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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Piya... Awsum FF... I jz read d entire FF in one go... Its jz sooo brilliant... I luv the characters of Maan n Geet... I luv d softness n the flow of Maan's character...its soothin n very beautiful.. I luv d bindass attitude of Geet..her guts yet so soft from inside..i luv d brave Geet.. Evrythin bout their characters is very refreshin n special..
I rly feel sad for Geet...her parents werent thea wen she needed them mst.. I feel bad dat Maan thinks it was his mistake..though shes so alone cz Maan wasnt thea bt bechara Maan bhi kya krta..uski bhi majboori thi..he was soo small..even he cudnt do nethin... I sooo luv it dat Geet doesnt Dev at all.. I feel Geet also knws dat her so called frnz r useless n they dnt care bout her bt still she stays wid dem cz dey keep her occupied away from thinkin bout her loneliness..i luv it hw Maan is sooo determined bout getin his Geet back... I luv d dialogues u hv used to potray Maan's determination..its jz sooo energetic.. I luv ur portrayal of d story Piya.. Ur jz absolutely brilliant... 😃
Luv u loads babes...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Pihu i know m being demanding par kya karoon yaar m really missing ma sweetheart lover boy n main bahot eager hoon us box mein chhupi amanaton ko dekhne k liye plus maaneet ka delhi darshan bhi to dekhna hai...to agla iska update mil sakta hai?????
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. English translations are given in blue colour those who are comfortable with Hindi kindly do not read the translations
Love- Piya
PART 16

Geet: Maine toh tumhari amanat aaj bhi samalkar rakhi hai par kya tumne bhi meri amanat ko samalkar rakha hai? [I have kept all your assets securely even today can I expect the same from u as well?]

Geet: Kaash beethe hue lamho ko hum phir se kaid kar paate toh shayad aaj tum tum nahi aur main main nahi balki hum kehlathe [I wish I could capture all the past memories that we had spent together then maybe there would have been no I no you between the two of us. If at all this was possible then the only word that would have existed for both of us would have been we]

Meanwhile,

Maan enters his room

Maan removes his tie and opens the first two buttons of his shirt

He was wearing a black thread which had a key attached to it

He removes the thread from his neck and goes and opens a box

As soon as he opens the box a strange happiness and satisfaction appeared on his face

Maan: Tumhare amanat k sahare hi toh itne saal guzare hai Geet tumhari kisi bhi yaad ko maine apne zehen se ojhal hone nahi diya toh ye amanat toh beshkimti hai isse main kaise kho detha [ Your assets were the sole source of my strength on the basis of which I could stay away from you for so many years. I have cherished every memory related to u even today. Your assets is the most valuable thing for me how could I lose it]

He kissed the object and kept it back in the box

Maan: I love u Geet

Maan takes a paper and a pen and starts writing a letter

Maan: (thinking) Main tumhari har ek saas ko pehchantha hoon Geet tum mujhse laakh chupalo par tumhari har ek baat ko tumhare bina kahe hi main jaan letha hoon [I recognize every breath of yours. U r trying to hide something from me but maybe u r unaware that even today I can understand every small expression of yours]

Maan starts writing the letter

The letter was addressed to Geet

After writing few lines Maan stops. He folds the letter and keeps it in a book

Maan: Ab se har din main iss letter mein kuch likhunga aur ye letter jis din complete ho gaya ussi din main ye tumhe dunga tab tum shayad samaj jau k tumhara Maan aaj bhi sirf tumhara hai aur tumhari khushi k liye wo kuch bhi kar saktha hai [From today onwards every day I would go on writing few lines in this letter. The day I finish writing this letter I will give it to u maybe that day u will realize that ur Maan is still yours and he can do anything for the sake of your happiness]

Maan gets a call from office he had an important meeting

He goes back to KC for attending the meeting

Meanwhile,

Geet gets a message on her mobile it was from Dev

Message: "Hey sweetheart kaisi ho? Jaan main bus tumhe ye inform karna chahtha tha k kuch dino k liye main sheher se bahar ja raha hoon kuch personal kaam hai miss me ok. Bye" [ How r u sweetheart I just wanted to inform you that I am going out of town for few days do miss me bye]

Geet deletes his message immediately

Geet: Main kyun bhala isse miss karne lagi lagta kaun hai ye mera [Why should I miss him when he does not hold any importance in my life]

Geet tries to concentrate on some work but her thoughts were getting diverted towards Maan

The song that he had sung was still resonating in her ears

His sweet talks which were full of love was still dominating her mind

After few hours

Geet takes the phone directory and gets the number of KC

After a moment of hesitation she finally dials the number

Pinky: Hello Khurana Construction's Office how can I help u?

Geet: Mujhe MSK se baat karni hai [I need to talk to MSK]

Pinky: Mam iss waqt Sir kisi important meeting mein hai agar koi zaruri kaam hai toh aap mujhe bata sakthi hai main Maan Sir tak information paucha dungi [Sir is busy in an important meeting right now if there is something important then u can tell me I will pass the information to him]

Geet: Nahi aisi koi zaruri baat nahi thi [No nothing important]

Pinky: Kya main aapka naam jaan sakthi hoon [May I know your good name pls]

Geet simply cuts the call

Pinky: Ajeeb ladki thi [Strange Girl]

After few hours the meeting ends

Pinky enters Maan's cabin

Pinky: Maan Sir aapke liye ek ladki ka call aaya tha [ A girl had given a call in the office she wanted to talk to u ]

Maan: Kaun thi wo ladki [Who was the girl?]

Pinky: Pata nahi Sir naam puchne se pehle hi phone kaat diya usne [I don't Sir before I could ask her name she kept the phone]

Maan: Thik hai tum jau [Ok u get back to your work]

Maan takes his mobile and dials a number

Geet: Ye kiska number hai [Who is calling me this is an unknown number]

Geet: Hello

Maan: hello Geet tumne office mein phone kiya tha [Hello Geet u had called in the office right?]

Geet: Maan tumhe kaise pata maine toh apna naam nahi bataya tha aur tumhe mera number kaha se mila?

Maan: Hmm' ek saath do sawal toh pehle main tumhe tumhare dusare sawal ka jawab detha hoon [2 questions at a time ok let me answer the 2nd question first]

Maan: Tumhara number maine pehle hi tumhare dad se le liya tha [I had already taken your number from your dad]

Geet: Aur pehle sawal ka kya jawab hai?[ And what is the answer to my first question?]

Maan: MSK ki zindagi mein tumhare alawa koi aur ladki nahi hai toh tumhare siwaye itne haq se koi bhi seedha KC k MD se baat karne ki soch bhi nahi saktha ye haq sirf tumahra hai [ U r the only girl in MSK's life other than u no one has the authority to talk to me directly this right belongs only to one girl and that is u]

Geet was speechless

Slowly knowingly or unknowingly her world had started revolving around Maan

Every word of Maan was breaking some part of the strong wall that Geet had built around herself atleast the foundation of the wall was surely getting weak

Maan: Phir se soch mein kho gayi [It seems u have again got lost in your own thoughts]

Geet: Meri soch mein ab mera kaabu kaha raha uss par toh ab tumahara kabsa hai [I have no control on my thoughts any longer you r the one who has started dominating my thoughts]

Maan: Kya kaha tumne [What did u just say?]

Geet suddenly realized her mistake

Geet: Nahi main ye keh rahi thi k tumne mujhe phone kyun kiya? [No nothing I was just asking u why did u call me.]

Maan: Phone toh tumne mujhe kiya tha toh tum batau [U tell me the reason u were the one who wanted to talk to me]

Geet: Haan wo main darasal bore ho rahi thi toh socha k tumse baat kar lu [Yes actually I was feeling bored so just wanted to talk to u casually]

Maan: Waise tum abhi free ho?[R u free right now?]

Geet: Haan kyun? [Yes]

Maan: Geet tum humesha kehthi hona k itne saalo mein humare sheher mein kafi kuch badal gaya hai toh kya tum mujhe humara badla hua sheher nahi dhikaogi? [Geet u always tell me that lot of changes has taken place in our city over the past years so why don't you show me our new city]

Geet: Haan kyun nahi batau kab chalna hai [Sure why not when would u like to go?]

Maan: Aaj issi waqt [Today infact right now]

Geet: Par tumhari meeting? [But what about your meeting?]

Maan: Tum uski fikr mat karo meeting khatm ho chuki hai [U need not worry about the meeting it is over]

Geet: Thik hai toh batau kaha milna hai [Ok then tell me where should we meet?]

Maan: Tum taiyaar ho jau main tumhe ghar se pick kar lunga [U get ready I will pick u up from your house]

Geet: Ok

Maan: Bye

Geet: Bye

Maan comes out of his cabin

Maan: Pinky aaj k saare appointments cancel kar do [Cancel all the appointments]

Pinky: Par Sir aaj Kothari Sir se aapki meeting hai aur ye deal 10,000 crore ka hai [But Sir u have a meeting with Mr. Kothari today and this deal is worth Rs. 10,000 crore]

Maan: Aisi deals toh kafi mil jaayengi Pinky par main jaha jaa raha hoon wo deal itni anmol hai k uske liye main aise saikdo deal ko tukhra saktha hoon [We will get many such deals in the future but the meeting which I am going to attend right now is so precious that I can reject numerous such deals in front of it]

Pinky: but Sir

Maan: Cancel the meeting Pinky

Maan leaves from there immediately

Handa Mansion

There was a strange happiness that Geet was experiencing

Maybe she had found something that she had lost long back or maybe she was realizing that she had never lost anything

She was unable to understand the reason behind her happiness

All she knew was that she was excited and she was waiting desperately for Maan

Maan arrives

Geet could somehow sense his presence

She comes down running

Maan: Geet samalke [Geet be careful]

Geet: Aa gaye tum main kabse tumhara wait kar rahi thi [I was waiting for you for so long]

Maan: Janta hoon [I am aware of it]

Geet: Kya matlab? [What do u mean?]

Maan: Kuch nahi chalo chalthe hai [Nothing let's go]

Maan: Waise Geet tumhe car chalani aati haina [Geet I hope u know how to drive a car]

Geet: Haan mujhe car chalani aathi hai [Off course I do]

Maan: Toh ye lo chabi aur jaha bhi mujhe le jaana chao le chalo [So here are the keys take me wherever u wish to go]

Geet: Soch lo agar maine tumhara kidnap kar liya toh? [Think again what if I kidnap u]

Maan: Tumhare saath bitaya hua har ek pal mere liye jannat ki sair hogi agar kidnap karna chaho tab bhi shauqh se kar sakthi ho main yakeen se keh saktha hoon k wo ghadi bhi mere liye ek behet hi khoobsurat ghadi saabit hogi [Each and every second that I live with u would be a heavenly experience for me if u want u can surely kidnap me I am sure it would still be a blissful moment for me]

Maaneet share an eyelock

Geet: (thinking) Naajane tumhare lafzo mein ye kaisi taakat hai jo mujhe chup hone par majboor kar dethi hai najjane tumhari aakhon mein ye kaisi roshni hai jo meri aakhon ko jhukne k liye majboor kar dethi hai kya hai tumhare paas jo mere paas nahi aisi kaunsi taakat hai jo tumhe humesha sahi aur mujhe galat saabit kar dethi hai [Your words are so powerful that they always make me speechless. There is a strange light in your eyes which forces me to lower my gaze in front of them. What is it that u possess and I lack? What is it that always tells me that u r right and I am wrong]

Maan: (thinking) Tumhari mohabbat hi meri sabse badi taakat hai haan yahi wo jazba hai jo tumhe aur mujhe jod raha hai mujhe apni chahat ka ehsaas hai apni mohabbat par naaz hai jis din tumhe apne jazbaato ka ehsaas ho jaayega wo din tum ye mehsoos karogi k nahi main kabhi sahi tha aur naahi tum kabhi galat humare beech kabhi sahi galat ki deewar ho hi nahi sakthi bus agar kuch ho saktha hai toh wo hai pyar aur sirf pyar [Ur love is my biggest strength this is the bond that connects both of us. I am aware of my true feelings and I am proud of my love. The day u will realize your hidden love I am sure u will be confident that I was never right and u were never wrong the only feeling that is and will always be present in between us would be love and only love]

Maan touches her hand

His simple gesture touched her soul

Maan: Chale [Shall we leave?]

Geet: Haan [yes]

Geet starts the car and both of them leave

PRECAP: Maan gives a gift to Geet but will Geet accept it what would be her reaction?

Sorry for my mistakes Guys I am in a very bad mood today if at all u feel that the update was not good then kindly forgive me

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yehhh...we got an update...i was so waiting for this to read more about my sweet maan...hehe...u know how much i love him TOO...lol...all are becoming my favourites nowadays...khas kar DR MAAN...hehe...


from geet's words it seems ke woh abhi bhi sab kuch nahi bhuli hain...i mean she does remember about her past and maybe has a soft spot for maan...shayad she doesnt want to show it yet...well hope so...


omg...even maan has a box with that key...i thought he only had a diary...well geet even maan has treasured you amaanat all the while...how sweet of him...actually how sweet of both...this is so cute...both keeping a box with each's amaanat...i love it...and that letter maan has started to write...i wonder by the end kaisa hoga...i sure it gonna be full of romantic lines...i cant wait for geet to read it now...


yuckkk...dev...i so so so so hate him...gadha kahin ka...ab yeh kahan se tapak para...stupid gawaar...but then am happy ke he is going out of town abhi ke liye...n miss him...miss him my foot...at least geet is intelligent enough to delete his message n not to miss you...love you for this geet...


maan and geet talking over the phone...and maan saying she ONLY has the right to talk to him directly...am so dead...i loved it when maan said that...and geet being speechless...she isnt to be blamed,...msk's charm is difficult for anyone to resist...hehe...and when geet was talking as if in a trance...admitting how maan has started dominating her thpughts...i was about to faint...lol...aur phir maan canceled his deal woth 10 000 crores...i wonder if men like him do exist...


and now both gonna roam around the city alone...this gonna be amazing...and precap is very nice...aur haan...plzzz aisa mat kaho ke bad mood mein ho...i dont like u saying this...ok...chill and be happy like always...thik hain...continue soon Pihuuu...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


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sabse pehle thank u sooo much sweetu jo tune aaj update kiya(pls gussa mat ho main aaj tere pyaare se gesture se bahot senti ho rahi hoon)...luvya loads dear...
update ka kya kahoon dis was truly adorable...so sweet n filled wid deir luv...haye...
now lets start wid d update...

koi baat nahin geet maan ki koshishen jald hi tum dono ko 'hum' bana degi...
haye m so falling for dis sweet maan after every update...ye mujhe deewani bana k chhodega...how sweet ye apne box ki key ko gale mein pehenta h yaani dil k qareeb rakhta hai...awww...

Maan: (thinking) Main tumhari har ek saas ko pehchantha hoon Geet tum mujhse laakh chupalo par tumhari har ek baat ko tumhare bina kahe hi main jaan letha hoon
dese words of maan hints he can feel n understand wats going in geet's heart n mind...lovely yaar...
ye lover boy mujhe diabetes karwa k chhodega kitna sweet h yaar ab ye apni shehzadi k liye letter bhi likh raha h...awww...
kuch kuch samajhne lgi h aur baqi bhi smjh jayegi babaji tumhare saath hain maan...

wow geet ne dev ka msg fauran delete kr diya yipppeee...

geet ne khud maan ko call kiya...awsome...
par baat nahin hui...:-(
but ye to mera lover boy h kabhi disappoint nahin krta so smjh gaya it was geet aur jhat se apni shehzadi ko call kar liya...

haye pehle sawaal k jawaab se to maan ne geet k saath saath mujhe bhi spellbound kar diya...amazing yaar...

to MSK 10000crore ki deal chhod kar apni shehzadi k saath waqt guzarne ja raha h...his love has no limits yaar...its boundless...

geet's happiness was described beautifully...every description of geet's heart is marvelous sweetu...u write amazing...

phirse maan ka speechless kardene wala answer on her kidnapping him n me n geet thayen...

geet's last pov was really awsome it was so touching n maan's answer to it in his own pov was spellbinding...yaar Pihu itne amazing dialogues tere dimag mein aate kahan se hain...main to padh k speechless reh jati hoon...

tera update aur super amazing adorable na ho aisa kabhi hua h kya...it was simply marvelous dear...

luvya loads...
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice Update piya

geet ore maan ka wo yaadonko deke apne aapse kia huwa wada yaad karna acha laga
ore bi comment karne ko jo mene baad me ki
Edited by maaneet5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
no words

tumai lafozo me kya zadu hey
hum har bar tumra ff padne me
najboor hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear...
awesome dialogues..just superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update piya
Loved it thank god geet is changing feeling for maan
Do continue soon
Love ya xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it very much

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