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Posted: 13 years ago

Kriyansh-racing tracks of love

Update-4


Jaane Tu Jaane Tu Yeh Jaane Na..

Maane Tu Maane Tu Yeh Maane Na..

Kria is so busy in dancing that she couldn't notice those eyes, a shadow who is there watching her.

Who's this person?? What's the meaning of watching someone dancing at workplace?

Rey, he's there standing spell bound. Watching her dancing with a calm expression like some fairy tale is going on in front of his eyes. He's standing in corner behind the wall watching her but his feet were jammed as he couldn't move a step. It's his real chance to fire this crazy girl but no he didn't interrupt her. He didn't want to stop her. He just wants to see this beautiful scene.

Tu Soche Yeh Zindagi Yeh Na Badlegi Kabhi

Mein Sochoon Sab Badaltha Hai, Yeh Na Badle Kabhi

Mein Socho Tu He Tu, Mera Koi Aur Nahin

Tu Soche Mein Hoon Tera, Bas Tera Koi Aur Nahin

Koi Aur Ho Ya Na Ho, Tu Hai Mein Hoon Bas

Jaane Tu Jaane Tu Yeh Jaane Na

Maane Tu Maane Tu Yeh Maane Na...

Kria was living her most beautiful dream. Each step of her dance is not just dance. It's living the life. Her dreams are dancing there.

Song finished and kria's face is just so mesmerized like she has just lived some divinity. Her dancing is for herself. Rey is still standing there, watching her and when she stopped dancing, a smile on his face. An unknowing and non deliberate smile... He is someone else today. Kria after a great pause looked everywhere to ensure her only presence here. Rey hided himself behind wall so she cannot see him.

Rey is awake from her dream world and just again confused with his new actions these days. He reminded himself that he was here to collect his apartment keys he forgot to take. He is annoyed not on this girl but on himself for watching her dancing like this. Kria asked Buggati, so what do you think?? How was it?? Rey sneaked in and see with whom she is talking. There's no one but he is. He saw she is talking with his car!! He smiled again, Oh god!! This girl is mad!! He entered the room and makes her realize his presence.

Kria saw him coming!!! And all dreamy divine sequence is over. Like a beautiful champagne glass is broken!! Kria shouted, Aap??? What you are doing here??

Rey smiled in a hopeless manner, Oh God!!! This is my place girl!! Don't you think this question is silly!!

Rey then interrogate her, By the way, what were you doing???

Kria's face was like white and pale on this question!! She thought Aaj toh gayi Kria tu Kaam se!!! Rey noticed her feared face!!

He rectified himself, I mean you were supposed to be repairing breaks but you are talking to my car!!

Kria took a deep happy breath, Oh universe ji!! Thank you!! He didn't saw me dancing!!!

She answered him, oh you were talking about talk with car…she laughed unnecessarily…she was nervous!! She added, You know..I was alone!! Getting bored!!! So why not talk to a car!!

She spoke it in a very dramatic way!! And then realized, Oh what the hell!!! This is so crazy!!

Rey relieved her by saying, Whatever!!! I just forgot to take my keys!! So that's why I am here!! You carry on your foolish talk!!

She made a kid face and thought, FOOLISH!!! Ye monster kab sudhrega!!

Rey was leaving the place!! But turned back and told Kria, Hey miss talkative!! Forget your college for tomorrow. You'll be assisting my team tomorrow!!

Kria asked him, what!! I mean where???

Rey answered her, you'll know!! We all will meet at 8 here in workshop!! And left!!

Kria is so confused. Where am I assisting this MONSTER???

Next morning, Kria reached workshop and see some fancy HOONIGANS standing!!! She just bounced to them and said..Wow!!! Hoonigans!!! Neha asked Vicky,:what's these cars?? They aren't ours!!!

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Vicky answered her, Baby indeed they are ours. Hoonigans!!! Yay baby!! It's gonna be some deadly fun today.

Neha asked, OMG!!! Don't tell me we are going on that death tracks again!! You are not allowed Babu to run these cars!!

Kria wondered, Death tracks!!

Rey came and stood besides her and answered, Yes!! Death tracks!! We are going to DIRTWAYS. It's gonna be fun!!

Kria asked him, "IS it allowed?? Rey answered her, Of course it is allowed!!! In my case, everything is allowed!! He looked at her with deep expression!!

Kria first time looked at him seriously. First time looked into his eyes!! First time, she was not taking his talk arrogant!!

Rey asked her to go inside and bring some tools. Kria went in. When she came back, cars are disappeared. Only one hoonigan was there. Who was already started and roaring like a lion to take off!! She ran to the car!! Rey was in that Hoonigan. She asked,"where's everybody?? Rey answered her, " Everybody just left because all us of can't wait for you na!!!

Kria then asked him, then why did you waited??? This question amazed Rey!! He fumbled a bit and then answered, "I have to because you are having my tool kit na!! Rey just got a little uncomfortable with her question and thought, why I waited???

Kria sat in the car and said, Chalein!! Rey woke up from his self analysis mode and answered, Yeah!! Tighten your seat belt because I love to lead the rally of mine!! She asked,"what??

Rey didn't answered and accelerated hoonigan with flying spped. Kria is so fearded with his rash and fast driving!! She asked him to slow down the car but he wasn't listening!!

In some minutes Rey was able to see all other fellow hoonigans on road. Kria cheered, Yay!! We are racing!!

Rey looked at her and said, Finally You got it!! Congrats!!

Kria made a crying face but then again smiled to see that they are beating all others hoonigans one by one. She was shouting out high, Yay!!! Making some funny noise!! She waved Neha and Vicky when Rey's car left them behind. Rey was looking at her and thinking," Oh God!! This girl is crazy!! He smiled.

They are leading now. Rey slowed down the pace and a fine rally of The Dazzlers's hoonigans was marching in a line. It was a stupendous scene. They were out of the town now. Small mountains were looking from the window. Kria popped her head out of the window and said, wow!! Yaha pahaad bhi h!!! Rey laughed but controlled his laughter as he didn't want to invite Kria's silly fight!!

She was behaving like a kid!! Tunnel came and they entered in that, Kria shouted so loud!! Rey suddenly stopped the car and asked,"what???? She hold him so tight and said, I hate darkness. Mujhe andhere se bahut darr lagta hai!! Rey answered," but why you shouted so loud. You mad girl, I could loose control and now we are in tunnel with car stopped. An accident could happen!! Rey started the car and crossed the tunnel and then saw, Kria is sitting like a angry kid watching outside the window and just about to cry. He said,"Oh god!! Please Not a crying girl in my car!! He said,"why are you crying?? Kria looked at him in anger and answered, look into my eyes!! Can you see a single tear?? No na!!

He looked and forgets to take off his eyes from her. She woke him up and said Aage dekhiye!! Warna accident ho jayega!! He made a rude face and continued driving car!! Now she's happy as she has thrown his point back on him!! She smirked!!

They have reached DIRTWAYS!!! Kria asked him,"pahunch gaye with excitement". But annoyed Rey didn't answered!! She whispered to herself," Khadoos!!! Rey said," I heard that!!! She made a dramatic face and asked in a polite way, "Really!!!

DIRTWAYS!!!!!!!

The stylish place ever!! You can feel the adventure in air!! Only dirt and dust can be seen as far as you can see!! A very quiet place!! But danger speaks!! As roads are so curvy and dust in the air makes you blind to see the road ahead!! Here in DIRTWAYS, no one officially announce his presence here. Unknown danger just joins you midway!!

Rey stopped the car and came out of it!! He took off his jacket as it's hot!! Kria too came out and said," Kitna sunsaan hai na!!! Rey looked at her and nodded his head in hopeless manner!! He threw his jacket on her and said, keep it inside!! She collected it from her face and mocked him by making faces!!

Everybody is here now!!! Neha and Vicky reached them and other crew too!! Neha asked kria,"you okay na?? Kria said,"mujhe kya hoga!! Neha asked Rey," Rey why were you driving so fast??? You know how much I was scared for both of you!! Kria smirked and joined her," Yes!! It was risky!! Rey confronted Kria," I guess you were enjoying that!! Neha looked at Kria and said," You both are impossible!!

Vicky asked Rey to decide the teams for the drive. Rey was about to say but Neha interrupted, Simple me and babu!! Rey and Kria!! Ali and team will follow us for technical assistance!! Rey asked," me and Kria??? What will I do with her?? Kria intervened," matlab kya h aapka??? Rey said," Oh hang on!! I mean It would be better If I'd go alone. Vicky said,no dude!! You need a navigator and assistance. It's not safe to be alone here. Kria said,"yeah waise I don't mind coming with you. As you know I am good with cars. Rey nodded his head and said," tum log mujhse puchhte hi kyun ho when you decide by yourself!!

He walked from there to his hoonigan. Vicky followed him!! Hey sun na Rey!!!

So what will happen when Rey and Kria will lead to these DIRTWAYS alone???

Is it calm as it is looking or something unexpected waiting for them??

Where this dangerous drive will lead these two??

For knowing, keep reading…..😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

The first one to comment...!! Its like a dream for me to comment 1st on my favorite FF...Yipee..!! A big hug for you🤗🤗

What to say about your FF..I told you na..This one is my favorite..!!

Lemme grow and earn a lot,then we'll make this story a serial.And we'll cast ArSha in the leads. I'm sure they will be as energetic as they are now.They won't lose the charm till they die.

Don't give the copy rights to anyone.Its exclusively reserved for us.

PS:I'm very serious..!!

Edited by --aimy-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i was w8ing sooo impatiently 4 dis update so a big THNK U..🤗. i was thnkin cn we expct sme cute if nt romantic scenes frm da nxt update???😉
am realy goin mad thnking dey wil b alone..in a car..doing such a dangerous drive..😍
i jst hpe nothng bad happens.. fab update hun😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --aimy--

The first one to comment...!! Its like a dream for me to comment 1st on my favorite FF...Yipee..!! A big hug for you🤗🤗

What to say about your FF..I told you na..This one is my favorite..!!

Lemme grow and earn a lot,then we'll make this story a serial.And we'll cast ArSha in the leads. I'm sure they will be as energetic as they are now.They won't lose the charm till they die.

Don't give the copy rights to anyone.Its exclusively reserved for us.

PS:I'm very serious..!!

Awww... thanks Ditzi!!! I always wait for your feedback...I love your genuine opinion...Love ya...🤗🤗
I am so privileged that this one is your Favorite...It feels like feather weight every time I think about it.. 😊
Serial on this story!! This is such a big compliment!! Arsha will always be leads of our every story...😃
And you grow fast..hehehehe...I would love to see my Ditzi making a serial on my story..This story wholly belongs to you all...😊
I am touched sweets..really thanks..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome part
the crazy drive was mind blowing
loved it very much
update next part soon waiting for the dirtway drive
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fallenstar

i was w8ing sooo impatiently 4 dis update so a big THNK U..🤗. i was thnkin cn we expct sme cute if nt romantic scenes frm da nxt update???😉

am realy goin mad thnking dey wil b alone..in a car..doing such a dangerous drive..😍
i jst hpe nothng bad happens.. fab update hun😃

Thanks sweets...🤗🤗
YESH!! indeed you can expect...ahem ahem..😉
You'll know soon sweets...I'll try to update asap...😃
Thanks again...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monaya24

it was as usual awesome

Thanks sweets..🤗
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Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Awww... thanks Ditzi!!! I always wait for your feedback...I love your genuine opinion...Love ya...🤗🤗
I am so privileged that this one is your Favorite...It feels like feather weight every time I think about it.. 😊
Serial on this story!! This is such a big compliment!! Arsha will always be leads of our every story...😃
And you grow fast..hehehehe...I would love to see my Ditzi making a serial on my story..This story wholly belongs to you all...😊
I am touched sweets..really thanks..🤗

Dii...I love you..!! After reading your update..I jumped from my seat...and just ran around my room..!! I want to see ArSha acting on this. I was able to picturise it in my mind. I can imagine that beautiful background,the expressions of each actor,The intensity of the situation..Every thing...!!

Even then,I want this to be a real fiction,not a simple fan fiction.And I would like to see ArSha doing this..!! I want them to do it..!!

*SCREAMS* I want ArSha to do this..!!

Edited by --aimy-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

its awesome part

the crazy drive was mind blowing
loved it very much
update next part soon waiting for the dirtway drive

Thanks sweets..🤗🤗
Crazy drive!! you liked that!! I am glad!! 😃
It's gonna be crazier!!😉
I'll try to update asap... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update..plz update soon..cant wait for the next part..

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