-dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF THREAD 9 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
... don't touch me she roared
don't u dare touch me she warned pointing a finger at him
He looked at her blankly, like he couldn't understand her words. Or was he seeing beyond those words that confused him so much.
geet kya jakas di abi bi uski kopdi me samaj nahi aaya heto bagwaan jane
waise maan samaj aaya ya u r thinking how can she say like that ki itna sab kuch unke beech hone ke baad i mean 4 kisses ye kya keh rahi how can i
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Posted: 13 years ago
part was really osum di geet ka chillana maan ka confusion humari confusion ore bada di
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Posted: 13 years ago
he will never ever talk to her again with wat she did today. He will hate her more. He will hate me '
she managed to cab it home..she didn't even change just crashed into her king size pillow.. her puchka..he will hate me.. he will hate me...more
geet is it ur thought or ur wish jo kabi poori nahi hogi kyun ki ye jo tum kabi poori dil se nahi maangogi kyun ki tum kud nahi chahthi
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Posted: 13 years ago
precap
Maan talking to raj
really osum abi se mere dil me ladoo poote
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Muskan,
I m d newest member on IF nd also on ur FF DA. Must say u r a brilliant writer. I hav read many FF on Maaneet bt find only 2 or 3 r gud. Frankly speaking at starting when i read ur FF Dhundlae aks(DA) dnt find it interesting or i can say dat ur story is gud bt somehow i wasn't ready to read any 17 n 18 year oldcollage going Maaneet story. bt gradually i started liking it nd now m completely into it...well i like so many parts of ur FF bt my fvrt part was part 73⭐️...God dat was hell beautiful... plz giv more dat kind of part...jst luv it😊
Lots of confusion in dis FF ...yes i know u mention it vry earlier stage dat there will be confusion n confusion bt my brain's bulb is totally fuse by dis conphusion...Plz MUSKAN do something.😕
And i also like dat u update it on regular basis so there is no break in link...well i also wnt to tell u dat i read 80 PARTS of ur FF (DA) IN JUST 2 DAYS😆 ...GOD ITS INSANE bt wat to do cnt control myself fr further reading😉
Thnk U fr giving such an amazing FF on MAANEET...may be i'll nt be able 2 comment on regular basis bt remember dat i'll always be eagerly waiting fr ur update...Jst to tell ABT MY VIEWS N FEELINS to u i hav OPEN AN ACCOUNT ON IF😆...or else wat can i say...

Another request MUSKAN when u conclude dis FF plz start a new FF ON MAANEET WHERE WE'LL BE ABLE TO SEE A BIT MATURE MAANEET I MEAN NT COLLAGE GOING TYPES😛...nd after reading (DA) I know u r capable enough fr building a strong story line full of passion n romance😳 bt yes less conphusion😆... well yes i like dhundlae aks vry much jst coz of u ur writing nd d suspence u hav given forced me to read it...only u know wats going to happen nxt fingers crossed
Well i hav to end up here. i know i m going tooo much...jst want to share my feelings...well waiting fr nxt update i hope there will be some positive twist 😊 cnt bear more confusion...nahiii... well all d bst fr coming updates
thnk u see ya soon
Bye n luv u tc😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 88
coming to this part di me kay bolu ab dekhne ko milega maan ka restlesness
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ist realy intersting...I love This...N Maan ka masti oh love it so much...Muskan dr thanks love u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
May be she is gone crazy because she was hungry.. oh god..why does it matter so much to him. He was irritated..his ego trying to surface.. how dare she yell at him.. how dare she!!
wo samjthi kya hain apne aapko..

maan tuna kya soch raha hi yaar book ke maare wo gusse me thi badiya imagination ya ye bi hosaktha hi ki tu last time ki tarah use feed nahi ki socho
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Posted: 13 years ago
di aapko pata hi hume aapka FF kyun pasand kyun ki beech me aapka jo imaginary jokes hote hena wo padke
well that was for who don't know to swim.. not for who don't want to swim.. muskan shakes her head.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di maan raj conv after so many days what we want jo maan ke dimag me kuch gussaye ki wo kya feel kar raha hi kiskeliye

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