OS: ASR's new clothes (Part 2, pg 10) - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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VIDHYA!

Angsty!

*pouts*

I WANT MOREEE! and a happy ending!

*cries like a baby whose dolly just got snatched*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Oh.. That was awesome... I really hope La speaks up. She has become a poor little thing which ASR uses to hurt Khushi and himself, as you rightly pointed out.

And the what-are-you-wearing-scene-go-and-change was right out of Monday's episode but I loved how you changed the situation with Khushi the victim and protectiveness, the reason instead of spite.

Loved it <3
Thanks for the PM.

Love,
Dee.



Thanks! So, weirdly enough I wrote this OS over the weekend even though I only put it up yesterday..I guess it worked out well though,, story-line wise!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sharneil92

VIDHYA!


Angsty!

*pouts*

I WANT MOREEE! and a happy ending!

*cries like a baby whose dolly just got snatched*



Sorry you didn't enjoy my angsty OS.😭

I'll think about continuing it as an SS. No promises. 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great OS - but most of us want you to continue, please..
Anyways, enjoyed your OS so much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
WOWWW OMG LOLVED THIS ENTRY!!!! plz do continue!!!!! can't wait to read nex tone.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Good ending. I hope that it happens in the serial too. It is too much insulting for Arnav to go on about money, status, blah blah.. He needs to be counselled to deal with his past and he cannot be spreading his assumptions /hatred /dislike on everyone else.. just because he has the affluence to do so.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Oh madmaxine i just love love love this! LA showing spine, Kushi rejecting Arnav. Both the girls putting him in his place & moving on with their lives.

Thanks a lot 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Thanks everyone for the nice comments. Glad you all liked it.😊 Several people have asked if I intend to continue this. I originally did not have any such plans. But since so many have asked, I'm thinking about it. Maybe I'll make it into an SS...though honestly I have no plot in mind at this time.😳

Cheers!
Vidhya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: madmaxine



Sorry you didn't enjoy my angsty OS.😭

I'll think about continuing it as an SS. No promises. 😕


i dont like angsty stuff. my life's main ambition: THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS.

so since ur OS has now become a part of my life, I DEMAND AN SS!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharneil92


i dont like angsty stuff. my life's main ambition: THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS.

so since ur OS has now become a part of my life, I DEMAND AN SS!😳



You're a sweetheart! I like that positive attitude. OK girl...you've convinced me. There will be a happy ending. Don't ask me when it will happen, 'cos I have no clue. But it will happen! 😃

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