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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey,, i'm obsessed wid this FF... I'm dying to read d next update... Plz plz plz jaldi se update it...
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Thanks to all for such a lovely response. Your words mean a lot to me!!! This story belongs to you all and I will always try to give my best..😊
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I am updating in one hour...😳
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Update -8


That night was sleepless for both. Rey was fighting with himself and Kria was letting in new warmth.

That night was revolutionary for both of them.

Next morning, Rey reached workshop and joined his team!! Kria was not there as she works at night shift!! Vicky hugged him and asked Rey!! Had a good sleep??? Rey thinks for some second about his night and then answered with a smile yeah!!

Whole day on work he was missing something!! It was like something is missing from his day!! All he could think of is Kria!! These random thoughts of Kria were irritating him!! He was trying hard to concentrate on work but it was all vain.

Kria in her college was so lost somewhere. She was not at all interested in listening what lecturers are saying!!

Vicky was noticing Rey's restlessness and trying to figure out the reason. He didn't see him this restless since long time. Vicky asked Rey, "Buddy there's a party tonight and we all are invited. It's more like a get together of all the racing teams!! All the big names will be there!!

Rey nodded his head in denial and said I am not coming!! You all attend this!! Vicky was determined to take Rey to the party as he can't see Rey so indulge in his tense mode. He said, you have to come Rey!! You are defending champ and your presence is mandatory.

Rey made an irritated face and thinks for some moment and said Okay!! I'll be there for some time!!

Vicky's face just blossoms with smile. He said okay!!

Kria's day was also very incomplete as she missed something too!! She reached home and said universe ji, why I am so restless???

Neha entered her room and told, hey girl!! Today you are on a leave from work!! Neha smiled and was expecting a happy reaction from Kria!!!

Kria said what!!!!! Why???? No I want to go on work!! Neha was shocked!! Kria rectified herself and said I mean I can't bunk work as That Monster will cut off my salary!!! Kria behaved so over explaining as she just protected herself from revealing her feelings!!! Deep inside Kria knows that she wants to see Rey!!

Neha holds her tight and said relax girl!!! Rey will not cut your salary!! We all are going to a formal party as we are representing our team tonight in a prestigious party!!! And all of the crew is invited by Rey!!

Kria smiled and said oh!!! She was excited about tonight!!! Neha warned her to not to wear her trousers tonight!!! Neha said open your cup board and see there is a surprise for you!!! Kria was shocked and said, no I am not gonna wear something short and yukkiieee!!! Neha left the room and said nope!! I am not listening. Just wear that I have choose for you!!!

Kria opened the cupboard and saw a very beautifully wrapped gift!! She opened it and she was like wow!!!

Neha gifted her that dress and dress was so elegant and not at all something Kria can't handle. It was a knee length off shoulder black dress. Kria doesn't like these kinds of dresses but today she loved it!!! She went to mirror and was trying to figure out that how this dress will look on her. She wants to look best today!!

Rey on other hand was on his way to party in his bugatti as Rey likes punctuality. He in his sub conscious mind was thinking that Kria will come or not!!

Kria wore that dress and looked at herself in mirror. She updo her hair and tied them with pin. Flicks were hanging on her face. It was making her more beautiful.

Neha entered room and she is surprised to see this beautiful Kria. She hummed Khuda jane ke mein fida hu and then hugged her!! Kria was feeling embarrassed!!! She smiled and said haan haan bas!!!

Then they both left for party. Rey was already there!!! Vicky joined him in moments!! Vicky said I don't know where these girls are!! Rey looked at him with a ignorant expression!!!

Kria and Neha entered the party!! Every eye was on this beautiful girl!! Kria was feeling awkward. She said Neha!! Am I looking that weird??? Neha laughed and answered no re!!! You are looking exceptionally beautiful!!

Vicky looked at them and said here's my Kagu!! And Kria is not here I guess!! There is someone else with Neha!! He said it with so mush certainity!! Rey with a shocking expression asked what??? Kria is not here???? Vicky looked at him with a weird expression and answered so what's the big deal!!! Rey said nothing!!! Rey self talked she didn't come!!!

Girls reached boys and Kria wished hello to Vicky!!! Vicky was like OMG!!!! KRIA???????

Rey turned around quickly and after that things were stopped for a moment!!! Kria and Rey, both were looking at each other. Rey was lost in her!! Kria's eyes were trying to find appreciation in his eyes!!!

Vicky tapped Rey's shoulder slightly with ahem ahem!!!

Rey woke up and answered hello!!! And then suddenly with high heart beats turn back towards drink corner. He was so uncomfortable with the moment!! He was like so embarrassed with his action of staring her!!!

Kria was a little disappointed with his gesture of leaving the place!!! Her face can tell that she is expecting something else!! But then she self talked monster kahin ka!!!

Kria was sitting in a corner and Rey was on drink corner!! Neha and Vicky were on dance floor!!! Rey was surrounded by girls but no girl has guts to talk to him as Rey bites!!

A girl came to Kria and asked are you Kria??? She turned and said yes!!

Hello I am Sharon!! Head cheer girl of dazzlers!! You are the new girl in technical team!!! Right???

Kria with an ignorant expression said yeah!! Her eyes were on Rey!! Sharon smirks and said so how was the night you spent with Rey in dirtways!!! Sharon evil smiled and further added you are a lucky girl to spend a whole night with Rey!! Kria looked at her with a disgusting expression and said excuse me!!! Kria said Are you mad or even you know what you are saying!!!

Kria stood up to leave but Sharon added galat kya kaha meine!!! Girls like you love to find excuses to stay with Boys like Rey!!! But Rey is not your cup of tea!!! Kria didn't see her saying that and a tear from her eye core float down her cheek. She with fast steps moved towards wash room!!!

Rey saw her going with her teary eyes!! He followed her. He knocked door and asked Kria!! Are you okay???

But this was Girls rest room and girls were looking at him with disgust look standing there. He left.

Kria came out after some time and again in party. Neha took her to the place where all the gang was dining. Kria's face was telling that she is not okay!!!

Rey looked in her eyes and tried to find out reason behind this sadness. Sharon smirked as she knew that she succeeded. Sharon started pampering Rey more in front of Kria by offering food with spoon. Rey always hated Sharon for this behavior. He said Sharon!!! Please!!! I don't like this!! Sharon felt embarrassed.

She immediately covers up the whole situation and said Kria I want to thank you for taking care of Rey. He is very precious. Kria tried to be normal and said its okay!! Rey looked at her with a shocked face.

Kria said Guys I am leaving!! I am tired!! Neha and Vicky tried to stop her but she didn't. Sharon followed her to gate and stopped her hey!!!! You miss wannabe!!! Stay away from my Rey!! You don't have him just because he was with you alone there in Dirtways. Kria couldn't control herself from crying and left. Rey was standing exact behind Sharon!!! He heard it!!! Rey hold her from her arm hard and said what did you just said to her!!! How in the world you dared to talk like this to Kria!!! Vicky and Neha reached them and Vicky stopped Rey as it was becoming a scene. Sharon pretended and said I have said nothing to her!! Rey said shhh!!!!! Just don't lie!! Rey's eyes were full of agony. Vicky said Rey hey bro leave her!! Everybody is watching!!

Rey left her arm and went behind Kria!! Sharon was shocked!! Vicky was too with Rey's reaction!!!

Kria was moving fast on road with tears in her eyes. She was recalling each and every taunt of Sharon. Her heel broke and she bent her ankle badly. She was in pain. But she kept on moving slowly. Rey was finding her in streets. Kria couldn't move with hurt ankle more she sat on a bench. Rey with fast steps reached her. She was sitting quietly with dry tears in her eyes. Rey stopped and looked at her with so much love. Rey could feel her pain. He sat with his legs bent on road in front of her. Kria looked at him with a blank expression. Rey unknowingly touched her hand and hold it tight. A tear drop slides down on her cheek. He said nothing. But eyes could tell that he can't see her like this. Rey wiped her tear with his finger. Kria shivered a bit with his touch.

Kria eyes had some questions about Sharon's taunts. Rey read them and hold her both hands tight with something so convincing that Kria's questioning eyes just filled with affection.

Tears from her eyes started falling fast.

Rey closed her eyes with his fingers.

Close your eyes so your don't feel them

They don't need to see you cry

I can't promise I will heal you

But if you want to I will try

These lyrics can define the moment. Rey closed her eyes so any hurtful memory can't affect her.

She put her head on his shoulder and just cried as much as she wants to!!!

Rey hold her in his arms and lift her in his arms as she can't walk. Whole journey to her home, Kria was looking into his eyes spell bound. For moments she just lean on his chest by resting her head as she was feeling so relaxed in his arms.

Rey whole journey was thinking about all those words which Sharon said to Kria. And eyes again turned angry.

They didn't speak a single word in whole way. Rey opened her apartment door and took her to room. He put her in her warm bed and covered her with blanket!!

Then first time in whole night Rey spoke to Kria!! I am going now!! Neha will be home soon!! You just take care!!! Rey turned to leave but Kria hold his hand. Her eyes were asking why you did this today for me Rey??? Who are you to me??

Rey said, I do it not for you with a blank expression but I did it because what Sharon said was not true!!! I can't bear it when someone does things like that. She has no right to hurt you!!! It's not allowed!! And then in flow he said I don't allow her to behave like this with you!! Kria looked at him with wide open eyes. Rey realized what he just said!!! Then he immediately left!!

Kria smiled and said you feel for me!! That's true Reyansh!!!

Rey went to sea shore. He was quiet and not at all hyper today with his actions. He was thinking something!!!

Vicky on the other hand was thinking about Rey!! He self talked Rey!! My Bro!!! You are melting after a long time!!! You are reacting for someone first time after that unfortunate event!! You are drowning in emotions and first time I am thinking that it's more than friendship. After Avni left us!! This is first time you are feeling!!!

I got to talk to Amma about this!!! And Kria She needs to meet Amma!!! I am sure she is the one who can return us our Rey!!!!

Kria was feeling serene and relaxed but still wondering that why Rey is so different about feelings. Why he is afraid of new feelings???

In next part

You will read

- Kria's meeting with Amma.

- Curtains will fall about Avni. Who is she???

- You will know that Dance had a role in Rey's life too once upon a time!!!

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Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
*RES*
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After a long time again I'm the 1st one to comment.
Woo..I feel like dancing..After all yeh humari holly wood romantic thriller haina..!!

And about the update...
What to say abt this?? You know na? You're awesome.
That was so cute.

And Avni..i love that name..!! Waiting for the mysteries to be solved.
Edited by --aimy-- - 13 years ago
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awesome update again aditi...
i am alwaz at awe wid ur style of writing the way u potray the feelings...luvd it to the core...n plzzz come up wid the nxt part fast...wanna knw abt dis avni...
Edited by sukanyaa - 13 years ago
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WOW ADITI...I CAN FEEL UR FF WHILE READING...KRIA CRYING REY USKO UTHAKE GHAR PE CHODING...REY MELTING...I THINK THIS AMMA IS AVNI S MOM I GUESS!!!!
Edited by anamika143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its realy amazing. Can't wait 4 nxt. And plz take care of urself dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aditi Awww...🤗I loved it...

The way Rey just doesn say anything n just takes her in his arms...I love it...
I cud totally feel Rey s pain wen he sees Sharon taunting Kria. He himself doesn knw wat Kria means to him but still he did so much for Awww...☺️


N I'm waiting for ur next update Adi...Love u😊
Edited by KriYansh_Pam - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika143

WOW ADITI...I CAN FEEL UR FF WHILE READING...KRIA CRYING REY USKO UTHAKE GHAR PE CHODING...REY MELTING...I THINK THIS AMMA IS AVNI S MOM I GUESS!!!!

nai re ami amma is rey's daai ma

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