My Lover My Enemy~pt 13pg64~dt 8/1/13 - Page 2

My lover my Enemy - part-II

6.30 pm K & S Associates & Construction

(Khurana's and Shishodiya's) office located at Bandra Kurla Complex a posh Commercial area of Mumbai.

Out of Maan's Cabin :

What are you doing Man? You know very well na I am in no mood to go anywhere at this point of time as you know I am not feeling good. 😡

Yudi: Dude let me know when you feel good Never, never, Ever. Please yaar chalna Raani may be waiting for me. 😡

(Angelic: Oh ho yudi ab tak geet mili nahi hai toh mood toh kharab hi rahega na 😆 )

Maan: Yudi please yaar, I really don't understand what the Hell you are doing man? If you guyz love each other then go and get married na damn it. What the hell are you waiting for? To broke up with each other.

Yudi: Maan yaar tu kya bol raha hai you know very well na pitaji will never allow me to get married with her.

Maan: If you don't have guts to accept your love in front of everyone than leave her.

Yudi : are You mad maan? How can you just think that I will leave her? She is my life and you know it better than me.

Maan: then accept her in front of everyone.

Yudi: okk will talk about it later now let's go.

{So this was the First image of maan (our MSk) and his Friend Yudishtir (yudhishtir known as Yudi )the best childhood Friends. The Prince of Two Royal Families of Punjab and Rajisthan } 😊

After Completing their MBA and other Business administration course with architecture From Harward of England They both start the K & S as a partnership firm now successfully running it. Both most eligible Bachelor in the city Yudi is already Victim of Cupid's Arrow and Maan's is not love follower(but soon he will be the Lover oops an obsessior J) yudi love Raani a Common middle class girl. He loves her madly but very well know that his father will never accept it and separate them. Whereas according to maan if he loves her he have to accept it (uff poor maan don't know jaha pyaar hota hai insecurities bhi aa hi jaati hai) yudhishtir is still fearful about separation where as Maan is getting irritated with this Drama.

Yudi was Driving and Maan was busy in his thoughts his chain of thoughts Broke Because of Continuous ringing of phone. It was Yudi's Phone. As he saw the Caller Id a smile Crept on his face.

Yudi: (kept his phone on speaker) Ha Sweetheart Bolo.

Raani: (Sadly) Kunwar ji aaj hum nahi aa payenghe.

Yudi: Q kya hua koi problem ho gayi hai kya?

Raani: Ji woh Baba ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai aaj hum nahi aapayenghe hum unhe le kar Hospital ja rahe hai.

Yudi was quite (may be thinking what to say) and Finally replied : Hm Okk

Maan: (Cut the Yudi's Word and said) Raani Tell me the Hospital's Name, we will be there soon.

Raani: Ji maan Its City Hospital

Maan: Okk we will be there soon you don't worry. (he said it and hang the call.)

Yudi: maan Kya hum sach me ja rahe hai

Maan got irritated & shot a glared which was enough to shut the Yudi's Mouth.

How insensitive you are Yudi, she is your Girlfriend and (he paused and Glared) there may be the would be wife if you dared a bit (he taunted) than how can you leave her like this to face her circumstances alone.

Yudi Felt really ashamed on his thinking and after completing his Cursing section he felt happy to get a Friend like Maan)

As they reached the Home the pairs of hands hugged geet madly and screamed Geet diii 😲

Geet: Oh God gunjan please yaar ab toh aisa behave karna band kar de you are not a small kid yaar.

Gunjan made a baby face and pouting lips said: Geet di. First of all you come here after a long long time. I waited for you so long. Sunday, Monday... she starts counting the days

(Ughhh nupur ki sister is just like her neither stop breaker nor signal 🤢)

Geet: Ok Ok my Sweet girl now I understand that you are grown up. And you learned that there is 7 days in a week and not 8 days.

Nupur: and of course Sunday is not a sunny day and Monday is not a moons day.

And saying this trio look at each other and Burst into laughter. Trios get inside the home. It's almost 7.00 in the evening. Its small 1 BHK Row house located at lower middle class area. Its Really small Compare to geets place but still geet love that home more than anything. It's her ideal home, the Ideal Dream Home Sweet home, Where there is Caring father, Strict Bua ji(as nupurs Mother passed away at the time of Gunjan's Birth) and two sweet sister cum friends they treat Geet as their family member and her own Sister.

As nupur and geet get Freshend up Both held up with chatting together and Gossiping about their Colleagues. As Geet is a bit Serious Type of girl compare to Nupur but when she is with Nupur No one can believe that she is the Same Geet who even Think twice to say Hmm, or Ok.

(Angelic Wondering: hey hey Babaji is ne toh kanjoosi me Maan ko bhi pichhe Chhod diya)

Nupur was doing mimicry of their colleagues,and principles, where as Geet enjoying it and Gunjan Watching DDLJ don't know how much time she already watches it. But she again and watch it. There was some special romantic films were there which include VIVAH, DDLJ, KKHH, and Mohabbatein, she can watch it any time any where.

Maan and Yudhishtir reached hospital as maan was the one of the biggest donor of the Hospital everything went smoothly. That was just a High BP problem, but doctor asked them to keep under observation. Yudhishtir and Raani was there in the Hospital where as maan come out to go home. He was late he know may be Dadi ma Waiting for him. He was in hurry to go and meet her, He knows very well Dadi ma also rejects to eat and took any medicine when he is not around.

Her chain of thoughts Diverted to Raani. The Maan singh Khurana ruthless, powerfull and rude business man having feeling for some girl who even doesn't care for any girl but he care for this sweet girl. He is the only child of his parents. He knows what loneliness is. And he don't know why but he always feel like if he may get any Barbie Doll named Sister that will be none other than Rani. He Treat her like her own sister. His sweet doll. But he never shows it as till now's experienced he realized some times showing care and love may create separation in love ones. She to loves him like her own brother.

Precape: the First peep in geets life

Previous: part-I

next : part-3

So Friends this is part II😊

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MY lover My Enemy - Part 4

That was the same time, Rahul Just entered the home, he can sensed some kind of tension in atmosphere, He looked at Geet and Geet looked at him with teary eyes, that was enough for Rahul, he felt like his heart broke into million pieces, Geet ran from there and shut the door of her room behind her. she sat down their ,hugging her knees with the back on the Door. Geet was sitting numb her leg refused to take her Weight. She sat their helplessly, her mind start working after some time and then she realized what haapen with her few seconds ago, this is not the first time, Mami ji slapped her, her truthful talks never digestible to her, she always wants to show to GEET her actual place in her home. But Mamaaji she was still in shocked what he was telling, Today first time in her life she replied back to her Mamaji , For her it's a sin, whatever she tell to everyone, How rude she is in front of the people but she know the values of Relationships & respect them too, how to treat the Relatives it is not her cup of tea she knows very well, But what she can do. Halaat ne zindaghi me itni kadwahat bhar di thi ke mithaas ka naam o nishaan tak na tha, she knew that she committed the Sin today, but what she can do, does she have any option at that time, in other case she never ever replied back, but she knew it agar aaj chup reh jaati toh kal koi aura aa kar kuch aur keh deta, which she cant Bear, She proud on her blood, and they point it out that she is not from Good family, How can she bear it, The Volcano and bitterness of relation ships which was there since 19 days its just burst out today, it exploded, and she know that the next day of her this life will be the worst day she may have ever, because its mami ji who is behind all this game, she know very well that mamaji is always busy in his business, He never interested that when she is coming home and what she is doing, its only mami ji who is always behind geet, she just want a chance to insult the Geet.

She was thinking all the drama again and gain and dosed off, her sleep got disturbed continuous ringing of the phone she checked the time its 11.30pm in the night, and she forget to call the Nupur when she reached home thanx to that Drama, as She received the called she heard the wooried voice of Nupur,

: Geet pagal ghar ja kar phone nahi kar sakti thi,I was worried for you, Kitni tension ho rahi thi, tu thik toh hai na,

Haa nupur, I am fine, I reached home at 10.00 only but stuck with some work still busy, will call you later,

she said and immediately cut the call, Ek both pyaar aur care karne waali friend ko raat ke iss waqt aise tension dena , how can she think like that, she knows very well that she cant hide anything from Nupur, Nupur can read her like an open book inside and out and she knew that if she talk right now she may be sensed something form her Voice.

As she cut the call she heard some voice behind her the Door. And she realized, oh how can she Forget that he may be here only, he will not leave her till she wont tell her everything,

RAHUL, she said and then the Sounds coming in from outside make her understand that he is also sitting there like her in a same position.

Rahul You Go will talk with you in the morning; please I want to be alone this time, please.

Rahul: Geet please meri baat toh sun le tu, Dad gussey me they, iss liye unhone who sab kaha you know na he never meant it,

That was it, Geet opened the Door, immediately, and see Rahul standing there like he is a real accused in all this,

You are good for nothing Rahul, Nothing, Being a girl I have courage to say Wrong to wrong and right to right, but you being a boy cant do anything except praise others and make them happy.

"Geet meri baat toh suno"

Rahul nahi you first listen to me : they were insulting me like anything and you were standing there like a mute spectator, now you can be mute please leave me alone,

his shocked and teary eyes enough for her to understand that she hurt heim tooo

I don't want to hurt you more please,

and she just closed the door

Rahul was standing there the Door closed with a thud, he turned and went to his room, he looked Rano Bua was sitting in the hall, he know she was hurt whatever happened today.

He went there and sit near her foot, Bua ji everything will be Ok you don't worry,

Beta, Geet aaj phir '. rano looked at him with teary eyes. she is the mother of that girl. Who hurt those people, the people who actually help them at the time of their crisis, when they were alone. even his husband refuse to be with her.

He cut her and said: Bua ji she is fine I talked her now, he was not able to meet gaze with her, and she know he is lying just because to feel her better, Bua ji aap ja kar so jaiye me aap se morning me milta hu Good night

With that he make his way towards the room

He sat on the bed, his heart is bleeding

she is Crying his love is crying, He just want to put her in his Arms but he failed, he failed miserably, he never have that courage to face his family's hatred towards geet , he know they all hate Geet, because of her rude behavior but don't know when Cupid's love arrow stuck in his heart.

The Chowpatty of Mumbai and Maneets First Meeting. 😳

previous - Part- 3

Next - part-5

So frnds this is the part 4

i know every one is sad Geet Ended

Me tooo saddd

But what we can do its their decision as they End it

But i am still happy that they ended it on a happy note

Uff the baby MSK ...

Just loved him

ab kyaa kahoo

Okhh now back to the story i know its a bit sady sady story but

You know mere udaas aatma aisi kahaniya hi padhna pasand karti hai so enough of my bak bak

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MY LOVER MY ENEMY

Part- 3

Geet reached home at 10.00 she just put her first step in the home and heard the thunder sound.

Geet where you were till last 4 hours. We permit you to join the school just because we don't want to feel you lonely, but you , you the filthy creature aakhir Bharosa todh hi diya na humara, She looked up and shocked to see her uncle first time shouting at her, first time in her life. And because of her sharp senses she can understand that this is just a beginning of Bad time.She looks down again and listens to her Uncle:

hum ne tum par bharosa kiya aur tum humein hi dhoka dena ka soch rahi thi, huhhh Aakhir ho na usi Dhoke baaz baap ka ganda khoon,

Geet went numb for a second than numbness turn into anger, her mind failed to code the next sentence as she just Screamed

Stop it just stop it mama ji , mera Baap Dhoke Baaz nahi hai.

She looked at her mom who was standing in the corner of the hall motionless mute spectator

Mama ji: Hmmm tum yahi kahoghi na khoon to tumhara wohi hai na usi gande insaan ka,

Geet: Chup rahiye aap , aap mere baap ko jaante hi kitna hai, wo agar acche insaan na hote toh har newspapers me unki taarifein nahi chhapti, not only my self the whole world is proof that my father is respected person of this Society, who is always ready to help the people, har ek par ehsaan karne waale,

Mami ji interrupted them: Geet tum hosh me toh ho kyaa tum nahi jaanti ke tum isi ghar ke maalik ke saamne khade ho kar ussi ki be izzati kar rahi ho, hey Bhagwaan hum ne toh socha tha ke shaayad tumhaari parwarish karke tumpar se uss gande insaan ke khoon ka asar khatam ho jaaye, Tum dusro ke baarey me bhi sochne lagho, nahi lekin tumhara ganda khoon,

(Uff this is the only word which is making geet angrier, she loves her father even more than her ownself, she never met him, bit he is always there in her dream, uss se baatein karte hue, uss ke saath khelte hue, Home work karwaatey hue, then how can she bear such things against her father)

Stop it mamaji just stop all this just because you are my mother's brother you can't say anything to my father, he is respectable for me as you WAS, and I am proud to be her Daughter,and will always I dont know what happens Between My parents but Whatever that was i still love him . aur me yeh bhi jaanti hu ke aap sab Q bardaasht kar rahe hai mujhe as mere Naqabil e bardaasht Wajood ke saath aap sab ko ek full time Nokrani bhi toh Mil rahi hai mere maa ke roop me Jo pura din munh band rakh ke Kaan Khol ke aap sab ke kaam kar deti hai. Aisi full time maid kaha mileghi aap ko,

She got a tight slapped which shut her instantly, she looked at the hands who belongs to her mami ji, she Screamed shut up just Shut your filthy mouth right now.

How can you talk like this with your uncle, unn key tukdon par palney waali aur unn se hi zubaan chalati hai, she is queen of this kingdome she can say, can do anything, any anything which she wants to do, :apni Hadd ko bhool gayi tum.

Geet look at her mother again she was expressionless, not a slightest tinge of pain in her eyes, as she actually deserved this. It starts haunting her.

She put her hand up infront of her face and which stop her Maami ji instantly then she replied,

I know very well Mami ji what I am doing, kiss se zubaan chala rahi hu and I knw my limits very well. Me uss insaan se zubaan chala rahi hu jiss ke ghar me meri maa ko ek nokraani ki tarah din raat kaam karna parta hai phir bhi uss ke liye kisi ke dil me sympathy nahi aathi, kisi aur ke dil me kya wo khood apne aap ke liye nahi sochti, But I am not Rano Handa, I am Geet Handa, mujhe apne haqq lene aate hai, maang kar nahi toh chin kar hi sahi, I will take whatever is mine, Now matter how.aur haa ek aur baat sun lijiye aap sab meri

she looked at everyone there was house full of all the members looking at her Interestingly as she is the only source of Entertainment in this house.

Aaj aap logon ne jo kuchh kaha jo kucch kiya meri Dad ke baarey me jo bhi kaha Unn ki mohabbat ka taqaza yoh yeh hai ke me is Ghar me ek second bhi na rahu, but still again its only my mother whom I cant live alone here, On your mercy , with a merciless peoples. I cant just let her suffer alone. But if it is not today it will be tomorrow i know , I will leave this house soon i understood it. But i will leave this house only when my maa will be on my side.

she looked at her mother and she can see some type of emotion in her mothers eyes but not understood what,

Fear, Happiness, Worry

Some thing which is not clear, not Expressible

That was the same time, Rahul Just entered the home, he can sensed some kind of tension in atmosphere, He looked at Geet and Geet looked at him with teary eyes, that was enough for Rahul, he felt like his heart broke into million pieces, Geet ran from there and shut the door of her room behind her.

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