee..

Boys kar rahe hai kabse wait..

Karti hai who makeup shakeup..

Aur har waqt kehti rehti hai just shutup..

Unke pyaar mai phas gaye hai hum..

Chabati aise hai humai jaise hum hai chewing gum..

Samajhti hai sab apne aapko anaarkali

Bt sab lagti hai sukhi chipkali..

Vicky-wah wah mere bhai tune mere dil ki baat boldi..

Nil-thnks yaar,..

Sum voice came frm back..

Simmi-oh really nil..

All d boys turn to see..

Nil-s'ss..simmi..

Simmi-kyu shock laga??

Neha-deewane u thinking like dis ..

Rinni-tum log kitne cheap ho ..u think like dis about us..

Vishaka-dude maine to kahan tha dunt trust boys..

Amar-aley linni mai nahi yeh log mai to tumse bohut pyaal kalta hu..

Rinni-aww soo sweet..

Simmi-shut up rinni..and hamai tum log se baat nahi karni..

Raj, rey and swayam giggling..

Nil-arey baby suno naa..

Vicky-deewanii tum mujhe chod ke mat jao..

Neha-vicky tumne mujhe dokha diya ab mai tumhare saath nahi reh sakti..

Vicky-naahhiii'.

Vishaka-woaa guys chill neha go bechaara khada hua hai..and bharat where r u dude chal lets have drink..

Rey-by d way vishaka tum gown mai awesum lag rahi ho..

Vishaka-dude thnks fr reminding me dis bloody gown I wont leave u ..

Rey-wooaa sry sry..

Raj-god guys u all r jokers..simmi yaar chill aise hi tym pak kar rahe thai..

Simmi-huhh tum ladke ho hi aise bt forget it hamare paas dil hai maaf karne kai liya cum on guys lets dance..

Raj-hey vishaka kria kahan hai?

Hearing krias name rey was waiting fr vishakas answer'

Vishaka ' dun knw dude woh hamare saath nahi thi..

Swayam-kahan reh gayi den..lemme call sharon..

Swayam-heyy.. sharon..

Sharon-yeh swayam sry car kharab ho gayi thi we r just here outside..

Swayam-ok byee.,,

Just den after sum min kria and sharon enter

Vishaka-guys see kria is here..

Neha-wow kria and sharon looking so beautiful..

Simmi-really..

Vishaka yells hey sharon and kria..

Hearin sharon kria's name swayam raj and ofcrzz rey turns to see dem'

Kria was smiling..(hayee her smile)

Raj-wow..

Rey can not even blink fr a sec..

Swayam-was leaning on rey..

Swayam-hayee meri sharon..

Sharon comes near swayam..and kisses him on his cheek..

Raj moves forward and holds kria hand and kisses her hand..

Rey gets distracted..

Kria comes forward and stares at rey wid sad eyes..

Just den Tanya enters wearing brown backless cut gown

She walks towards rey and kissed him on his cheeks..this makes kria uncormfortable..

Raj-hmm'kria u all rite..?

Kria-yeh obviously..

Raj-dance my princess..

Kria gave him a cute smile..

Tanya grabed rey to d dance floor..

Kria-hmm raj cool party..

Raj-afterall maine organize ki hai'sirf selected ppl hai..

Kria-it means im one of dem..

Raj-ur d girl I slected to spend my life wid..

Kria always felt uncomfortable whenever raj will talk about der marriage..

Meanwhile..d3 gang..

Vishaka-oho love birds mai khusur phusur..

Simmi-love birds kaun..

Neha-arey kria and raj'

Rinni-thnk god love birds hai angry birds nahi..

Simm-btw guys rey kria were much better couple'I mean I dun like kria wid him..

Vishaka 'yeh dude u r rite..dekho rey is very sad and still staring at kria..

Neha-neha killing dis tanya very soon..huh..

Bharat-agar tum logo ki batai khatam ho gayi to apna pakao section band karo..

Vicky-deewani dance kare..

Neha-haa han deewane chalo..

Amar-linni chalo..

Nilesh ' yeh rinni chalo/..

Simmi-aey hello tum kahan jaa rahe ho cum wid me '

Nilesh-kahan phas gaya..

Simmi-excuse me..

Nilesh-huh..baby let go cum on..

Swayam and ahron sitting near d pool..

Swayam-sharon ur luking beautiful..

Sharon-thnks swayam..

Swayam-sharon ..

Sharon-hmm..

Swayam kissed on her cheeks..

Swayam-never ever leave me sharon..

Sharon-swayam mai tumhe kabhi nahi chodungi 'tum mere se itni assani se peecha nahi chudva sakte abhi to mujhe puri life rehna hai aur shopping karni hai..

Just den tanaya and rey cumes

Tanya-ohh hello sharon..

Sharon faced to see her..

Sharon-hey..

Sharon whispers to swayam ' jungle se aayi hai kya iski dress phat gayi??

Tanya-hmm sharon theek thaak lag rahi ho tum..

Sharon-excuse me wat do u mean..

Tanya-oh whatever bye..rey baby aarahai ho??

Rey-tanya pls leave me alone..

Sharon-wat does she think of herself..?

Rey-leave it ignore karo..

Swayam-sharon cum lets dance'

Sharon-bi*ch '

Swayam-sharon..!

Sharon-ohh im sryy'

Rey-god swaym leave it tum log jao..

Just den kria comes ..

Kria-hey swayam..

Swayam-hey kria ..luking gorgeous..give her a side hug ..

Kria-dance karne jaa rahe ho..?

Sharon-yup..swayam cum on..

Kria and rey were standing alone staring at each other..

Just den sum of reys frnd comes and start chatting wid rey and kria leaves frm der and joins raj at d bar..

Rey to his frnds..

Rey-guys mai washroom hoke aata hu..

Rey went to his room bt d bathroom door was locked..

Rey-excuse me kaun hai andar..?

Tanya-rey its me..

Rey-tanya atleast u can ask fr permission 2 use my washroom..

Tanay-sry rey..

Rey-uhh..bro ke room ka use karleta hu..

On the other side..

Kria-raj..

Raj-yeh..

Kria-meri gown ki ribbon I guess loose hai ..

Raj-kria go to my room and tie it'

Kria- thnks

..kria goes towards rajs room and locks d door..

Just den rey cums out of d washroom and notices kria struggling while tying her gown ribbon..

Guys that's all fr today..hope u enjoyed dis part..

Precap-ahem ahem ..sochte raho..:P 😉

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😆Part 7

Sharon and swayam were goin to drop kria..

Sharon-kria..lets go..

Kria-hmm

Swayam- mai driver ko call karta hu..

Sharon-till den mai aur kriya cafe mai hai okk so tum yeh luggage load kar dena..

Sharon and kria were sitting in the cafe..

Sharon-kria..

Kria-hm

Sharon-aisa kya hua kit um hum sab ko chod ke chali gayi?

Kria-sharon aisa kya nahi hua us raat ko..mer mom ko mere dance ke bare mai pata chal gaya aur ur best buddy rite..reyaansh singhania ne mujhe meri life ka sabse bada shock diya..wow..

Sharon-kria dekho aisa nahi hai rey bohut pareshan hai..he loves u..

Kria-yeh sharon he loves me he loves Tanya aur pata nahi kitni girls hai jisse woh pyaar karta hu..

Sharon-kria dekho..

Kria-plz sharon mujhe us rey ke bare mai koi baat nahi karni..

Sharon-ok kria bt raj bhaiya ko pata hai dat u and rey were dating.

Kria-no kria maine raj ko aaj tak yeh nahi bataya dat sumone was der b4 in my life..and mujhe nahi pata tha dat raj rey ka bhai hai..

Sharon-tum raj se pyaar karti ho?

Kria-w..what do u mean ofcrzz..he is a sweet heart unlike his brother reyaansh singhania..!

Sharon in her mind I knw I knw kria dat u dun love him..

Swayam calls sharon..

Sharon-hello..

Swayam-yeh sharon driver aagaya..

Sharon-ok im cumin..

Sharon-kria lets go driver aagaya..

Kria-yeh..

On the way home..

Swayam-kria ur changed..wow..

Kria-matlab?

Swayam-matlab yeh ke dat tum shorts pehni ho kool..

Kria-to isme kaunsi badi baat hai ' waise guys tum sab kaise the yaar..

Sharon-hum theek the..and u knw wat kria me and swayam r goin to get engage'

Kria-wow dats great news..aur tumhe pata hai dat mai aur raj bhi bohut jald engagement karne wale hai..

Swayam-what!! Kria bt itni jaldi..

Kria-yeh I knw jaldi hai bt raj chata hai'hmm swayam driver se bolo left le lo cuz I dun live der anymore..

Sharon-tumhari mom kab aaye waps dehradun se?

Kria-I dun knw bt mom ko kuch kisi ki yaad arahi thi..pata nahi kyu bt she allowed me 2 dance..mai yaha ayii thi Mumbai 1 saal pehle..bt tum log ko maine bohut dhunda nahii mile..and swayam..swayam..!

Swayam-haan..

Kria-swayam kya hua?

Swayam-kria I cant believe dat tum aur raj bhaiya engement kar rahe ho..i mean rey ka kya hoga..

Kria was blanked..

Kria-plzz swayam rey ka chapter meri life mai bohut pehle band ho gaya tha..

Swayam-god!! Kria tum kyu nahii samajhti ho it was just a misunderstanding'he loves u more den his life!!

Kria-''.plz mera ghar aagaya I guess..

Swayam-god..

Sharon-ok kria hum andar nahi aayenge cuz we r late..and is dis ur home..?

Kria-ok sharon next tym u have to cum..yeh dis is my home ..

Sharon-wow it beautiful..

Kria-thnks..swayam bye..

Swayam-'''..

Kria-swayam'?plz dun do dis to me'

She started crying..

Swayam-kria plz dun cry im sry..cum I will drop u inside sharon chalo'

Kria and swayam enterd the bunglow krias mother was in garden..

Kria went and hugged her thightly frm back..

Smriti-kria..?

When she saw kria she hugged her thightly'

Smriti-tum yahan .. tumne bola nahii..

Kria-aww mom mai aapko surprise dena chati thi

Smriti-kaise ho beta ji maine aapko kitna miss kia..and raj kaisa hai..

Kria-mom mai theek hu and raj bhi accha hai..

Smriti-arey sharon beta tum bhi ghar aagayi and swayam tum bhi ho..

Kria-mom sharon bhi ghar aagayi matlab?

Just den gautam came to d garden frm living room..

Kria-gautam sir sharon ke dad,.mom yeh yahan kya kar rahe hai?

Smriti-kria yeh sharon ke dad nahi tumhare dad bhi hai..!

Kria-kya..!

Kria looked at sharon den at gautam..

Kria-mom aapne mujhe bataya nahi..

Smriti-kria yeh tumhare dad hai aur tum aur sharon twins ho..

Sharon kept her hand on kria's shlder .. swayam was smiling cuz he knew bout dis infact evry one knw..

Smriti-jab tum dono chote the den hum dono ke beech mai misunderstanding aagayi thi so humne decide kiya ke hum seprate ho jaate hai..aur mai tumhe leke ke dehradun aagayi tabhi mujhe dance se nafrat thi..bt gautam ne mujhe mumbai mai dekh liya so usne mujhe sab samjhaya ke kya hua tha..

Kria went slowly towards her dad and hugged him..

Gautam-kria beta kaise ho tum I was dying to see u..

Kria-im fine dad..

Sharon came near kria..

Kria 'sharon tumhe yeh sab pata tha so y u din said me at d airport..

Sharon-actually mai tumhe surprise karna chati thi..

They both hugged each other

Smriti-ok beta chalo khana kha lete hai swayam join us..

Swayam-no aunty actually mujhe jana tha ..so I will catch u later..

Kria-mom woh actually mereko bhuk nahi lagi hai mujhe neend arahi hai so I will eat later

Smriti-but kria'

Gautam-smriti usse sone do baad mai khalegi..

Kria-yeh mom ..

Smriti-theek hai..and sharon tum betho khaana khaane ke liye..

Sharon-okk..

Kria rushed towards her room she locks her door..and started crying I whish rey hamari beech mai yeh sab na hota kya kami thi mujhe mai'kya thi..kria tum na ro uske liye..

Kria went fr a bath..

Rey's house..

Rey still in his room..

Vicky nilesh swayam bharat and amar came..

Vicky-dude..

Rey-hey guys

Swayam-kaisa hai..?

Rey-mai theek hu..

Nilesh- bro kahan hai?

Rey-woh fresh hone gaye hai..

Swayam- rey mai tumse kuch kehna chata hu..

Rey-kya?

Swayam-rey I dun knw raj ne tumhe kaha hoga bt kria said dat dey r goin to get engaged..

Rey went blanked..

Swayam-rey..

Rey- swayam I need kria..i cant live wid out her plzz

Vicky-dude hum kya kar sakte hai..

Just den raj came..

Raj-guys wasup..? rey kya hua?

Rey-bro kuch nahii..

Raj-ok kool waise abhi raat ke 10 baj gaye I guess tum log ko jaana chahiye..

Vicky-hum thodi der baad chale jaayenge ..

Raj-ok so mai bhi tum log ke saath bhet ke baat karta hu..

Swayam-sure..

While dey were talking raj called kria .. she picked up d phone'

Raj-hey kria..

Evry one starts starin raj..

Kria-raj tum..

Raj-yeh mai kya hua r u fine..

Kria-yeh im fine..

Raj-kria I miss u'I knw mai pagal hu sirf 4 hours hi to huye bt still I love u lot..

Kria-raj mai sone jaa rahi hu so bye and I love u to..

Kria cuts d call..

Raj-I dun knw y but mujhe aise feeling aati hai ke kria mujhse pyaar nahi karti..

Rey was staring raj..

Nilesh-chill bro kria bohut acchi hai..and guys guys kal hum party rakhenge ok..

Raj-wow dude dats good idea..

Swayam-kool so sab kal milenge and guys I guess we shld leave nw..

Vicky-yeh bye rey bye bro..

Raj-byeee..and rey gud nite ..

Rey-gud nite..

Precap-party tym..

I knw dis part was booring bt party will be fun..i have some hot kriyaansh and swaron scene in my mind..:P

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hey guys thxx very much..ur commetnts meanse alto 2 mee..😊
part 2
toronto..
11:pm
Trin trin kria picked up her mobile and received d call and said
Kria-hello kaun hai jo mujhe subha subha pareshan kar raha hai.
Raj- Happy birthday 2 u my love..
Kria- raj tumhe yaad tha? Aww I love u .
Raj- ok fast get ready mai tumhe pick up karne aaraha hu 2 day is a special day..see ya in 10 min.
Kria- bt raj.. uff phone kat diya.bt uski kya galti hai usse to nahi pata dat aaj ke din kisi ne mujhe dokha diya tha..(wid irritated mood) uffu kria tumhe koi hak nahi hai usko yaad karne ka jisne tumhe use kiya..:(
1:00 PM
Kria- God yeh raj kahan reh gaya? Bol raha tha 10 min mai aaraha hu 1 hr ho gaya..chalo jaa ke juice hi bana leti hu..
Kria- yeh ladke bhi naa kabhi time pe nahii aate..
Raj- im so sry kia actually mai thoda late ho gaya..kria?
Kria-ohh agaye tum atlast.
Raj-aww kria tum gussa ho?
Kria 'nahii mai to bohut kush hu..
Raj-gud achi baat hai..
Kria 'kya? Mai bohut gussa hu..
Raj-tum girls hoti hi aisi hai koi baat ka sahi answer nahi deti..ok fine ab gussa chodo aur mere saath chalo..
Kria-no mai nahii arahi ..
Raj-plzzz *puppy face*
Kria-ok chalo..
Raj-wait a min aise nahi eyes pe blindfold bandho pehle
Kria-kya kar rahe ho raj tum..
Raj-plzz..
Kria-ok..kria in her mind plzz plzz karke sara kaam karvata hai..
Raj-ok ab lets go..
After half an hour
Kria-raj kitni door hai mai andhi ho jaongi..
Raj-bas hum aagaye'chalo I will open ur blindfold..
When he opened her blindfold kria was surprised.
Kria-woww..raj its soo awesum..aww I love u..
She hugged him thightly.he hugged her back
Raj-u liked it ?
Kria-I loved it
It was a gardern and path covered with arched rose arbours..

After 5 hrs dey went 2 a have dinner in a restaurant
Raj-kria mai tumse kuch bolna chata hu
Kria-kya?
Raj-dat kal hum india jaa rahe hai..
Kria-really?
Raj-yeh..
Kria-aww ur soo good .. waise bhi I was missing mom..thx raj..
Raj-ur always welcum dear..waise kria i guess mai sirf 3 months ke liya india aa sakta hu so mai tumhari mom se shaadi ki baat karu?
Kria- raj tumhe nahi lagta we r goin 2 fast??
Raj-hum ek baar tumhari mom se baat karke dekhte hai den we will get engage shaadi baad mai karlenge ..
Kria-theek hai..i will see..ok drop me home packing karni hai..
Raj-yeh mujhe bhi kuch kaam karne hai..
India
Swayam sleeping on his bed..his servant came to tell dat he is goin
Servant-swayam sahib mai jaa raha hu..
He did nt wake up den the servant touched swayams hands and swayam pulled him closer his eyes were closed and he said
Swayam-ohh agayi tum
Servant-sahib..aa..aap kya kar rahe hai
Swayam-shh bilkul chup acha Sharon mujhe ab ek kiss de do
Servant ' sahib mai sharon madam nahi hu
Sharon heard swayams voice frm out side
Sharon-yeh swayam kisse baat karaha hai kahi dosri ladki to nahi?
Sharon opened d door and yelled swayam
Swayam opened his eyes and pushed d servant.Sharon started laughing.
Swayam-tum yaha kya kar rahe the?
Servant-sir mai to apko bolne aaya tha dat mai jaa raha hu par aapne to..
Swayam ' shutup ab jao yahan se
Sharon-ha jao kal phir aana(she started laughing)🤣
Swayam-haso aur zor se haso..
Sharon-sry..actually *laughs*🤣 mai yeh kehna tha jaldi ready ho jao we have to go
Swayam-bt where?
Sharon-rey ke ghar jana tha bhul gaye..
Swayam ' oo haan..(pushed her closer* itni bhi kya jaldi hai..
Sharon-swayam leave me..
Swayam-chodne ke liye nahi pakda..(moving towards her face)
Sharon pushed him
Sharon-tumhe nahi jaana mai jaa rahi hu
Swayam-arey! Wait..im cumin..
Sharon-jaldi mai tumhara wait kar rahi hu..
Swayam came down Sharon was staring him'when he came near she kissed him
Sharon-lets go..
Swayam-yeh rey bhi subah subah bula leta hai..
Sharon-kuch kaha tumne ne?
Swayam-nahi sweetheart chalo or we'l be late..

Toronto
Raj- *talkin on phone* hello rey
Rey-bro? kitne din baad phone kiya..
Raj-and hw r u?
Rey-im fine..and u?
Raj-mai bhi theek hu..actually rey mai tumse keh raha tha dat hum India aarahe hai..
Rey-wow dats gr8 new itne saal baad India arahe ho aap..but hum? Aapke saath aur kaun hai?
Raj-wo surprise hai..
Rey-plzz tell na
Raj-actually mai apni girlfriend ko lekar aaraha hu I love her very much so India aake hum engage ho jaye ge
Rey-dats gud atlast koi ladki to mere bhai ko pasand aaye wats her name?
Raj-who to tumhe tab hi pata chalega jab mai India aaonga..
Rey-okkk..waise dekhti kaise hai who?
Raj-she is very pretty the most gorgeous girl in d world..
Rey-naa kria se zyada nahi..
Raj-w8 a sec tumne kya kaha?
Rey-k..kya maine kuch nahi kaha
Raj-nahii tumne kuch kaha..
Rey-dude seriously mai ne kuch nahi kaha..
Raj *thinkin*to shayad ab mujhe kria ka naam saari jagah sunayi deta hai..
Raj-rey so tumhare aur Tanya ka kya hua..
Rey-bro maine khan a I dun love her mai to bas ek ladki se pyaar karta hu woh bhi maine kho di..
Raj-dude chill'u will surely meet her..rey tumha yaad hai jab hum chote the hum dono ko ek hi cheez pasand aaya karti thi? Aur hum us ko lene ke liya ladte the aur hamseha tu hi woh lekar jaata tha..
Rey-yea yaad hai mereko..
Raj-bt u knw wat jab tum meri gf ko dekho get um usmi hi kho jaoge she is so beautiful..*dreamy face*😍
Rey-dude let me tell u mujhe koi intrest nahi kisi ladki mai maine bas ek se pyaar kiya aur ussi se pyaar karunga..and I hate dat gal jisne mere bhai ko mujhse door kardiya..:😔
Raj-arey kaise baat karta hai tu..pagal mat ban..
Rey-ok sry..
Raj-mai tumse kabhi naraz nahii hua.
Rey-ok bye koi door bell baja raha hai'
Raj-byee..
Precap-flashback of hw rey n kria got seprated and swayam and sharon started dating..
guys hope u liked it plzz hit like if u want pms.😊
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Part 1

India

*Ooohooohoo* sad tune version playing Rey resting his head on the pillow staring at kria's photo it was 12 am. His eyes were full of tears..

Rey- happy birth day kria..

*Flashback*

Kria was sittin in her room it was 11:57 A.M suddenly lights went and a *thud* sound came.

Kria- kaun h..h..hai wahan?

Sumone was cuming near her she took a step back

Kria-dekho mai mom ko bulaungi..

Stranger-ohh really? Bt mom to ghar pe hai hi nahi.

Kria- tumhe kaise pata chala? Dekho mere paas mat aana..

Stranger-accha! Kya karlogi tum?

Kria-m…mai mai kya karungi .Plzz mujhe kuch mat karo.

Suddenly kria slipped and chaught strangers hand both falled on the bed and light came kria eyes were closed when she opened her eyes she was shocked.

Kria-Rey tum??

Rey- haan mai..:P

He hugged her thightly..happy birthday kria.. Kria tried to push him.

Kria-chodo mujhe ..

Rey- haha as if tum bolo aur mai tumhai chodun ga…

Kria-yeh koi tarikha hai birthday wish karne ka..

Rey-its good na..waise mujhe aur bhi tarikhe aate hai birthday wish karne ke..

Kria-kya?

Rey was moving towards her lips..suddenly sum one opened d door..it was d gang

Gang – happy birthday kria (they yelled..)

Swayam-guys yeh dekho kya ho raha hai..

Sharon-yeh dono to akele hi birthday celebrate kar rahe hai (makin a sad face)

Rey-tum log yahan k..kya kar rahe ho..??

Vicky-oh to chalo hum jaa rahe hai chalo guys

Rey murmured – acha hai jaa..kria looked at him..

Kria pushed rey

Kria-guys wait … pagal ho gaye ho kya lets celebrate

Rey in his mind pagal to baatcutter ho gayi hai kyaa yaar achi khaasi raat mili thi who bhi gayii…L

*flashback over*

Trin trin

Rey -hey Sharon wasup? Itni raat ko evry thing is all rite?

Sharon-Rey tum theek ho na? actually kal subah tumhare ghar aarahe mai aur sawayam..

Rey-yeh Sharon im fine bt tum log kyu aarahe ho?

Sharon-rey ajj kria ki birthday hai..(wid a low voice)

A tear of drop was der on reys eyes..

Rey-really mujhe to pata hi nahi chala..ok bye im nt feelin well kal baat karte hai..

Sharon-rey ..phone kat gaya…hmm muje pata hai rey dat u r lying to me tumhai pata tha dat it s kira's birthday..swayam ko inform kar deti hu..

Swayam picked up d phone..

Swayam-yes baby kya hua..meri yaad aarahi thi na??

Sharon-nahii..mere paas aur bhi kaam hai..

Swayam-fine den apne kaam karo jaake byee

Sharon-arey w8 sry baba mai ne ye bolne ke liye call kiya ki kal ready ho jana rey ke ghar jana hai ok byee love you..

Swayam – as u say madam luv u too…byee .

Precap:cute swaron scene and raj and kria's scene..

Hope u guys liked it..:)

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Part 8

Next day at rey's house

Raj go towards rey room..

Raj-rey'utho

Rey-sune do na bro..

Raj-chalo wake up and hami tayyari karni hai chalo fast utho and waise bhi kria aane wali hai..

Rey suddenly get up and rushes to washroom..

In the wash room ..:P

Rey to his self bro mai life mai sari aapki fav cheez cheene hai so is bar kaise peeche reh sakta hu sry bro but I love kria aur I can do anything fr her..kria ko to mai realize karwake hi rahunga dat its nt my fault..

Kria 's home..

Sharon comes and hugs kria..

Kria-aww sharon gud mrning..

Sharon-kria get ready

Kria-bt y?

Sharon-hum bro ke ghar jaa rahe hai..

Kria-mujhe nahi jaana..

Sharon-cum on kria mere liya itna bhi nahi kar sakti..

Kria-ok fine..waise sharon mai tumhari liye birthday gift layi hu..

Sharon-birthday gift?

Kria-ofcrzz dumboo mujhe yaad tha as we both are twins to obviously same date pe hoga na..u din said any one bout dis'aur kisi ne apna dimaag bhi use nahi kiya..

Sharon-yeh I knw bt me and swayam special date night pe gaye the..aur mom dad nai celebrate kit hi..

Kria-ohoho..

Sharon-shtup..cum on get ready..

Kria-mujhe rey se nahi milna..

Sharon-tum raj se milne jaa rahi ho..rey se nahii..

Kria-fine..

Kria was ready and she was looking really cute..in her pink dress..

And sharon was wearing orange dress..

Smriti-aww meri pyari betiya..

Gautam-haan meri beautiful wife ki pyaari betiya..

Sharon and kria giggled..

Smriti-yeh kya kar rahe ho office ke liye late ho jaoge chalo..kria sharon tumhe jaana tha na..chalo jaldi breakfast karo..

Kria-mom woh mai raj ke saath kar lungi..

Smriti-par kria tumne raat ko bhi kuch nahi khaya ..

Sharon-mom kria ne kaha na hum dono udhar hi kar lenge..

Smriti-theek hai jao..

Kria-bye mom bye dad..

Gautam-bye beta..

Smriti-araam se jaana..!

Rey's house

Rey was wearing pink color shirt (which he was wearing on last thusrday's episode)

Swayam @ rey's house..

Swayam-rey party ki tayyari ho gayi..he was wearing an orange color cheked shirt.

Rey-hmm .. nil , Vicky, amar aur bharat will handle it..sharon kahan hai?

Swayam ' woh bas aati hogi..where is bro?

Rey-backyard mai hai..

Just den kria and sharon arrives ..

Swayam opened d door and sharon hugs him thigtly ..

Sharon-aww I missed u..

Kria smiled'

Swayam-I missed ya to sharon..kria cum in..

Kria-hmm raj kahan hai?

Kria's eyes were looking fr raj but her eyes spotted rey who was sitting at couch an watchin tv her heart skipped a beat bt she ignored him ..

Kria-swayam'raj kahan hai..

When rey heard kria's voice he turne to see her..his hearbeat stopped she was looking so cute and pretty in dat pink dress wid loose straight hairs he can not take his eyes of her..he wanted to touch her and hug her thightly'just den raj came..

Raj-kria'!

He hugged kria..

Rey comes back 2 reality and was feeling jealous of raj..

Raj-kria chalo lets have breakfast ..rey u cumin dude..

Rey-bro aap jao mai aata hu..

Kria-mai washroom se aati hu..

Sharon-bro lawn mai breakfast kare dekhe kitni acchi air hai..

Raj-ok..swayam lets go..

Swayam-yeh..

Kria came out frm d washroom and goin towards d lawn bt she bymistake bumps into rey..and den cute LoOk LoOk hawa hawa '

Kria-rey

Rey-im sry..woh actually bro w8 kar rahe hai..

Kria-hmm lets go..

Dey both move towards the lawn..

Raj-guys aagye tum log cum on..

Kria sits between raj and rey..

Swayam slowly holds sharons hand..

Sharon whispers-swayam leave my hand..

Swayam-''''

Sharon-swayam..

Raj-any problem guys/..?

Swayam-no kuch nahi hua bro..

Sharon-*cough*

Raj-kria ajj hum ek party throw out kar rahe hai so u have to come..

Kria-raj party..plz not in a mood..

Raj-baby dekho na plzz waise bhi bohut tym hogaya tumhe hot avatar mai dekhe hue..

Hearin dis word baby and hot rey feels uncomfortable..

Kria-raj stop behaving like kid..

Rey-hmm kria I guess u shld cum..waise bhi bro tumse bohut pyaar karte hai so agar tum nahi aayi woh party enjoy nahi kar paenge..

Kria could nt stop herself frm sayin yes..

Raj-gr8 den waise rey ki baat maan gayi meri nahi..btw rey maine Tanya ko bhi call keh diya..

Rey-kyaa?

Kria-raj excuse me..mujhe aur sharon ko boutique jaana tha..so catch u later bye raj ..

Rey-bye kria..

Raj-bye cum fast I will be waiting fr ya..

Kria-hmm..

Swayam-I will drop u guys..

Sharon-ok..

After dey left..

Rey-aapne Tanya ko kyu bulaya?

Raj-chill dude I knw u both r in relationship and dun want anyone else to knw bout it..

Rey-shut up bro plzz we r nt in relationship stop it..

Raj-ok dude chill dun be angry..sab ko call karke invite karlo..

Rey-ok..

8 pm..

Sharon-kria tum ready ho gayi we r late'

Kria-haan w8 a min..

Kria was wearing a beautiful t blue gown..

Sharon-wow kria ur looking soo pretty..hmm I must say Toronto jaa kai kaafi style aagaye hai..

Kria-aww thnks sharon..ur looking like a princess..

Sharon-woh to mai hu hi..

Sharon was wearing black gown..

Kria-chalo lets go b4 mom and dad returns home..

Sharon-yeh cum on driver is waiting outside'

All d girls at the boutique..

Simi-rinni ur luking preety

Rinni-thnks rinni ur are also luking gorgeuous..

Simmis gown was yellow and rinnis pink..

Neha-guys see how is neha luking ..

Rinni-wow neha u r looking awesum..

Neha was wearing silver gown..

Neha-thnk u..

Just den vishaka comes yelling'

Vishaka-guys yeh gown kitna despo hai I hate it yeh rey ne dress code gown kyu rakh diya god..

Evry one was stunned

Simmi-vishaka ur lookin beautiful..

Rinni-yeh vishaka hi hai na..

Vishaka-dude grow up man..itna ghatiya hai yeh

Neha-neha dreaming..

Vishaka-dude chalo late ho rahe hai..

Tanya's house

Tanya-tanya ur gorgeous sabse khubsoorat mai lagoon gi us kria se bhi zyada..pata nahi kahan sa tapak padi woh

'.

Precap-pool side party..rey is lost in kria..swaron having der tym..

Hope ya liked it'

Edited by awesomeabshu - 13 years ago

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