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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Oh boy what has the snake and Raizada's done to our innocent khushi. She has totally changed! Well that was expected. Anyone would change after facing so much. It will be fun seeing Arnav getting that old khushi back. Arnav's changed as well...for good.

Thanks a ton for the PM. 🤗

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Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

awesome job again muffin..It's a very interesting twist in the tale..now Khushi is cynical about love and Arnav is opmistic that ther is still a possibility to win her over.

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the update!!!!! love how the two character changed personalities.. amaazing twist to the story yaar!!!!

hope khushi doesnt forgive arnav that easily... arnav better get down on his knees and beg for forgiveness!! thank you so much for the pm!! had a blast reading!! continue soon!! eagerly waiting for the next part!!!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

that was an awesome and simply brilliant update!! Khushi's changed behaviour towards everybody, towards life, well it was Arnav who made her believe that realities never have happy endings!! I like the role reversal objective you've taken up!!

Thanks for the PM!

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Brilliant update,continue soon,Thanks👏

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nyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

WOW! That was FAB! I could completely imagine Arnav strolling off to Khushi and then removing the lilly, and putting her hair behind, but then, Khushis reaction was quite something. And her no believing in Devi Maiiya and Poojas...Uh Oh! Definitely a role reversal of Khushi and Arnav here. I absolutely cant wait for whats to comee...=)

Update soon

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Thanks for the PM. Wow. Khushi has changed a lot.

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hkhb17

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

i'm speechless. this is amazing!!!! very well written

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

fantastic update...you know you're one of my favorite writers on IF...love your work...and coming to the update, loved how Khushi and Arnav completely switched personalities...it's going to be a hard chase for him...can't wait for the next update...please continue soon and thanks for the pm hun