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Miss-Riz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

awesome updates :) also congrats on new thread :)

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change12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

wonderful update i know maan was wrong in the past but now i'm feeling sorry for him.

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Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

we knew she cant accept him so easliy

sometimes situation compels us to both the sides dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

edited my comment page 17

Di finally ur Piggy managed to b the first one to comment on ur wonderful ff😊

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

my god this part was too good ! I understand Maans pain and longing very well, but I m really liking how hes trying to make up for all hi wrongs..

it will take a long time though, and poor Geet.. the girl is so emotionally wrought... to have to keep giving pain intentionally to someone you love is so difficult.. it can be draining and hurtful .. i feel for her.. but yes, she does need to hurt him and keep her distance after all what he did..

oh I cant tell you how much I loved the last scene.. the way he simply is persisting with a smile to make her accept the gift.. loved it loved it loved a,d felt like crying and hugging him, when he simply took the gift out of the dustbin and told her hes going to wait for her to accept it.. awww!!!!!

Please continue soon !

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

again an other painful part..
she cud not hav done dat...especially throwing it to dustbin..

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reni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Awesome part loved maan ka determination

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pingu.tingu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

wow totally in luv wid this ff...yar continue soon :) aww bechara maan ...feeling lil bad 4 him ...bt he is MSK n he has 2 bare the consequences 4 hurting her GEET ...:P lol i know i am thinking really devilish :P