Socha na tha 4 Sujal-kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-1....Sujal is
a middle class guy who is
crazy about music.his gr8est
ambition is 2 become a gud
playback singer.his friends r
Chraru & Rishi. Charu is the
daughter of a famous
music director Inderji{Ronit
Roy}.Sujal's plan is 2 get
a chance from him 2 sing 4 a
movie.Charu has given him
hopes.he stays in the outhouse
of a rich family.a smart
old lady called Arundathi
stays there with her
grandchilren Kashish{19yrs old} &
shamit{11yrs old}.her son
Om{KGGK}& wife naina r in
america.One day in the
morning,Sujal hears a sweet
female voice :dadi,i'm going 2
college. Sujal was eager
2 see her.he looks thru the
window.he sees a girl going
out on a bike.he cud see only
her back.short
top-jeans...silky hair.after a
few days,shamit comes 2
see Sujal with a request:can u
do 1 favour? he:yes
sure. shamit:she told 2 take
the book thats kept on the
top of the cupboard. Sujal:who
is this 'she'? shamit:my
luvly sister kashish. Sujal
smiles.he remembers seeing her
back 1day .he wants 2 see her
face. he goes there &
takes the book from the top of
the cupboard.the shy
girl{kashish} extends her arms
from the room 2 reach the
book. S smiles:cum out of
room. she cumes out
slowly.S was shocked 2 see
her.bcoz she was looking
horrible.she was in a pink
salwar.she hs worn a big
black framed spectacle.her
teeth were that horrible...as
if its going 2 cum out of the
mouth.S gives her the
book. K smiles:thanku..
S goes out
immediately.he was feeling
awkward remembering her
horrible smile. K &
shamit in the room.shamit
laughs:that poor fellow ran
away with his life.he got
scared. K laughs. she
removes her spectacle & the
duplicate teeth she had worn 2
fool sujal. shamit:didi,u
wear it always.u look better
in it. K becomes
angry:u naughty boy.....they
dance 2 the song...its the
time 2 disco...suddenly
hearing dadi's voice they stop
the music & pretend 2 be
studying. dadi cumes:gud,u both
r studying.every1 knows that
u'l study well with gud
culture if ppl stay with me.
K-shamit felt funny.
dadi:ur dad is online..they
become so happy that they
rush 2 take the Ph. shamit
talks.K takes the
reciever from him:hello
daddy,how r u?i'm fine...Sujal
passes by...he looks at her
thru the window with a weird
feeling.he cud'nt see her face
.suddenly K turns
back.S was surprised 2 see
K's normal
appearance. K did'nt see
him.she continues talking:u
hav a surprise 4 me?whats
that?its a suspense? u'l bring
it when u cum here next
time?o!daddy,u r so
sweet.....Sujal
whispers:kashish,u r also sweet....


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JaViA thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part 👏 👏 👏
but u have posted it before in Kavyanjali forum ....
but in that story the leading characters were Kavya and Anjali .. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 grr888...me havn't read so u continue 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
PART-2...Sjal:kashish,u r also sweet like ur dad....the
next day when kashish goes near
her bike,Sujal was seen b4
her.she gets shy,bcoz her
identity is out now.
S:so.. were playing a
drama...K:what drama?what
did i do? S:why did u fool
me? K:u got fooled
easily bcoz u r foolish.what
can i do 4 that? S
becomes angry.but he controls.
he becomes sweet
purposefully:why did u hide ur
pretty face? K gets
impressed by that statement.
she laughs:bcoz i wanted 2
tease u? kSujal smiles:but why?
she:simply...she takes
her bike & goes away with a
smile on her face. Sujal
tells himself:i'm going
crazy...is it luv?or simply an
attraction? he sings & dances
around in that spirit:dil
to paagal
hai...Charu:Sujal,who is in ur mind?
Sujal:music. Charu:no 1 else?
he:who else can take that
place? Charu:i can't believe
it seeing u singing &
dancing like a mad person.
Sujal becomes embarrased.
Rishi laughs.
Charu:anyways,2morow,there is a song
recording.u cum with us.the
super singer Swayam
is the male singer.and the 1 &
only Charu is the female
singer. Sujal:u r so lucky
charu...C:1 day that
luck will cum 2 u sujal. he
smiles. he also goes 2 see
the recording.he sees the song
recording & enjoys.he
dreams -...Sujal singing in
the place of swayam.Charu
intoduces him 2 inderji.
Sujal:plz giv me a chance 2
sing 4 a movie sir. inderji:i
can't tell u yes
immediately.1st let me hear ur
song. S gets
tensed.so his voice does'nt
cum out properly.he was very
weak in singing. inderji
becomes angry:this is ur song?&
u r so prowd.u want 2 sing in
my movie?rubbish.he
does'nt even listen 2 Charu's
words. C:sujal,why r
u getting tensed?u were so
energetic. he:i dunno how it
happened. she:anyways,u hav 2
take practise. he:ok... Sujal goes 2 see inderji's
house.he becomes angry:why r
u here again?i told u no,u
can't sing,so no chance 4 u.
he becomes sad.but he does'nt
show that. he:no problem
sir.plz giv me sum other
job.i've financial problems.
inderji:can u do cooking?
S was confused. C
shows action 2 tell yes from a
small distance. so Sujal
shakes his head. inderji:u no
cooking? S:yes sir.
inderji:so 2day onwards u can
do cooking here. he:ok
sir. inderji goes.cHaru cumes.
S:charu,i dunno
cooking at all. C:its
ok,i'll help u.sujal,its a
gud chance 2 get close 2 my
dad.u'll get a chance 2
prove ur talent. S
smiles:thats my hope. S
serves food.he was tensed
about inderji's reaction.
inderji tastes it:u r a gud
cook. S:thanku sir.i'm
also a singer. inderji
teases:that i no.that day i had
heard ur song no.
S:sir...thats bcoz of my tension.
inderji does'nt mind it.he
feels funny. C consoles
him. S goes back.he sees
Kashish's bike.he goes &
touches it smoothly.he kisses
it.he hears a laughter.it
was shamit's.S gets
embarassed:full of dust.i was
cleaning it.. shamit smiles &
goes out with his cricket
bat. Kashish brings a plate
full of gilebies & ladoos
without others' knowledge &
keeps it on sujal's table
thru the window.she hoped that
seeing this he will
search 4 her.kashish hides
herself 2 see sujal's reaction
seeing it. Sujal had seen
it,but hid himself from
Kashish.he cud guess anjali's
plan.so he pretends 2 be
crazy about these sweets.he
does'nt look 4 her,instead
of that he eats it fast as if
he was starving 4 1
week.K becomes angry &
goes away.seeing it,S
laughs.he felt funny.Kashish
keeps a paper piece on Sujal 's table thru the window &
goes.he sees the
paper,takes it &
reads.."fool,bloody fool...." Sujal
becomes angry.





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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Part-3....Kashish & Kanan were cuming back from the
college. Kanan:how was 2day's class? K:oh,boring
yaar...i was not at all listening.
Sujal with tuff face
stands b4 them. K whispers 2 kanan:this is that
fellow..Kanan laughs.Sujal cud'nt stand them teasing.
S:kashish,i want 2 talk 2 u.plz cum 2 the park.i'll
wait 4 u.
K:i'll think about it{with
headweight}..
S waits 4 K at the park.she does'nt
cum.he gets really irritated. but after sumtime she
cumes. S was angry:why did u becum late? K:i was
not late..accoding 2 me..i cum only when i feel like..
S:ok..he takes out the piece of paper K had kept
on his table:whats this? she:can't u see?its a
paper.very funny..S:i no that.but whats written
here? she:can't u read english? he:yes,thats why i asked
u. she:i've written that u r a fool,bloody fool!
S
loses his control:stop it.in the beginning itself i new
that u r naughty.but i took it as a funny thing.but now
u r crossing ur limit.u don't no who i am.u no,when i
was in the college,i've done many notorious things.
K laughs:so u r adventerous.let me hear ur
adventures.tell me...tell me....S:i won't tell u.but
i'll show. he keeps her tightly close 2 his chest &
kisses her. K screams at him:u brute!how cud u do
this 2 me?this is the way u hav 2 behave 2 a girl?
S
becomes upset:i'm sorry..i did this 4 fun. she:this is
how u shud hav fun?i'll tell this 2 dadi...& 2
every1...she runs away.S becumes upset & goes 2 see
Charu & rishi. he:i did a blunder.
C:what did u
do?
S tells everything.they were shocked.
R:sujal,this is not a silly thing.u hav insulted a
girl in a public place.if she files a sexual harassment
case,u'll be put into the jail. S gets tensed:then
what can i do? R:go there during the nite.u take
all ur things & escape without their knowledge.
sujal,charu & rishi go there.only S gets inside.he
goes 2 his room & takes all his things.suddenly he was
shocked 2 see kashish standing b4 him. S gets
embarrased.
K:so,u r planning 2 escape from here.
S:no,i was arranging everything. K:don't lie.u
can't escape now.i've called every1 here 2morrow.let
them cum & giv u punishment. S:its my request.plz
don't spoil my future. she:this u had 2 think b4. he:i
did that,bcoz u made me angry. K:so when u bicum
angry,u kiss others? S:no,i kiss only u.bcoz i
thot u...K:what did u think about me?u thot i luv u?
S:leave it plz..u can giv me any punishments.but
don't insult me b4 others. she:u're willing 2 accept any
punishment that i giv u? he:yes. she:then u extend ur
right arm.
S extends his right arm after closing his
eyes.K felt funny seeinh his tensed face. she kisses
his arm.S opens his eyes with surprise.he cud'nt
believe it. k was shy.S kisses her arm.then they
hug each other.
R:where is this sujal?i doubt
whether he is caught by them. C:let me go & see.
she goes..she was shocked 2 see both of them hugging
each other.she smiles & goes back 2 Rishi:don't expect
him now.he won't cum.bcoz they r n luv.
R was
surprised. k runs away from S with shyness.S
smiles at her.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooooo jasmine 😉 ....loved it!!! 😳 cont fast
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jasmine gr8 sttory 😊 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lovely jasmine plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-4...Sujal tells kashish:atlast u stole my heart.so u
r a thief.
Kashish:what about u?u r also a heart thief.i'd
noticed u watching me from the beginning..they
laugh.
she:sujal..luv is a feeling...true luv can't be
hidden anywhere.it will automatically cum out. S:if
ur dad opposes our marriage? K:never!he can't stand
against my wish.
S smiles. while inderji & charu
were entering the house,S was polishing inderji's
shoes & was also singing. inderji was surprised 2 hear
S's sweet voice. S stops singing seeing him. he
goes 2 the kitchen.
C: told u no papa,sujal sings
well. inderji did'nt mind her.she becomes dull.
A song
recording of rahul ..kashish & kanan also cum 2 see it
on the care of charu. rahul came very late losing his
professionalism.K-kanan ask 4 autogragh,but
hedid'nt mind them. inderji scolds him:now u r having
headweight.
rahul becomes irritated.he leaves the place.
every1 becomes sad. inderji was cool:sujal,u hav 2 sing
this sing...sujal,kash,charu were surprised. S
did'nt get words 2 thank inderji. S goes 2 sing.K
did some actions 2 giv him best of luck.S smiles.he
looks at K & sings the romantic song.
the song
becomes a big hit. when kashish was dreaming about S
in her room during nite,S cumes from back .k was
surprised.
S:u were studying?
K:no...i'll get a
big zero 4 the exam.bcoz while i open my book,only ur
face is seen.
S:i'll giv u a medicine 2 study well.
he hugs her.
K:when u r becoming a popular
singer,i'm getting tensed whetheru r moving away from
me.. he:never,bcoz real luv can't go anywhere.my song
became nice ince u were there with me.u r my inspiration
2 sing.
K:i feel that those romantic lyrics were
written 4 us.
Sujal smiles.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Continue Jasmine... what happens next???

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