MAHSOOS- (M & G) THREAD 6 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was so emotional... So much love.. So much fear.. Hope they get through this.. X
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yayyy...!!!
U are back...!!!
Welcome back dear...!!!
Now u r going to update...!!!!
Eagerly waiting 4 ur update sweety...!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Geet could put her Mahsoos in word
Great that Maan also understood her Mahsoos
lt was lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome back .how can we forget you...superb and mind blowing part again love it thank you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
after soo many dayss
hope u re alrite now
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Posted: 13 years ago
😡awww...Safi you made me cry..i cant express how happy and glad i am after reading this update yes its been a while but the wait was worth it,...i think this is the first time you have made me cry in an FF ,..the sheer depth of the dialouges of geet...simply a touch of brilliance..after yesterdays disgusting epi...i think i will survive only by the grace of wonderful; FF writers like you...would you believe what happened yesterday ??immediately after watching the worst epi of geet ever i started re-reading Seduction and crazy all over again simply to wash my mind off that horrendous mistake shown yesterday...thanks so much ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i made maanpreet cribe so much... look what she have done...
she wrote part 55 in her way...
please read...
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PART 55 by Manpreetmann


"when you told your friend you are ashamed, that's what came in my head... That's what made me scared of you... What do you feel for me geet? I can't see you... I can't tell you what color is our life... I can't help you with anything. I am helpless... What do you expect from me geet? I am not like any other guy, who could see to love you... I am not like any other man who will be able to tell you how beautiful you are to me... I am not one of them who could walk with you anywhere... I don't have the ability to enjoy the view, share there experience like any other would. I am not the person who would be a dream man for anyone... Then why do you love me? What is love to you? What is mahsoos to you?"

The only noise that sang along in the room was there pounding heart. Geets chest went up and down in a rhythm that for a moment she thought, this was her last breath.
Silently listening to his plead made her world upside down. Made her think the depth of there relationship...
where on the other side, maan lost somewhere else...

Har Lamha, Har Pal Teri Aahat Mehsoos Hoti Hai
Jaane Kyun Mujhe Tujhse Qurbat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Sukoon Sa Rehta Hai Jo Tu Qareeb Hoti Hai
Jaane Ke Baad Tere Ek Wehshat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Nahi Jaante Ke Tere Bin Ji Payenge Ke Nahi
Bas Saans Ki Tarah Teri Zaroorat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Her Aah Mein Tera Naam, Har Khwahish Mein Bass Tu Hai
Tujhko Paane Ki Ek Hasrat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Yeh Dunya Ki Muhabbat Bohat Bechain Rakhti Hai Mujhay
Par Dil Ki Bechaini Mein Raahat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Is Chalti Hawa Mein Saansein Dono Ki Shamil Hain
Tujhse Wabastagi Mujhko Har Waqt Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Bewaqt Hain Woh Pal Jo Tere Baad Guzarte Hain
Tu Hoti Hai To Waqt Ki Qeemat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Najaane Kya Hai Ke Meri Baand Nigaahon Ko
Tujhe Dekhe Bina Hi Muhabbat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Na Tore Koi Meri Soch Ke Is Haseen Khuwab Ko
Iss Ehsaas Mein Yeh Duniya Jannat Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Par Aaj Tune Jo Dard Diya Mujhe, Unn Lafzon Se
Usse Iss Dil Ko Ek Darr Ki Aahat Si Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Darr Laga Mujhe Aaj Tere Pyaar Se
Darr Laga...

Kya Pyaar Mein Bhi Kabhi Kisi Ko Sharam Mehsoos Hoti Hai
Phir Kyun Tujhe Apne Dosto Ko Mere Baare Mein Batane Mein Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Kya Yehi Tera Pyaar Hai...???

Tere Channd Shabdon Ne Mere Dil Mein Ikk Darr Paida Kar Diya
Kahin Tu Mujhse Door Toh Nahi Chali Jayegi

Darr Raha Hoon Main
Darr Raha Hoon GEET...!!!

geet looked lost thinking something deeply... maybe finding the answers for her husband's questions...
Bolo Geet Bolo.. Maan demanded the answers
while geet looking at him with a blank face

after sometime she spoke
I never hated u... it was just, i was angry on my parents for fixing my marraige to a blind man, i wanted them to regret seeing me by not accepting this marraige... that was my anger which forced me not to like u...
she smiled remembering the day she saw his pic
but u know what, when i first saw ur photo before our marriage, i toh just fell for u rightaway..
maan blushed little, though he was angry but liked the idea how her wifey fell for him on the very first day she saw his pic
i never knew then, love at first sight exists.. but when i came 2 know that i got married to a blind person, my mind denied to accept the truth, i was unable to digest it.. u know, we humans who are normal, who can see things, are so mean, for them blind people have no life...till i just saw ur photo and knew nothing about u, i was so happy with this marriage thing but the day i came to know the truth, i was all against it...
she thought for a while and said
Appearance..!! Appearance was the thing which all mattered at that time...
a tear escaped maan's eye... this was the last thing he ever wanted to hear from geet's mouth... she closed her eyes in pain seeing maan's tear, but couldn't dare to wipe it off..
Slowly i came to know things about you, which surprised me.. and i so much used to hate , but not u, it was ur calmness which i use to hate so much... i being so rude to u in the beginning and u being so calm used to irritate me...
maan remembers how geet used to crib about every single stuff and still maan dint mind it
In starting i used to wonder, how u find me, even when u can't see..
then i found out u hear my payal and locate me, then one day i removed it, but still u found me out...i was amazed how can a blind person find someone without any noise...i had a big doubt that u can't see... but that was my aroma which helped u...
and one day i hide myself in the study in one corner far away from u, still u found me out... i was so irritated with u finding me everytime without any hint... then u talked about Mahsoos... u mahsoos me, my pounding heartbeat... u can mahsoos me in the crowd...
tears fall down from her eyes..
yes i told my friends that i was ashamed but now i'm not, rather i'm proud...
Maan just think once from my perspective, have u ever imagined, if u were a normal person like any other and i was a blind girl and we would have got married without ur knowledge,.. then what would have been ur reaction...?? n ur friends who knows u from ur childhood, what would have been their reaction,?? who seems more excited than u for ur married life...
maan gave a thought to her questions...
i feel you are best person i have ever met in my entire life, in this whole world... who has such a pure heart... who is far better than us... Maan u dont make mistakes even when u can't see and we make even when we can see...
maan faced her, looking somewhere
Maan u can't see me, but u can feel me, u can't tell me wat color is our life, while u filled my life with so many colors
maan hear her with great concentration...
u think u can't help me with anything, while u have unknowingly helped me in seeing this world from a whole different era, u taught me somthing who can't, u taught me how to mahsoos things, rather i would say i'm helpless infront of you
maan was amazed with her choice of words... she being so childish everytime, dint expect somethin like that from her, talking so maturely
I expect u to love me forever and ever and ever till eternity and nothing else
maan smiled little barely noticable
i know u'r not like any other guy, who could see me to love me... but u see me without seeing, without any image, u feel me without feeling... u can't tell how i look still ur heart says i'm beautiful...
maan nodes his head, which geet dint miss...
u'r not one of them who cud walk me anywhere, but where ever u take me everytime, no one ever could... u don't have the ability to enjoy the view, share ur experience like me or any other would, but how experience the world, how u mahsoos it, no one can do who have the ability to see..
geet thinks for a moment, than continues
U r not the person i've ever dreamt of...
for some odd reason, maan turned her face sideways, like he din't want to hear this
geet continues... ofcourse i have also imagined like every girl, a Prince on horse coming to take her princess away from this whole world, promised her to keep safe....maan wanted to close his ears
but today i need to confess one thing,... U are a Prince, u kept me safe in ur arms, in ur embrace, i feel secured when i'm with u... it feels like heaven to me... i feel complete...
maan was rather shocked with her these lines, he was more than happy, that she feels he kept her safe, she feeels safe with him, she feels complete
Love
a word caught maans attention
Love to me is "MAAN"
maan closed his eyelids, tears rolled down... atlast he heard wat he wanted to from so long... geet gave his all answers, in the sequence, exactly the way he asked... geet went close to him, caress his cheek, wipe his tears with her tiny hands... and kissed his eyes, one after another...
Mahsoos is what Maan mahsoos in his Geet...
she hugged him tightly crying like a baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay me first..
Hey
gr8 part..
cont.soon
Edited by janu_2006 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
u made us cry dear
the way she said is great
really waiting for the next

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