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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff dear
just read
loving it
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plz update soon
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HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR HEPZI
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wow its awesome
i like de way geet is afraid of maan
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PART 9

maan went to pinkys home...he pressed the door bell...after few second a maid opened the door


maid:who r u?what do you want?


without giving response to her question...maan rushed into the living room...pinky s mom and dad went to office .so the maid takes responsibility of the home...


maid:who r u?what do you want?...sir i'm asking to you...


maan:where s geet?


maid:sir first tell who r u?then i'll tell where s mam?


maan:it wont take time for me to tie u in the pillar and search my geet


maid was really scared about maans blackmail


maid:sir geet madam is in her room its upstairs


she showed the way for her room...maan was about to go to geet s room...


maid tried to call the police...maan calls his gaurds


maan:keep eyes on her... she must not move from here.


Maan gave orders to his gaurds and went to geets room without making noise maan opend her room...he found geet sleeping in

her bed...maan went to her..

Maan:[st]geet i badly missed u all the day but ur sleeping here peacefully



maan sat near the side of her bed..



he touchd her forehead and he felt the heat of her body he feel bad for her...his touch sent cool to her body...she adjusted herself close to him and put her hand on his lap...nw geet sleeps comfortably...but maan was mesmerized by her sudden action..he admired her beautiful face...a small smile play in her lips..


At that time maans mobile rang...it made geet jerked n woke up from her sleep...she saw maan...she was shocked..it took few min for her to realise.geet stared at maan without blinking her eyes


maan:geet i know i m hot..


Geet suddenly turn her face in embarressment.. she again turned n look into his eyes


geet:you...you...how


maan:do u have any problem in talking


geet:how u came to my room.did u come through window?no it close na then how u came here?


She asked him in one go..she was afraid ,what if someone sees maan in her room..what will they think?


Maan:geet u can take breathe in btween ur questions..i did nt want to sneek through window..i m ur bf .n in future i m gng to b ur hubby .then y i want to come through window.i cme through front door


geet was shocked at his boldness.she searched for words to talk


geet:u r not my bf


maan:i m not asking whether i m ur bf or not...i've already said u.u dnt hv no other option".so dnt repeat dis mistake...u have things already 2 pay heavy for your lie...dnt add next payback to that...do u understand


geet noded her head in yes


maan:how do u feel now...


geet:better


maan:did u take tablet?


geet:no


maan:y


geet:i dnt like tablet...its in bitter taste so i dnt take it


maan:(angrily)do u take injection...


geet:no i m afraid for injection


maan:(angily)geet dnt behave like kid?where is the tablet box?


geet point the cupboard...maan take the tablet from the box...take a glass of water from the side table and hand it to her


geet:i dnt want dis...i feel better...c i hv no fever


geet take maan hand and place it in her forehead


maan:k come with me...


geet:where?


maan:hospital


geet:y


maan:u dnt like tablet na...so u take one shot


geet:no no...i'll take it


geet:(make a baby face)i dnt like it ...plz maan


maan:geet...

she take the tablet from his hand and ate it...she make a different face


maan smile at her face reaction...


geet:maan y u came here


maan:i cme here to c u


geet:u c na...then go maan...if my uncle or aunty comes here then theyll think wrong about us...


maan:geet i already told u...i am not afraid for others words...what comes to my mind ..i'll do that only...


geet:plz maan...for me plz(she made a puppy face)


maan melt in her face expression and her words


maan:k honey...for u i 'll go dear...but dnt think i m afraid for your uncle...



he kissed her forehead and went away...dis time she fell something different when he kissed


geet:(st)how much he cares for me na?


IN COLLEGE CAMPUS:


college was over.pinky comes out from her class and made her way to exit.maan blocked her way


maan:pinky dis s my visting card give dis to geet...tell her to call me


pinky:but


maan:look pinky...if she dnt call me with in 1hr then I'll cme there to meet her...which s better


pinky:I'll tell her to call...dnt come there plz


maan:its in ur hand...time starts now


pinky went to home and ran to her room...pinky without wasting a second..gave VC to geet


geet:what is dis?


pinky:maan ph no..he wants to talk with you...so call him


geet:no pinky...i m not..


pinky:geet we dnt hv much time...c 51 mins over...please call him..


geet:51 mins...i cnt understand


pinky:maan said"u should call him in 1 hrs otherwise he will come here"


geet:what?


pinky:s


she takes geet mbl from side table and give to her...geet made the call .at the same time maan mbl get ringing...maan smiled himself and pressed the answer button

maan:hello


geet: '


maan:hello...whose dis?



maan knew its geet but he wants to hear the sweet name from her

geet:ji...woh...may...geet


maan:geet ..hw u feel now?


geet:better


at the time maan mbl slip from his hand and fell on couch...


geet:hello


maan: ..


geet:hello


geet think the line s went cut...she place the mbl on side table without pressing the end button...maan takes the mbl.


pinky:what happend?


geet:i think he cut the call


maan hears their conversation


maan:hello


geet: ..


maan about to press the end button.he hear the name maan from geet.so he placed the mbl near his ear


geet:maan cme to home today morning


pinky:what? geet what he said?


geet:he make me to eat tablet and went away


pinky:nice guy...so sweet...he always take care of u...geet what do u think about maan


geet thinks for a second


geet:nice person...his angry stays always at the tip of his nose...he s very very hot


maan smile himself to hear her conversation and continue to hear


pinky:geet be serious...i'm asking about his love


maan sharpen his ears...he was very eager to hear


geet:pinky i hurt him with my lie...he is blackmailing me but he dnt try to hurt me in his dream too..but i m afraid of his love...u know pinky whenever he comes close to me i feel different i cnt able to explain...his touch make s me tickling...my heart beat raise...its really different feeling


maan feels as he is in 9th cloud.to hear his effect on her


geet:pinky i m affraid for his lov n care towards me


pinky and maan confused


pinky:y


geet:whether it will make me to fall for him...then,if my papa comes to know dis then surely he wont allow me to study...u know na my papa is my world...i'll accept the person whom my papa selects for me...i wont hurt my papa...


maan was super duper happy and cut s his call


maan:(st)geet u have already fallen for me...i know how to make u confess your love. to me...


PRECAPS:new entry harjeet...

Harjeet best friend for geet from her childhood...but maan enemy...small twist😉




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Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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thank you dear...wish you the same😊
Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome Update
Continue Soon...



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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update dear...
i am so happy with this update..
it was just superb..
what's the twist dear..
can't wait for next part..
continue soon..
thank u for the update

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