dk&disha- part 25,page 35!mssge.on.pg.36

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Vanita

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Yay!!!! Cant Wait!!!!!!!!

I will be waiting!!!

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Raksha

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lol..sorry to say guli..it wnt b as long as ures..just short parts..and i mean really short..lol..but it wil b frequant i promise...

but also...sorry to say...

i will be revising a lot during the Easter holz..which 4 me are starting 2mrw..so i have 2 revise, i need to get good grades..

but i wont revise too much in one day..(it will be 2 much 4 me...) so i will try and come on Indian Forums.. 😛 but wont be on so much. 😭

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its okay blah. write as much you can 😉 😃

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well as long as you write something! 😉

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blah yaar where have you disappeared to. 😃

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jaanu you have to continue soon! pls.....pretty pls!!!! 😆

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Raksha

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sorry to say this guys..bt i do feel really bad about not continuing.....

and therefore i will be ending this fanfic..

i know for sure i wont continue a lot..and im so so so sorry

bt i will rite some parts..and soon end it 😛

im really so so so sorry everyone 😭

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Raksha

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ok guys..i am gna continue 2day....4 sure!!

lol

im gna have 2 read wot i rote in the last part..and den i will do a recap..4 u guys...(its the least i could do 4 u 😆 )

and.....well...enjoy...and look out cos i will write a part 2day 😛

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Raksha

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Recap

Rano looks at vedant : I thought u said she was happy…

Vedant: she….she is..

Rano runs up 2 disha's room to see what actually happened…

Rano: di?

Disha: rano..can u help me pack the rest please

Rano helps and doesn't bother to ask..because she knows disha wont tell her the truth

Rano comes down holding one of disha's bags..

Disha comes down holding another..

Rano looks at vedant and gives him cut eye

Payal sees this and is happy…

They both leave

Payal: look at the way that Yano looked at u

Vedant: her name is Rano ….R…R for Rhino..(vedant looked at her and rolled his eyes)

Payal: *if he tried to say im fat I didn't find that funny!!!(gives an angry look)*

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Raksha

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Part 20

Payal walks off….

Vedant goes to his room and thinks about everything that has just happened..meanwhile dk stumbles in ….and priya has difficulty holding him properly..dk is very drunk…

*dnt ask how..i really have no idea..i said it in the preview..bt..i really ddnt know how the story would unfold…lets just say its all Priya's fault*

Dk comes in shouting…

Dk: get off me…where's disha?...Disha???....do u know how long its been since I last saw her?!?!?!

Priya: *not long..but from now on…smiles evily*

Vedant comes out when he hears all the shouting

Vedant: brother…theres bad news

Dk : hmm…what bad news?...we lost any business contract….

Vedant : …erm..disha bha-

Dk : good point..where is disha..?? I called her a while ago

Vedant: disha bhabi-

Dk: vedant…ure talking really slowly..and ure spinning around a lot…common…stop it

Vedant: im not spinning

Dk:yeh u are!!!

Vedant : I think it would be best if we take him to his room right now

Dk : (holds his head..he drank a bit too much) – so vedant what were you saying about disha?

Vedant : erm…

Priya *getting pissed cos vedant keeps taking his time* = FOR GODS SAKE..SHE LEFT U..AND YOUR HOUSE!!!

Vedant looks up at Priya shocked.

Vedant *how the hell does Priya know this…I know she liked dk before..but could she still…but she cant do all this alone…that means….Payal*

Vedant looks at dk and sees him lying on the floor

Vedant and Priya help him up..

Next morning

Dk wakes up with a headache..still things seem to be spinning for him…he sees a figure coming….

Someone: good morning

Dk = arre..disha…tum..kal raat kaha thi?..aur tumhari awaz koh kya huwa

Priya = mein disha nahi…Priya hoon (says this angrily) *abhi bhi disha keh bare mein soch raha hain*

Dk = toh phir disha kaha hain?

Priya = voh tumhe aur tumhara ghar chodke chali gayi hain!!!

Dk = PRIYA!! Watch what u say!!

Vedant comes running as he hears shouting..

Vedant = brother?...what happened…why are u shouting?

Dk = priya kya keh rahi hain…kya voh such hai?

Vedant = ..i ddnt hear what priya said..i just came in the room now

Dk = wheres disha?

Vedant = she…voh..erm…..

Dk = kaha hain?

Vedant = she left

Dk put a coat on and is about to leave the room..

Priya = kaha jaa rahe hoon??...

Dk = you aren't my wife! I don't have to answer each and every question of yours

Priya= whats the point? Disha left u…wait until she comes running back to u…wait for her 2 beg 4 ure love…*not that she will…huh….i made sure she is out of ure life forever*

Dk gives her a cold look and goes off in his car

Vedant keeps staring at Priya….

Priya notices this = kya?

Vedant carries on..and realises what he thought was right..it is Priya and Payal doing all of this

Vedant leaves giving priya a dirty look

Vedant goes in his room and thinks of all this…and thinks of how to get disha back in the house

Bhonsle house

Dk comes in..and asks the servant where everyone was

Suhas wasn't there because she went with sumitra ….sumwhere

And rano went out to do some house shopping

Dk realises disha is alone..and thinks it's the best time to talk 2 her..

He goes to her room and finds her near the window…deep in her thoughts

Dk = disha?

Disha obviously doesn't react as she ddnt hear him…

Dk walks closer to disha and calls her name out again = disha?

Disha turns around anxious …

Disha: tum?....why have you come here?

Dk = to meet my wife!

Disha = huh

Dk = disha..whats wrong

Disha = did u tell Priya your coming?

Dk = why are you bringing Priya into this??

Disha stares at him and laughs at him..while dk has a confused look on his face

Disha walks off..about to go past dk when he holds he hand..her back his still facing him..

He turns her around and looks into her eyes…

They both stare at each other for a while..-

Disha = please leave

Dk *shocked* : kya?

Disha: I said leave!

Disha tries 2 break free from his firm grip..but cant…

Dk makes his grip tighter

Disha : you're hurting me!

Dk: why are you doing this?

Disha: wah!! ..that should be MY line!!

Dk lets go of her

Dk is about to leave –

disha sreams really loudly

dk turns around and is shocked to see disha fainted

dk carries her on her bed and calls his doctor

Rano comes in the same time as the doctor

Rano: aap?...aur yaha?

Doctor: ji..me. sehgal called..saying his wife fainted

Rano: kya? *dk jiju yaha?*

Doctor follows Rano into disha's room

Rano and Dk go out of the room

Dk tells Rano the truth..the whole truth and nothing but the truth… (hehe)

Rano feels sorry for her jiju…but doesn't want to come between the misunderstanding…because that will make matters between disha and rano worse

Doctor comes out..and Rano goes to get the medicine

Doctor: please mr sehgal..look after Disha..she is very weak..and it could affect the baby aswell

Dk realises disha is pregnant *what a good dad innit?* and thinks he has to make sure all misunderstandings should be clear before disha talks about a divorce one more time

Dk goes in the room and sees disha's tear which she tries to wipe away

Dk sits next to disha

Dk : I know you think I am in the wrong..but I will prove to you that this is all a misunderstanding..

Disha looks at him and towards her stomach

Dk: please disha..look after yourself..and our baby – dk leaves the room saying that

Disha thinks long and hard about everything

While Rano is all out and about getting disha's medz, she bumps into vedant

She looks at vedant and vice-versa

Vedant: hows bhabi?

Rano: she fainted..and jiju came aswell

Vedant: rano we need to talk

Rano: erm..what are we doing now?

Vedant: rano…please?

Rano: fine..but I need 2 go home and give Di her medz

Vedant: fine..i will meat u at Starbucks at about 6pm ..

Rano: fine..bye…

Vedant: bye

Rano goes home..- she talks to disha..and disha tells Rano her side of the story

*even about how she heard dk say "I love u" to Priya…<now dk didn't tell rano..so rano is very confused about everything*
and without knowing its 6pm..

Rano: shit! Vedants waiting for me

Rano reaches Starbucks 15mins later

Vedant looks at her kinda pissed

Rano: sorry…I forget..

Vedant: I realised

Rano: soo..(taking her seat)..how cum u wanted to meet up?

Vedant : I wanted to talk about disha bhabi and brother

Rano: look..i know it wasn't jiju's fault..im not blaming him…but I don't understand who is behind all these misunderstandings (she tells him disha's side of the story)

Vedant: Priya and Payal

Rano: KYA?

Vedant: haan

Vedant tells Rano everything

*lets just say..vedant heard Payal and Priya talking about everything they did..and why they did it..*

Rano: so…..Payal is doing it because she loves u..and Priya because she loves jiju

Vedant: haan

Rano : (mutterz) us payal ki tho mein chuti kar doon gi

Vedant: kya kaha? (smiles cs he heard what she said)

Rano blushes..: kuch nahi..

Rano: ab plan kya hain?

Rano and Vedant talk about plan A

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