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Posted: 13 years ago
last para sooo cute .. he slept hearing her breathing in sleep 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey like other parts this was also very good..
Verba diarrhea 🤣 she is always funny be it real or FF..
i hope the next part their relationship will be in a next level..
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Posted: 13 years ago
You have such a nice flow to your writing :) I absolutely loved the phone conversation. It was so real and I felt the emotions. Very well done :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Yeh...Me First!!😛 Comments after I read.

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Just finished reading it!! Loved it. I love their interaction and of course Khushi's "VERBA DIARRHEA" is always hilarious!! It was so sweet that she waited up for him to come...and loved how she has no hesitancy about picking up the phone and calling him in the middle of the night!! Looking forward to more Arhi interaction...would love to see Arnav try to be physically romantic with her...dying to see how he breaks the awkwardness!!😛

YEY I am glad you liked it... haha you know back in school I had this one teacher who always use to tell me that i suffered from 'Verbal Diarrhea' cause i would constantly be talking...and most the time with out thinking...looks like khushi has the same symptoms too...
...I know peep were probs expecting a more intense ARHI update but i dont feel its quite there yet maybe in a update or two...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princessunara

oooh i love this story more n more every day!! it really is cute!! n that last part where he goes to sleep listening to her soft breathing brought such a sweet tingly feeling to me...so adorable!!

do update the next part soon! looking forward to reading..it really is a beautiful story with a wonderful relationship building between these two...

I thought I might have overdone it with him falling asleep whilst listening to her sleep...given a normal situation it's be like 'ok...weird'... but then i thought its ARHI ! its never weird and didnt have the heart to take it out...I'm glad i left it in. 😃
Thank for the comment xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MissButterfly

You have such a nice flow to your writing :) I absolutely loved the phone conversation. It was so real and I felt the emotions. Very well done :)

I was hoping not to dissapoint with the phone convo... its short but its still early days I feel..
Thank you for the comments and support 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubblii

I was hoping not to dissapoint with the phone convo... its short but its still early days I feel..
Thank you for the comments and support 😃

You more than lived up to my expectations. I love it when a writer shows an emotional bonding between two people before proceeding further in their relationship. You've nailed that aspect of writing :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: devisridhar

⭐️⭐️the whole update was cute and i loved their conversation they were the best

i loved arnav when he said he would honestly try to make the relationship better a much happier on for them❤️
the last part scene was the top of all the scenes with khushi's breath heard in his ear he slept as if she is lying beside i loved it and it was sweet 👏
thanks for the pm dear and update soon⭐️

Hi there, thanks for the comment 😊
I felt it was big step for anrav but hopefully didnt seem too out of character...I would hate it if I made a mess of Arnav... he is one of thoes characters which is perfectly complex I didnt want him to seem shallow or over complicate him...

One thing I do know is that i have overcomplicated this response 😃 so I'll leave you peace.
Thank you xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
PS - I have a good feeling that the Shyam is not as innocent as he seems to be...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...'
plzz add me to ur pm list...

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