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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Maaneet moments were fab Mona par mujhe toh Meera ko bhagane ka mann kar raha tha kya zarurat thi usse terrace par aane ki romance start hone se pehle khatm ho gaya

btw ridhima geet se jealous kyun hai?

from the last 2 updates u r giving the precap of the interview ab interview karwa bhi do yaar

love u -Piya

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: piya-
Maaneet moments were fab Mona par mujhe toh Meera ko bhagane ka mann kar raha tha kya zarurat thi usse terrace par aane ki romance start hone se pehle khatm ho gaya

btw ridhima geet se jealous kyun hai?

from the last 2 updates u r giving the precap of the interview ab interview karwa bhi do yaar

love u -Piya

thanx a lot di😊
ha di bechare maaneet koi na koi unhe disturb kar raha hai😆
yes ridz is jealous of geet..iski reason jaldi pata chal jayega😉

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

thank u sooo much for ur love and support guys..keep supporting me in the same way plzzz i need ur support...

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love u all...
-mona

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shweta

@sweety095

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

actually after a long time looking in to ur ff .but loved it.now iam hving holidays.sorry for not replying😃

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

                      LOVE ALWAYS WINS..

            PART-9
sorry frnds..this time i could not be able to give english translations...forgive me

sid and nupur reaches restaurant and waits for mayank...

nupur:ofo...ye mayank kaha reh gaya abhi tak aaya kyun nahi?(y this mayank not reached here till now?)

sid:ha nupur abhi tak tho aajana chahiye shayad trafic mein fas gaye honge...(yes nupur he would have reached here..he might be in traffic)

nupur:phir bhi..ek call nahi kar sakthe the..hume pata tho chale ki o kaha hai...aa bhi raha hai ki nahi..(he would have called us to inform whether he is coming or not and where he is..)

sid:kyun nahi aayega?jiju ne khud call karke bataya tha na ki hum restaurant mein mil rahe hai..phir wo kyun nahi aayega?(why?he himself asked us to be here then

nupur:bhai aapko pata nahi..jab mr.mayank sharma kaam mein dub jaathe hai na tab is duniya ki koi cheez unhe yaad nahi rehta..(u don't know that when mr.mayank sharma get involved in his work na..he forgets everything)

sid:aisa kuch nahi hai..mein jiju ko jaantha hoon..o zaroor ayenge..(nothing like that..he'll come for sure..)

nupur:by god bhai..sach mein aap na jiju ke chamche ho jab dekho unki tarafdaari karne lagthe ho..

sid:nupur tu chup kar warna...(nupur just shut up otherwise..)

nupur:warna kya...?(otherwise...?)

meanwhile,sid's mobile rings...

sid:ha bro kahiye...(yes bro..)

maan:kaha ho tum?(where are u?)

sid:mein nupur ke saath hoon restaurant mein .kyun kuch kaam tha kya?(iam with nupur now..y any urgency..?)

maan:nahi kuch nahi bas aise hi call kiya tha(nothing...i called u casually)

nupur grabs mobile from sid..

nupur:bhai geet ghar chali gayi kya?(geet left from there?)

maan:ha nupur uski dost aayi thi yaha par..usi ke saath geet ghar gayi hai...(yes she left with her friend who came here)

before maan could complete...

nupur:tabhi tho...mein ye soch soch kar pareshan ho rahi thi ki aapko geet ke hote huye hamari yaad kese aayi..(oh is it so..iam wondering that how cah u remember us when geet is with u.)

maan:nupur tum bhi na..

nupur:kya hua bhai?mein kuch galat thodi keh rahi hoon..(wat happened did i say anything wrong?)

sid and nupur giggles...

maan:accha chodo ye batao ki tum log restaurant mein kya kar rahe the?(why u people are there at restaurant?)

nupur:ha.. bhai o hum log mayank ka wait kar rahe the...
hum soch rahe the ki next week ke liye plan karna abhi se shuru kare..
(we were waiting for mayank and we are thinking to start planning for next week now itself)

maan:planning?kis cheez ke liye?(planning?for what?)

nupur:ofo..bhai ab itna bhi bolu mat bano.aapko pata nahi mein kis bhaare mein baath kar rahi hoon..(oh don't try to be innocent..y u dont know wat iam talking about?)

maan:nahi tho..sach mein muje samaj mein nahi aaraha hai ki tum kya keh rahi ho..(no..iam not able to understand wat u r talking about..)

nupur:accha bacchu..aapko kya lagtha hai mein aapki baath maan lungi..bhai aap bhi na ek no ki nautanki hai..ab aap kahenge ki aap ko
yaad nahi hai next week kya hai jab wo occassion us insaan se judi hai jiski jagah aapke dil mein hai aur o aapki zindagi mein sabse special hai...(oh really!do u think that i believe in ur words..now u'll say that u dont remember wat is there in next week and that too when that occassion is related to that person who lives in ur heart and she is spcl to u than any body..)

before she could complete..

maan:bas kar meri maa...mein haar gaya.tum logo geet ke liye surprise plan kar rahe ho na..(oh stop it now..u people were planning surprise for geet.. rite?)

sid and nupur smiles and shares hi5

nupur:ye hui na baat..tho ab batayiye ki aap ne kya plan kiya hai geet ke liye...(that's good..so tell me now about ur plans..)

maan:o tho tumhe usi din pata chalega..(u'll come to know that day itself)

nupur:by god bhai..lagtha hai aapne geet ke liye bada surprise plan kiya hai..(oh wow so u r planning something big..

maan:hmmm..kuch aisa hi samajlo..
acha teek hai muje aadi ka call aaraha hai mein tumse baad mein baat karunga..(may be u r right...
ok i'll catch u later

nupur:ok bye...
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geet and meera reaches home..

geet:meera tum baito mein paani lekar aathi hoon..(u sit here..i'll bring water 4 u)

meera:teek hai.

she brings water and cofee too..

meera:accha geet ye bata ki tumne ghar mein kisi se kaha hai ki kal hum interview attend kar rahe hai(hey geet did u inform anyone in the house that we are going to attend interview tummorrow)

geet:nahi meera mein ne kisi se kuch nahi kaha hai..kal interviews dene ke baad hi sab ko batadenge aur waise bhi muje poora yakeen hai hum dono ko jobs zaroor milenge..is liye hum kal hi batadenge sabko..(i didn't say anything to anyone..i want to inform tummorrow itself after attending the interview and iam sure we both gonna get jobs)

meera smiles..
meera:oh tho kal sabko surprise dena chahthi ho(so u want to surprise every one)

geet:hmmm
ab chalo kal ki tayyari karthe hai..(ok now let's start preparations for 2morrow)

meera:ok k chalo
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nupur to sid:
sach mein...bhai kitna pyar karthe hai na geet se..(bhai loves geet a lot na)

sid:ha nupur aur geet bhi bhai se bahuth pyar karthi hai..o dono ek doosre ke liye perfect hai(yes..and geet too loves bro a lot..they are made for each other)
nupur smiles...

nupur:bhai muje ek baat samaj mein nahi aathi hai..bhai aur geet ek doosre se bahuth pyar karthe hai aur ye baat sirf hum dono,mayank,meera aur riddhima jaanthe hai..bhai papa se abhi tak geet ke bhare mein baat kyun nahi kiya(i dont understand one thing when maaneet loves each other then y dont bhai said papa about their relation)

sid:shayad sahi mouke ka wait kar rahe hai(he may be waiting for correct time to reveal their relation to papa)

nupur:bus o dono jaldi se ek hojaye(i hope they'll be togethr soon)

sid:ha nupur muje bhi geet ko apni bhabi ke roop mein dekne ki badi jaldi hai..(i too want geet to be my bhabi soon)

meanwhile,mayank arrives there..
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maan in his room:
(thinking)

maan:aakhir kya wajah ho sakthi hai papa ki pareshani ka?kya papa se jaake baat karu?
nahi.. nahi.. abhi baat karna sahi nahi hai..abhi abhi o hospital se aaya hai..pehle o teek hojaye phir baat karunga aur unki pareshan door karoonga..phir us din mein jo baat kehna chahta tha o kehdunga.
kehdunga ki mein geet se kitna pyar kartha hoon..(smiles)
muje poora viswas hai ki papa khushi kushi maanlenge geet ko apni bahu banane ke liye...(wat would be the reason for papa's tension..should i go now to know abt that?
no no not now..i have to wait until he gets well and then i'll also reveal him about my love for geet..iam sure he'll definitely agree to make geet his daughter-in-law)

maan:waise..meri mishty kya kar rahi hogi?(wat she would be doing now?)


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geet's home:

geet:chalo accha hua..hamara preparation ho gaya..ab kal ke liye wait karthe hai..(finally
we are prepared now ..let's wait for tummorrow)

meera:ha geet finally..ab muje bhi poora yakeen hai ki kal hum dono ko jobs zaroor milenge(yes geet finally we did it..and iam sure now we are gonna selected 2morrow)

geet:kyun nahi milenge aakhir hum dono college ke bright students jo hai..(winks to meera)(y don't we get?after all we are the bright students of the college)

both smiles...

geet:pad pad ke meri dimak garam ho gayi hai..mein hum dono ke liye chai banadu?(my brain got stressed by continuos reading..shall i preapare tea for us?)

meera:ha geet plzz

geet goes to kitchen...
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mayank arrives there with flowers in his hands...

sid:ye lo jiju aagaya(see he's there)
nupur gets elated by seeing flowers in his hands...

she instantly grabs them from mayank..
mayank gets puzzled by nupur's quick action..

mayank:sorry mein late ho gaya..o actually mein traffic mein fas gaya tha(sorry for the late actually i got struck in heavy traffic)

nupur is totally in her world and dont hear wat mayank says..

nupur:hayee mere mayu..tum kitni romantic ho gaye ho(oh mayank u became soo romantic today)

mayank gets annoyed..

mayank:nupur tum se kitni baar kaha...(lowers his voice)
tumse kitni baar kaha ki muje sabse saamne mayu mat bhulaya karo..par tum to sunthi hi nahi..(nupur..how many times i said that dont call me mayu in front of all but u stii do the same)

sid laughs out..

mayank:(annoyingly)sid...

sid:sorry jiju..continue..(laughs again)

mayank:aur nupur tum...ab mein ne aisi koun si baat keh diya jo tumhe itni romantic laga?(and u..which words of me made u think that iam romancing u?)

nupur:mayu..sorry..sorry mayank tum bhi na sab mujse sunna chahthe ho(u want everything to listen from me rite?)

mayank:nupur ab plz jaldi bataogi baat kya hai?

nupur:lagtha hai tum aaj bahuth romantic mood mein ho is liye tho mere liye flowers laye ho(she says by blushing)(u brought these flowers for me becoz u are in romantic mood na?)

mayank:nahi tho..mein ne a flowers tum hare liye nahi laya(i didn't brought these flowers for u)

nupur:kya????

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geet will be preparing tea..
meanwhile her mobile rings...

geet:hmmm

maan:hello mishty..tum sun rahi ho na?(hello..are u listening?)

geet:ha maan kahiye..

maan:kahiye ka matlab?tum aise kyun baat kar rahi ho jaise tumhe koi jaldi hai

geet:nahi tho..mein ne isliye poocha kyun ki muje laga ki aapko koi kaam hoga mujse?

maan:kaam..oh tho mein tumhe sirf kaam ke liye call kartha hoon?

geet:maan aap bhi na..mein ne aisa kab kaha?

there maan will be smiling as he is enjoying the way he's teasing geet..

there will be silence for sometime and geet understands that maan is trying to tease her..
she gets annoyed..

geet:oh tho aap phir se meri taang keech rahe hai..
chaddo! mein aapse baat nahi karungi..

she is about to cut the call..

maan:oye ...hello geet...tum tho bura maan gayi mein tho baas mazak kar raha tha..

geet:(smirks)aapko tho hamesha mere hi saath mazak karna hota hai na..

maan:ha

geet:(widens her mouth)kya kaha aapne?

maan:kuch nahi mein tumse keh raha tha ki muje tumse kuch kaam hai sach mein..

geet:accha kahiye kya hai?

maan:tum muje mera gift de bina hi chaligayi is liye a pooche ke liye phn kiya tha ki kab de rahi ho mera gift😉

geet blushes...

geet:maan aap bhi na..

maan:kya aap bhi na?pehle muje batao ki tum mera gift kab de rahi ho?

geet:acchaji aap muje demand kar rahe ho?

maan:aisa hi samajlo

geet:tho teek hai aap yaha aajayiye mein aapko aapki gift deedungi..

she instantly cuts the call..

maan:oye..hello..geet..
ye geet bhi na..
tho miss.geet sharma tum msk ko challenge karthi ho?teek hai..
he smiles...

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nupur:kya matlab?ye flowers mere liye nahi tho aur kiske liye?

mayank: kisi ke liye bhi nahi aur ye flowers mein ne nahi kareeda hai..

nupur:tho ye flowers tumhare paas kese hai?

mayank:o darasal aaj office mein mera pehla din tha na tho meri colleague ne muje welcome karthe hue di thi

nupur:oh di thi matlab ladki?

mayank:ha tho?

nupur:(annoyingly)by god mayank tum tho kehte ho ki flowers dene jaise formalities tumhe pasand nahi hai tho tumne ye flowers li kese? aur waise sirf us ek ladki ko badi shouk hai tumhara welcome karne ka..

mayank:ofo...nupur tum bhi na aisi koi baat nahi hai...

nupur:yehi accha hai tum hare liye bhi aur us ladki ke liye bhi..warna mein..

sid:oh god!tum dono kabhi nahi sudroge..
ab aapki ladaki katam hogayi ho tho hum kaam ki baat kare..i mean jis kaam ke liye hum aaye hai us bhare mein sochte hai..

nupur smirks...

mayank:ha sid chalo..

nupur immitates mayank and goes with them..
they discuss very seriously for some time then they decide something...

mayank:so kesa laga idea?

nupur:idea tho kamal hai mayank...

sid:ha jiju geet zaroor kush hojayegi hamare surprise dekkar..

meanwhile,mayank gets a call and it is from maan..

mayank:ha maan bolo

maan:hogayi tum logo ki planning?

mayank:ha maan hogayi waise tumhe kese pata ki hum planning karne wale hai..(he throws a glance at nupur)
oh i knw i knw hamare bbc newz reporter jo hai sabko batane..

nupur gets annoyed..

nupur:by god mayank..tum aaj nahi bachoge..
she is about to beat mayank but sid calms her down..

maan:mayank mein soch raha hoon ki mein bhi tum logo ke saath geet ke bday ke bhare mein disscuss karu...

mayank:ha kyun nahi par tum hara plan tho ho chuka hai na

maan:ha par mein kuch aur arrangements ke bhare mein discuss karna chahta hoon..

mayank:wah ye tho bahuth acchi baat hai

maan:tho mein tumhara ghar aaraha hoon..

he cuts the call without listening to mayank's reply..

mayank,nupur and sid reaches home...

geet:aagaye tum log waise abhi tak kaha the?

nupur:(without thinking)restaurant mein

geet:kya?
mayank and sid glares at nupur..
nupur:mera matlab hai mein...wo...ha mein aur bhai restaurant gaye the coffee peene phir hume aathe waqt mayank mil gaya.. hai na bhai..

sid:ha ha bikul..

geet gives puzzled expression...
geet:sid tum is waqt yaha..?

sid:kyun aa nahi saktha..?

geet:are nahi mein tho bas...
before she could say anything..

nupur:meera tum ?tum kab aayi?

meera:mein subah geet ke saath aayi thi..

nupur:accha(with smile)
tum yaha kyun khadi ho chalo na andar chalthe hai..

she drags meera with her inside..and also signalls mayank,sid to come in..

geet:ye log itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe hai?
chaddo..muje kya hai?

nupur:hey bhagwan bach gaye..

mayank:nupur tum na soch samaj kar baat kar liya karo warna di hume pakad legi..

meera:ek minute!koi muje batayega ki ho kya raha hai?

nupur:chalo mein tuje sab batati hoon..
mayank mein chai banakar laathi hoon tab tak tum log room mein jaakar fresh hojao..

nupur and meera goes to kitchen..

geet:ab ye meera kaha chali gayi...mein dekkar aathi hoon..

as soon as she turns..she finds maan there..and gets flabbergasted.
she makes baby face..

geet:maan...!aap?

maan:ha mein hoon koi shaq?

saying so he moves close to her...

geet:aap sach mein aagaye?

maan:ha..tumhe kya laga mein nahi aaunga..(he smiles naughtily)

geet:haat chodiye..(with annoyed face)

maan immediately leaves her..

geet:maan aap na bahuth badmash ho gaye ho..sab ghar pe hai agar hume yaha dekhliya tho phir se humare tang keechenge..

maan:koi bhi kuch bhi kahe mein tho apna gift lekar hi rahunga..aur ha tum ne hi tho kaha na ki agar mein yaha aaunga tho tum muje apna gift dedogi..

he moves closer again..but geet pushes him by hitting with her hand..

geet:aap na biklul besharam hogaye ho..pehle aap yaha se jayiye..
warna koi aajayega..

maan:(with fake anger)oh tho tumne sabki padi hai par meri koi fikr hi nahi hai..
he turns a side..
geet smiles and hugs him from backside...

geet:(wispers in maan's ear)dust danav..

maan smiles and immediately brings her very close to him..

maan:accha!tumne muje phir se dustdanav kaha?

geet:koi shaq?

maan:accha pehle galti karti ho phir nakre dikathi ho..iski saza tho tumhe zaroor milegi..aur ha geet mera gift ko chodke..o tho mein baad mein loonga..pehle..

before maan could say anything..geet locks maan's lips with her's...

after sometime they end the kiss..
they get lost in each other..

maan:i love u mishty

geet:love u too...dustdanav

maan and geet smiles...
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meera:are wah!tumlogo ne tho kamal ka surprise plan kiya hai geet ke liye..iam sure she'll be very happy for this..(oh wow u guys made a superb plan and i'm sure geet will be elated with ur surprise)

nupur:aur tum bhi hamare saath dogi ismein aur ha geet se kuch nahi kahogi..teek hai( u'll be with us in this plan and ha u r not going to say anything to geet..ok?)

meera:i swear mein kuch nahi kahungi..(i swear..i dnt utter a single word to anyone)

nupur and meera shares hi5

nupur:ab chale..chai peethe hai.(let's go and drink tea now)

meera:chalo..(ok)

maan and geet who lost in each other come to senses when nupur calls out geet..

they part with eachother quickly..

nupur:geet jaldi aaja..chai tandi hojayegi..(where are u geet?come soon..otherwise tea may become cold)

geet:ha nupur aayi..

she quickly runs from there..

maan:is nupur ki bacchi ne tho mera romance mein interval laga diya..kitni mushkil se mouka mila hai geet ke saath time spend karnena..ye mouka bhi haat se nikal gaya..
chalo mein bhi bahar chaltha hoon warna wo phir se shuru hojayegi..
(o god this nupur came in b/w romance..i got this chance with agreat difficulty and this nupur came nw..anyway i'll go out nw otherwise she'll again start teasing me..)

maan comes out..

nupur:maan bhai aap yaha?aap kab aaye?(bro u??when did u come here?)

maan:o nupur abhi aaya hoon..(i just came)

nupur:tho aap geet ke kamre mein kya karne gaye the?(so wat u were doing in geet's room?)

maan:o..ha mein tumhe doond raha tha..(i was searching u?)

nupur:mujhe??aur geet ke kamre mein..(u were searching me in geet's room???)

nupur and meera shares smile...
geet also smiles...

maan:wo...nupur mayank kaha hai?(where is mayank?)

mayank and sid comes out...

mayank:hum yaha hai..
kya ho raha hai yaha.. tum teeno itna muskura kyun rahe ho?zara hame bhi to batao(we are here..wat's happening here and u three are smiling..can any 1 tell us the reason for that smile..

nupur:mayank actually wo..maan bhai..(actually bro is...)

she threatens maan by signalling whether to tell mayank or not but maan interrupts..

maan:mayank hum shuru kare?mera matlab hai mein jis kaam ke liye aaya tha o kaam shuru kare?(mayank shall we start now?i mean the work for which iam here now)

he shares naughty look with geet at the same time..

nupur:(setting her voice)bhai aaplog jayiye hum khana tayyar karthe hai..(bro u go inside and carry on with ur work..meanwhile we prepare food)

maan:teek hai.(ok)

mayank and sid goes inside and signalls maan also to come with them...

nupur:bhai jayiye na..(go na..)

maan:ha...jaraha hoon na..(ha going..)

nupur,geet and meera smiles...

precap:
same precap...

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-MONA

link to next part:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins?pn=53

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago