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SARA

@zuaireah

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#951

Wow what an ending darling ...what an ending...speechless. Loved this FF a lot...u have done an amazing job on this one and on the Pandora's box...Loved the fact that Khushi kneed him. A well deserved kneeing indeed...That dude has a thick head...Hilarious was the fact that he tried to write poetry...Would have loved to read some lines of his poems though...

LOVED IT...

Sara

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savvz

@savvz

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#952

awesome... great... fantastic..

u r too good...

and a beautiful journey comes to an end..

will miss SSTC... guess its time to go back and read from the first part...

thanks for this ..

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#953

That was a brilliant end!

*The glow that came from their bodies was blinding illuminating their path with iridescent rainbows and warmth. Every nock and cranny of the staircase was illuminated, each step made them feel lighter as if they were floating through the air rather than climbing a never ending circle that went nowhere. When they had each other the possibilities were endless, each new landing brought something new, something good something that was conquerable and could be overcome because they were together. She looked down at the source of their striking glow, their hands linked together, as they made their way up the spiral staircase together as one*

Loved these lines...

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#954

Fab Ending . Finally Khusi showed nobody dares to mess with Mrs Khusi Sing Raizada. 😆 She was awesome . I was confused whether to be upset since this is the end or laugh hear out on Khusi's reaction to the letters. I thought she will be all senty type after reading all those but you just turned the table. Gosh i can imagine Arnav's face after she pointed out about the poetry.. 😆

I loved this FF completely. I will surely miss this but i know i can always go back read all over again whenever i want 😉

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#955

many thanks for such a wonderful FF! like everyone else will miss it so much. does this mean u will write Something new soon!!! sorry just can't get enough of ur writing!