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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: devisridhar
it was nice and its touching my heart and some how i get a tinge of pain in ur lines...
update soon dear and thanks for the pm

Thanks devi once again for liking it

No problem about the pm :)

Originally posted by: sarach
very well written.liked this part.that crap.hate him..plz update sooon..

Thanks sarach!

We all hate that creep, don't we, and I do that asap!

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: fallenstar
man i jst love khushi..its sooo obvious dat she's doin it 4 Anjali..
i really feel lyk killin dat creep yaar..😡

btw u knw i dnt really lyk hindi dat much bt since u wrote it i read each n evry word..😃

i really hpe Arnav somehw finds out abt all dis..

Hey Tara!...Khusi is an Angel...I love her too ❤️

Do that asaap, I will be glad if you do...🤣

And honey, so sorry for that lamba dialogue (it looks odd when Shyam speaks farratedaar English🤣)

Anyways, I had difficulty too writing, so I will avoid Hindi dialogues next time..and I am glad and thankful that you read!

He will find, and thanks again 🤗

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
I'm absolutely loving this Sancho.
You've written it so beautifully.
Can't wait to read more.
Thanks for the PM angel.
⭐️

Thanks Zeba Di...love you

I am glad you liked it, and no problem about the pm!

Originally posted by: --sumana13--

Thank you so much Sumana for the lovely comment❤️

Originally posted by: -Fatz-
Awesome update Sancho!!
i hate Shyam!! he hit her in the head...HOW MEAN!
can't wait till Arnav does the same to him!!
waiting for next part!!

Aw, My bestie!!...he is a meanie, I know, hate that creep!

Arnav will, or he will not, find it in the next chap...till then, stay tuned.🤣🤣

Thanks for the blossom comment🤗

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Zeee
this is so emotional. damn i want arnav to kill shyam!
xxx

Originally posted by: srahs
loved it

thankx for pm👍🏼

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
brilliant update

Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
very beautifully written.. thank you for such a nice SS :)

Thank you so much🤗

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
No.. this was a painful sad update for me..!
My eyes prickled at the end even though I tried to control it!!😔
Beautifully written..!!

Thanks for the PM buddy!!
And congo for winning Best SS of the week!👏

Aw, don't cry buddy!

Thanks for the lovely comment...and yup, I am more than happy about it 😍

thanks

Originally posted by: amrit23
im speechless !! Vry well written yr...i love how u've made the events unfold, that shamless creep, hate him so much...hope Arnav beats him down soon (in the coming parts)
Continue soon :D i'll b waiting

Thanks Amrit so much...I am glad you liked it and thanks for the awesome comment.

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: tina_1234
grhh i hate shyam...khushi tell arnie only he can save u nd anji frm tht jerk

Originally posted by: Barbie3143
oo my my my its too goood ... luv you writing style

Originally posted by: Nici0306
beautiful... so nicely written..

Thanks🤗

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Suvi7884
OMG Yeh kya ho raha hai? Why did Khushi make everyone go?
And whats up with Shyam?! He's a monster!
And why did Khushi mix sleeping pills in her food?

Shyam wanted her to be alone...so that he can *ahem*

Khusi didn't mix it, he mixed it purposefully by peeing through the window!😆

Thanks for dropping by

Originally posted by: -Saibo-
Plz pm me!0

I will..thanks for dropping by

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: zaniax
Hey!!!! i LUV ur story...very well written 👏
Pls add me to ur pm list. Thanks😊

Thanks for the lovely comment Zaina

I will 😳

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Escapist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Very well written Sanchari, I really like your writing style and also the flashbacks :)

Looking forward to the story...just 2 parts to go I guess...but yet :)

Cheers,
Fatima

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sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: -Murphy369-

You left me no words Sharmi (am I right?😕)
And buddy, you have a tremendous power o'er language and flows lucidly, I mean no words to thank you for reading my SS. I am honored you do that!😳
Did I give a heart pain?? I expect the epilogue will be enough to soothe it down. 😍
Aw, you are too sweet pal..thanks for being my friend🤗

😡 SHALINI!! OR SHALU!!! 😡 but use shalu only if you love me too much!!!😳

WHAT? nonsense... I feel privileged to read your work, and swoon on my laptop as soon as I'm done reading ur work and then thank my 30 million gods for bringing you and your work into my life! 😳 YOU CUTIE PIE! 😳

OOOHH!! epilogue! 😃 i LOVE the sound of it! 😉 😆

And i'm honoured to be your friend, madame.

Once again, chapeau, for the brilliancy in ur writing!👏

EDIT -

LOL. I FORGOT TO ADD MY COMMENTS FOR THE LATEST UPDATE! 😆

anyways, OMG. I CRIED WHEN THAT PIECE OF PAPER CAME FLYING! 😭

like really. you must think i'm some non-stop ganga-jamuna flowing machine here.. 😆

but really! THAT WAS SOOO... SOOO... how is it that when i desperately need an adjective to describe your work, i always fail. YOU LEFT ME SPEECHLESS, SPEECHLESS! (i love lady gaga!)

haha! 😆 anyways... girl. i feel pain this time too... but this time it's in my bum. i think i fell last night in my sleep. or did i dream that?😕 nah... it must be ur ff. BUT WHY DOES MY BUM ACHE? 😕

argh! i'm one weirdo. even i don't understand myself. 🤢

Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago