ARHI SS/FF : The Protector - part 16,pg 131

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: zuaireah
Loved it...Loving Sean and Khushi's bonding...

am glad you liked their bonding dear 😊

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#912

Oh Loved the update Nishi. The explainations about the procedures were absolutely necessary. Hats of to you for the Research on the procedure. 👏 👏 👏

I love this FF and hope that ARHI get together soon.

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tasmine

@tasmine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#913

Congrats gal.. u deserve a lot of appreciation.. u hav done so much of research.. u r gr8.. i admire u a lot 4 ur hard work😊

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Kehkasha

@K.Ahm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#914

so much detailing wow yaar u r an amazing writer👏

loved it 👍🏼

n thnks for the PM :))))))

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hiddenpearl

@hiddenpearl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#915

again an awesome update nishi this time with loads of information..khushi is truly a protector..she is again der to save him.when she wil fall in love with arnav again?love the end of dis part..waitin for more update.thanks for d pm.update soon

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#916

Excellent story! You have a flair for writing! Try writing as a profession.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#917

awesome update was so wait for an update loved it loved the bonding between sean ans khushi like a mom and her son loved the course you put asr on well draw up you must have spend hours on research loved it well written perfectly done thanks for the pm and she should drop him the same way he dropped her all those years ago

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@curry-sistah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#918

i'm so glad you updated. Everytime you mention Sean, i always think about my dog that i had, and my heart always melts. The story is developing well, and the last line where khushi asks arnav ,should i let you fall or not was perfectly significant. To see the training that cadets have to go through is so challenging... i was almost going to join ROTC back in high school, phew thank goodness i didnt... i'm not cut out for boot camp. lol

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#919

u finally updated this one😊 i was missing it so much. . .wen i saw ur pm i was hoping in my mind for it to b an update of 'the protector'. . .n bingo! it was wat i hoped for😊 n i was so happy😃 thank u!
d thing which i love the most abt this ff is d amount of research work n facts u add to ur updates. . .they r very much real..n i knw it bcz my brother is a major in the indian army. . .
anyway, i adored the update. . .n dats bcz of the bonding btwn sean and khushi. . .sean's a darling. . .n i love dogs!❤️
i laughed while reading arnav's thoughts wen khushi addressed him as sleeping beauty🤣 b4 dat it was hilarious to read his reaction aftr seeing getting woke up by ''a very furry, brown thing with big brown eyes, puppy eyes, with sharp teeth licking his face very near to his throat.'' 😆
coming to the ash part, i second her suspicions. . .malini roy's call n words were really very suspicious. . .i just hope, like ash, that nthng's wrong. . .
n dat girl, sheetal. . .wat is she upto? she's confusing me a lot!
anyway, gr8 job! hope u update the nxt part soon. . .

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#920

Was nice to see Arnav going thru the assault course...and the parallel between the past and present situation at the end of the chapter was a nice touch!!!!

Thanks for PM

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