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SORRY FOR MAKING U ALL WAIT...I M LITTLE BUSY WITH MY STUDIES SORRY FRNDS...
Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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hey dear r u updating ?
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Originally posted by: payalpari

hey dear r u updating ?

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Originally posted by: payalpari

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PART 14

on the otherside...

geet was lying in the bed and trying to get sleep...but she cant...she was scared to be alone...for the first time she was alone in an unknown place...she got up from the bed..and make herself comfortable on bed post...she saw across the room once...her eyes fell on the window curtain...it was white in color...it made her scared more...she cursed maan for leaving her alone in a room...

suddenly geet hear a foot step near her room...she was sure that was maan..she get up from the bed and try to open the door...before that maan opens the door...geet went to maan...geet was confused to see maan wearing the mask again..

geet:maan...y u r wearing the mask. again..

geet eyes fell on maan's shirt..

geet:maan...y u changed ur shirt...maan before u weared black shirt na...maan u took bath at this time?

maan node his head as no

geet:then y u changed ur shirt...i like the black one...black is better than white maan..

but maan didn't utter any word...

geet:maan, r you still angry with me...

maan nodded his head as no...

geet:why you are not talking...

before she complete her word...the power went off...


geet was scared to death...she tried to hug maan ...before that he disappeared from the place

geet:maan where are u maan...maan i am scared plz dn't play with
me...maan i'm scared

the room was pich dark.so geet can't able to see any thing clearly suddenly
geet felt a pain in her left hand...but she doesn't have time for that...her only aim is to escape from this dark.

geet:(screamed)maaann...

no response

geet:(screamed)aaahhh...


power came on ...geets eyes were roaming around the room but there is no sign of maan...

on the otherside

adi jerked from his sleep ...adi wake vicky ...

adi:vicky i heared geet screamed

vicky:what?maan was with her na ...then y...

both came out from the room ...at the time maan and gp enters into farmhouse...

but they didn't hear geet screaming

geet was scared to death ...she opened the room door and came out...she was shocked to see maan entering the farmhouse...but she missed to watch her father ...


geet started crying and ran towards maan she hits maan chest with her small fists...and hug him tightly

maan was confused .adi and vicky came downstairs they were also shocked by geets behavior...

maan:(worriedly)geet what happened?...

geet:why u did like this?(sobbingly)

maan:what i did honey?

gp silently watched them both

he was happy to see the love bond they were sharing

geet:why u leave me along in the dark?...

now geet watch maans shirt ...

geet:maan u changed 2 white shirt na...then y u changed black shirt again...

maan was confused...

geet:oh...naughty boy i know y u changed ur black shirt...

maan was more confused geet hit him...maan catch geets both hands...maan cares geet cheeks



maan:i think u saw some bad dream


geet:(make fake angry face) ya u are correct...i saw u na...Then it would be a bad dream for me ...

adi and vicky laugh at geet statement..

maan was more confused...at the time maan's mobile
rang...maan saw the same unknown no.

maan:hello...

voice:hello...Mr.MSK dn't think great about yourself...i'll surely make u a loser... if u have doubt..then check ur wifes left hand...

maan took geets hand ...he was shocked ...there was a small cut in her hand...

voice:if i think then i will finish her in the spot...but my nly aim to make her suffer alone in the world...if any one try to save her or protect her then i 'll surely finish their chapter also...

maan:(angrily)i think you forgot whom ur speak?

voice:dnt threaten me maan...soon i will meet her in hospital

maan:(again)hello...
...
maan:hello...

the line went dead...

maan don't want to make geet scared...maan slide her hand around
her waist and bring her to couch and made her sit

maan:jaan how did u hurt ur hand?

geet:i don't knw maan but...

she thinks for a while .

geet:i think during the power off time...i got this hurt...all bcoz of you...

maan:how i'm responsible for this geet?

geet:y u left me alone in dark...

maan was confused...

maan:(worriedly)what happened in dark geet?

before she answered...gp interrupts...

gp was confused and little worried...

gp:geet u should be careful na...

geet was shocked to core...geet got up from the coach...

geet:pa..pa..papa...(geet was scared)

maan smiled at geets face expression...geet eyes widen in shock...

maan:ya...i forget to introduce...geet this is Mr.Rajesh handa...soon i'm going to marry his daughter geet handa...

geet look at maan... again looked at her papa...she dn't know how to react...gp came near her and caress geet shead...

gp:geet i know everything...i accept this proposal. i'm happy to have a man like maan as my son-in-law.

silent spread around the room... it took few min. for geet to come out from the shock

geet sits in the coach and folded her leg in the coach and looked at both gp and maan ...she made a crying face

geet:no i'm not going to marry him

gp and maan was shocked

gp:geet...

geet interrupts...

geet:i hate u...i hate u both...you both made me scared...u know how i was
scared?

gp and maan felt relief n breathed which they were holding.

geet makes a baby face...adi,vicky,gp and maan looked at geets face and start laughing

geet:(angrily)why are you all laughing at me??? i am dead scared here and you all are laughing at me?? she growled

maan tried to cool geet...

maan:cool honey...i didn't laugh at you...

he kissed her cheek...

geet hugged him tightly...

geet:maan u know how i was scared...

maan:geet i'm with you na then y u get scared...i will not allow any one to touch or harm you geet

there's is no word to explain their happiness

maan:i love u geet...

geet:me too maan...

geet bit her lips and giggled

maan:what did u say?

geet:nothing...

maan:plz geet one more time plz...

geet:i love u maan...

she shyly buried her face into his chest...

maan:maan y u leave me alone in the dark...

maan have doubt on harjeet...but he didn't show anything...

maan:geet it's too late...go and sleep dear...

geet get up from the coach and hugs her father...

geet:thanks papa...

Gp:ur happiness is mine dear...

Gp kisses geet forehead...

Gp:good nite geet...

Geet:good nite papa..

geet went to the bed happily...

gp:what happen maan?

geet:i think harjeet was here...

gp:(shock)what...

maan:s papa...papa woh woh..

gp:what happen ma?

maan:i want to marry her tomorrow...

gp:what.but how..we did not prepare anything maan...its not possible..

maan:no papa i just want to marry her silently...after she finishes her studies we will announce it to world papa...its all for her safety papa...pls ..agree with me.

gp:maan she is already ur wife...so do what you like...but how will your parents react for dis?

maan:they already like geet very much...my pars are eagerly waiting for her arrival...so dnt worry papa...

gp:k beta...first inform ur parents and invite them maan...

maan called his parents and update everything...what happened on HP...they are very happy about maans decision...they accept for the marriage and his parents told that they will arrive within 8hrs...'

PRECAP:maan and geets marriage...geet ignores maan



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Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi hepzi dear firsly superb update

the pics u have used really nice perfect
especially this one is my fav

geet scaring and maan worrying for her
and thank for accepting my request and showing a scene geet meet her father before her father saw how much they love each other
how his daughter really love him and how much maan tc of her love like a pricess,doll
nice conv b/w maaneet
geet ka abi se biwi jaisa hukum chlana
Edited by maaneet5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

dilog was really nice

geet:oh...naughty boy i know y u changed ur black shirt...
geet:(make fake angry face) ya u are correct...i saw u na...Then it would be a bad dream for me ...

adi and vicky laugh at geet statement..
harjeet is really bad person he cut geet hand my doll
voice:hello...Mr.MSK dn't think great about yourself...i'll surely make u a loser... if u have doubt..then check ur wifes left hand...
love the cute cute complaints of geet
geet:y u left me alone in dark...
Edited by maaneet5 - 13 years ago

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