DMG 2 CONTINUES : A new era of luv , life n learning .

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello guys i m new of IF but always wanted to write a fan fic on d incomplete stories of our lovable characters . Its my 1st time so i m sure it will not be that nice so pls help me wid ur critics . It starts wid d last scene in dmg where armaan n riddhima unite . Everyone was so happy for d completion of a long time waited ammy-ridzy luv story . After few mins everyone left d ground for d party organised by armaan . Everyone was enjoying . With d happiness within d heart n on face armaan-riddhima , shashank n jp-jiggy eyes were searching sid n yuvi too who were just there to see armaan riddhima uniting .

Shashank - armaan aaj tum dono ka pyaar ek hua hai par ek baat yaad rakhna ki sacha pyaar wahi hai jo hume humesha sahi karne ko kahe . Jismai hum sirf unke bare mai na soche jinse hum pyaar karte hai balki unke bare mai bhi jo humse pyaar karte hai . Kyon sirf aapne pyaar ke bare mai sochna to khud ke bare mai sochne jaise ho gaya na . Sacha pyaar hume chaaro taraf sirf khushiya phelana sikhata hai . Taki unke pyaar ko sirf dua lage . Aur agar kabhi kisi ko dukhi kiya bhi to use manana bhi sikhata hai .

While this conversation they heard jp saying to jiggy .
JP - pata nahi yeh sid bhaiya aur yuvi bhaiya kaha chale gaye aur woh bhi humse bina mile .
JIGGY- ha yaar abhi to un dono ko dekha tha ground par . Pata nahi kaha chale gaye .

Listening to this armaan riddima n specially shashank felt little disturbed . As they knew abt d reason of sid's absence from d party n thought yuvi must be gone wid him to accompany him in his solitude .

JP-jiggy were talking , jp-pata hai hume sid bhaiya ki bahute yaad aa rahi hai .
JIGGY-ha yaar sid ke saath humne kitni masti ki hai na .
JP - Are sirf unki hi nahi humko to yuvi bhaiya naina flowerji tamana flowerji su flowerji raj bhaia aur shilpa ji ki bhi bahut yaad aa rahi hai .
JIGGY - ha yaar woh kya din the jab hum sab saath the kitni masti karte the par sab hume akela chor gaye .
JP - pata hai sabse zyaada dukh to is baat ka hai ki woh log bhi alag hi rah gaye jaise yuvi bhaia naina flowerji . Sid bhaiya .
JIGGY - ha yaar naina aur yuvi dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte the par naina ke pappa . Kitna bura hua un dono ke saath . Aur apna sid jisne humesha dusro ke bare mai socha .
JP (in an upset voice) - ha apne sid bhaiya ke saath to humesha hi .
JIGGY - ha yaar apna sid jo ki sanjeevani ka sabse happening intern tha uske saath to humesha hi bura hua pehle tamana aur ab .

Jiggy just stopped there thinking wt ammy n ridz will feel if they hear this .
But shashank armaan n riddima were listening to there low voice convo . Armaan n riddima lukd into each others eyes wid hesitation n guilt but were not able to luk at shashank neither shashank was . He was sinking within himself with guilt for all those pain sid was suffering .

Shashank - beta excuse me .
Armaan riddima 2gether in hesitated voice - jee papa . Yeas , sir .

Shashank went to his office room for some silence . Sat on his chair n opened his table drawer n take out a photo frame wid sid n riddhima's 1st honeymoon pic (in which sid was wearing a black shirt n riddima was in pink salwar , sid's left hand was on riddima's left shoulder wid riddima lukin at him n sid smiling at d camera) .
N starts to talk in mind - sid , beta mujhe maaf karna . Mai janta hu ki tumne jitna kuch mere parivaar aur khaas kar ke armaan riddhima ko ek karne ke liye kiya woh mere koi apna saga beta bhi hota to nahi kar pata . Tumne mere aur riddhima ke izzat ke liye apne parivaar unki khushiyo aur izzat ko bhi nahi are aane diya . Mujhe maaf karna beta .

Apart from this in d party armaan n riddima were getting admires n compliment for their luv completion . Everyone were laughing n remembering abt their old times wid old gang . Ridz n ammy were enjoying too . But in there mind some other thoughts was budding . Armaan was remembering d mind blasting funfilled moments he has earned wid his best well wisher n frnd sid . On the other hand riddima was happy wid armaan but was feeling sad n guilty on thinking her funny n innocent moments wid sid .

Just then ANGIE says - ok guys its too late now . I think i m leaving . Chal ridzy .
Riddima n armaan hesitates as de wanted to stay with each other for some more time .
ARMAAN - kyon um kyon riddima kyon tumhe late ho raha hai na .
RIDDIMA in a supporting way but hesitatively - ha u p ha di tum jao mai kuch der mai papa ko lekar aati hu .
Everyone understand de want some more time together .
ANGIE - mai papa ke hi saath ja rahi hu tu bhi chal .
ARMAAN - are yaar tum jao na , kabhi to apni behen ko akela choro .
Everyone except dr keerti in a teasing voice - ooo akela .
DR SHUBHANKAR - ok luv buds is sanjeevani tree par kuch time akele bitana chahte hai . To hum sab chale .
ANGIE - ha dr keerti apka baby bhi to ghar par akela ho ga us baby sitter ke saath .
DR SHUBHANKAR - anjali baby sitter nahi dai jaan .
ANGIE - ha ha wt eva ... Dj ok . N angie , not anjali pls dr shubhankar .
Everyone giggles at dis .
Just then JP cover his face wid hand in shyness n says - hai armaan bhaiya aur ... Akele , hai daiya humko to sharam aa rahi hai .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Everyone lukd at jp wid questioning expression .
ARMAAN - abe tujhe kyon sharam aa rahi hai be .
JIGGY - ha armaan riddima ki baat kar raha hai teri nahi . Tu mera saath ghar ja raha hai .
Everyone laughs .
JP - are hum jaante hai bloody fullwa . Hum to armaan bhaiya aur bhabhi ji ke hi bare mai soch ke sarma rahe the .
Riddima n keerti in a strict voice dr jp .
ARMAAN - bhoolo mat hum tumhare senior hai .
JP (quickly in argument trying being cute) - are hum ka kare bhaiya humare sare dost hume akela chor gaye to kiske saath majak kare . Jaiye hum nahi baat karte .
(a sad version of dmg tune)Jp jiggy felt little sad abt their batch mates .
Keerti armaan n riddima too felt sorry for this seniority rudeness .
Then ARMAAN tries to lighten them n says - abe yaar ab senti mat ho . Bhool gaya humne saath mai kitni masti ki hai . Aur jaise tune chote bhai wala majak kiya humne bhi senior wala majak kiya , hai na riddima (lukin at her) .
RIDDIMA in a cheering voice - ha jp jiggy . Mai tum logo ke saath majak nahi kar sakti kya .
JP - nahi nahi bhabhi ki aise baat nahi . Hum to bas natak kar rahe the .
ARMAAN in irritated way - tu bhi na . Chal ab ghar ja . Raat bahut ho gayi . Jiggy tu darna mat akela nahi hai raat mai , jp tere saath hai .
JIGGY - ishi ka to dar hai .
JP - in anger - ae humko na sirf flowerji log achi lagti hai . Tere jaise cactus nahi .
JIGGY - mujhe bhi cute ladkiya pasand hai tere jaise cauliflower nahi .
N de started to quarrel
JP shouts - mai tere bus ka rent nahi pay karunga .
JIGGY - mai tujhe mere chacha ke ghar mai nahi rehne dunga .
JP - abe woh ghar tere chacha ka hai tera nahi . Mai unko barbar rent deta hu to woh mujhe kaise nikalenge .
JIGGY - to mai bhi kamata . Apna bus bhara khud de sakta hu .
KEERTI warns - dr jp n nurse jiggy ek dusre se tameez se pesh aaiye .
They get scared n stopped fighting .
ARMAAN - ha yaar tum dono hi independent ho . Aur abhi to tum dono keh rahe the ki apne purane frnz ko miss kar rahe ho . Aur jo saath hai ussi se jhagra .
RIDDIMA - ha guys ab baki baatai kal . Ab sab ghar chalte hai , kafi raat ho gayi . Subah duty bhi karni hai .
ANGIE - ha ha hum sab chalo .
JP - hai daiya yeh to barah baj gaye .
ARMAAN - kyon tu cinderella hai kya .
JP - are dhat teri ki . Hum apni problem ki soch rahe hai aur ho ki hamari khubasurati ki hi tarif kiye ja rahe ho . Na to hum cinderella jaise khubasurat hai aur na hi humare paas koi jadui gari hai jisse hum udd ke raat ke barah baje ghar pahuch jaye . Aur ab to kowno bus bhi nahi milegi . Armaan bhaiya aap hume chor doge .
Armaan got scared n hesitates as he wanted to drive ridz home , alone .
JIGGY understood armaan sign - are chal na hum ... hum chale jayenge . Mai tujhe le jaunga .
JP (in taunting manner) - dum na durga bhanje murga chup . Khud to tumse chala nahi jata . Au kah rahe ho ki humko lele jaoge .
JIGGY - paidal le jane ki baat kar raha hu goud mai utha ke le jane ki nahi .
JP - ha to humko bhi tumse chipkane ka kauno soukh nahi hai .
ARMAAN - are ab ja na .
Everyone starts laughing but armaan was getting furious as he didnt wanted his also so long romantic moment wid riddima to be spoilt . So he signs to jiggy to take him .
JIGGY to jp low voice - abe armaan riddima akele samaj na yaar .
JP brain bulb lightens - acha koi baat nahi armaan bhaiya . Hum kabab mai haddi nahi banenge .
JIGY - tu haddi nahi hadd hai be .
Again everyone laughs .
Armaan - ok ok ab chale . Angie tum dono ko drop kar degi .

Anjali get shocked . Ammy n ridzy requests her . Then she agrees n gives a stern luk n orders to behave themselves . Jp n jiggy giggles wid d sensation of happiness .

ANGIE - tum dono parking lot mai jao mai dad ko lekar aati hu .
DR SHUBHANKAR - chalo keerti .
DR KEERTIi - bye gn tk . Bt 2morrow on time ok .
ANGIE - have a nice moonlight drive armaan riddhima .
ARMAAN - perfect salli .
ANGIE (stern luk) - excuse me .
ARMAAN - um m i i mean salli ji .
ANGIE - dat sounds better .

Everyone leaves d places .

ANGIE wents to shashank's chamber n sees shashank upset n asks him wt happened . " dad kya hua aap thode pareshan lag rahe hai , kya aap khush nahi hai ?"
SHASHANK comes back in his senses n says " khush ?" .
ANGIE - ha armaan aur riddima ke liye !
SHASHANK - Oh ! Nahi bete mai to bahut khush ho . Woh bus aise hi kuch soch raha tha .
ANGIE - anyways baki ki baatae kal sochna . Bahut raat ho gayi hai , ghar chale !
SHASHANK - ha , riddima tayar hai .
ANGIA - ha lekin woh armaan , i mean armaan use drop kar raha hai . Hope u dont mind . SHASHANK- oh no , mai kyon . Mai to tum dono ko khush dekhna chahta hu humesha bas .
ANGIA - aur mai apko healthy dekhna chahti hu . N 4 dat early to bed early to rise makes my dad healthy wealthy n wise
. SHASHANK - hah . Chalo .


Edited by magnificentKW - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon
n which ff is it?
Ar? Arsh ? sidma ff?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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In d parking lot jp n jiggy joins them .
Shashank - tum dono .
ANGIE - ha dad woh yeh dono bus se ... aur its 12 am so armaan asked me if i could drop them .
SHASHANK - good good , waise bhi mujhe tum dono se kuch baat karni thi akele mai .
JP (mumbles) - yeh big dudewa ji ko humse ka baat karni hai . Au bhi akele mai . Kahi humre ko anjali ji ke gari par baithiene ke liye punish to nahi karenge .
JIGGY - pata nahi yaar maine to tujhe pehle se hi bol raha tha ki paidal chalte hai , punishment se to better hi hota .
JP - are humko ka pata tha ke aasman se is khubasurat flowerji ki gari mai nahi khajur mai attackenge .
ANGIE - par dad mai inhe drop kar rahi hu . Yeh mujhe nahi jo u will be alone to talk to them . Kal baat kar lena .
JP n JIGGY (in fear) - ha ha sir u ka hai ki bahute raat ho gayi hai na der se soyenge to subah hospital kaise u p u .
SHASHANK - ok ok dariye mat koi punishment nahi hai . Mujhe to tum dono ki madad chahiye .
JP (low voice) - dekh rahe ho hamra kamal sanjeevani ke mallik ko bhi humri help chahiye .
JIGGY - ae sirf teri hi nahi meri bhi . He .
Angie stops d car infront of jiggy's house . Jp jiggy get out of car n says gud night sir ji .
Jp (shy manner) - gud night flowerji .
Shashank gives a strict dady luk . Jp engulfs his breath . Angie smirks . N de leave for their house .
Edited by magnificentKW - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys pls tell me if u want me to continue . N pls tell me my mistakes . Its a dmg ff not for any particular couple . I always wanted d incomplete luv story to de completed .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting start...liked it
but is it SR or SidShi?...actually i will love anything of Sid...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

interesting start...liked it

but is it SR or SidShi?...actually i will love anything of Sid...

. Yes sid will be one of d most focussed character as his character was most unfairly treated in d end of dmg . But i will focus on other incomplete stories too . Do tell me wt u guys expect i will try my best . N do tell me my negative points . N thanks for liking d start . It means a lot . As i m totally new on if n in ff making . So i dont know anything .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally mil geya link
gonna to read
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Sweats* Firstly am from mobile.. Then it was so hard to find the link...

Hey yaar, first of all Congo Shongo on your first ff... *party*

Coming to the update.. :D

Ahhh.. It felt like am watching dmg continuing... Beautiful... You did fair enough with all the characters..
Loved the conversations between jp-jiggy-armaan-riddhima... You could very well portray the emotions, be it hilarious feeling or the sad and nostalgic air, i could feel them...

You write very well dear, but indeed there is scope for improvement... *winks*

Thanks for the pm sweety, and please do continue it.. You are motivating me to write my update.. Since it starts in the basketball court where there was the last part... :) I could visualise the part and now i felt a wave of inspiration.. Thank yooouuu...

With love,
Liashna
Edited by Liashna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Liashna

*Sweats* Firstly am from mobile.. Then it was so hardbto find the link...

Hey yaar, first of all Congo Shongo on your first ff... *party*

Coming to the update.. :D

Ahhh.. It felt like am watching dmg continuing... Beautiful... You did fair enough with all the characters..
Loved the conversations between jp-jiggy-armaan-riddhima... You could very well portray the emotions, be it hilarious feeling or the sad and nostalgic air, i could feel them...

You write very well dear, but indeed there is scope for improvement... *winks*

Thanks for the pm sweety, and please do continue it.. You are motivating me to write my update.. Since it starts in the basketball court where there was the last part... :) I could visualise the part and now i felt a wave of inspiration.. Thanl yooouuu...

With love,
Liashna

Thanks for all ur sweet words n suggestion . I know nothing in this world can be best or perfect . But i will try my best to improve it . I also use mobile to write this ff thats why even if i write from next para still it gets continue by itself . As cell dont provide a comp or lapy facility .
Edited by magnificentKW - 13 years ago

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