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Bahaar

@Morning Star

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

oh god this thick headed Arnav arghhh. He is a business man right? how come he speaks b4 thinking. Now Khushi has to stand for her rights and even if he comes begging her on his knees, he shouldnt 4gve him soon. let him suffer n rot in hell for a period of time knowing that he is the devil in hell cause of whom innocent Angel is dragged there. but no more now. if he wants her, he has to purify himself and join her in heaven. PLZ CONTINUE SOON AS IN WEEKEND or even TODAY

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Angels11

@Angels11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Guys just like how its bad 2 actually explain a joke its also bad to explain ones story but i just wanted to point out a few things since we are half way into my story now. You guys will find the following characteristics in my story:

1. Sometimes Arnav & Kushi echo each others' dialogues. In the prev chap Arnav's closing dialogue was that One day he ll win Kushi's love. Kushi says the exact same dialogue as her opening cue in this chapter. Two bodies, One soul 😳
2. Sometimes Arnav does something which confuses Kushi & vice versa. Hence i try 2 put across both their POV. Kushi w'd b pondering over Arnav's action & then i try to show Arnav recollecting his actions & the rationale behind it so that v the readers know the justification behind their actions though ARHI ending up pulling their hair apart trying 2 understand the other person. Thats y the continued misunderstanding between them though 2 us readers again its strikingly obvious that they r madly in love with each other.
3. Even their flashbacks r linked to each other in sequence. For eg while Arnav remembers the incident where he saves Kushi frm the car, the immediate flashback for Kushi is their trip together in the car & the tree climbing antics. So though the story is in a non-linear manner alternating between present & past u ll notice that just like how the present is in correct chronological sequence, even the flashbacks r in chronological sequence. 1st Shyam's entry, then Kushi's entry in AR, RAKSHAS fiasco, car hit & run etc etc.

Will add a few more down the line 😳

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Angels11

@Angels11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Morning Star
oh god this thick headed Arnav arghhh. He is a business man right? how come he speaks b4 thinking. Now Khushi has to stand for her rights and even if he comes begging her on his knees, he shouldnt 4gve him soon. let him suffer n rot in hell for a period of time knowing that he is the devil in hell cause of whom innocent Angel is dragged there. but no more now. if he wants her, he has to purify himself and join her in heaven. PLZ CONTINUE SOON AS IN WEEKEND or even TODAY

Don't b angry with me & Arnie baby Dear. This is ASR for u. Kushi has already called him the modern version of Dr Jekyll & Mr Hyde. No matter how much v dislike this is the real ASR. Sometimes extremely sweet & sometimes extremely cruel. And in real life also there r no fairy tales with Prince Charming. Every relationship has 2 ppl who ve their own pros & cons. As the relationship matures each person tries to understand, accept & adjust 2 the other person & out of this blossoms love & trust. Its this love which ultimately makes each person try 2 probably work on their bad qualities for the sake of their lover. This ARHI journey is the same albeit a little more complicated & painful. But ultimately Kushi's love ll mellow Arnav & make him work on his anger & similarly Arnav's love ll make Kushi forget her painful past & try to cherish wat she has now that is Arnav's love.

Be patient & accompany me on this rollercoaster ride!

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Jalebi

@Jalebibaby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

oh at last u updatd aftr sme time...bt it s worth wait..
Such a beautiful update..
i was too woried at the end of update 4 kushi..
hw she s controlin such a hurtful words..
I thot she ll giv anthr slap..bt i knw he s also hurtd 4 that words..thn y he s telin like that.
Bt i also dnt want kushi to go away frm him..so want to knw wat s gng to happn..pls cont soon..thanks 4 pm..

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Oh my! That was so shocking, what's gonna happen now? Cant wait to read, pls try to update soon.

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Angels11

@Angels11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Since its a Friday & the CVs always stop here with a cliffhanger, I am going 2 follow the same trick. Plz dont kill me folks.

Remember I love u guys a lot 😉

Chapter 25

Shanthivan Delhi 2011

"KUSHI KUSHI STOP."

She wrenched her hand out of his grasp. He rushed to block her way.

"Kushi just listen to me."

"MOVE RAIZADA."

"Don't call me like that."

"Why? Do u miss your nickname RAKSHAS?"

Arnav closed his eyes & took slow, steadying breaths all the while clenching his fists.

"Can you stop blocking the way & continue with your yoga exercises in your room. I ve better things to do rather than watching you breath in & out."

He opened his eyes & looked at her. She was shaken to see a hunted look in his eyes.

No Kushi. No. Don't give in. This has become the usual routine. Yesterday he insulted you & the moment he fell sick & hugged you, you melted. Don't become a bloody doormat allowing him to walk all over you, trampling your heart, your feelings, your dignity & your self-respect. Be a girl. Walk away with your head held high. He loves you yes, but it's high time he learnt to RESPECT you!

"RAIZADA, I am telling this one last time. I have already put up with your insults for a long time now. As I said I have finally realized that I have been fighting a losing battle. Remember it was you who wanted to marry me & not the other way round. Yes you are right. I loved Shyam, still love Shyam & I will always love Shyam. You mean nothing to me. I just don't care whether you live or die just as you don't care if I am alive or dead. Now get out of my way before I do something drastic".

He recoiled from the venom spewing out of her heart. Unable to take his pain Kushi quickly ran to her room, sprawled on the bed & started crying her heart out.

"I Will always love Shyam"

Her voice kept cruelly reverberating in his ears. Just a few hours back he had been hoping to win her love but now she had screamed out his inner most nightmares. She dint love him & never will. His heart broke. He fell on his knees & started crying softly. The mighty ASR actually crying
the second time in the same day. It must be some kind of a black record he thought inwardly.

Strong hands were pushing her into the water accompanied by manic laughter.

"Babuji Babuji" Kushi screamed but her cries echoed eerily evoking no response.

The water was extremely turbulent & she was struggling to remain afloat. She felt herself going inside the water again. Her nose, mouth & lungs filled up with the stinging salty water & she was finding it difficult to breathe.

"Amma Please Please don't do this" she pleaded but the manic laughter continued unhindered.

She was rapidly sinking literally & figuratively. She was dying & her last thoughts were on her dad & his serene face.

"BABUJI" Kushi screamed.

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Friends do post all ur brickbats. I ll take them all 😆 Also i want ppl 2 post their predictions as well based on the last chapter. I want 2 c how many ppl r close 2 the mark. I mean all of us grew up on Indian movies so i guess this s'd not b so tuf.

Its always fun 2 predict b it the actual show or FF. Who knows some1 might come up with a brilliant idea which is even better than my rotten one. But i solemnly promise that i ll not plagiarize & lift ur idea. The plot ll always b my original 1.

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