ArHi SS: Heels Over Head (Last part: page 33)

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DrishS

@DrishS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Shreya, this part was so cute, although i can't help feel horrible for La, i wonder what the CVs' plan on taking forward that part of the story in the actual show. Arnav is such a tease, haha but i love the last role reversal bit, a bold Khushi ... she couldn't resist Arnav could she?! Will it be too much to ask for another part, where they actually say the 3 magic words to each other? Basically, i don't want this to end :(

HAPPY BIRTHDAY 🤗 enjoy clubbing, it's fun ;) Have a great day!

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.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

loved this..update was so good so SS was also really good.loved it

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

WOW BOLD KHUSHI

LOVED IT THANKX FOR PM

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Omfggg, This Was SOOO Naughty :) 😆 I'm Glad That Lavanya Has Moved On 😳

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Great update! Loved it!

Happy Birthday! Have a fun night out!

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

wow! such a lovely ending. found it funny that khushi has some arnav traits, lol

xxx

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Happy birthday!
Hope u had a blast.
Initially in ur note, I was like y is she scared of lavanya(LA) at nyt. Then my mind finally Got it, lol.
Awesome update! Love the end.

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

SHREYAAA!!! :O

when's ur birthday??? mine's a day away! 😉 ahaha!!

omg! that means you're a sagi too?? YAAAY!! HI5 BUDDY!!!

ALL SAGIS ROCK1!!

anyways, on to the update!

well, short, concise, precise. EXACTLY HOW I'D LOVE THE ENDING TO BE! 😳 loved it! fab! and ASR is sooo hot! ☺️

P.S.

LOVE YOUU! ❤️

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pajino_dj

@pajino_dj

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

But why is this the last part you could continue

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: savi-tan
A belated happy birthday!
Your SS was a good read. Felt a little bad for La...what the heck - all is well that ends well :)

Thank you!

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9
Thanks for the PM. Great part. Liked the aggressive Khushi. Happy Birthday. party hard hun.

Thanks! I did! ;)

Originally posted by: alice54
great update again:) kushi overtaking arnav:D and happy birthday too!!have a good time clubbing:)

Thank you! & I did! Haha :D

Originally posted by: dumas

love it i so glad they got married thank god that creeps in jail and anjali has moved on and so did la love the end perfect ending

Thank you!

Originally posted by: sushi-la
fiesty khushi!! "its seems that our roles have been reversed" "it seems so" "do as you please" "oh, I plan to"

raarw!! hehe..loved it! muah!

P.S. HAPPY 18th B-DAY!!!!! I was so happy when I turned 18!!...I was like finallly!! (don't ask me why...I guess just because everyone else around me made such a big deal about it..😉😛)

have fun clubbing!! and be careful 😉

BTW..when I read that you are afraid of LA at night, the first thought that registered in my head was...afraid of Lavanya? what the-...then I re-read it and *facepalm* and then, before i know it..I am yelling at myself..DUDE!! not everything is IPKKND in this world!! (though we would all wish it were 😳)

Haha I can honestly say that I LOVE the ending to this one! & Thank you so much for the bday wishes! yes everyone does make a big deal about it. Lol I have a twin brother & he HATES when people do that :P

and thanks again! I did! :D

Originally posted by: littlemoi
yay!! they got married!! loved the update!! thank you so much for the pm!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

Thank you!!! :D

Originally posted by: harsh42
That was too good Shre!!
And you stopped at that!!

so bad. . . .
It'd have been nice if we could read further ;)

Okay.. I knw I'm being too greedy..
But you've got only yourself to blame..
Coz you write so well.. :D

PS: Happy birthday.. An ddo tell me how your clubbing went. Coz I totally hated it.. The "Dhun chak dhun chak dhun chak" music just got on my nerves!! X(

Arsh!! Thank you so much! :D I was debating on whether or not to take it further...but then i was like 'nahhh i'm not feelin it' lol I'm so lazy :P psshhh you write well too! :D

and clubbing was awesome! hot guys everywhere YUM YUM YUM!! lmao :P

but yes, the loud music was a little annoying!

Originally posted by: ROOHI2009
Thanks for the great update, and the pm. 😃 Happy belated birthday, hope you had a wonderful day. 😃 But this is the last part? 😭 Aww, well looking forward to more good writings from you!!

Thank you! I'm actually working on 2 FanFics at the moment so you'll definitely be PMed once I update! :D & thanks for the wishes!

Originally posted by: Vsc94
Role reversal...finally! 😉

Now if I could just see khushi grabbing Arnav by the shoulders! Hmmm...he'd still go "What the..."😆

Happy Birthday!

Haha i bet!

Thank you for the wishes! :D

Originally posted by: crazy44
awesome update!
and hapPy 18th birthday dear.wow ur a adult now! have fun club and take 2 shots for me too, i m stilL 17 so i cAnt , have to wait till next july!:(
anyways hav a blast , and since i love all of you FF, u cAn. update anyoNe you like!
CHEERS !

Haha you have to be 21 here so I couldn't. But the bar tender was nice enough to let me have a sip. :P But thank you for the birthday wishes and glad you like my work! :D

Originally posted by: arhi-fan
It was just superb! And i really like the roles reversed.

WISH U A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! MAY U HAVE A BLASTING YEAR AHEAD. Have a great night out.

Thank you very much!! :D

Originally posted by: --Preeti--
OMG OMG they got married!!! 😃 😃 😃 And Lavanya forgave them 😊 I cannot wait for the next update! 😉 Please please update soon!! 😉 And ohh Happy Belated Birthday 😊Hope u didn't get kidnapped 😛 Thank u for the pm 😊 And please update ASAP 😃

Thanks for the birthday wishes! & I'm sorry, but this was the last chapter so I will not be updating this anymore. Sorry!

Originally posted by: nims6
happy ending...thank you so much...and belated birthday wishes...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: devisridhar

loved the update and the happy ending and the last bit-role 😆reversal
happy birthday shreya
bye enjoy and rock the party🥳

Thank you SO much!!! :D you're so sweet!

Originally posted by: -Fatz-
Awesome part...loved reading it...
brilliant work...keep it up...

and Happy Birthday...have a gr8 day!

Glad you liked it, Fatz! & thanks for the wishes! Love ya! :D

Originally posted by: arooshee
last????
it has ended???? how come????

Because it was meant to be a short story.

Sorry if you didn't want it to end! :/

Originally posted by: DrishS
Shreya, this part was so cute, although i can't help feel horrible for La, i wonder what the CVs' plan on taking forward that part of the story in the actual show. Arnav is such a tease, haha but i love the last role reversal bit, a bold Khushi ... she couldn't resist Arnav could she?! Will it be too much to ask for another part, where they actually say the 3 magic words to each other? Basically, i don't want this to end :(

HAPPY BIRTHDAY 🤗 enjoy clubbing, it's fun ;) Have a great day!

yes I keep wondering the same thing! I get the feeling that she's going to find out there's something going on between Arnav & Khushi. ooo wishful thinking :P

Thanks for the bday wishes! clubbing is fun! but waiting in line isn't. :P lol

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Great update! Loved it!

Happy Birthday! Have a fun night out!

Thank you! :D

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz
Happy birthday!
Hope u had a blast.
Initially in ur note, I was like y is she scared of lavanya(LA) at nyt. Then my mind finally Got it, lol.
Awesome update! Love the end.

Thank you!

Yes, someone else put that too. I think as i was going back to read it even I thought of Lavanya. haha

Thanks! Glad you like it! :D

Originally posted by: sharneil92
SHREYAAA!!! :O
when's ur birthday??? mine's a day away! 😉 ahaha!!
omg! that means you're a sagi too?? YAAAY!! HI5 BUDDY!!!
ALL SAGIS ROCK1!!

anyways, on to the update!

well, short, concise, precise. EXACTLY HOW I'D LOVE THE ENDING TO BE! 😳 loved it! fab! and ASR is sooo hot! ☺️

P.S.

LOVE YOUU! ❤️

SHALUUU!

Mine was yesterday! Finally 18! Whooop!

Sagis do rock! :D

Haha yes ASR is suppa, flaming, fiery, red HAWT!

P.S

Love YOU!!!! :D