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Posted: 13 years ago
part 135
lovely part...
very good they are progressing...
Sujal is now not getting angry har baat pe and also is make fun and teasing Kashish...
very good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 136


k-Khair tum jaake so jao, mujhe phone dena mujhe Sam se kuch baat karni hai

s-So jaun? Robot hoon kya...aur yeh Sam se naa thoda bach ke rehan boho bada flirt hai

He says giving her his phone

k-Han haan, main koi bachchi nahi hoon

s-Nah wo bohot pohochi huyi cheez hai.. but as we concluded...you are progressing

k-Jo bhi, waise suno. Idhar aao

He leans forward in his chair

k-Wo...thnk you kehna tha laptop ke liye. Bohot hi pasand aaya mujhe

s-I am glad you liked it

She pouts

k-Tum to mujhe kitna kuch dete rehte ho aur main kuch bhi nahi

s-Kashish tum...mujhe...I don't need materealistic things...and everyhing other than that you have given me

She smiles

k-Really?

s- But I want to know something

k-Ask

s-I thought you were angry that I left you there with Sam... I wouldn't have if I haven't trusted Sam ok...but anyways I left you and you were so angry...you wouldn't even eat with me...and after what I was doing last night I thought you would be even more angrier...but you are not... what did I say last night?

She smiles

Sujal looks very nervous jaise school test ke marks bata rahe ho

k-emmm...nahi bataungi!

s-hah?! But...I...but...kyun nahi bataogi? Aisa kya kaha maine?

k-Aise hi. Meri marzi...nahi bataungi

Sjal to total surprie mode me chala gaya... aise outright mana kar diya...aur koi secret bhi nahi hai...after all words hai to uske hi repreat karne mei kya jaa raha hai...

k-Tum nahi batate naa puri baat, bass gussa karna aata hai

s-It was stupid I guess...I don't even know why I did it for once I just wanted someone to trust me without any reasons.. without any explainations...but that's unreasonable right

She places her hand on his

s-We even had a stupid disagreement coz of it all. Now everything is fine since I must have blurted most of it last night..

k-Tum pehle bata dete to jhagda hi nahi hota

s-yah I get it now...

k-Because we care for each other. Khair rahi baat kal ki to, kal tumne bohot kuch bataya, kaha jo mujhe nahi pata tha

s-oh? Maine aur kya bataya?

k-Mom ke baare mein, apne baare mein, Sam ke baare mein

s-Did we talk about Sam? Coz I don't rememeber but it may gave slipped coz I remember talking about that horrid woman

She takes his hand in both her hands

k-Shayad, main kabhi imagine bhi nahi kar sakti, jo tumpe beeti hai, par main 1% to samajh hi sakti hoon

s-I wish you couldn't understand even that 1%...nobody should understand any percent of it

Her eyes are brimming wth tears as she is remembering his pain frm last night

s-Dekho Kashish wo Sam ke baare mein...usse kuch kehna mat.. iss bare mein usse nahi pata...

k-Nahi kahungi. Aur jo bhi tha usse mujhe koi farak nahi padta

s-Thank you... for acceptng it all..

k-Main aage bhi tumhare saath aise hi jhagda karungi, tum aise chodke gaye to bass

s-Tum jaogi to tumhe kabhi rokunga nahi main Kashish...I want you to undersand that. Jab tak I don't think I am good enough for you...agar tum jaogi to tumhe rokunga nahi

k-Maine kaha agar tum aise raat ko chodke gaye to, baat mat palto! Very smart huh? Main nahi chodke jaati, tum aur tumhara gussa. Isliye head massage is must

s-I agree on that

Sujal jaldi se keh deta hai

She smiles

s-Baaki tum Sam ke paas gayi thi and I trust Sam isliye tumhe wahan choda tha...agar koi aur hota to bulata nahi par wait karta, bhadak kar bhi nahi jata...par wapas bhi nahi bulata. But I am sorry for hurting your feelings


k-It's ok

s-I know it's a mess I have made

k-Ek baat kahun?

s-Bolo

k-Past jaisa bhi raha ho, jo bhi hua hai. I promise hamara future usse bohooot behtaar hoga. Usmein bass khushiyaan hi hongi

He smiles...

s-You don't have to tell me that

She smiles

k-Waise main kal interview ke liye gayi thi

s-Kaisa raha?

k-Thik tha. Dekhte hain

s- Konsi company hai?

k-Fashion house hai. Fashion magazine ke article writer ki post hai

s-Good good...tumhe intrest ayega

k-Mujhe laga tha ki kal tum gussa karoge, main kal 11 baje jo aayi thi

s-What?!!!! 11 baje!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

She pouts

s-Kashish 11 baje?!!!!! Are you nuts???? Tumhe pata hai kuch ya nahi???

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really sad...bcoz some writers aent free to comment or send pm's to notify readers...the ppl dont take out thr minute to comment on what they have read...neglecting the 2 hours a writter spent to write a part and also the heart and love for readers bcoz of which a writer as taken out time and writter a part levaing all the imp work or relaxation that a writer cold have enjoyed...sadly, ppl insult the heart, conviction and time of a writer to save few minutes of finger tapping on the keyboard...sorry folks if I ws blunt...but I always considered my readers my dear friends but now I know the harsh reality

I guess most of the redars will ignore it coz its all crap and not an update
Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter

Really sad...bcoz some writers aent free to comment or send pm's to notify readers...the ppl dont take out thr minute to comment on what they have read...neglecting the 2 hours a writter spent to write a part and also the heart and love for readers bcoz of which a writer as taken out time and writter a part levaing all the imp work or relaxation that a writer cold have enjoyed...sadly, ppl insult the heart, conviction and time of a writer to save few minutes of finger tapping on the keyboard...sorry folks if I ws blunt...but I always considered my readers my dear friends but now I know the harsh reality


I guess most of the redars will ignore it coz its all crap and not an update

Hey...u know wat????I had thought d comments dont matter 2 u may b......cause in every other FF...d writer generally at least presses likes on the comments if not reply to it...so...really...i had commented...But soon i dint see ur reactions or signs 2 assure myself that my comments r important for u?????????But ...anyways thanks for the note...atleast i came 2 know that my comments r not irritating or not liked...LITERALLY..Sorry to u too if i also sounded blunt( i hope i have d copyright for using ur words😆😆)...But i just said wat really was in my mind & heart...Now see if u dont comment or like this...then obviously i will feel as if u disinterested...NA???😔...Well.i hope u will understand me...& actually....u dont hav 2 feel sorry...at least ur note cleared all misunderstandings i had regarding u.....😃 Now i will comment knowing sum1 is recognises it...😳...U know wat.on d other grounds i really love ur updates...So...i am sorry if i hurt u unintentionally..I am very very extremely sorry if u felt hurt abt my not giving comments...It was never my intention 2 hurt u...& abt ur last line...i have luvd ur crap😉😆...coz it also shows ur feelings for us......Mind u ...dont take this as buttering 😡😡😉.😆..& this time do like ma comment😭😭😭...if u dont reply to it...
Edited by 9staroneserials - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear...its nt lyk that we al luv ur writng n alwayz will...dnt fl bd...abt cments dear...n v r nt gng 2 ignr u ok...if u want na den also we r nt gng 2 ignr ur cmntz...:);) so updt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9staroneserials

Hey...u know wat????I had thought d comments dont matter 2 u may b......cause in every other FF...d writer generally at least presses likes on the comments if not reply to it...so...really...i had commented...But soon i dint see ur reactions or signs 2 assure myself that my comments r important for u?????????But ...anyways thanks for the note...atleast i came 2 know that my comments r not irritating or not liked...LITERALLY..Sorry to u too if i also sounded blunt( i hope i have d copyright for using ur words😆😆)...But i just said wat really was in my mind & heart...Now see if u dont comment or like this...then obviously i will feel as if u disinterested...NA???😔...Well.i hope u will understand me...& actually....u dont hav 2 feel sorry...at least ur note cleared all misunderstandings i had regarding u.....😃 Now i will comment knowing sum1 is recognises it...😳...U know wat.on d other grounds i really love ur updates...So...i am sorry if i hurt u unintentionally..I am very very extremely sorry if u felt hurt abt my not giving comments...It was never my intention 2 hurt u...& abt ur last line...i have luvd ur crap😉😆...coz it also shows ur feelings for us......Mind u ...dont take this as buttering 😡😡😉.😆..& this time do like ma comment😭😭😭...if u dont reply to it...


See it cant be possible...that 1 posts a fic and not care for comments...thn the whole concept of posting is defeated...dnt think so...well...I have made clear several times that my working hrs and time I take in writing part dnt allow me to reply on comments...I even asked readers wld they want regular updates with no rplies to comments or less updates with replies...and they chose to not get reply...but may be ppl have changed thr mind or forgot abt the commitment...and abt like button the damn thing dsnt work
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soorlovemaneet

Hey dear...its nt lyk that we al luv ur writng n alwayz will...dnt fl bd...abt cments dear...n v r nt gng 2 ignr u ok...if u want na den also we r nt gng 2 ignr ur cmntz...:);) so updt soon

will i am glad u lik and took r time to reply me...but if u do lik wht i right...thn y nt show it in few lines...the like or dislike abt char or ud
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter


See it cant be possible...that 1 posts a fic and not care for comments...thn the whole concept of posting is defeated...dnt think so...well...I have made clear several times that my working hrs and time I take in writing part dnt allow me to reply on comments...I even asked readers wld they want regular updates with no rplies to comments or less updates with replies...and they chose to not get reply...but may be ppl have changed thr mind or forgot abt the commitment...and abt like button the damn thing dsnt work

Thanks...for d clarification...i will see...to it...i will comment hereafter😃😃😃...My like button works ..How isnt ur working...i am sure u press d like twice in frustration😆😆😉...coz...if u press d like button a second time...it gets unliked again😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey not my comments are really short sorry for tat but my office hours are long i manage to read your updates only during travel
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok i knw ur point of view is very clr n ri8...actly m usng mbl usualy n net is 2 slw...no its nt excs bt i didnt ms 2 like d updt...
Edited by soorlovemaneet - 13 years ago

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