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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
maan is such a dukhi & confused atma one side he says he hates her nxt side he says why she hates him
poor geet realized she has lost her heart to one who "hates" her
omg maan kissed geet angrily
wat wud yash do with maan if he cums to knw d guy is him
luvd how yash was so worried abt geet
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago




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Posted: 13 years ago
di I am dead sleepy
so pls update soon

WAITING...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Phwww just edited my comment for Part 76 and here u r updating again
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Geet ' he was little stressed
yash ' then he should go to his GF, why is he bothering u
Geet defended ' no sir, he was not bothering me
why did she do that... why was she defending him after all that... wat happened in the evening.
Yash softly smirked at her cutely defending him ' lekin beta, it is between ur frd & him, tum itna kyun stressed ho rahi ho
Geet ' ji!
she snapped out of her thought
yash ' why r u so stressed
Geet ' ji wo bahut pareshan the.. & I don't know mujhe aacha nahi laga
yash ' r u close to him too
she didn't know the answer to that herself. She couldn't detach herself from him & he can't even stand her sight.. he said he hates her.. her heart cried out thinking all that...
her silence was all Iit took yash to feel sorry for her involvement with that guy.
He immediately became stern ' tum uss sen door hi raho
she couldn't say much to that.. probably he is right
yash ' nahi beta ..not that I am interfering in ur personal matters
Geet ' nahi sir
yash ' meri puri baat suno,
I am telling u as a frd.. may be he is able to be open with u than ur frd.. but like this ur only shutting the opportunity of them getting to know each other. So if u want good for them.. encourage him to talk to her, share his worries with her.
She silently nodded
yash warned ' never ever switch off ur phone
Geet ' ji
yash emphasized - NEVER
she cutely accepted.
Yash ' did u have ur dinner
she shook her head
yash ' shall I order something for u
nahi dir mujhe bhook nahi hain
yash ' Geet stop thinking abt that guy
ok
she couldn't stop it.. she just couldn't
yash ' aacha main ma ko kahoon kuch ghar ka kahna bhejne ke liyen
nahi sir mera sach main man nahi kar raha
yash didn't want to force her.. but he could just kill that BF of her frd.. who has done this to Geet.. just made his little princess lost & unhappy. Her voice was also so lost & stressed.
Yash ' acha suno .. just have milk.. don't sleep without having anything
ji sir
yash was not wanting to cut the call.. he was feeling so worried seeing hearing like this.
After the call he went to daadi's room.
Daadi ' sab teehk hain na
yash dropped his head sadly ' aaj kal ke bachen bhi na
that boy tell u
Daadi ' she has a BF?
yash became really protective ' common ma..u know her , wo waisen ladki nahi hain
Daadi wondered wat was waisen abt that.. every girl ..can have a BF... even he was once to his wife..
& muffled her cute dreamy smile.. thinking dadu was hers..
yash ' there is some guy bothering her
Daadi smiled.. wo tho hain hi itni pyari hoi bhi ussen pasand karenga
yash retorted ' not that way ma
Daadi was totally confused now
yash ' that boy is her best frds BF
Daadi was like ok .. wat is he doing with Geet???
yash ' exactly my point. Why is he bothering her with his problems
why can't he just talk to his GF & sort out his problems.. meri bachi ko kyun pareshan kar raha hain
Daadi sighed sadly
yash walked restlessly infront of Daadi.. clutching his fist
agar wo ladka mujhe mil gaya na.. I will definitely slap him now
Daadi tried to sweet talk her crazy son.. but .. all down the drain...
finally yash felt at ease when Daadi assured she will talk to Geet tomorrow

Geet couldn't sleep.. maans restlessness.. his hating her.. his kissing her.. his claiming her in angry & then denying it all.. she just couldn't close her eyes. But then wat yash sir was right. Wat ever it was ..she was coming between prachi & Maan.
She thought for a moment & called prachi
prachi..was really low & frightened to even speak to anyone. Especially Geet or armaan.. because she couldn't hide anything from them.
Prachi ' hi..
her voice was like a dead person
Geet got really tensed ' kya huwa yaar
prachi ' nahi wo Maan.. & then just kept quiet.. chodna tu bol
Geet ' tum dondo main kuch
prachi felt like crying.. & she broke down in tears. She was too ashamed to confess, how could she confess.. her mistakes.. how could she tell Geet.. that she got Maan to her flat & they got close. Gross it will sound so cheap & wrong.. when there was nothing wrong in their intentions
Geet ' prachi kya huwa yaar
prachi ' sab galat salat ho gaya
she just cried.. softly not able to explain herself
Geet ' shoo.. please itne zor se mat ro.. aunty utt jayegi..
prachi got terrified & muffled her cry.

By now Geet understood.. that something drastically went wrong between Maan & prachi..& thats why both of them are so disturbed. After the call Geet kept thinking abt Maan, how miserable he was feeling.. & all she could do was be rude to him.. tell him she hates him..

bechara ..he came to her with his troubles & she went ahead & spoiled every thing with her confused feeling. Why can't she get it!!!! why can't she understand such simple things

she felt really horrible to have even thought otherwise.. but his eyes..
she hated herself yet again to wander around.. oh god she cuddled close to her pucki's king size pillow.. complaining to him.. agar tum yaha hoten tho sab teehk karde then..
I miss u so much.
precap
Maan not liking Geet talking to prachi
-PREV PART 76 NEXT PART 78-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww...
so nice of maan's dad apni wud be bahu ka kitna khyaal rakhta hain but maan se kyun dur kar rahe ho...

great part
Edited by Appy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yash is really OMG abhi tu Geet on ke beti nahi hai and he was worried for her Geet told him k woh bohat pareshan THEMaan is carbon copy of his DAD over possessive TypeYash knew Geet better than her PUCHKI k woh esi larki nahi hai
she called Prachi and she was crying Now em feeling THORA THORA sad for prachi too the thing is prachi ko geet ko batana chahiye tha and she was avoiding her friends or woh Maan ko dekho came to geet with his problems
Awww she was missing her Puchki hugged his pillow and cried Ganda puchki he doesn't deserve u GEET
Can i have another update Please
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww.. how sweet is yash !! the way he explained to Geet and then poured his frustrations over 'that boy' in front of Daadi..


And is maan going to get possessive over Geet now ?! I mean, yeh he may not want Geet to talk to Prachi so that she does not get to know that he 'cheated' .. (or simply cause he does not want to share Geet😍)

oh man.. so now we have Maan singh Khurana trying to avoid Prachi(?, hopefully) , trying to keep Geet to himself (😍) .. and driving Geet, and Yash, and everybody, even himself, crazy with his antics!😍

superb part.. but more more more !

and more ! then some more..please. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
i think maan and geet to know who thery are.. and prachi... hate her...if maans dad found out it was maan he may like it.. then Geet would officially be his daughter .. lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
will we get one more...?? Lolz...
Dont look at me like that...he he...

Hayye...Yash...what a caring man...
Maan kuch sikho apne dad se...

Nice part...
Updt soon.

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