FF - Shattered Dreams Link 2 Thread 2 updated - Page 88

feel so sad for arnav!!!!! im glad khushi was there for him!!!! wow all this before the intermission...cant wait to read the next update :) sorry for the late reply been really busy at work i know it sounds lame considering you guys take so much time out and out so much effort in writing the stories...but i am sorry :( just want to say i do appreciate it and if i avnt commented on the updates it simply means i avnt read it yet!!!

ohh finely you have update it and is was amezing az always

i loved chapter 32!! i cant wait for chapter 33

Wow... That was awesome. Superb. They are both always there to comfort each other. It was very well written.

superb update...

really anxious to know about their past

AWW FAB LOVED IT

Originally posted by: jahnvi.m

beautifully written and totally differentstory line...
loved the fact that dey admit dey r in love wid each other... though dey misinterpret deir feelings...n my god hw beautifully u portrayed khushi's n arnav's feelings n fear at the same time...u neva lost d lead of the story...its such a mesmerizing story...


wud luv to read more...dnt get dishearten n plzz continue n write more n more...coz after reading dis its nt only ur fav stry...its mine fav too...n i bet mny other thnk sme...

wud luv to knw wat shyam's fiasco is in dis 1...


n d way dey all admit dt dey hve dne evil...n guilt n love at a same time in all of dem (not only two leads bt also anjali) dts js amazing...

ur writing is magical, fabulous, fantastic, and mesmerising...at the same time it made me keep reading it...more n more i read...more n more felt i am dere n dis ol is happening in frnt of me...ohk No gutter thots...bt still...

n i never cn imaging arnav to tlk decently dt too wid khushi...well her expressions were mind-blowing...

n khushi n anjali were sweethrts in dt chapter...hw anjali tld her dt she dnt hate her bt is instead jealous coz arnav loves her more...

n evn i felt bad wen arnav asked her to apologise to B* mona...
he shudn hve dne dt...bt i understand he ws forced t d dt...


n in deir flashbaks hw dey try to hide deir feelings from each other...
well dt reminded me of myslf...i nw realized hw obvious i used to be...😳😳...


well i guess i shud conclude it...longest post frm me...phew...
well dis story deserves one long post cz it js one wrd frm me "AWESOME"👏

i am glad that u liked the story & also wrote a detailed comment on wat exactly u liked. i always welcome comments & critiques. the longer the better 😃