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Originally posted by: muskanp


lomger part ..thats why taking time...

posting now



Yahoo! Long part! Thanks muski, waiting eagerly
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hope she updates soon

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Jaane jaan dhoondta phir raha
Hoon tumhe raat din main yahan se vahan
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Posted: 13 years ago
just few points..
when the FF started geet was 17 going to be 18
maan was 19...
now its been almost 2yrs.. geet is in 4th sem of engg
maan in 6th sem of engg
they know each other clearly as Maan & Geet..
but not as mistimia & pucki ..or the other dhundlae se aks
geet doesn't even know maan as Maan Singh Khurana
hope that clears lot of the doubts.. here..
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She was first just in the faded face of strange complex feeling.. how can he always think wrong abt her. & then followed a stunned reaction.. he was again kissing her.. she closed her eyes struggling against him.. realizing she was no match to his strength..but how dare he always gets his way out with her?? she hated that!!! but more than all that she hated herself for the pocket of weak moments that blacks her out completely of right or wrong & all she wants is to see him happy..
he was no longer pressing her.. it was more in passion, his hand slowly snaking her back.. reaching her her curls. She looked up at him.. his eyes were closed, he looked so lost. She could keep on looking at him, admiring him, he was like a magician how could any time; any min; any sec turn the entire reality around her world into fantasy, making her feel special like a princess.

His hand cupped the back of her head pulling her still closer.. fighting with himself for have said all that & angry with her to have accepted. Why she didn't protest. How could she say something like this abt his Geet... his eyes fell open did he just say his Geet. He gulped hard to see those eyes gaping angrily at him. Soon she pushed him away.. with all the strength she had left. His stomach churned & flipped with sudden emptiness.
She looked disgustedly at him wiping the moist lips with her hand. . her words strained "so this makes me 3 timing.. or 11 timing now"
he raised his hand almost to smack her face but hit the car roof instead. She tried to walk away .. he held her hand as it crossed him.. still looking away. She wiggled her hand to let go off his grip.
Chodo mujhe she spat
his grip only tightened
just leave me.. I hate u..
he pulled her back in his embrace.. wat makes u think I will ever love u
she looked it into those eyes searching them .. she had avoiding looking into them.. since that night in the store room.. because they speak to her things she can't believe or doesn't want to believe. They say a different story of their togetherness. Different tale which she just wants to believe even when the reality is something totally different.

I hate u even more.. he said it looking back into those lost eyes angrily .. she immediately looked down, tears threatening to fall. Why should she feel hurt when she knows he is lying. But why does she believe it is a lie when there is nothing between them.
I hate u even more... samjhi..
he cupped her face kissed her again.. this time deeper & harder ANGREIER.

He didn't let her go... nor did she stop protesting. The more she tried to push him off the more possessive & obsessed he got with her. In between.. all this they made their way through the cars back door... & still fighting sitting in the back seat.
It was night & they were still fighting in the road. She had to finally succumb. He was still not planning to let go of her.
He was really frustrated. How could she say something like that.. 3 timing!!!
hates him!!!
she has some wits to rub him always in the wrong side.
Her protesting hand went around his waist consenting, finally a moment.. she could feel anything but him.. his warmth.. her heart filled with him & mind with million of questions abt this feeling. She rested her head on his chest... his hand pushing her strands behind..
kyun humesha mujhe se ladthi ho.. he placed a soft peck on her head hands still holding her firmly
when did she ever fight ??? it is him & his accusations !!!!
she had no energy left in her to argue.. she very slowly slipped out of his embrace. The feeling of emptiness, fear of losing this moment.. the fear, the emptiness that haunted her on the last night with puchki. She looked down fighting yet again with herself for all the odd feeling that began to play in her heart. It is forbidden..!!! its forfended !!!! she crossed her hand around herself holding on to the shattered pieces of her heart which was not hers any more.. not looking back even once at those eyes .. which only tells her that she is right when every thing else denies..

he kept looking at her sitting in the back seat ... walk away from him.. denying him... leaving him cold.. yet his heart throttling with a strange feeling, with her resting her cheek sweetly on his chest, the complete surrender. His heart felt overwhelmed reminiscing & the kiss, her seemingly honey-lips
her essence that rampages his veins like a wild horse galloping to find a fresh stream of water on a scorching dry day. Her thoughts encompass him even long after she is gone. How she triumphs even when she is not in power. He just kept watching her aks get dhundlae again as she walked away... further away.. but her feel ..he touched his chest just above his heart where she rested her head.. he closed his eyes dropped his head back... not understanding anything..!!!!
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it took him some time to put himself together & drive back home. It was a kiosk at home. He could hear yash's voice even outside the Mansions huge doors. Dad never get so wild. He does .. but not like this.. this was more of restlessness. He quietly sneaked in.. making least of the noise possible. He quickly tiptoed & reached to Daadi.. & whispered kya huwa?
Yash again snapped at Nakul for coffee not tasting right.
Maan checked the time.. dad aur coffee iss waqkt?
Daadi rolled her eyes mat pucho.. shaam se janab ka mood karab hain
Dev came in dropping his head & looking at the phone sadly
Daadi ' phone laga?
Dev ' nahi Daadi.. abhi bhi switched off aa raha hain
Maan looked at Daadi & then Dev
Daadi ' yeh ladki bhi na uff
Maan wondered ladki??!!
Dev ' Daadi, aab tho mujhe bhi chinta horahi hain.
I even went to her flat she is not there. Uski parents bhi ussen reach karne ki koshish kar rahen hain
again they heard yash shouting at someone on the phone
where were u the whole evening?
Rn't u supposed to be coming to office?
Don't even have the courtesy to call?
Kanha thi tum?
Yeh koi time hota hain ghar aane ka?
Why is ur phone unreachable?
were u with some guy??
who is he?
Geet kept quiet. She couldn't answer to any of yash's question.. he was right with every question & accustion. Yes she was with a guy, whom she was not supposed to be.. yes she should have called them.. he is right.. this is no time to reach home.. especially when she is alone.. just because mama-papa doesn't say anything.. it doesn't mean she goes roaming with Maan.. when there is nothing between them.. but hatered. Her tears didn't seem to stop.
Stop crying yash shouted. Ek tho galti karthi ho ..upper se rothi ho.. u know I can't see tears in ur eyes
his voice softened a bit
Daadi & Dev sighed in relief.. his tone finally was toned down .. after the whole evenings yelling.

Maan was oblivious to the whole fact .. he was the one sole responsible for all this.. but janab was lost in his own world... that he didn't even bother realizing that the girl they all were worried abt was his mistimia ..actually his Geet..as he prefers to address now.
Geet immediately muffled her sobs.. wat was happening to her crying.. crying every other day.. well she is doing mistakes too every other day..
yash softened ' sab teehk haina beta
Geet ' ji sir
yash sighed in relief ' kanha thi tum?
Geet ' ji wo
she couldn't lie .. not to him.. she respected him a lot
ji wo
yash ' BF hain kya
Geet ' nahi..
he is actually my frds BF
yash was really protective now ' wat is he doing with u then
Geet ' I am not sure sir
yash was little taken a back, but he knew she can't be wrong.. she is too naive to be wrong. he just hopped that guy was not taking advantage of his little princess
Geet ' he was stressed
yash ' then he should go to his GF, why is he bothering u
Geet defended ' no sir, he was not bothering me
why did she do that... why was she defending him after all that...

precap
Geet talking to prachi
-PREV PART 76 NEXT PART 77-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Poor Geet wanted him to think Good about her but how could he Geet Jab khud woh itna Confuse ha Mistimia, Prachi, Wifey or Geet me he was hurt when Geet said she hate him Then what about him itni baar geet ko hate u kaha hai os ne he is always ready to Kiss her she placed her head on his chest and he was holding her tu phir hurt kiun karta hai ose bewqoof Larka
Yash was worried for her becz of his own son duffer didn't even ask mistimia's name Maan ki niyaat na shuru se hi kharab thi Poor Geet defending him i wish Yash ask her to stay with them in KM Or phr ho Maan ka Pachka
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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di I m sleepy
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