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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update...

please update soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
hai rabba u had to stop here.. cont soon yaar.. first date where? interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lvly updt...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!dressed to kill!!
but where s d place?
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Part 76

Geet took few minutes to open her eyes and clear her vision.

As she vision became clear she is shocked with what she saw.


she stood there looking at the wonderful monument in awe. She literally opened her mouth.

"muh band karo geet..." Maan giggled.

His voice brought her back and instantly she turned around and hugged him. At first he was shocked by her reaction but hugged her back.

As they stood there in that position maan felt his shirt become wet. He pulled her and saw tears in her eyes.

"geet...tum ro kyun rahiho?" maan asked worriedly.

"nahi maan kuch nahi" geet wiped her tears and turned again to see the taj.

Maan came beside her and held her hand and made her sit on the ground and sat beside her.

As they both sat on the ground maan again asked "misti kya hua?"

"maan thank u soo sooo much...i really loved this...u know what maan its my dream to see taj...once in my childhood our school management planed a trip to taj but my parents refused me to send...from then I have this wish to see taj...even after coming to delhi I tried many times to travel here but something or the other obstacle came and my travel used to cancel" geet said still looking at the taj in amusement.

"wo isseliyeh hua ki its written in our fate to visit taj together" maan smiled looking at her face which is glowing with happiness.

"yeah may be u r right" geet said and stood up.

"kya hua?" maan asked.

"lets go in" geet pulled him towards the taj and both literally ran towards the taj.

Its one of the full moon days and the taj is glowing more under the moon. There were less tourists compared to other days. Only few couples here and there romancing in there own world.

Our maaneet are not less they are in their own world.


geet and maan roamed the whole place for more than an hour in hand in hand. Finally geet got exhausted.

"geet challo" maan pulled her holding her hand.

"nahi maan I cant" geet said holding maan's shoulders for support.

"geet abhi kuch baaki hai dear" maan said holding geet supporting her.

"baaki???" geet looked at him puzzled.

"haan" with that maan once again lifted her in his arms and to walked.

After few minutes maan kept her down and geet turned to see the wonderful sight.

There placed a table covered with white cloth and two chair opposite and a bonfire lit a bit away from the table. Many different dishes covered were placed on the table with 2 roses arranged at the middle of the table for decoration.

And from far the view of taj brought all the glow to the dinner arrangement.

(ignore the background and think it as at taj)

"challo geet" maan hold her hand and took her near the table. Geet was lost in the beauty. He dragged her chair and she sat silently. He went around and sat in his own place.

He looked at her who is lost in the surrounding.

Suddenly out of no where he asked "who are u?"

With that question geet jerked her head towards him in confusion.

"who are u?" maan repeated his question.

"maan?" geet asked confused.

"aur nahi to kya...from the moment u came here u are so quite unlike my sherni...kya hua my bak bak express ko...tum wo nahi ho jis ko mein literally hoshiyarpur se uttake le aya hoon" maan said in all dramatic way with his one hand on his heart.

Geet smiled at him "itna drama mat kar Mr.khurana tumko suit nai karti"

"acha ji aap yeh muh banana chodo" maan smiled back.

"hmm...par tum itna romantic kab se bangaya" geet laughed.

"jab se mujhe meri mishti milgaya" maan chuckled.

"ha ha nice joke" geet giggled.

"sach hai geet...joke nahi" maan said holding the skin of his neck.

"maan mujhe buk lagrahi hai...chalo chalo lets eat" with that geet opened the dishes and started eating.

Maan looked at her in awe "tum bhi khalo maan...aisa kyun dekh raheho?"

He smiled and served for self. They both had their dinner and finally sat there in silence looking at the taj.

Suddenly geet shouted "omg"

"kya hua?" maan asked worriedly.

"maan time kitna hai?" geet asked.

Maan "10:40...kyun?"

Geet worriedly got up "omg maan I m go home...pinky will be worried"

Maan calmly looked at her "dint u tell that u are going on a date with ur bf?"

Geet "I said...but its so late she will be worried na"

Maan stood up and hold her hand "don't worry geet u will be home before 12"

"par maan" geet

"challo challo geet...do u want to be late" maan dragged her to the car and they both drove back to airport.

Maan took her to his private area where his jet is waiting for them. As they went near the jet a man came near maan and led they into the plane.

Man " sir should we start?"

Maan "hmm"

As they entered the plane geet gasped.

"maan yeh private jet hai na" geet looked at it in wonder.

"haan geet" maan smiled and followed geet in.

"kiska?" geet asked still looking all around the jet.

"mera" maan said.

"kya???" geet gasped and turned looking at him with her eyes almost popped out.

"kyun dint u like it?" maan smirked knowing her reaction.

"U HAVE A PRIVATE JET" geet ignored his question directly.

"hmm" maan smiled again.

"WOW" geet check out the whole jet.

Precap: maaneet in office.

hi gals,

i posted many pics but dunno y the post is not accepting

so plz imagine maaneet at taj...

Edited by teju2292 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
waiting for the surprise date
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wow ... you updated
"Taj" indeed dream place
thanks for the update
Edited by abina03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome can't think of any thing more romantic than this
superb ...
Dinner in front of taj on first date...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome indirectly to maan ne confession kar hi diya hai i hope jald ji directly bhi ho jaye continue soon dear eagerly waiting for next update this one is awsome
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
date at taj 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wt a lovely update ...

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