Pt42 'Devil In Love'Thrd11 Pg51

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

how can you snatch something that already yours

words to live by perfectly written wow in that it summons every emotion be it love or hate its a vow to be there when no one else is there forever

love the update

maan is always so wicked he real is a devil

Still image of Maan and Geet in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

awesum part..

luvd maan's eg part(red chillies)

he always want geet to voice out her feelings..

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Kshitija

@krndr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#353

Superb update

The bathroom scene was so sensous

But plz continue soon

Can't wait to read the next part

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

loved thae whole update altogether
Devil doesnt miss a single chance to tease her...

asking her to change there itself

and her feeling shy and looking at him how her fear vanished was sooo sweet...

so payback is to make the Devil feel happy

wow... Geet though to trick him but got trap in her own plan

playing game

lolz

Devil play smart to select truth and dare

well hide n seek main Devil kahan payback le paata

whether truth or Dare...

idhar kuwan... uther khaii...

either say it or do the same...

great ...me loving it...

OMG... what i've read this time Devil controlled himelf and leave her to sleep

and she herself choose to sleep in his arms...

so sweet

yeah i think Geet can give in phusically in this...

i know... i was the one among those who said opposite in MIK... that no consummation before marriage... but condition is entirely differennt their they have to show the trust...

here she have to win the trust...

Awesome update

waiting for next

u know i am also very much against consumation before marriege

so lets c😉

i have some twists n turns in mind

so stay tuned

love u comments

sooo much

luv u rabs

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

edited my comment on page 52

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: Speechless
edited my comment on page 52

luv u n ur comments

gonns read right now

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: Speechless
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She wanted to show him love physically and emotionally Ufff devil ki tu nikal pari she made breakfast for him and wanted to know him better about his like and dislikes he made her eat green CHILI No wonder afterall he is a devil and only devil is capable of doing this poor Geet *KISS k chakar mein phas gai Hai [ *KISS urdu wala bhi or English wala bhi]
He slide her zip to prove her that he is worse than a devil yeh kesa proof hai??? His PAY BACKS and PROOFS sub esi type k kiun hote haan?she just gave him a clue about her surrender he being a duffr took her to washroom
he wanted to listen from her Shameless DEVIL par kiya karien with him so much and Geet kissed him and said it what he wants to listen