Ek Anjani Si Ehsaas AK (Part 15 Page 33)

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pink sky

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Posted: 18 years ago

#141

Awesome fanfic till now

The reason nobody is commenting according to you which you think is this is my view: you post to short parts and they might want to make you understand through this method or there must be some other reason.

Please post longer parts as you take a lot of time to post one part

I read the entire fanfic in 45 minutes that shows how small your parts are. I am sorry but I really mean it don't want to hurt your feelings.

Anyway your parts are really nice and good

One thing when you write a long part it is too crisp and gives a feeling of a short part.

Why did you say that we are going to hate you for the next 4-5 parts. I didn't understand that.

Your parts are good and romantic at the same time.

if at any point of time you get angad and kirpa married please don't get them separated again and again just like in the original show for a twist.

Please please please continue outstanding parts and nice title for this fanfic from where did you get it?.

Do not get offened I did not intend to hurt your feeling If I did I am extremely sorry.

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: pink sky

Awesome fanfic till now

The reason nobody is commenting according to you which you think is this is my view: you post to short parts and they might want to make you understand through this method or there must be some other reason.

Please post longer parts as you take a lot of time to post one part

I read the entire fanfic in 45 minutes that shows how small your parts are. I am sorry but I really mean it don't want to hurt your feelings.

Anyway your parts are really nice and good

One thing when you write a long part it is too crisp and gives a feeling of a short part.

Why did you say that we are going to hate you for the next 4-5 parts. I didn't understand that.

Your parts are good and romantic at the same time.

if at any point of time you get angad and kirpa married please don't get them separated again and again just like in the original show for a twist.

Please please please continue outstanding parts and nice title for this fanfic from where did you get it?.

Do not get offened I did not intend to hurt your feeling If I did I am extremely sorry.

😡Number one there is something call school where i go for atleast 8 hours plus after school so 10 hours

Number two there is also something called homework which i have alot

and Number three if you had a mom who hardly ever lets you go on the computer this happens

😆yeah plus i know what you mean i hardly continue cause i'm sooooooooooo busy this is how life is when your in 8th grade and none of the ofence taken😆

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pink sky

@pink sky

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Posted: 18 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~
😡Number one there is something call school where i go for atleast 8 hours plus after school so 10 hours
Number two there is also something called homework which i have alot

and Number three if you had a mom who hardly ever lets you go on the computer this happens

😆yeah plus i know what you mean i hardly continue cause i'm sooooooooooo busy this is how life is when your in 8th grade and none of the ofence taken😆

I am sorry again I think I have really hurt your feelings

I know each person has a lot of homewoke, but I have a small idea which might rock.

You write long parts but having huge gaps or write small parts with little gaps.

If you don't like the idea you can conitnue whenever you want I would not want to force.

Anyways your parts are really nice this fanfic has originality in it which other fanfics don't really have much of.

I like your fanfic and am sorry but I thought I should tell you what I think.

I also have a mother who never lets me on the computer and have lots of homework to complete. I am not an odd person who is different from others .

I am sorry again. But this is what I think.

Please Do continue soon

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BABY-GIRL7

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Posted: 18 years ago

#144

nice disccusion above 😕
well please continue soon

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7
nice disccusion above 😕
well please continue soon

Thanks I'll continue today😆

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

#146

Next Part Up In A Few Hours

Or Earlier

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago

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coolwoman

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Posted: 18 years ago

#147

plz hurry up and post. im dieing here 😆 😆

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

#148

Part 13

She looked at him "Fine I love you now can I get a kiss" He brought his face closer to hers about to put his lips against hers but right when there breathes touched she put her finger on his lips pushing them away. "So Mr. Angad Khanna how many times did you say 'l Love You' to a girl just so you can get them to be in bed with you" she looked at him knowing what she said made him feel stupid "it wasn't so hard to get you here was it" he said with smirk growing on his face. She was about to replay when suddenly his phone started ringing 'Private Number' Tina he thought he picked up "hello sweety" he said in a flirty way. "you wanna have dinner with me next Thursday" He started saying mushy gushy thinks to make Kripa jealous at first it didn't work then it got out oh hand . Kripa got more and more annoyed she tried getting out of arms but couldn't she but her ear on his chest listening to his heart beat. The balcony door was open letting all the cold wind come in. the cold air touched Kripa's skin making her shiver she hugged Angad even tighter in her sleep Angad didn't know she was sleeping but he felt his arms somehow loosen around her he looked down and saw Kripa squeezing her arms around him Tina was talking on the other side Angad hung up on her and turned his phone off. He watched her shiver he tried pulling her off but she was to deep in her sleep. He pulled the blanket up to his neck since she had her arms around his neck and her face buried into his neck.

Sorry I know its short i'll continue when i'm done eating around 8 so hope you like next part will be better.😃leave comments

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago