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Posted: 13 years ago
THANK GOD EVEN GEET HAS FEELINGS FOR MAAN
NOW ONLY HER PAPA HAS TO BE MANAOD BY MAAN
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Posted: 13 years ago

for d PM
continue soon...



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Posted: 13 years ago
getting interesting ...

continue soon...

thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update hepzi... loved it...
Maan is so caring...
Geet loves maan wow nyc...
w8ing 4 d twist nd new entry
plzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff

i have sent u a buddy request..plz accept it n pm when u next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
NEW HARJEET
Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 10

maan was lying in his bed and staring the ceiling...maan thinks about geet

maan:(st)every time her eyes make me weak...


every time her smile makes me die...


i m dieing to hear her voice...


he thinks each and every second...he spend with geet...


her face...when she was sleep...the small smile in her lip...


her baby face...


he knew he forced her...he feel bad for his attitude but now he was happy to see his effect on her...

at the time maans mobile ring...he saw the caller id...it came from some unknown number...he pressed the answer button...

maan:hello...

voice:hello

maan:whose dis?

voice:that's non of ur business...ur great maan singh khurana...u may have achieved whatever u like...but soo ur gng to become a looser...ur gng to lose ur love to me...ur gng to lose geet

maan was shocked

voice:i m gng to win ur love...i'm gng 2 make geet as mine...

maan was super duper angry

maan:(angrily)whose dis?if u have guts come n talk before me...

voice:we are gng to meet soon msk...ur gng to become a looser...i m gng to win msk...ha...ha...ha

the call ends..maan was restless...he was confident in his love...but he was afraid for geet...if something happens to her,he cant think about the thought...maan was restless...maan called geets mobile...but her mobile was switch off...he wants to go 2her home and meet her...but he know geet dnt like that...he dnt want to push geet into critical situation

maan:(st)whose that guy?...dis s the first time i m feeling scared not for me...for my geet...my life...my world...whatever may be i m confident in my love ...geet i'll protect u from all the harm...i wont allow any one to touch you...i m not a looser to lose my love...i am msk..whom he thinks of himself..he is playing with fire...he is gng to pay heavy for this...ur mine geet...only mine...

NEXT DAY MORNING IN COLLEGE CAMPUS:

maan was waiting for geet in usual place...he was restless...he was trying her mobile continuously...but her mobile was switch off...so he was restless...
at the time geet enterd the college with pinky...he watch her...maan was speechless...he was admiring her beauty without blink his eyes...
in the fraction of second a BMW enters the college campus with high speed...car stops, but it accidently hit geet...she fell in the ground...maan was shocked and run towards her...pinky helped geet to get up...the BMW door open...a handsome guy came out ...next second a hard punch fell on his face..maan hit the boy badly...it took time for geet to understand the situation..

geet:maan plz leave him...plz maan

but maan was not in the mood to hear her words..geet catches maans hand...maan try to release his hand from her grip...the sudden force makes geet to fall again...before she hit the ground maan grabbed her by waist...eye lock between them...(maahi...)


boy clears his throat to get their attention...maan straighten her and make to stand on her foot...both turn towards the boy they are shocked...maan was frozen like statue in shock


maan:(angrily)you...

geet:(happily)you...

maan try to say something before that geet tightly hug harjeet...he too

geet:harjeet how r u?u know how i miss you...sry..sry...i dnt see at first...

maan tighten his fists in anger...harjeet winks at maan...maan feel that he was standing at the top of hell...geet touches harjeet face where maan hit him

geet:ur k na... is it hurting you...

and again hugs him...she forgot the surrounding...she forgot where she was...


maan was super-duper angry...he harshly pulled geet towards him...geet was shocked by his sudden action...

harjeet:hey leave her...who r u ?...how can u touch her...

maan:(angrily)dnt interfere between us...

harjeet:i think your gng to become a looser...leave her hand...u have no rights to touch her...

he tighten his grip on geet...

maan:i m her BF...

geet:ur not

it made maan super-duper angry...but harjeet was in 9th cloud.,..

geet:leave my hand all r watching us..

maan:one min before u hugged him in front of everyone...u feel that's correct...but my grip on ur hand make you feel sin na...

geet tried to release her hand from maans grip...

harjeet:leave her hand...u dnt have any rights to touch her

maan:non of ur business...dnt come between us...otherwise u r gng to die in my hands

geet:(angrily)he tell s the truth...u dnt have any rights on me..

maan:oh i c...then what right did he have to hug you...

geet:he have all the rights because he s my best friend from my childhood...do u understand...

harjeet smiles sarcastically...it makes maan more angry...he punched the car window with his bare hand...the window broke into million pieces...now geet feel scared to death...maan hand started bleeding...he harshly pulled geet close towards him...


maan:u tell na i hv no rights on u...now i m gng to make you mine...

maan filled her forehead with his blood...


geet was shock...

maan:now u r mine only mine...i hv all rights on you...if i c u touch any one or any one touch you then i m gng to kill them. with my bare hands..

maan looks at harjeet

maan:if i found the air which u breath...it fells on her...then i wont allow u to live...now i leave you because ur my wife's friend...

he winks at harjeet

maan release her and went away...all the students are frozen at their place in shock...

PRECAP:maan misunderstand geet


hai frnds how s it?
frnds when you finsh read this part what ever come to ur mind
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Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

Happy New Year dear...

part 9
nice part...
Maan's love scary but endearing...
wow Iqbal is the new entry...
too good...
i like him and plz dont hurt IQ dear in any updates...
cont soon...

HEY FRNDS...I CHANGE HARJEET PIC...PLZ FORGIVE ME...I DNT WANT TO HURT IQBAL KHAN FAN'S...PLZ SORRY
Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
no words to say at all
lovely part
spell bound
usne maang bardiya hai
great dear
oh no!!!!!!!!
maan mu geet cant see that yaar
he thinks she is with harjeet
hope in next part he may MU her
but further part
pls clear it
cant see much big MU between them dear
pls dear
hope u soon complete MU dear
ll be waiitng for the next dear
pls update soon dear
pls dear
pls give tommrow dear
cant wait more dear
pls dear
hope u ll
cant see what he ll do and dont
i think he ll MU geet becoz of sam only
somewhere me feels the same dear
hope u give soon dear...

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