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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Amazing Chapter. And Your Already In My Friends List. By The Link You Gave Me Wasn't Working.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
this story is getting interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
wow awesome please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Blue lotus Part 4

Friends...i'm creating romantic Arhi scenes 4 u all which r not seen in d show now.So plz giv me long comments..plzzz

Jayashree showed a red saree to Khushi.
J:How is it Khushi?
K:Beautiful saree nani.
J:This is for you.
K:For me?
Khushi was surprised.She could'nt believe that such an expensive saree was for.
J:Yes..for you.Tomorrow is my birthday.
K:Really?
J:Arnav is keeping a party.I had told Chottu that i don't need any party.But he wants to celebrate my birthday.
K:That's a good news.Arnavji is expressing his love through this party.
Jayashree smiled.
J:I know.He loves me a lot.Khushi...you should wear this saree for the party.
Khushi smiled:Thank you so much for the saree nani.
Jayashree smiled.

Party...
Arnav's eyes searched for Khushi.
A:Nani...where is Khushi?
Jayshree was not minding him as she was busy with the guests.
Khushi came.She walked gracefully in her red saree.
Arnav was spell bound by her beauty.
He controlled himself.
Khushi saw Arnav's eyes getting stuck up to her.
Purposefully she did not look at him.
Everyone was busy eating food.

Khushi stood alone in a lonely area.
Arnav went there.
He wanted to talk to her.But he did not know how to start.
A:We did not have cake cutting ceremony as nani is a pure vegetarian.She does'nt even have cake.
Khushi turned back with a shock hearing his voice.
Arnav noticed it.
A:Why do you look startled?You did'nt expect me here?
K:Yes,i did'nt expect anyone.So suddenly when i got your voice i got scared.
A:You are telling a stupid lie Khushi.Don't tell lies to yourself.You expected me here.You knew that i would come here.Or your heart longed for my presence.
Khushi did not say anything.
A:Khushi...what is your reply?

Khushi tried to walk away.
Arnav held her hand.
Khushi was nervous.
K:Please leave my hand.What if someone sees us?What will nani think about us?
A:I will leave you only if i get a reply from you.
Khushi removes his hand from her's.
K:Arnavji..i told you God will decide..if a blooming blue lotus is seen in the temple pond...i will believe that you are my destiny...you are found by God for me.
A:Oh Khushi...you are so superstitious.
K:It is my belief and i am sure that God won't be wrong.He can't make mistakes.
She tries to walk away.
A:Khushi!
The cool wind blew.
Her saree's pleats got removed due to wind's heavy blow.
Khushi tried to manage her saree.

Arnav lost his control.Unknowingly his eyes followed her.

She saw him watch her.
She felt uncomfortable.

She put her saree properly.
He went towards her.
She could not face him.
Arnav uttered her name:Khushi...you look lovely today.You were the star of the party.

He just went away without waiting for her reaction.
Slowly she smiled.

Khushi and Anjali went to the temple.
The pujari said:Khushiji..God has blessed you.There is a blue lotus blooming in the pond.
Khushi was very happy.
K:Was it for me for sure?
Pujari:Sure.Now a days no one has such kind of a belief.So no one has submitted one rupee coin for blue lotus.
Khushi ran towards the temple pond.Anjali followed her.A beautiful blue lotus was found there.

Anjali and Khushi smiled.
Khushi became very emotional.
An:Wow Khushi..God heard your prayer.
Khushi was really excited.

Khushi went back.
She saw Jayashree packing her bags.
K:Nani...where are you going?
J:My friends have called me to Kasi.I'm getting a nice chance.Pilgrimage is the best for old people.I will come after a few days.Till then you should look after Chottu.
K:What?
J:Chottu loves your food very much.You should make his favorite dishes.
K:Yes nani.Sure.

Jayashree bid 'Good-Bye' to Khushi and Arnav.
Immediately Arnav looked at her with a naughty smile.
A:So in this house only you and me.
Khushi got scared.
A:Don't worry Khushi.I won't hurt you.I will cover you with my love.
Slowly she smiled.
Arnav was surprised by his smile.
A:Finally you smiled at me.Thank God!By the way what was God's reply?
K:God has approved of our relationship.
Arnav was overexcited:Really?
She blushed.
Without waiting for any moment he took her in his arms.
K:What are you doing?Please put me down.
He put her down softly.
A:Oh!What is this Khushi?I was in a romantic mood.But you...now God is not an obstacle.Then why are you so unromantic?
She smiled and ran to her room.
Arnav smiled.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Wow I am first!!!
And what should i say its such a faboulus update...I just loved the way Khushi looked up to god for approval in relationship!!!
She seems to such innocent girl and our Arnav he is such a cute and romantic lover...Well its superb!!!!
Edited by uniquebluerose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Owww sooo cute
I was waiting for your update
Thanks pal it was sooo nice
I love the selection of pictures :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
wowwwaaahh.loved the update..v goood..their romance.loved that..loved how she accepted..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
ooohhh
so cute scene
i new it god will say yes...hope u read my comment last tym
wow
osum
loved it
i love d idea again for d saree thing
n i m happy to see arnav being so romantic...hehheee
wen i fnish reading ur parts..a smile automatically comes in my face
so so so so so...
wat
u try n guess my word for ur dis part as i m
speechless for dis tym bt still such a big comment
hehheheh
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
It is such a beautiful and innocent love story! Thanks for writing such a beautiful FF and sharing it with us!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
i read all the 4 parts
it's awesome i loved it
do continue soon
thanks for the pm
love
Avi

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