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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support. Guys once again I am repeating I am not going to end any of my FFs so please do not worry
love-Piya
PART 69

Khurana Mansion

Dadima and Annie were desperately waiting for Maaneet

Annie: Dadima abhi tak ye log wapis kyun nahi aaye kahi koi serious baat toh nahi hai

Dadima: Fikr toh hume bhi ho rahi hai par Maan haina Geet k saath hume yakeen hai k unke rehthe hue Geet ko kuch bhi nahi hoga

Annie: Haan Dadi bhai jab tak Geet k paas hai toh hume fikr karne ki zarurat nahi hai par Geet ko iss halat mein dekha nahi jaata kabhi socha nahi tha k wo yun chup chup si ho jaayegi

Dadima: Sach keh rahi hai aap, Geet ki ye khamoshi humare dil par teer bankar chub rahi hai hum chahkar bhi apne bachhi ko gale nahi laga paa rahe unki takleef ko dur nahi kar paa rahe wo toh hume bhool hi chuki hai

Annie: I hope jab bhai aur Geet laute tab kuch good news sunne ko mile

Dadima: Dua toh hum bhi yahi kar rahe hai babaji kare humari bachhi jald hi theek ho jaaye

Maan and Geet enter KM

Annie: Dadi wo log aa gaye

Dadima: Maan bete kya kaha doctor ne kahi koi ghabranewali baat toh nahi haina?

Maan: Dadima aap shaanth ho jaaiye aur pehle aap aaram se baithiye main aapko sab kuch batatha hoon

Maan: Geet kuch der hum yahi baithenge

Geet sits besides Maan

Maan: Dadima fikr karne ki koi baat nahi hai doctor ne kaha hai k Geet k mann mein koi darr bait gaya hai aur wo tabhi thik ho sakthi hai jab hume uske darr ki asli wajah pata chale

Annie: Toh kya doctor ne Geet se koi sawal puchha par Geet toh aapke alawa kisiki bhi baato par respond nahi kar rahi hai

Maan: Nahi Annie Doctor ne Geet se koi sawal nahi kiya aur agar wo karna bhi chahthe the toh main karne nahi detha kyunki mere hothe hue Geet k saamne koi bhi aisi baate nahi kar saktha jisse k wo depression mein chali jaaye

Dadima: Toh phir hume Geet k darr ki wajah kaise pata chalegi?

Maan: Brain mapping Test se

Annie: Ye kaisa test hai bhai?

Maan: Details toh mujhe bhi nahi pata par doctor ne ye vada kiya hai k iss test se hume humare saare sawalo k jawab mil jaayenge aur unhe pura yakeen hai k hume humari Geet dubara sahisalamat mil jaayegi

Dadima: Toh ye test aap kab karwarahe hai?

Maan: Ye test kal hoga Dadima

Annie: I hope sab thik ho bhai

Maan: Sab thik hi hoga Annie mere rehthe meri Geet par koi aach nahi aa saktha

As soon as Maan says this Geet starts smiling and her hands automatically move towards his face and starts caressing it lovingly

Maan: Geet tumhe bhook lagi hogina chalo main tumhare liye kuch special banatha hoon

The whole day Maan takes full care of Geet

He teases her fights with her and does all silly things to keep her happy and he manages it successfully as well

Next day

Maan takes Geet to the hospital

Today finally he would come to know the reason behind Geet's fear

Doctor: Hello Mr. Khurana

Maan: Hello Doctor

Doctor: Chaliye hum brain mapping session shuru karte hai everything is ready

Maan: Doctor pls don't mind mere liye Geet ki safety se badkar aur kuch nahi hai issliye kya main iss Test ka procedure mera matlab hai ye Brain mapping Test actual mein kaise work karta hai kya main jaan saktha hoon

Doctor: Sure Mr. Khurana chaliye main aapko iss test k baare mein detail mein batatha hoon

Maan and Geet follow the doctor

Doctor: Agar common terms mein kaha jaaye toh mapping ko hum fingerprinting bhi keh sakthe hai

Maan: Brain ka fingerprint?

Doctor: Uhhi samaj lijiye ye ek aisi technique hai jaha par hum patient ya yun kahe subject se koi bhi sawal nahi karte balki hum unke saamne kuch sounds ya kuch images pesh karte hai.

Doctor: hum kuch sensors ka use karte hai jo k brain ki electrical activity ko monitor kar sakthi hai

Doctor: Sensors sirf aur sirf tabhi waves generate karenge agar kahina kahi unn images ya sounds se uss patient ka koi connection ho

Doctor: Neuroscan se hum unn waves ka analysis karte hai aur hume EEG (Electro Encephalogram) aur ERP (Event Related Potential) mil jaata hai isske through hum aasani se ye pata kar sakthe hai k actual mein hua kya tha

Maan: Thik hai Doctor I feel we can go ahead with the test

Doctor: Toh chaliye pehle Geet ko iss screen k saamne baithne ko kahiye aur unhse ye kahiye k main jobhi sensors inke sar se attach karne jaa raha hoon usse inhe ghabrane ki koi zarurat nahi hai

Maan tells Geet to sit in front of the screen and he assures her that these sensors won't harm her

The doctor attaches the sensors to her head

Maan and the doctor move towards the computer screen

Doctor: Mr. Khurana maine thode crimes se related images ready rakhe hai Geet sirf ussi waqt respond karegi agar wo incident usse related hua toh

Maan: Ji Doctor

Doctor starts showing different images

The first image was of some robbery taking place in a bank

No waves were generated since Geet did not respond to the stimulus

Second image was of some dangerous weapons which included guns

The monitor showed some movement as a signal was observed

Doctor: Dekha Mr. Khurana bank robbery se related image mein Geet ne koi response nahi diya par gunwale image ko dekhkar hume response mil raha hai

Maan: Haan kyunki unn gundo k haath mein guns the

Doctor: Exactly, chaliye ab next image dikhathe hai

The next image was related to some bomb blast

Again there was no signal

Doctor: Aapne jaise uss gufha ka description diya tha kuch waisa hi image main ab Geet ko dhikhane jaa raha hoon

The next pic on the screen was more or less similar to the place where that unfortunate incident had taken place

Geet responded immediately

The next image showed some group of goons standing with swords and guns

The intensity of the signal increased

The doctor then showed her the images of some drunkards who were trying to rape a girl

The signal intensity reduced

The doctor understood that atleast Geet did not witness this crime

He thought for a moment and then placed a photograph of a murder

The signal intensity reached the highest level and suddenly Geet also started getting nervous

She was sweating badly

By this time the doctor understood that Geet had indeed witnessed a murder but to give a final conclusion he went on placing different pictures of ruthless murders in front of the screen

In each of the case the signal response and the waves generated were of the highest intensity

Geet's was shivering she could not take it any longer

The doctor realized this and immediately stopped the Brain Mapping Session

He went and removed all the sensors which were attached to her head

Maan hugged her

Geet was really scared and she was trying to hide herself in Maan's embrace

Maan: Geet shanth ho jau dekho main yahi hoon tumhe ghabrane ki koi zarurat nahi hai

Maan could sense her fear she was trembling in his arms

Doctor: Mr. Khurana Geet kisi murder ki main witness hai aur main yakeen k saath keh saktha hoon k wo murder kafi dildehlanewala hoga jiski wajah se ye itne bade shock mein chali gayi hai

Maan: Ab hume kya karna chahiye Doctor? Geet toh phir se darr rahi hai

Doctor: Filhaal aap inhe ghar le jaaiye aur inke darr ko apne pyar se dur karne ki koshish kijiye itna yaad rakhiye sirf aapka pyar hi inhe dubara theek kar saktha hai

Maan: Thik hai Doctor filhaal hum chalthe hai

Geet was shaking from head to toe she was finding it difficult to walk

Maan carries her in his arms and walks towards his car

PRECAP: Maan: "Tumhe theek karne k liye muje ye raasta apnana padega Geet mere paas koi aur taareka nahi hai tumhe wapis laaneka"

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi piya nice part dear emotionla hogayee geet ka pain deke thanks for daily update agar tu daily nahi deti humara kya kyunki mera fav in FF is this one most har ek part me MH ka matlab dikati ho

Edited by maaneet5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey piya...finally...hehe...actually i came back today only... :P


it feels nice to see how dadima and annie are all being worried for geet...i mean u can clearly see how much they all love geet and cares for her...she is a damn lucky girl for sure...ek taraf maan hain aur doosri taraf the whole khurana family... :)))am sure she will soon be well with all the love, care n warmth she is receiving from them all...haan par yeh baat alag hain that she is responding only to maan... :(((


the whole brain mapping part sent chills all through me...i mean i can never imagine myself in geet's place...that must be paining...to have all those sensors and all over u... :(((...i really felt bad for geet...


but then the good thing is that atleast the doctor got an idea of what exactly has affected geet...n what might she have actually witnessed which has caused her to be like this...


the precap seems exciting though...am really waiting for the next part now...continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
m in love wid maan s love 4 geet!!!!!!!!
dreamyyy..
do updt soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
At last they know why Geet went in to shock
Precap sound interesting
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm
thanks a ton for increasing my memory yar
loved the whole procedure yar...superbly written
u know what aaj geet ka situation soch ke even i was shivering yar

loved it...
ab maan jaldi se thik kar dega use...i knw kya karega par shhh...koi read kar lega agar yaha likha to

love maan's family ya kitne hi loving hai...

superbly update
hats off to u piya...

luv u...!!!
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
precap is interseing
what i maan going to do
continue soon
thanks for pm piya
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Posted: 13 years ago


Maan loves her so much...he is caring for her...

Brain Maping Test shows that she have witnessed murder...

now precap...Maan is going to do something...I hope he should not do anything stupid that can be dangerous for his and her life...

awesome update...thanx for pm

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