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Gudiyalovesguru

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

superb update...we want lot of maneet moments...

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Awwwhhh this part made me sad!

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Great update Anu

Geet is feeling guilty but still not trusting him.

Maan realises and understands her predicament and decided to give her space.

I so wish she could undertsand his love the way he understood her pain. This does not mean that everything can be hunky dory and she should start having romantic relationship with him. As a matter of fact I will love to see you do things gradually. You are very good at writing expressions and even small emotions. So, even when she starts trusting him, romance should be gradual.

But yes I will love some level of understanding and openness. Maybe she realises he is trying to make amends. Maybe she shares her pain with him and tells her why she just can't pick up the pieces right away. Maan being understanding. Maybe they even work for some time together and then gradually they fall in love all over again erasing the marks they have given each other.

I don't know your plans for this story and I will love it either way Sheru. Waiitng for you to unfold your plot.

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

awesome update...
loved it...
poor maneet both r in pain... cant see them like this...
continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm...

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

awesome part

luvd it

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

pata nahi, will both maan and geet will ever understand each other

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

hope maan geet understand each other

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Awesome update..dying to see how will maan get his geet back..

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Hey darling,

Will geet realize that he is genuinely trying to make amends...

Will she realize herself or there will be a trigger point somewhere along the story line?

will she be able to bring in the awareness and the acceptance that her husband is actually repenting...and is doing everything that has the best interest for her?

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#370

beautiful part. geet is melting slowly .

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